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So then, what next? Drawfag needs writefag.

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So then, what next? Drawfag needs writefag.
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>>25995793
>drawfag actually seeking out a writefag for story structure in his comic
this is like spotting a leprechaun.

are you starting an anon in equestria story?
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>>25995793
Nude panic as soon as you notice the spider crawling up your right arm.
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>>25995816 That was the plan, it can roll any which way from this, I just want to draw hoars.
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>>25995828
if thats the case, im sure youre about to be mauled by a thousand writefags fighting for dominance.

do you have any outline at all for what you wanted to do? any general direction? or are you asking a writefag to write the whole thing?

you may find the writefag guild would be a good ally for this project. they can even fix up what you have so far grammar-wise so it sounds more natural.
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>>25995867
My only plan was "well it would be nice to draw marble pie and those ponies aroused by anons physique greens are kinda fun, maybe something like that" And Pie family already has a great basis for harem.
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>>25995793
Show her youre not a threat. Introduce yourself I suppose
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>>25995895
So... someone writes the green in this thread, then you take the green and draw the comic in the thread?

Sounds fun
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Also damn, youve got more artistic talent than all the art cyoa runners on this board combined.
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>>25996084
This. It'd be cool if you ran a quest or something.
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give her this look
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>>25996127
Halo is shit. Your post is shit. You're shit.
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>>25995895
ah, so youre looking for something like one of those comedy stories from those old threads. thats a good choice for visual comedy.

i wont be around to write or give additional tips even though this seems like a fantastic project id like to be part of, so ill try to sum up some ideas i thought were good from those threads.

>1
anon doesnt realize whats going on with the ponies. hes "innocent." the ponies might eventually start fighting over him amongst themselves, but he isnt directly involved in those fights. try not to make it blatant because if hes TOO oblivious, it wont be funny, it will just be stupid.

>2
the children are immune. not only for obvious reasons, but it can be compounded with the attraction ponies feel towards anon. example "hes so good with kids."

>3
perhaps even the ponies themselves dont fully realize whats going on with them immediately. could be fun to watch them deal with foreign feelings.

>4
try to remain as close to in character as possible, even when bending the rules for anon interaction. it has to feel natural. if the conversations or even the silly situations feel too forced, youll run into the same problem as you do when you make anon too blatantly oblivious; it will just be stupid.

but like i said, if you look for a writefags guild thread im sure they can offer a lot of help for this. there doesnt seem to be one up right now.

for dialogue you have so far, id suggest:
>"Uhm... Hello? Are you awake, uh... S-sir?"
>"I'm sorry to bother you, but you really shouldn't be here."
>"My sister doesn't like uninvited- uh... G-guests."

next panels will probably deal with anon sitting up and holding his throbbing head or something. he might think hes dreaming since theres a talking horse, and then get embarrassed when he realizes hes completely nude. she would be confused by his strange appearance and his reaction to being naked, probably asking who and what he is.
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>>25996127
Faggot
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>>25996074
Yeah, if no green appears by the morning I'll just pick some suggestion entries CYOA style from here I suppose. I think I'll head to sleep some now.
>>25996084
Thanks.
>>25996115
It has a good chance of just turning to a quest, but those are often quite lacking in fulfilling narrative storytelling and I know I am not good enough to conjure one. I just know how to draw.
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>>25996138
Thanks for the notes, will keep those definitely in mind. Now for that sleep, I will resume this tomorrow when my eyes don't feel like two dry pinecones.
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>>25996180
goodluck anon. ive always imagined what it might be like if a drawfag and writefag worked together. youve given me hope that this could actually happen.
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>>25995793
In lands of hooves and wings up high, under magic eyes,
there lives a creature, queer and foreign, hairless and clothed,
standing tall, two legs is all, his arrival plainly nigh, being watched carefully, under those magic eyes.
Snagged and grabbed, pushed aside, coveted by wanting cries,
all alone, no permanet home, wayward he always flies,
survive not thrive, dim not light, friend of the night,
his name is known, body rarely shown, his spirit drained of light.
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>>25996330
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>>25995793
Cavalier anon in equestria please
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>>25995793
>"Uhm... Hello? Are you awake, uh... S-sir?"
>"I'm sorry to bother you, but you really shouldn't be here."
>"My sister doesn't like uninvited- uh... G-guests."
"W-What? Where am I?"
>she starts pulling you up off your back
>"Quickly, hide somewhere. No one can know you're here"
>She turns around and heads to her door
>"I shouldn't be long, just wait here for me"
>And she's gone
"What?"
>You can't remember how you got here
>Getting to your feet, you look around
>The room surrounding you appears to be a bedroom of some description
>looking out the window... you are on the sexond floor of some building in what looks like a farm, but there are rocks everywhere
>must be the rock farm Pinkie always talked about, maybe you van find her
>you go over to the door but hesitate to open it, what happens if they do find you
>pressing your ear to the wood you hear faint voices, probably downstairs
>you slowly begin to swing the door open but swiftly close it again
>SHIT
>Your naked!
>Scanning the room again you spot your underwear and tie but nothing else here
>better then nothing
>after slipping into your minimal clothing you head back to the door and check it's clear again
>there is a voice approaching from where they were before
>getting behind where the door would open one voice passes by the room chatting about showing someone something
>"one sec"
>the second more familiar voice says directly outside the door
>the door begins to open from the other side
>"No no come now"
>the door stops moving but is left ajar as the second voice is being dragged away
>"But- ughh fine"
>You poke your head out the door and see the butt of a pony disappearing into a room further down the hall and closing the door behind it
>sneaking out of the room you seen one open door at the end of the hall and the stairs leading down in the other direction
>you remember what you were told about not being seen and waiting in that room
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>>25997464
No idea if that's the way you wanted it to go but that's the feel I got from it. Let me know what you think. I'm gonna sleep now as I'm very very tired
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>>25998617
Ghost bumping?
I'm interested in seeing where this concept goes.
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Bump bump bumping up oooops threaaaad
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op here, I have crawled out of the bed and in process of stuffing face, will generate second page soon.
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How about you draw yourselves not being ponyfaggots
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>>26002268
How about you draw yourself a nice warm bath and share it with a toaster? :)
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Another panel on its way. Posting this as a bump.
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>>26002851
Damn son... You have talent, mate.
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>>26002851
Holt shit you can draw
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>>26002851
nice anatomy
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Here we go. Now I am taking a break, any writefag who has ideas where to go from here is free to give me ideas. Also the location is a boulder barn in the pie family farm.
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>>26003434

More pleas.
I give you my 'trips' for that
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>>26002851
You need to keep drawing because your art is fucking awesome and you are a very talented person.
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>>26003434
hot monkey sex of course
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>>26003434
Oh and Marble is blushing more and more due to morning wood effect that anon currently does not notice quite yet.
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>>26003434
anon looks like MJK to me for some reason

k-keep going..
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>>26003434
oh wow
Have you drawn anything else before?
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>>25995793
>>26002851
>>26003434
Hot damn, that's top quality art
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And so Anon looked the horse in the eye and said unto her "THY BE A CREATURE OF DIVINE BEAUTY, I SHALL LAY CLAIM UNTO THY HEART O FAIREST OF MAIDENS!"

