if thats the case, im sure youre about to be mauled by a thousand writefags fighting for dominance.
do you have any outline at all for what you wanted to do? any general direction? or are you asking a writefag to write the whole thing?
you may find the writefag guild would be a good ally for this project. they can even fix up what you have so far grammar-wise so it sounds more natural.
My only plan was "well it would be nice to draw marble pie and those ponies aroused by anons physique greens are kinda fun, maybe something like that" And Pie family already has a great basis for harem.
ah, so youre looking for something like one of those comedy stories from those old threads. thats a good choice for visual comedy.
i wont be around to write or give additional tips even though this seems like a fantastic project id like to be part of, so ill try to sum up some ideas i thought were good from those threads.
anon doesnt realize whats going on with the ponies. hes "innocent." the ponies might eventually start fighting over him amongst themselves, but he isnt directly involved in those fights. try not to make it blatant because if hes TOO oblivious, it wont be funny, it will just be stupid.
the children are immune. not only for obvious reasons, but it can be compounded with the attraction ponies feel towards anon. example "hes so good with kids."
perhaps even the ponies themselves dont fully realize whats going on with them immediately. could be fun to watch them deal with foreign feelings.
try to remain as close to in character as possible, even when bending the rules for anon interaction. it has to feel natural. if the conversations or even the silly situations feel too forced, youll run into the same problem as you do when you make anon too blatantly oblivious; it will just be stupid.
but like i said, if you look for a writefags guild thread im sure they can offer a lot of help for this. there doesnt seem to be one up right now.
for dialogue you have so far, id suggest:
>"Uhm... Hello? Are you awake, uh... S-sir?"
>"I'm sorry to bother you, but you really shouldn't be here."
>"My sister doesn't like uninvited- uh... G-guests."
next panels will probably deal with anon sitting up and holding his throbbing head or something. he might think hes dreaming since theres a talking horse, and then get embarrassed when he realizes hes completely nude. she would be confused by his strange appearance and his reaction to being naked, probably asking who and what he is.
Yeah, if no green appears by the morning I'll just pick some suggestion entries CYOA style from here I suppose. I think I'll head to sleep some now.
It has a good chance of just turning to a quest, but those are often quite lacking in fulfilling narrative storytelling and I know I am not good enough to conjure one. I just know how to draw.
In lands of hooves and wings up high, under magic eyes,
there lives a creature, queer and foreign, hairless and clothed,
standing tall, two legs is all, his arrival plainly nigh, being watched carefully, under those magic eyes.
Snagged and grabbed, pushed aside, coveted by wanting cries,
all alone, no permanet home, wayward he always flies,
survive not thrive, dim not light, friend of the night,
his name is known, body rarely shown, his spirit drained of light.
>"Uhm... Hello? Are you awake, uh... S-sir?"
>"I'm sorry to bother you, but you really shouldn't be here."
>"My sister doesn't like uninvited- uh... G-guests."
"W-What? Where am I?"
>she starts pulling you up off your back
>"Quickly, hide somewhere. No one can know you're here"
>She turns around and heads to her door
>"I shouldn't be long, just wait here for me"
>And she's gone
>You can't remember how you got here
>Getting to your feet, you look around
>The room surrounding you appears to be a bedroom of some description
>looking out the window... you are on the sexond floor of some building in what looks like a farm, but there are rocks everywhere
>must be the rock farm Pinkie always talked about, maybe you van find her
>you go over to the door but hesitate to open it, what happens if they do find you
>pressing your ear to the wood you hear faint voices, probably downstairs
>you slowly begin to swing the door open but swiftly close it again
>Scanning the room again you spot your underwear and tie but nothing else here
>better then nothing
>after slipping into your minimal clothing you head back to the door and check it's clear again
>there is a voice approaching from where they were before
>getting behind where the door would open one voice passes by the room chatting about showing someone something
>the second more familiar voice says directly outside the door
>the door begins to open from the other side
>"No no come now"
>the door stops moving but is left ajar as the second voice is being dragged away
>"But- ughh fine"
>You poke your head out the door and see the butt of a pony disappearing into a room further down the hall and closing the door behind it
>sneaking out of the room you seen one open door at the end of the hall and the stairs leading down in the other direction
>you remember what you were told about not being seen and waiting in that room
Here we go. Now I am taking a break, any writefag who has ideas where to go from here is free to give me ideas. Also the location is a boulder barn in the pie family farm.
