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Adagio first, let her take the lead.
Aria second, hot and heavy angry sex.
Sonata last, lovely sensual lovemaking with lots of groping and kissing.
And we continue with the sporadic green
>Dagi starts to get in the shower
"Relax." she said, "I'm not going to do anything to you. I'm just going to help you clean up."
>she gets behind you and starts washing your back
"How's that feel?" she asks
>she scrubs your back with gentle circular motions
"It feels.. pretty nice."
"Hey Dagi, right here?" asked Sonata
"Oh yes, perfect."
"Huh? Sonata, what's go- INGINGING!!!"
>Sonata just stuck her fingers up your butt
>you didn't feel anything go in though
>she probably just poked the anus
>regardless it still gave you a shock
and had you moving forward to the wall
>you hear both of them laughing
"Oho! That was perfect Sonata!" said Dagi, "You should've seen his face!"
"I wish I did!" said Sonata
>you were grumbling
"Didn't I tell you, Anon?" she said while flipping her wet sponge like hair, "I told you I would get you back for that because I always get what I want."
>okay that's it
>you furrow your brow
"Well then. You got me but now it's my turn."
"And how will you do that?"
"Easy. Sonata, hold her."
>Sonata holds onto Dagi's legs tight
"Wha?! Let go Sonata!"
"Don't let go of her."
>you grab her hands
"I think you need to learn more about discipline."
>you pin Dagi's hands to the shower wall while Sonata is still holding on to her legs
"Hold on a second. What are you doing?"
"Sonata, you said you wouldn't mind if I did Dagi too right?"
"Uh-huh. I think she might enjoy it."
"Wait, you don't mean-!?"
"You /did/ say you wanted a turn."
"B-but not like this! I wanted it on the bed!"
"That's really nice but there's been a change of plans."
>Implying Adagio who is all show will know anything more than the bare essentials of procreational sex
>Implying Aria won't be awkwardly arrogant in an effort to hide the fact that she's nervous and intimidated
>Implying Sonata won't abuse you for her kinky pleasure
>Implying you're not
Man, I wish I could draw this.
>"Easy. Sonata, hold her."
>>Sonata holds onto Dagi's legs tight
>"Wha?! Let go Sonata!"
>"Don't let go of her."
>"I think you need to learn more about discipline."
>"That's really nice but there's been a change of plans."
Awww yeah. Get rekt Adagio
>you used the shower to clean Sonata's mouth to take out any remaining semen in her mouth and then proceeded to kiss her
"That was great Anon!" she said with a big smile
>you both look at Dagi sitting at the edge of the shower
>she's twitching while still in an eye rolled daze
>the water was washing down all the semen that was on her
"Maybe we should clean her up." said Sonata, "It would feel wrong just to leave her like this."
>you and Sonata spent a half hour giving Adagio a shower
>you were washing her legs
>Sonata was shampooing the hair
>during all that Adagio woke up from her daze
>she immediately noticed the both of you
"Wha-What are you doing?!" she yelled
"We are giving you a shower. Now hold still."
>she started kicking and failing around until you and Sonata left the shower
>she looks at both of you with an angry face
"I can do it myself!" she yells before slamming the shower door
>well that happened
>she probably feels humiliated after everything that happened
>you're still surprised how Sonata was okay with having sex with another woman
>but would it still be cheating if she was involved in the three way?
>you pondered about this as you started walking out of the bathroom
>she started giggling as you both got out
"That was really fun." she said, "I've always wanted to wash her hair."
>you hear a knock
"Professor? It's me, Cadence."
Yeah you should probably just write out the scene from now on. You did a decent job with the Sonata one and you could probably be a bit more creative and kinky with this portion given that you already started it out with an almost anal probing.
I love you, /dzg/
B-but you haven't even bought me dinner yet
"Let go of me!" yelled Adagio
"It's no use, consider this a punishment."
"But it was Sonata who poked you!"
"I know, she will get her share as well."