Then suddenly her sister, Limestone walks in with a look of malcontent upon her face, bellowing in fury.
"I AM BELLOWING FURY MARBLE! HOW DARE YE INVITE GUESTS UNTO OUR KINGDOM, ESPECIALLY UNINVITED ONES?" Then suddenly she puts on clothes and sexy sultry music begins playing out of nowhere.
"Without telling me?"

And so, The Game of Bones porno began.
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>>26003434
Anon takes her words as a dare and eats her
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>>26002851
>>26003434

you have a name at derpibooru?
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>>25995793
>Drawfag needs writefag.
>>25995895
>anons physique greens are kinda fun
>>25997464
Interesting start to a story.
>>26002851
>>26003434
>apex quality art
>>26003444
>trips
I have found a new thread to lurk, please continue.
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>>26003523
Nope. I on occasion art on 4chan and don't even arse over trip. I fail at being social media era artist.
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>>26003434
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>>26003434
Do you do lewds? I hope you do lewds.
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>>26003554
In good time, Anon.
In good time.
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>>25995793
>>26002851
>>26003434
This is how generals should be born.
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>>26003740
We already have a general for this, it's called Anonymous in Equestria.
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posting as a bump.
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>>26003828
What has it been, two hours? You're a beautiful machine, drawfriend.

I think you should maintain a pseudo-CYOA formula for now and more closely coordinate with a writer afterward. Get a feel for those who show up in thread and decide who you're jiving with.
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>>26003828
See where she's going with it. Say that if her other meal is acceptable it will appease us for a time
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>>26003828
"A pony is fine too."
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>>26003828
>Something else than a meal
God's work, Anon
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>>26003828
why does every anon have the batman chesthair?
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>>26003828
>mfw Anon
>mfw no face
I'm liking where she's looking though~
>>26004021
>the batman chesthair
god dammit I can't unsee it now
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>>26004021
It's out honorary mantle, to be cut in that shape upon graduating from the cartoon character uni.
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>>26003828
very nice
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This thread is actually happening! Great job drawfriend, i can see some jim lee in your lines.
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>>26003828
tfw art on fleek
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>>26003828
>rape
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Ok, more tomorrow, or later if I feel like it after meal.
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>>26004226
ty anon, looking forward to more
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>>26004187
Not so fast, this is Ponies aroused by anon's physique comic, not
>rape
comic / cyoa, Also I am in this for a long haul anyway so we have plenty pages to go.
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>>26004226
MOoOoAaAR
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>>26004226
I kind of would like to help you with the language a bit
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>>26004226
this is the best thing since sliced pineapples
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>>26004253
Go ahead, I can edit all the pages still.
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>>26004262
Stealth posting at work. I'll work up some suggestions in a few hours, if no one else does so beforehand
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>>26004226
Dude looks like he uses Nanomachines
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>>26004226
Why are you on this board? Go become a rich artist son.
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>>26004226
Nigger you got a blog where you post these updates?
Not gonna be able to keep up with you on /mlp/, go for tumblr or something!
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>>26004344
I am skurd of Tumblritus, in 3 years time I'll be trans-blackwomanstargender fighting against boob shaped stress balls.

But maybe I can toss this there, I just need to visit /pol/ for my vaccination.
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>>26003434
Holy fucking shit, Marble is 100% HNNGGGGGG in the last panel.
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http://marble-pie.tumblr.com/

It's there now too.
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>>26004399
Is marble ur fav poniponi?
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>>26004410
Nah, Pinkie is. But marble is a close second.
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>>26004399
You are not going to leave us after a couple of days are you? Talented people like you usually leave their projects unfinished......I'm scared.
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>>26004399
I feel like I'm witnessing a begging of someone very ebin, so I'll post here for another generations,
HI MOM!
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>>26004443
I don't know, I am prone to flights of fancy, moments of whimsy and spells of fuck you world. But I will try to finish this one, it is not taxing to work on it so prospects seem good.
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>>26004399
you got draw ponies, faces, fingers what are you doing with us?
for how long have you been drawing and what are your previous works?
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>>26004516
I live in the wrong country to be hired as comic book artist so I am here serving the public in my small way. Beats doing commission art for idiots with terrible OC's.
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>>26004582
but dude the internet exist!, get a portfolio and send it around! you're really good! you might get a shot at doing some cool shit.
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>>26004226
Heh, it's amazing, desu
>>26004399
Neat
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>>26004752
Wow, you're quick!
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>>26004399
Following.
>>26004752
>Tomantha
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>>26004752
kekkens
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>>26004752
top kek
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Dunno what else to do...
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>>26004582
What's your previous work? Surely you must have a devianart
you seem like someone who draws porn
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>>26005049
I do have DA but no porn there.
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>>26005022
What are your aims, exactly? Lewd? RomCom? I saw harem mentioned earlier on somewhere.
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>>26005200
pls link
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>>26005200
You're posting art on the wrong website then. You'll never get anywhere on DA unless you're ultra good. Go post comics like this on E621 and watch the views roll in... Then when you're popular start a patreon.

>>26005544
I like doing lewd comedy like in doujins, but animated in some simple yet effective way.
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Language fag, here. Let's see if I have anything agreeable to contribute.