You need to
keepdrawing because your art is fucking awesomeand you are a very talentedperson.
Hot damn, that's top quality art
And so Anon looked the horse in the eye and said unto her "THY BE A CREATURE OF DIVINE BEAUTY, I SHALL LAY CLAIM UNTO THY HEART O FAIREST OF MAIDENS!"
Then suddenly her sister, Limestone walks in with a look of malcontent upon her face, bellowing in fury.
"I AM BELLOWING FURY MARBLE! HOW DARE YE INVITE GUESTS UNTO OUR KINGDOM, ESPECIALLY UNINVITED ONES?" Then suddenly she puts on clothes and sexy sultry music begins playing out of nowhere.
"Without telling me?"
And so, The Game of Bones porno began.
>Drawfag needs writefag.
>anons physique greens are kinda fun
Interesting start to a story.
>apex quality art
I have found a new thread to lurk, please continue.
Nope. I on occasion art on 4chan and don't even arse over trip. I fail at being social media era artist.
This is how generals should be born.
What has it been, two hours? You're a beautiful machine, drawfriend.
I think you should maintain a pseudo-CYOA formula for now and more closely coordinate with a writer afterward. Get a feel for those who show up in thread and decide who you're jiving with.
>Something else than a meal
God's work, Anon
>mfw no face
I'm liking where she's looking though~
>the batman chesthair
god dammit I can't unsee it now
Ok, more tomorrow, or later if I feel like it after meal.
Why are you on this board? Go become a rich artist son.
Nigger you got a blog where you post these updates?
Not gonna be able to keep up with you on /mlp/, go for tumblr or something!
I am skurd of Tumblritus, in 3 years time I'll be trans-blackwomanstargender fighting against boob shaped stress balls.
But maybe I can toss this there, I just need to visit /pol/ for my vaccination.
Nah, Pinkie is. But marble is a close second.
I feel like I'm witnessing a begging of someone very ebin, so I'll post here for another generations,
I don't know, I am prone to flights of fancy, moments of whimsy and spells of fuck you world. But I will try to finish this one, it is not taxing to work on it so prospects seem good.
you got draw ponies, faces, fingers what are you doing with us?
for how long have you been drawing and what are your previous works?
I live in the wrong country to be hired as comic book artist so I am here serving the public in my small way. Beats doing commission art for idiots with terrible OC's.
What's your previous work? Surely you must have a devianart
you seem like someone who draws porn
You're posting art on the wrong website then. You'll never get anywhere on DA unless you're ultra good. Go post comics like this on E621 and watch the views roll in... Then when you're popular start a patreon.
I like doing lewd comedy like in doujins, but animated in some simple yet effective way.
Language fag, here. Let's see if I have anything agreeable to contribute.
"I am sorry that I have to wake you up but is is soon noon-"
Reads with mechanical discomfort. Unless there's Marble content I'm unaware of, she's a relatively blank slate personality wise: Fluttershy/Big Mac elements at best. The first speech bubble sets up her demure mannerisms well enough so we can ride with that. Maybe something like this,
"I'm sorry to bother you while you're sleeping, but it's almost noon and... my sister doesn't like guests, especially-"
"Normally, I'd let you sleep but..."
"I don't want to wake you/bother you/be a bother"
The options are a little loose until you really find her voice. Again, I'm assuming her voice doesn't already exist in some extensive way via comics or something.
You could play with the stuff after "noon and" as well but I like how the face reveal and bite of humor lands so I won't be the one to suggest changing it.