>Sonata looks at you with wide eyes
>it caused her to hold on to Adagio tighter
>you get closer as Dagi tries to move her arms to escape your grip
>you kissed Dagi's neck
"Sonata, take off her panties."
>she takes off Dagi's wet underwear
>you move back and take a good look at her exposed lower body
>huh no hair either
>you notice Dagi looking at you with anger and embarrassment
>she's probably too embarrassed to even struggle out of your grip
>but just to be sure
"Hey Sonata, that thing you did to me, how about we try it with Dagi?"
"W-What?!" yelled Dagi "You can't do that!"
"First off wash your hand and then stick up your index and middle fingers."
>she washes her hands with the water falling from the shower head and sticks up her index and middle
"Now turn your hand to the left."
>she does that and her hand is facing up
"Now slowly go to her vagina and rub it."
>she starts gently rubbing Dagi's vagina
>Dagi was breathing in a quick rhythm
>suddenly Sonata stopped
"Do I rub this too?" she asks
>it's the clitoris
"Oh that part you can play with but make sure you do it a LOT."
"Wait don't!" said Dagi
>but its no use
>Sonata kept playing with the clitoris, rubbing, pinching and licking it
>Dagi let out a collection of moans and squeaks while trying to squirm out of your grip
>but it's no use
"Okay Sonata, now stick those fingers in."
>Sonata stops and and brings up her middle and index finger again and puts it in Dagi's vagina
"Now pull and push your fingers in slowly."
>it was quite amusing to watch despite thinking this is not morally correct
>but this is happening
>in your apartment
>in your bathroom
>it's your rules
>Sonata kept moving her fingers back and forth as Adagio let out squeals and moans
"S-stooooooop iiiiiit!" she said
>she started to rock her hips
"Now Sonata put in three fingers and do it as fast as you can!"
>Sonata started putting her ring finger inside with the other two and she was pushing and pulling out at an intense speed
>Dagi was screaming and started doing convulsions
>liquid started spurting out of the vagina
>Dagi started to lose strength in her legs and would've fallen in the corner if you weren't still holding up her arms
>she was breathing heavy
>there we go
"Good job, Sonata."
"What do I do now?" asked Sonata
>you move your pelvis near Sonata aiming your erection at her face
"I think you know what's next."
>she looks at your dick and licks her lips
>she lets go of Dagi's legs and crawls on all fours to you
>she opens her mouth wide with her tongue out
>she moves closer and takes your dick in her mouth
>she didn't even use her hands
>she started moving her tongue as if she was massaging the bottom of your shaft
>eventually she starts moving her head back and forth but much faster than she did last night
>she really IS good a this
>you look at Dagi breathing heavy while looking at Sonata
>she's still weak from the orgasm
>you think she's ready
>you lower her to the bottom of the shower
>you let go of her hands and grab her head by the hair
>surprisingly she didn't make any protests
"Sonata, step back a bit."
>Sonata stops and pulls away from your dick
>Adagio's eyes widen when you aimed it at her
"What, what ar- MMMMMPH!!"
>you shove your dick in her mouth and proceed to finish the blowjob with her
>you kept moving her head back and forth while a random collection of 'MMPH's were heard from Dagi while she tried to push you away
>but it's no use
>Sonata just watched in awe
"She's so good in doing this. She's good in everything!"
>you went faster until you felt the pressure coming
"TAKE IT IN."
>you push Dagi in as close to you as much as you can while you came inside her mouth
>all she could do was say
>her eyes rolled up
I'll admit... not a fan of the complete flip in this character's personality the last few posts. Rape-y shit goes in the trash for me, especially when it's Dagi, for some reason. (But just muh opinion, and probably in the minority)
he kinda went from I'm like these girls dad to I'm gonna fuck'em.
I'm not sure how to feel about this.
i think I'd feel better about the whole thing if it was still the girls forcing them-selfs on him. but anon just straight up shoving his dick in digi's mouth to fucker her is pretty raw
At this point the only way you can salvage this is by saying it was a dream, because the way anon is behaving screams that you just wanted to write some smut.
It's your story though so continue as you wish.