>>25995793
"I am sorry that I have to wake you up but is is soon noon-"

Reads with mechanical discomfort. Unless there's Marble content I'm unaware of, she's a relatively blank slate personality wise: Fluttershy/Big Mac elements at best. The first speech bubble sets up her demure mannerisms well enough so we can ride with that. Maybe something like this,

"I'm sorry to bother you while you're sleeping, but it's almost noon and... my sister doesn't like guests, especially-"

other ideas

"Normally, I'd let you sleep but..."
"I don't want to wake you/bother you/be a bother"

The options are a little loose until you really find her voice. Again, I'm assuming her voice doesn't already exist in some extensive way via comics or something.

You could play with the stuff after "noon and" as well but I like how the face reveal and bite of humor lands so I won't be the one to suggest changing it.
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>tfw you will never have so much talent
>tfw drawing something always ends in disappointment
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>>26005624
No one exits the womb understanding how to draw the human form. Or anything else, really. Don't be a punk. Practice.
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>>26004226
This I like
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>>26005666
Satan begone
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>>26005681
No
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Ok, More tomorrow. Had to watch some hockey so didn't get much done tonight.
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>>26006550
>not even by accident
>implying that anon has never eat out a horse pussy
kek
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>>26006550
looks good
Looking forward to some more
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>>26006550
And this Anon, I like your style, can you maybe stream for us when you draw? I'm interested in how you do it, how the process look like
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>>26006550
>"Not even by accident, I promise."
>Except you're never quite sure what that mystery meat is they put in your kung pao chicken
>Because it sure as hell wasn't chicken
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>>26006550
Looking good anon, we will be looking forward tomorrow
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>>26006550
>hockey
Canadian detected?
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>>26006629
Nah, the other puck crazed alcoholic nation of northern loggers.
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>>26006550
B O O P
O
O
P

E
H
T H E
H
E

E
N
O
P O N E
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>>26006705
>>26006550

BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOP
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i need this in my life bump
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>>26006688
Irish? I really don't know any other puck-crazed alcoholic nations of northern loggers desu.

Testing: desu baka senpai
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>>26006858
Finn-ish
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>>25995793
Damn that's a very good art!

>>25995895
>Pie family
>Ponies Aroused by Anon's Physique thread
>Possibility to form a Harem

Oh my~
>mfw I resurrect that thread hoping some green and keks
>mfw just become a bump-thread


>>26002851
>Dat anatomy

>>26003434
U-Unf

>>26003828
>>26004226
Kek

>>26004752
>>26005022
>>26005586
>>26006550
Sir you have all my attention!!
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>>26006550
>Not even by accident
Ok, I chuckled. Looking forward for your next visit, drawfriend.
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>>26002851
The art style reminds me of the Chronically Single comic strips. Gotta read those again.
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Live thread, LIVE
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You faggots better keep this thread alive!
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bumpedy bump
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http://i.imgur.com/SsEzWBy.jpg
Here's a preview for the impatient ones. Now I am off to sleep.
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>>26009089
>do you have any cloth
it's CLOTHES
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>>26009224
Or MAYBE he means cloth. Make a loan cloth
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>>26009089
Y'ALL NIGGAS BETTER GET A MOVE ON
I HEAR THE PIE FAMILY APPROACHING OUTSIDE WITH PITCHFORKS AND SHOTGUNS
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>>26009224
Cloth, clothes, or clothing all work in this case actually, though the latter two are inherently easier to wear. However, the idea of Marble bringing Anon a dish rag to cover up with amuses me.
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>>26009089
Quick revision. Anyone got suggestions for the "accident" line? Seems a bit stiff.

So... You don't actually eat ponies?

Not even by accident, I promise.

Since I'm no longer on the menu, can you tell me what you are and how you got in here? I know the barn is cozy, but the door locks on the inside.
(I might have confused that last sentence)

I'm just a man. Last thing I recall is stepping into the sauna at the gym and now I'm here.

A man? I've never heard of a "man". What are "briefs"? Are they some kind of magical item? And what happened to your fur?

Miss... uh Pony. You have more questions than I have answers. Likewise I have questions of my own.

You can call me Marble, mister. Marble Pie.

Do you have any clothes, Marble? It's a bit drafty.
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>>26009224
ponies naturally won't have CLOTHES that fit a human. So a cloth, like sack, tablecloth, curtain makes a nice toga in a pinch.
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>>26009336
I uhh... sure, but what am I supposed to call you besides m-mister?

Uhh, just give me clothes, anything that I can wear around my waist would me amazing.

>marble coming back with a skirt.
T-that's all I found, I'm sorry.

>Human puts on skirt
I look ridiculous... alright, let's start from what I remember.

I don't fucking know...
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>>26009336
How about "Not even accidentally, I promise"?
Also you are correct, you confused that last sentence. I'm thinking "I know the barn is cozy, but the door was locked from the OUTSIDE."
And nitpicking here, throw a comma in "Likewise(comma) I have questions of my own". That way there's a small pause in the sentence.
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>>26006550
... Lurking.
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>>26009089
>So you do not eat ponies
>Not even by accident I promise
>Oh good, well, we ponies eat anything!
>cue shark grin on Marble and nervous sweating on Anon
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when are they gonna fug
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>>26010354
Four chapters in, after the heavy make out, first kiss, and cuddle chapters
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>>26010704
And after Big Mac anal rapes anon with his massive cock for touching his woman.
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>>26009089
How are you drawing so fast and well? Not even professional Japanese mangakas do it as fast and they have assistants as well.
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>>26011579
Maybe he does have assistant
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>>26003460
Now i can not unsee MJK there, thanks Anon.
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COME BACK DRAWFAG

p-please?
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>>26011552
you wanna throw down, son?
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>>26012389
keenan in equestria green when?
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>>26013694
right after he steps through his shadow and comes out the other side
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>>26011579
I work alone, but I am just cutting corners a lot so it is fast going.
>>26013535
I came.
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>>26014041
http://marble-pie.tumblr.com/ The new wordings / language edit version of the comic is now up on TUMBLR. Watch for brain damage, keep your hands and members inside the marble blog at all times and don't feed the SJW's from windows.
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>>26014044
>http://marble-pie.tumblr.com/
sent you a lovely little ask <3
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>>26014041
Now the question is whether she'll bring him a skirt to put on or a girly apron!
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>>26014044
umf
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OP here, I am going to movies today so there'll be likely less art (if any) made for tonight. Unless insomnia strikes.
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>>26014044
first I find your tumblr through derpibooru and now I see this thread. today was a good day after all.
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>>26014041
>that middle panel
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I like the idea that Marble would bring him either a tiny piece of towel or a very short skirt to wear after he asks for some clothes.