>tfw you will never have so much talent
>tfw drawing something always ends in disappointment
No one exits the womb understanding how to draw the human form. Or anything else, really. Don't be a punk. Practice.
Ok, More tomorrow. Had to watch some hockey so didn't get much done tonight.
Damn that's a very good art!
>Ponies Aroused by Anon's Physique thread
>Possibility to form a Harem
>mfw I resurrect that thread hoping some green and keks
>mfw just become a bump-thread
Sir you have all my attention!!
>Not even by accident
Ok, I chuckled. Looking forward for your next visit, drawfriend.
Y'ALL NIGGAS BETTER GET A MOVE ON
I HEAR THE PIE FAMILY APPROACHING OUTSIDE WITH PITCHFORKS AND SHOTGUNS
Cloth, clothes, or clothing all work in this case actually, though the latter two are inherently easier to wear.
However, the idea of Marble bringing Anon a dish rag to cover up with amuses me.
Quick revision. Anyone got suggestions for the "accident" line? Seems a bit stiff.
So... You don't actually eat ponies?
Not even by accident, I promise.
Since I'm no longer on the menu, can you tell me what you are and how you got in here? I know the barn is cozy, but the door locks on the inside.
(I might have confused that last sentence)
I'm just a man. Last thing I recall is stepping into the sauna at the gym and now I'm here.
A man? I've never heard of a "man". What are "briefs"? Are they some kind of magical item? And what happened to your fur?
Miss... uh Pony. You have more questions than I have answers. Likewise I have questions of my own.
You can call me Marble, mister. Marble Pie.
Do you have any clothes, Marble? It's a bit drafty.
I uhh... sure, but what am I supposed to call you besides m-mister?
Uhh, just give me clothes, anything that I can wear around my waist would me amazing.
>marble coming back with a skirt.
T-that's all I found, I'm sorry.
>Human puts on skirt
I look ridiculous... alright, let's start from what I remember.
I don't fucking know...
How about "Not even accidentally, I promise"?
Also you are correct, you confused that last sentence. I'm thinking "I know the barn is cozy, but the door was locked from the OUTSIDE."
And nitpicking here, throw a comma in "Likewise(comma) I have questions of my own". That way there's a small pause in the sentence.
>So you do not eat ponies
>Not even by accident I promise
>Oh good, well, we ponies eat anything!
>cue shark grin on Marble and nervous sweating on Anon
you wanna throw down, son?
I work alone, but I am just cutting corners a lot so it is fast going.
http://marble-pie.tumblr.com/ The new wordings / language edit version of the comic is now up on TUMBLR. Watch for brain damage, keep your hands and members inside the marble blog at all times and don't feed the SJW's from windows.
Now the question is whether she'll bring him a skirt to put on or a girly apron!
I like the idea that Marble would bring him either a tiny piece of towel or a very short skirt to wear after he asks for some clothes.
Maybe he would get spotted by Maud before Marble can return with the clothes though?
If Anon meets the rest of the Pie family
It should look like this
Keep it up m8.
I think the twilight one is from a hilarious comic called "peeing is magic", but I don't remember for certain.
>you don't know what this one thing out of thousands of things is, so you're totally a newfag!
I will say that you're the first one to call me that over the 7 years I've browsed this site though. /mlp/ was not my first board.
You could spend 20+ years on every board there is, was, and will be. That won't save you from being a newfag.
Is an EQG edit
I can't find the manga/doujin I suspect this is an edit of so you get a free pass.
Primordial anon has appeared before us!
The prophecy was true!!!
Here's the link. It was "peeing is magic", hard to find the english version though, but here it is. http://g.e-hentai.org/g/631032/804071365d/
>You could spend 20+ years on every board there is, was, and will be. That won't save you from being a newfag.
I know, and yet I still felt the need to say something. Don't know why.
Guess that makes me a newfag after all. ^:)
>Is an EQG edit
I would've thought that, but it looked like it could've been part of a comic as well.
I was going to search that >>26014840 suggestion, but then I got caught up in muh games and sharing some
realhorse pussy torrents for an artist.