Was that supposed to be sexy? Because it was horrifying.
Her asshole is on the side of her cheeks.
Still here, but had some major internet fail last time with lag. Not sure if can be arsed to worry about it this time around. If the timing falls nicely, then I'll likely give it a go.
>you let out the rest all over Dagi and Sonata's bodies
>that was crazy
>almost a bit too crazy...
>you look at Sonata licking the semen off her
Aaaaaand continued on >>25991869
Aria. She might come across as a perpetual grump, but I think she's got a soft side to her. I don't quite agree that the sex would be angry; that would imply that she's dominant, which she's clearly not.
"Oh, hang on a second!"
>you head to the door and open it
>you see Dean Cadence with a huge bag of clothes
>you assume those are the uniforms she saved
>Cadence walks in and you close the door
"These are all the uniforms I collected."
"Wow, the girls will be quite happy."
>you hear a door open
>you turn to see Dagi coming out of the bathroom in a robe and a towel wrapped on her head
>she immediately noticed you
>she squints her eyes and quickly goes to her bedroom
>yeah she's mad at you
>well any normal person would after all that happened
>it's probably gonna take more than an apology to fix that
"Um, professor? Did something happen to her?" Asked Cadence, "She seems upset."
"Uh, let's just say.. A few things happened."
>you gesture to Sonata telling her not to say anything
>this is probably the worst thing you could do as a teacher and they aren't even your students yet
>though what are the chances they'll take your classes?
"So professor, are you going to call them over?"
"Well, Dagi is-"
"Is what, Anon?"
>you turned to see Dagi dressed in a shirt and shorts with a towel in her hand to dry her hair
"Oh, I was gonna say you were busy."
>she walks forward while drying er hair with the towel and lightly punches you while passing you
"So I hear you have uniforms for us?" Dagi asked
"Yes, I do!" said Cadence, "Our uniforms are pretty expensive but these are free for you girls. Consider it a thank you gift for all the help the Professor has done."
>she looks at you and raises an eyebrow
"Yes, ALL the help he's done." said Dagi
>you walk to Aria's room and knock on the door
"Aria? We have-"
>the suddenly door opens and Aria storm walks past you without even a glance
>you then remember what you did to her earlier
>great, two out of three girls that you live with hate you
>then again you shouldn't be surprised
>you head over to Cadence
"Hey Dean Cadence, since you know more about female clothes than I do, how about you help them with the uniforms?"
"What about you?" asked Cadence
"I'm gonna get some lunch for them and I think they'll be better off with you than me right now."
>you grab your keys and look at the girls before you leave
>Dagi and Aria are looking through the uniforms while Sonata waves goodbye
>you leave the apartment and close the door
>the walk along the red hallway felt heavy
>after you left the building and headed into your car, you just sat there and tried to think about this
>you thought about what you did to them
>especially the recent events with Dagi and Aria
>you start thinking
>why did you take in these girls in the first place?
>they needed a home
>they had nothing with them but each other
>they dealt with some very harsh situations
>that guy who just took advantage of her
>suddenly it hit you
>you took them in to take care of them
>to give them a home and a loving family
>but in the end you were no better than that scumbag who tricked Sonata and hurt her
>you smack your head on the wheel
"I'm such an idiot.."
>you need to find a way to fix this and fast
>you start the car and drive out to the city to get the girls lunch
>you drive to Appledee's
>your grab some quesadillas and some steak meals
>you should get something for Cadence
>maybe some pasta
>you bought the huge bundle of food and you put each entree in its own delivery box
>you bring it all to the car
>you would've made it back in time to assist with the uniform fitting but it looks like there was construction on your usual roads
>after many, many detours and an hour and ten minutes later, you finally made it back to the apartment complex
>you sigh with relief and headed to the parking lot
>as you parked in the lot and got out of the car, you spot Cadence heading out of the building
"Oh, professor! You sure took your time getting food."
"Yeah, I had quite a hard time finding what to get."