Maybe he would get spotted by Maud before Marble can return with the clothes though?
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Drawfag here, I am soon departing to movies, If this thread dies, I will likely repost the pages in a new thread with next upddate. I have this one saved for the suggestions held within.
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>>26014649
Don't worry, this thread is immortal.
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>>26014041

It's ironic.

Our resident drawfag is better at drawing on model, cute technicolor ponies than most of the people working on the god damn official published comics.
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>>26014649
If Anon meets the rest of the Pie family
It should look like this
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>>26005614
>Unless there's Marble content I'm unaware of
Late season 5 episode. Little shown, but it's there.
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>>26014041
>>26004226
>>26003434
>>25995793
Glorious.

Keep it up m8.
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>>26014041
Good god this is cute.

>>26013688
>>26014153
Okay, what the hell are these two caps from?
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>>26014771
I think the twilight one is from a hilarious comic called "peeing is magic", but I don't remember for certain.
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>>26014771
newfig out
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>>26014846
>you don't know what this one thing out of thousands of things is, so you're totally a newfag!
Anon, pls. I will say that you're the first one to call me that over the 7 years I've browsed this site though. /mlp/ was not my first board.
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>>26014870
You could spend 20+ years on every board there is, was, and will be. That won't save you from being a newfag.

>>26013688
Is an EQG edit

>>26014153
I can't find the manga/doujin I suspect this is an edit of so you get a free pass.
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>>26014870
Seven years!?
Primordial anon has appeared before us!
The prophecy was true!!!
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>>26014870
so you admit to being a newfig? lurk more
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>>26014917
its not that long. the sites been around for 13 years now.
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>>26015002
he was being facetious
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>>26015049
I suppose you are right. Poe's law got to me I guess?
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>>26014771
>>26014916
Here's the link. It was "peeing is magic", hard to find the english version though, but here it is. http://g.e-hentai.org/g/631032/804071365d/
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>>26015167
Thanks, senpai
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>>26014916
>You could spend 20+ years on every board there is, was, and will be. That won't save you from being a newfag.
I know, and yet I still felt the need to say something. Don't know why. Guess that makes me a newfag after all. ^:)

>Is an EQG edit
I would've thought that, but it looked like it could've been part of a comic as well.

>>26015167
I was going to search that >>26014840 suggestion, but then I got caught up in muh games and sharing some real horse pussy torrents for an artist.

>>26015103
It's usually easier and more accurate to assume they're serious. I don't blame you for thinking that.

As for >>26014958 and >>26014846
>
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>>26015319
Never fucking reply to me again unless you're contributing to the thread.
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>>26015167
I've read it all
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>>26015167
i love when celestia farts
not for the fetish. i love it for the reaction. she was like "nigga she dead"
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>>26015594
Hahaha! Yeah, I know exactly what you mean. I'm not into any of the material's fetish stuff either, but it gets so ridiculous with it who could help but lose their sides in laughter!
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Getting back on topic
How should Anon proceed with Marble and possibly her family?
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>>26015338
Unless you're the drawfag, the writefag, or the source provider, feel free to refer to the image located here >>26015319, non-contributor. Doubly so for adding yet another image that takes up image count.

>>26015874
Fuck. I'm not so great with a situation like this from a writing perspective.

"So you do have clothing?" would be anon's next move I suppose.
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>>26015874
She has a family?

He just arrived, he knows shit about her family
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>>26015910
>reading comprehension

>>25995793
>>26002851
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>>26015874
''So, Miss Pie...do you live alone?''
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>>26015874
Make her believe you are an apkallu.I think we should vote on which deity we choose to represent.
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>>26015874
Marble scooting ever closer to anon, making him more and more uncomfortable. Maybe have him back up and fall down on his butt, legs spread eagle in front of Marble? I guess Marble could keep asking what he would need clothes for while doing this?
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>>26015874
for now, let's just rest in the barn.
maybe we can ask marble to be our assistant, so we can talk with them
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>>26015874
>"What do you need clothes for?"
Father should go batshit nigger-killer
>"Blasphemy! It must comes from tartarus! Bipedals are evil!" blablabla
go full retarded amish "kill it with fire"
You could also go for a Ponka visiting and explaining everything with words only bookhoers could understand to calm everyone, or stick with marble keeping him as a pet with no one knowing.

It really depends on what you WANT the story to go really, and if you can/want to lewd too. You're still on /mlp/
Heck, maybe the mods won't even cry about you going a bit nsfw, like the other comics from here. (Or were they ONLY sfw here and the rest posted elsewhere? My memory is failing here.)
Should it stay full comedy, or do you want to put UNF in it or lewd or whatever.
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>>26014041
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>>26016020
>marble keeping him as a pet with no one knowing
This idea is my vote!
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Anon needs to take a leak and ends up pissing on holder's boulder. Limestone finds out.
Shit happens.
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>Anon does something retarded, becomes the messiah from the great rock book legend and ends up having to marry Marbul.
>Shenanigans
>More shenanigans
>Anon doesn't want to
>Marbul goes "qq am I not cute enuf"
>Anon dies from diabetes
>The end
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>>26016020
Comedic human and cute pones is the way to go
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>>26016020
>>26016081
>marble keeping him as a pet with no one knowing

>>26016095
>Anon needs to take a leak and ends up pissing on holder's boulder. Limestone finds out.

both of these ideas are great.
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>>26014041
what programs do you use for drawing and coloring?
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At which time does this comic happen? Would Trixie still be working on the rock farm while Anon appeared?