It's usually easier and more accurate to assume they're serious. I don't blame you for thinking that.
As for >>26014958 and >>26014846
Never fucking reply to me again unless you're contributing to the thread.
Hahaha! Yeah, I know exactly what you mean. I'm not into any of the material's fetish stuff either, but it gets so ridiculous with it who could help but lose their sides in laughter!
Getting back on topic
How should Anon proceed with Marble and possibly her family?
Unless you're the drawfag, the writefag, or the source provider, feel free to refer to the image located here >>26015319, non-contributor. Doubly so for adding yet another image that takes up image count.
Fuck. I'm not so great with a situation like this from a writing perspective.
"So you do have clothing?" would be anon's next move I suppose.
Marble scooting ever closer to anon, making him more and more uncomfortable. Maybe have him back up and fall down on his butt, legs spread eagle in front of Marble? I guess Marble could keep asking what he would need clothes for while doing this?
>"What do you need clothes for?"
Father should go batshit nigger-killer
>"Blasphemy! It must comes from tartarus! Bipedals are evil!" blablabla
go full retarded amish "kill it with fire"
You could also go for a Ponka visiting and explaining everything with words only bookhoers could understand to calm everyone, or stick with marble keeping him as a pet with no one knowing.
It really depends on what you WANT the story to go really, and if you can/want to lewd too. You're still on /mlp/
Heck, maybe the mods won't even cry about you going a bit nsfw, like the other comics from here. (Or were they ONLY sfw here and the rest posted elsewhere? My memory is failing here.)
Should it stay full comedy, or do you want to put UNF in it or lewd or whatever.
>marble keeping him as a pet with no one knowing
This idea is my vote!
>Anon does something retarded, becomes the messiah from the great rock book legend and ends up having to marry Marbul.
>Anon doesn't want to
>Marbul goes "qq am I not cute enuf"
>Anon dies from diabetes
>marble keeping him as a pet with no one knowing
>Anon needs to take a leak and ends up pissing on holder's boulder. Limestone finds out.
both of these ideas are great.
At which time does this comic happen? Would Trixie still be working on the rock farm while Anon appeared?
I just want to see Tsundere Trixie.
>Purple hoers & co gets a particularly strong
(and blush inducing)buttcall from the magic map.
>"D-d-did you girls feel that??"
>Ponka Po looks up to the sky, her ears twitching.
>"Yes Book Hoers, I felt a great disturbance in the force.."
>Ponka then take off using her pink powers to find anon and make him her new sith apprentice.
>I felt a great disturbance in the force..
They find purple ketchup
You can be if you want to be Anon.
I am home and drawing a bit again. You guys get the top panels again as a bumpen.
good god you're amazing at drawing
english needs some work though.
Replace "cloth" with "clothes", and the second panel is a bit odd regarding grammar.
I'm curious. Where do you hail from, drawfag?
Check out older posts, he's from Funland
Anon should ask for a bedsheet if she doesn't know what clothes are
He can pull off the Roman look
the only thing I would add is the eyebrows. They do have them on the show. not even complaining. this is perfect.
Wish I had a drawfag like you on my thread
And there we go, I somehow made a page, it is 4 am, I've had day long headache and suffered ass freezing winter. But My brethren need me i suppose.
kekd hard at yellow caution sign
I really like you drawing anatomy, well done and keep up the good work
I am awake, but in grave need of coffee, will draw hoarse when brain is game.
The anonymous awakens from his nest. The anonymous does not like to wake up... it is undetermined why this is, however scientists speculate it is due to their distaste for reality. The anonymous usually begins his day by checking threads from last night. This is how the anonymous comunicates with others of his kind.
Posting a bit of content before the dramatic turn. Oooo~
holy fuck I forget how fast you are.
Will she run into one of her sisters, or maybe mother nose-to-tail now, and get questioned what made her so flustered? Or will we go back to Anons perspective, and see who pops into the boulder barn before Marble can come back with some pretty little skirt for Anon?