Haha, knowing you and your thinking habits, I wouldn't be surprised. Anyways, the uniforms fit the girls pretty well. I was really surprised with Sonata's measurements."
"Hahaha.. you don't say."
"I think you need to talk to Adagio and Aria. They seem very upset and Sonata was pretty quiet. It felt quite uncomfortable."
>you look down
"Professor, did you do something to them?"
"You.. could say that."
>Cadence tilts her head in curiosity then straight
"Professor, I don't know what happened so I don't really have a say in this but.."
>you raise your head
"You must remember that these are young girls. They still have the rest of their lives ahead of them."
>she puts her hand on your shoulder
"It's our duty as teachers to make sure they grow and learn so they can face their future with smiles on their faces and since you are their guardian, teacher and father figure, it must be your greatest challenge
>suddenly you remember the letter from the pony Starswirl
"It was my greatest failure. Please teach them what I could not."
>a tear comes down your eye
"Professor?" said Cadence, "Are you okay?"
"Y-yes, Dean Cadence."
>you shake her hand
"Thank you for opening my eyes. You've always done that for me. I really owe you one."
"Haha, now you owe me two."
"I'll keep that in mind."
>you both laugh
"Oh by the way, here."
>you give the Appledee's box to Cadence
"I bought you some Appledee's pasta."
"Oh, thank you! I'm sure Shining Armor will enjoy this as well."
"Tell him, I said hi."
>Cadence takes the box and heads to her car
>you wave goodbye after she drives out of the parking lot
>you look at the apartment complex and take a deep breath
>this is gonna be a tough wall to fix
If you mean Dominagio pics then there's pic related plus the following. Probably more.
Though, you only get one wish. I'm off to bed. Though I've been toying with the idea of a green about the Dazzlings breaking anon and Sunset into a pair of sextoys/frightened animals through rape and torture (physical and psychological) for months. I don't feel I have the skill to do the idea justice otherwise I'd do it.
Anon needs to ignore the problem and pick up a bad habit like alcoholism or fighting in those ring outside bars. Eventually the girls will see how much he's been destroying himself inside and how much guilt he feels and forgive him.
That or puss out and do the womanly thing by talking about your feelings.
>'I heard you like Sonata more than me'
But I like Adagio the most.
lets ruin it
damn wasn't even close. also shimmer got it.
her face when
Well you guys got some dubs, so it was something.
And I mean Grape Grump, obviously
All of this Aria pleases me
>you make it back to your apartment
>you unlock the door
"Hey, Anon! Welcome back!"
>Sonata greets you, wearing the school uniform
>she twirls around happily
>it looks really nice on her
>however you really need to speak about something
"Sonata, I need to talk to you."
"What is it?"
"Sit on the couch and I'll tell you."
>you both got on the couch and you notice Aria is there as well
>she looks away from you
"Sonata, I want to say I'm sorry."
"What are you sorry for?" she asks
"I used you."
"What we did to Adagio wasn't right, I shouldn't have told you to do those things."
"Are you sure? I mean, it was fun."
"It doesn't change the fact that it's still wrong. I'm your guardian now. I can't do these things to you girls. I would be in serious trouble."
"What are you saying?"
"What I'm saying is we can't have sex anymore."
>Sonata's mouth opens and Aria turns to you with wide eyes
>both were shocked
"Bu-but why?" asked Sonata
"So you're not marrying her anymore?" asked Aria
"Aria, I said I wasn't marrying-"
>Sonata turns to Aria
"Wait, marriage?! He wanted to marry me?!"
"That's what Anon told me. He said sex was a sign of marriage."
>Sonata turns her head to you
"You want to marry me, Anon?" She asked with a happy face, "I wouldn't mind!"
>oh great, more to explain..
"Ugh, Sonata you are..."
>you really can't say 'too young' since they are over 500 years old
>find a detour
"still growing up."
"You both still have the rest of your life to look forward. Did you have any dreams you wanted to accomplish?"
"Oh, I dunno." said Aria, "I mean we wanted to rule the world but that's down the toilet.."
"Same here.." said Sonata
"How about finding a new dream?"