I just want to see Tsundere Trixie.
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>Purple hoers & co gets a particularly strong (and blush inducing) buttcall from the magic map.
>"D-d-did you girls feel that??"
>Ponka Po looks up to the sky, her ears twitching.
>"Yes Book Hoers, I felt a great disturbance in the force.."
>Ponka then take off using her pink powers to find anon and make him her new sith apprentice.
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>>26016998
>I felt a great disturbance in the force..
They find purple ketchup
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>>25995793
Why are we so manly
I'm not that manly
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>>26017841
You can be if you want to be Anon.
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>>26017841
Because that's the only way 'we' could get any pussy.
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>>26015874
With sexy results
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>>26015874
pet the cute poni. pet her good.
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>>26017841
Better start liftan.
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I am home and drawing a bit again. You guys get the top panels again as a bumpen.
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>>26018453
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>>26018453
I would give you money if I had any.
Keep doing cute pone pls
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>>26018453
You are the hero this board needs AND wants, artfag
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>>26018453


You are without hyperbole the best thing to happen this year. Thank you.
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>>26018706
I cant tell if this is one of those stupid "haha christmas was a year ago durr" jokes or not.
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>>26018453
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh yiss.
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>>26018453
*clothes. I don't think a single strip of cloth will be enough to keep his modesty.
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>>26018453
Best drawfag in the last recent years, no doubt
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>>26018453
They don't have towels?
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>>26019031
You're a towel
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>>26019055
Want me to be your towel? ;^)
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we should that pony for warmth!
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>>26018453
good god you're amazing at drawing

english needs some work though.
Replace "cloth" with "clothes", and the second panel is a bit odd regarding grammar.
I'm curious. Where do you hail from, drawfag?
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>>26018453
>pic related

>>26019385
Check out older posts, he's from Funland
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>>26019385
>Anon isn't supposed to be a random beta virgin that would totally drop his spergs everywhere if he ended up naked in front of a waifu pone molesting him.
I think it fits fine.
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>>26019385
That other country that is crazy about hockey.
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>>26019659
>>26020025
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>>26020072
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>>26018453
That ass, holy shit!

>Tfw noclop
>Tfw ass man
>Tfw I don't wanna use a reaction image because the image limit is needed for better things

This is all very confusing.
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>>26014041
Do you have that second panel without text nor text bubbles? It looks so adorable, a textless version would be great
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>>26018453
Anon should ask for a bedsheet if she doesn't know what clothes are

He can pull off the Roman look
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>>26020816
Even a towel would do
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>>26020827
Pony sized towels would be a tad too short.
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>>26014041
the only thing I would add is the eyebrows. They do have them on the show. not even complaining. this is perfect.

Wish I had a drawfag like you on my thread
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>>26018453
you need cloth because you're cold.
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>>26018453
What would her fur feel like against Anons skin?
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>>26020836
perfect then
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>>26020880
>Oh, um, cold usually has the opposite effect on stallions, A-anon~!

Joking aside, ponies know very well what clothes are. Maybe she could give him a dress.
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And there we go, I somehow made a page, it is 4 am, I've had day long headache and suffered ass freezing winter. But My brethren need me i suppose.
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>>26021025
>I am a big boy

for you.
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>>26021025
You are doing Gods work drawfriend
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>>26021025
I'm sure nuzzles and a hug aren't out of the question
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>>26021025
>That great anatomy and super cute Marble in the last panel
Just found this thread. You are a talent, friend!
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>>26021025
>i'm positive
i bet she was really close to active rape-anon
he doesn't need more problems in ponyworld
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>>26021081
She finally goes to get clothes.
Then, stepping from the back, silent until now:
Maud
Liking his 'chiseled' look
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I want the obligatory rock hard joke coming from Maud sometimes in the future.
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>>26021025
Wait for the pony to come back. in the mean time check out your surroundings.
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>>26021025
>Rape mode engaged
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>>26021025
Remember: Anon's dick must be at least 9 inches flaccid.

You know, for accuracy.
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>>26021230
I want to see the pies skipping rope with that shit
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>>26021230
9 inches
From the ground
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>>26021025

You have done very well. I hope you get the comfiest of sleeps.
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>>26021025
Hot
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>>26021248
9 inches
girth
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>>26021421
3 inches length.
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>>25995793
good to the the thread still alive
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>>26021025
kekd hard at yellow caution sign

I really like you drawing anatomy, well done and keep up the good work
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>>26017841
It's a fictional depiction.
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>>26017841
You can do it anon.
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My penis is sweeling
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>>26022252
Might want to get that checked out, anon.

'Sweeling' can't be good.
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>>26022315
My doctors said that I got penile cancer from 4chan
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>>26022354
Today was a good day
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>>26022354
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>>26021025

>dat marble scrunch

jesus christ
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Looking foward for when Limestone gets into play. Interesting how Anon made Fluttershy 3.0 instantly talk so much just with his gains so wonder how that d go with best tsun hoars
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I'm waiting for the autists to reach the image limit before the drawfag finishes the comic
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>>26022524
>what is another thread
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>>26022567
Something that doesn't exist
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>>26022586
Yeah, like the image limit yet lol
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>>26021025
Marble seems unusually forward
Typical farm girl

Anyway, what is Anon gonna do after he gets some clothing?
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>>26023045
he undresses again for hot monkey sex
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>>26014041
u draw pone really well.

>>26021025
anon on the other hand... wanna redraw it with a mr skeletal anon so i can self insert?

>>26021439
underrated post.
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>>25997464
>sexond floor

Hypermegasuper Freud slip.

Is there a meme for Freud slip?
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>>26003444
Dafuq did you do that?
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>>26023503
alt+f4 just before posting
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>>26004295
Nanomachines, you say?
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Bumping for great artist
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I am awake, but in grave need of coffee, will draw hoarse when brain is game.
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>>26025039
Good morning based OP
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>>26025039
The anonymous awakens from his nest. The anonymous does not like to wake up... it is undetermined why this is, however scientists speculate it is due to their distaste for reality. The anonymous usually begins his day by checking threads from last night. This is how the anonymous comunicates with others of his kind.
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>>26023503
like that

>>26025111
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>>26025111
YYYYOOOOO
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>>26025039
morning pencil Finn dude. Can't wait to see what Marble will get Anon, or what will happen to him while she is gone.
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>>26023503
>>26025144
Get scripts have been around for a while. He's using a script that checks post rates and posts at the right time for a get. sorry to ruin the main
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>>26025165
>main
Magic*
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>>26025039
>almost 2pm
>wake up
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>>26025308
Ayy.
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This thread is absolutely
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>>26025368
20% Coller than..
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All this love for the drawfag makes me feel jittery and gay. I have never felt this sense of community in /mlp
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>>26025468
>20% Coller
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>>26025468
20% Cuuller
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>>26025487
20% curry?
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>>26025520
20% cocktail
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Posting a bit of content before the dramatic turn. Oooo~
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>>26025701
Yes good!
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>>26025701
Myself from "what" NIGGA!? Myself from "what"!!?
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>>26025532
20% Hungover
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>>26025701
HNNNG
That Marble
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>>26025701
I'm ready
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If multiple people are masturbating to this, does that make it a circle jerk?
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>>26025721
Ib4 Cloudy or Limestone saying exactly this...withouth the nigga ofc
20% kek-ier if its Igneous
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>>26025701
Please continue
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>this thread
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>>26025701
holy fuck I forget how fast you are.