Watch her bring him back a sock or a scarf
Moar horse adventure follows after I catch up with some work out.
The best thing about this is that he is a better drawer than the official comic artists
Maybe he can get a job drawing for the comics
Keep in mind that what you are seeing are not ponies. Do not even begin to try applying the basic rules of pony anatomy here. Also don't try to criticize or factually prove that the anatomy is fucked, it's muh artistic freedoms you shitlord fucking hater parasprite and whatever else the cool kids are saying
yeah artists don't get paid much, even the professional ones that make comics and the like. really the probably don't make much if any more than double what they would charge for a commission.
the real value is in the free publicity and name recognition.
>better style, more character, better backgrounds, interesting poses, better perspectives and angles.
>op's work is better than almost anything get off Hasbro's dick
Had to edit that for you.
>better than fosgitt
Isn't a big deal. compare his work with another artist like fleecs or garwoska, Op is still better in lineart and speed but he need to improve the backgrounds
>short kitty-snouts and child-like foreheads
You mean the piglet aesthetic? Seriously, I'm pretty sure the guy has drawn Looney Tunes comics. Compare his work on pone with his version of Porky Pig. It's uncanny.
It's pretty obvious the guy is just ripping off the Baby Looney Tunes style. He wants to keep drawing his two-legged cute animals with disproportionately large heads and I guess nobody was bothered to tell him that ponies don't really work that way.
And just by checking EqD comments about the latest comic it's obviously working because they are adoring the art, I guess the mentality there is on the level of MLP's target audience. But as long as bronies like it, Fosgitt has no reason to try harder, and nobody has a reason to fire him, so watch out for more.
He only need 10 second to find greta in goggle.
You will if this thread sink anon !
>I overdid the Gym a bit today
You're gonna make it, brah
I WILL NOT LET THIS SHIP SINK!!
HOIST THE SAILS!!
CLOSE THE HATCHETS!!
THROW TE KEKS OVERBOARD!!
>going to the gym
>not using nanomachines
Mission "KeepThisTreadAlive", GO !
Ho, wait, Godanon is back...
shall we deploy emergency flotation devices, cap'n?
>This fucking comic
You motherfucker are extremelly talented
No one ever makes a fucking comic page that quickly and THAT good
Tell us your secret, oh so great and powerfull drawfriend
Who are you, pony jesus? You pop in out of nowhere performing artistic miracles like it's nothing, with no name, no traceable previous pony art, just bam, top tier comic
In under 3 days you do 6 pages which is like 20 panels each with a new pose, nothing reused, even speed is on your side, this thread singlehandedly BTFO'd the IDW shills
Everything just works, I don't know who you are but I fucking love you
This is prolly even better than when Catfood did the Maud comic here back then
Catfood has a different style, but it's not bad. That's what makes artists so loved, and hated. Don't be disrespectful to people who provide decent art for the amusement of others to please one guy, no matter how talented he is anon.
Just, WHO are you? You seriously need a nickname!
Oh no, I didn't mean to berate Catfood at all. I have tremendous respect for the guy and his projects (which actually made me create a goddamn tumblr just so I could follow all his various stuff easily). I made the comment with strictly the comparison of these two events in mind - back then (holy shit almost 2 years ago) we got the two dubs comics, with all the randomness you get going dubs decide, while now it's a bit more coherent thanks to the CYOA nature.
She's a (fairly high functioning) autist, sure.
She also holds or is pursuing some kind of rock-related degree, and contributes to the family business.
She understands what she wants fine, she just doesn't do well socially.
This comic really makes me want to cuddle the fuck out of Marble.
This thread gets me rock hard
You're an alright guy, OP
>All the community love and support in this thread.
She has a strong interest in rocks (such over-interest in a thing is par for the course with autism of all types) and an active imagination (and perhaps rock tulpas).
This doesn't make sex with her somehow wrong.
Merely a bit more of a challenge due to the autism barrier.
esting in poopins xD never forget world master ice hockey 1939-1945
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