Will she run into one of her sisters, or maybe mother nose-to-tail now, and get questioned what made her so flustered? Or will we go back to Anons perspective, and see who pops into the boulder barn before Marble can come back with some pretty little skirt for Anon?
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>>26025701
Watch her bring him back a sock or a scarf
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>>26025781
Nothing so organized.

We're just getting our rocks off
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>>26025701
S-stop teasing me senpai

>>26025911
THIS so much this. A fuckin sock would be hilarious
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>>26025890
I'm equal parts amazed and happy that this is here.
OP is truly a saint for bringing this during hiatus.
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Moar horse adventure follows after I catch up with some work out.
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>>26026008

>That tongue
She must be good.
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>>26026008
Good thing Maud startled the blush off of her.
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>>26026008
Is Marble gonna ask Muad to let her use her tunic?
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>>26026008
have fun shoveling snow. unless you meant you were gonna go to the gym. At which point, have fun shoveling snow.
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>>26026008
>dat last panel
topkek. You've got good delivery, drawfriend.
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>>26026008
>"I could hardly keep myself from Maud"
Go on...
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>>26026040
Maud is also a 'fashionista', she might have some rags laying around
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>>26026008

You sir are really talented. This has so much potential...!
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Monitoring thread
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>>26026008
Splendid, simply spendid
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>>26026008
Splendid, simply splendid
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>>26026387
this is neat!
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>>26026387
epic
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>>26026387
6 pages in under 3 days. Good job, drawfag.
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>>26026387
I gonna print that shit.
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>>26026008
We need more
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>>26026387
You're doing Celestia's work, anon.
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>>26026387
The best thing about this is that he is a better drawer than the official comic artists

Maybe he can get a job drawing for the comics
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>>26026469
> epic
Kek, haven't heard anyone say that in a while
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>>26026599
That mangled mess is supposed to be rarity in the last panel. Look at her fucking forelegs. My god....
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>>26026599
The fuck happened to her forelegs? Are those supposed to be tentacles?
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>>26026717
>>26026928
Isn't she just crossing her arms and leaning on them?
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>>26026599
better style, more character, better backgrounds, interesting poses, better perspectives and angels.

almost everything is better then op's work get off his dick
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>>26026928
Keep in mind that what you are seeing are not ponies. Do not even begin to try applying the basic rules of pony anatomy here. Also don't try to criticize or factually prove that the anatomy is fucked, it's muh artistic freedoms you shitlord fucking hater parasprite and whatever else the cool kids are saying
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>>26026959
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>>26026963
>>26026959
Woah, calm down there. People are trying to clop here.
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>>26026959
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>>26026008
So you wanna job making artwork, persay drawing mechs for a book, for $90 a picture, mind you i need like 28+ pictures.
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>>26026008

What is this draw fags name !?
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>>26026963
k
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>>26026959
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>>26026959
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>>26026959
Uh Oh a Hasbro shill drone!
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>>26026008
Pls have Maud take off her tunic
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>>26027207
90$ a picture for something thats to be printed and possibly sold sounds awfully small.
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>>26027250
Don't do this nobody wants to see what you think her cutie mark looks like.
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>>26027207
>>26027299
yeah artists don't get paid much, even the professional ones that make comics and the like. really the probably don't make much if any more than double what they would charge for a commission.

the real value is in the free publicity and name recognition.
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>>26026959
Oh hi, Illustrious Q.
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>>26027321
You can't buy food with publicity and exposure.
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>>26027353
/pol/ did

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/4chan#.22This_post_is_art.22
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>>26027353
This
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>>26027353
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>>26026387
I love you!
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>>26027396
I wonder if I can hang my sides up as modern art.
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>>26027373
only on 4chan.

the auction was a hoax though
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>>26026959
>better style, more character, better backgrounds, interesting poses, better perspectives and angles.
>op's work is better than almost anything get off Hasbro's dick
Had to edit that for you.
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>>26026599

>better than fosgitt

Isn't a big deal. compare his work with another artist like fleecs or garwoska, Op is still better in lineart and speed but he need to improve the backgrounds
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>>26026935
>arms
that's the fucking problem, they're drawn as if they were humans
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>>26026387
this is fucking fantastic

dont forget your contractions though friend
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>>26027523
>he need to improve the backgrounds
backgrounds take up a lot of time. i would rather have more comic pages than better backgrounds.
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>>26027546
Wasn't the human-esque features appealing, though? Like the short kitty-snouts and child-like foreheads?
They can be very anthro.
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>>26027642
>short kitty-snouts and child-like foreheads
You mean the piglet aesthetic? Seriously, I'm pretty sure the guy has drawn Looney Tunes comics. Compare his work on pone with his version of Porky Pig. It's uncanny.
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>>26027683
It's pretty obvious the guy is just ripping off the Baby Looney Tunes style. He wants to keep drawing his two-legged cute animals with disproportionately large heads and I guess nobody was bothered to tell him that ponies don't really work that way.
And just by checking EqD comments about the latest comic it's obviously working because they are adoring the art, I guess the mentality there is on the level of MLP's target audience. But as long as bronies like it, Fosgitt has no reason to try harder, and nobody has a reason to fire him, so watch out for more.
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>>26026599

>that comic

He only need 10 second to find greta in goggle.
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>>26027436
__________________________
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>>26027816
why is every artist working for hasbro so shit
they don't give the slightest fuck about anything
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>>26027816
maybe she ate a lot of those cakes
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>>26027816
>>26027891
well, that explains the body fat.
but why she looks like the hawk of looney toons? i mean, she had white and green feathers
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>>26027844
And yet it's sickeningly hard ta get hired there.
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>>26027976
Have you tried?
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>>26027816
Holy shit I have more of a reason to not read the offical comics
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>>26028010
You will if this thread sink anon !
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So epin IDW hate aside. What's next for our faceless friend and how will Maud react to him?
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>>26028638
I overdid the Gym a bit today so shaky hands make drawing difficult. However I have plans...
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>>26026008
>"Marble. You startled me."
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>>26028671
>I overdid the Gym a bit today
You're gonna make it, brah
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>>26028480
I WILL NOT LET THIS SHIP SINK!!
HOIST THE SAILS!!
CLOSE THE HATCHETS!!
THROW TE KEKS OVERBOARD!!
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>>26028757
>going to the gym
>not using nanomachines
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>>26028758
AYE AYE CAPTAIN
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>>26028758
Mission "KeepThisTreadAlive", GO !

Ho, wait, Godanon is back...
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>>26028758
shall we deploy emergency flotation devices, cap'n?
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>>26026599
>>26027816
Guys, this isn't the cringe thread
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>>26029116
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>>26027320
She already has a canon cutie mark
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fucking great
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>This fucking comic

mha heart
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You've attracted a lot of attention, OP.
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Will this the best thread of 2016? Not likely
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>>26026387
wew senpai
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>>26029971
wow, rude
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Have at thee.
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>>26030139
YEESSSSS
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>>26030139
My God Maud truly is autistic.
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>>26030203
I'd still fuck her.
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>>26030139
Dude every panel in your comic is fucking gold
Don't stop!
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>>26030139
kek
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>>26030139
marble should tell anon to hide then.
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>>26030139
Every update is like Christmas.
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>>26030139
You motherfucker are extremelly talented

No one ever makes a fucking comic page that quickly and THAT good

Tell us your secret, oh so great and powerfull drawfriend
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>>26030139
Thank you based Anon !
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>>26004752
>>26030139
I wonder if Boulder's mom is named Tamantha
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>>26030139
I don't know what was I doing with my life before finding this...
Now I still have no idea, but your drawing are awesome.
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>>26030324
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>>26030139
Who are you, pony jesus? You pop in out of nowhere performing artistic miracles like it's nothing, with no name, no traceable previous pony art, just bam, top tier comic
In under 3 days you do 6 pages which is like 20 panels each with a new pose, nothing reused, even speed is on your side, this thread singlehandedly BTFO'd the IDW shills
Everything just works, I don't know who you are but I fucking love you
This is prolly even better than when Catfood did the Maud comic here back then
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>>26030455
Catfood has a different style, but it's not bad. That's what makes artists so loved, and hated. Don't be disrespectful to people who provide decent art for the amusement of others to please one guy, no matter how talented he is anon.
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>>26030139
Just, WHO are you? You seriously need a nickname!
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>>26030227
>taking advantage of the disabled
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>>26030499
He goes by Pencils on DB, it seems
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>>26030499
Didn't he named himself "Ponyprints"?
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>>26030518
Maybe we shall call him DBPencil?
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>>26030533
nah

DeBestPencil is cooler
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>>26030518
Pencils is the designation of the penciller / main artist in comic books, Which is why I use it. Nice and anonymous yet descriptive.
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Honestly Anonymous is the best name possible.
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>>26030480
Oh no, I didn't mean to berate Catfood at all. I have tremendous respect for the guy and his projects (which actually made me create a goddamn tumblr just so I could follow all his various stuff easily). I made the comment with strictly the comparison of these two events in mind - back then (holy shit almost 2 years ago) we got the two dubs comics, with all the randomness you get going dubs decide, while now it's a bit more coherent thanks to the CYOA nature.
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>>26030503
How, exactly?
She's a (fairly high functioning) autist, sure.
She also holds or is pursuing some kind of rock-related degree, and contributes to the family business.
She understands what she wants fine, she just doesn't do well socially.
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>>26026387
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>>26030625
She fucking is going to take her pet rock to meet its pet rock family, kept in a barn. I can only imagine how long it took them to house-break her
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>>26030455
>This is prolly even better than when Catfood did the Maud comic here back then
Hey now, I believe that there is heresy, mister!
But you're not wrong
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Post the new thread in here if one is made.
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>>26028757
Isn't he dead from taking too many steroids? or some shit
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>>26030805
think his heart gave out
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>>26030805
>>26030829
Yeah, he had a heart attack in a Thai sauna or something. Pretty tragic, he was a cool guy.
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>>26030803
For your bookmarks, so will be done.
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>>26030139
Thank you based draw friend.
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>>26030139
Hey dude Pencil OP, if you are still awake, go to bed. Its late dont wear yourself out for us.
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>>26030139
Your Maud is 10/10 OP.
Larson himself couldn't write better dialogues.
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This comic really makes me want to cuddle the fuck out of Marble.
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This thread gets me rock hard
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>>26031174
This.
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>>26031384
This comic really makes me want to fuck the fuck out of Marble.
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>>26031744
This. This comic is fucking cute af yo. Drawfrieng, keep doing what you're doing.
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>>26031384
Is she petting crystals?
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>>26027996
Once, yes.
And then I realized that I hated Hasbro, so I never did a followup reacharound application.
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beautiful work man, please keep it comin!
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>>26032416
She's petting herself.
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>>26030139
>that inkie
>that maud
You're an alright guy, OP
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>>26030203
fite me
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Can we name the next thread the non-maybe sexually adventures of Anon in rock farm?
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>All the community love and support in this thread.
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>>26034224
ikr
Soon we'll call ourselves ponyfags and spam brohooves.
Good job OP
/)
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>>26034224
4chan likes when someone does something well without being a faggot about it. Go figure.
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>>26031174
Marble is drawn beautifully but so ooc for me
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>>26034696
Not her fault she can't control herself. Can't trump the stump!
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>>26030139
10/10
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>>26032574
B-but shekels!
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>>26030682
She has a strong interest in rocks (such over-interest in a thing is par for the course with autism of all types) and an active imagination (and perhaps rock tulpas).
This doesn't make sex with her somehow wrong.
Merely a bit more of a challenge due to the autism barrier.
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>>26006955

bumb :----D
esting in poopins xD never forget world master ice hockey 1939-1945
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>>26027396
I think the cleaning lady got it right.
She needs a promotion to Art Director.
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Based
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>>26003559
Fuck that picture triggers me.
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Suomi mainittu torilla tavataan
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>>26036217
I used to have a passing interest in learning Finnish, but now...
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>>26030852
Eh, seems like a massive faggot to me
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paranoid bump
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>>26036666
QUADS FOR THE DUBS GOD
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>>26014041
>>26030852
>last thing I recall is going to a sauna
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>>26036666
Satan you are drunk
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>>26036757
It is all making sense
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>>26036666
Bump for satan!
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>>26034368
>>26034224
Are you implying this is bad? Look at >>26034401

You kinda sound like people who came to 4chan just for /mlp/ and are trying to emulate the chided and cynical mindset but don't know discretion. What, spend a day on /b/ or something?
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>>26036975
Woooooooooaaaaah

Isn't it cold up there? For your defenses I mean.
I don't think there is oxygen that high.
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>If OP started a patreon and pandered to /mlp/ he could make a living off this
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OB, wher r u? :DDD
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Since my backgrounds were said to be lacking I decided to add a bit more time to them, Thus slower page generation speed.
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>>26037268
Oh marble sweetie
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>>26037268
YUS
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>>26037268
Funland delivers again
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>>26037268
noice
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>>26037268
This is fantastic.
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>>26037268
Uh oh Anon gonna have a visitor
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>>26037268
Appreciate the effort. I thought the backgrounds looked fine before, but now they look even better. I like the depth you convey with just grayscale.
Also, Maud fun times yisss
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>>26037005
I'm not even those guys. Just calling it how I see it.
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>>26037268
Ayyy
Also, try to use more contractions. It'll feel less stiff if you use "you're" instead of "you are", "you'll" instead of "you will", " I'm" instead of " I am", ect.
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>>26037413
I chose to make Maud more "stiff" sounding though because of her stoic nature and overall spergy awkwardness. It just fits her.
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You know what's funny?If I'm going to show this masterpieces on my native imageboard,fags'll probably going to call it shit in comparison to IDW.Most probably will come up with this kind of arguments,will try to protect them with straight face,too.Not because they like IDW,but simply because they would prefer to swallow shit done by "professionals" rather then touch anything done by amatures,and having "You called it shit so I'm going to demonstratively chew on it,because it's progressive and probably makes you butthurt)))"-attitude.
I'm so glad I'm HERE ,guys.
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>>26037268
I really really really like you man
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>>26037423
So far, I highly approve every single aspect of you comic.
Every - single - one.

Just so you know.
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>>26037268
Marble sure has her mouth open a lot.
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>>26036666
>6666
Got it ,boss!
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>>26037423
its fitting for her yes. also the headcanon that Marble is the kind of kid that would sneak/take in random animals and wanting to keep them as pets is acceptable to me. That she would try it with another talking species that builds cities is even better.
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>>26037455
Y-you too.
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>>26037413
With the other characters sure, Maud needs to stay stiff.

>>26037423
Your first four pages avoided a bunch of contractions as well.
>Since I am no longer on the menu
>I am just a man
>I am not a tulip or a dream, I am a pony

That's likely what he was speaking of. Usually how it works is that as someone introduces new characters they change existing and new speech patterns to help differentiate, so it's likely that Marble and Anon will mostly use contractions in the future. To avoid changing speech patterns after the fact write a few short dialogs between any characters you intend to use. Establish their voice and speech patterns, and how they differ from others, early on.

Just a small writing tip on establishing character voices.
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>>26030533
Ponyprints is just an autistic namefag
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>>26037455
>Most probably will come up with this (>>26026959) kind of arguments...
What a time to be a fuck up.
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>>26037498
Hmm, you are correct, I'll look out for it in the future,
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I can't recall the image limit for MLP, was it 150? Should I make a new thread with the next page?
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>>26037526
I'll spoonfeed so you don't do anything stupid
Bump limit: 500 posts
Image limit: 250 pics seriously, lurk moar
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>>26037526
250 on /mlp/
/b/ is only place with 150 if I recall correctly
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>>26037490
So, she's *literally* Grey Fluttershy then?
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>>26037542
Any board with a bump limit of 300 has an image limit of 150 with a few exceptions.
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>>26037555
yes.
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>>26037557
Mostly image dump boards get 300/250 post/bump ratio. For some reason /jp/ has 310/300.
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>>26037555
shit wai- i mean, Fluttershy 3.0 confirmed, trips never lie
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>>26037268
I'm no expert with drawing at all, and I appreciate your effort to make your backgrounds look much more lively, but I think this is something that should be confined to just establishing a new environment. You had the first two panels of the background down-packed. We can see that both of them are standing about 20 feet away from the barn and a little bit into a field. That's fine and dandy. From hereon out, your backgrounds can be much less detailed, because we already know where they're at. The times where you should be doing detailed backgrounds for dialogue scenes are when the dialogue itself is making a statement on the area around them, or there's no dialogue, which should be a given.


If I sound like a huge faggot talking out of my ass, that's probably because I am. Do what you feel is right, I'm just saying there are places to cut corners without tarnishing the quality your work (and dare I say, you draw ponies -fantastically-) as a whole.
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>>26037555
A grey, less annoying version of fluttershit.
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>>26026959
>>26037498
>>26037630
>>26037413

This shit reminds me of: http://www.bartleby.com/17/1/62.html
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>>26037691
I'm very pleased. That doesn't mean there aren't points where it can be further improved.
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>>26036217
Tää
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>>26037555
Marble is just basic Fluttershy in rock grey without all the later season's bells and whistles.

You want more assertiveness? For an extra fee, it'll be yours. You want an extra draconequus in the mix? That'll cost extra. Want an optional weed pony for fun times? Pay more money.

I don't get why a more shallow character is better liked. Maybe it's because some of you think Fluttershy's ruined as a character? Meh.
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>>26037691
I was being self-aware in my post. Art is subjective and most of what I said comes down to personal taste.

Art is a delicate, well, art.
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>>26037766
I think its more of a reminder of the early days of the show, when it was all new and exiting and we still felt hope for the world in general.
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I need more... I need Anon to fuck up everything and being in embarrassing situations, now...
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>>26037834
What if several of the fuckups somehow gets interpreted as sexual advances by the ponies? Like, he goes to put on a towel around his waist, trips, and while still holding the towel in one hand manages to whip one of the ponies on the butt with it?
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Let OP make the new thread
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As a notification, this post is now #506 ITT. Please wait until this thread hits page 7 or 8 to make a new one.
Actually, this >>26037912 too.

And most of all, don't panic.
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Something a little different tomorrow!
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>>26038019
based
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>>26038019
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New thread required soon
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new thread, please
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>>26038019
Lovein it
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>>26038087
New thread here:
>>26038115
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I'm aware that Imgur.com will stop allowing adult images since 15th of May. I'm taking actions to backup as much data as possible.
Read more on this topic here - https://archived.moe/talk/thread/1694/


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