"It's easy and I can help you out."
"You really gonna help us?" asked Aria
"Yes. I am a teacher after all. It's what I do."
>speaking of which
"Aria, did you try on the uniforms?"
"I did." said Aria, "It's too girly for me."
>somehow you don't feel surprised hearing that
"But they are comfortable. I'll need to wear something for my legs though. I hate wearing skirts in the cold."
"Oh, me too!" said Sonata, "Short skirts in the cold are the worst."
"Alright, we'll go to the mall later this week and find something to fix that."
>and hopefully it's within the school dress code
>well, Aria and Sonata seem to be fine
>up next is..
"Girls, I'm gonna check on Dagi. There's lunch on the kitchen table so go ahead and eat."
"Be careful." said Sonata, "Dagi is really mad."
"I'm not surprised."
"Have fun, loser." said Aria before leaving for the kitchen
>you get off the couch as walk to you bedroom
>you reach the door
"Dagi, you in there? I need to get something from my room."
>you knock on the door
"But it's my room."
"I need to go to my room."
"How about you FORCE your way inside?"
"Dagi listen, I'm sorry for what I did. I got a bit out of hand with it.."
>she opens the door and her head sticks out
>her face is filled with anger
"A BIT out of hand?!"
>you step back
"Okay, I went WAY out of hand. I just wanted to get back at you for the near-probing and I guess I lost it. I'm really sorry. I'll do anything to make up for it."
>her eyebrow raised
>you hesitated but you exhale
>she rubs her chin
>she retreats and closes the door
"Um, what about my room?"
>this is getting annoying
>the door opens
>Dagi's hand moves out and gestures to go inside the room
"Come inside." she said
"Um, it's my room though."
>she grabs you by the collar and pulls you in
>after bringing you in the room, she closed and locked the door
>she looks at you, eyes squinted
>she pushes you onto the bed and gets on top you
>suddenly she moves closer and kisses you
>she pulls back
"I told you, I wanted to do it on the bed but you /had/ to do that and ruin it for me. Be glad we didn't go any further from that blowjob or I would've hated you forever."
"So.. you don't hate me now?"
"I am mad at you for doing that to me. Now it's payback time."
"Wait, wha- MPH!!"
>Dagi covers your mouthwatering her hand while raising her index finger
>she lets go your mouth
"Y-you don't seriously mean..?"
>there's that seductive look
>this doesn't make any sense
"You don't get it, do you Anon?" said Dagi, "I /always/ get what I want."
>she leans in closer until you were face to face with her
>you tried to say something
>but it's no use
"Now then, Anon. Take off your clothes."
>you stare at her
>she gives looks at you intensely
"As you wish, Adagio Dazzle."
>Dazzles and pone
>after everything you said to Aria and Sonata, you still had to go through this
> you couldn't really say no since you said you'd do anything to make it up to her
>however once you were about to take your shirt off, she stops you
"Stop right there."
"I said stop. We aren't going any further."
>she gets off you and unlocks the door
>she looks at you, chuckling
"I wanted to see if you were really true to your word."
"Now that I know you'll do anything to make up for it, I'll be keeping it in mind for something special later."
"So are you still mad?"
"To be honest, it was humiliating but the way you tasted."
>Dagi turns and opens the door
>she had a mischievous smile on her face
"It was delicious."
>she leaves the room
>sex suddenly sounded like a better punishment
>you feel like you're going to regret this
>you put your shirt back down and head out of the bedroom
>Dagi was already at the kitchen, eating steak with the others
>you feel uneasy walking to them
>you don't know what to say or do
>you walk to the kitchen
>they notice you
>you stand there, scratching your head
"Aren't you gonna sit down?" said Aria
"Yeah, Anon. Sit down!" said Sonata
>you sit down between Dagi and Sonata
>you being to open your box and eat your steak
>wow, this is pretty good
>Dagi just kept looking at you as you ate
>it felt kind of creepy
>Aria stops midway cutting her steak
"You know, I kind of miss this." said Aria, "Eating nice food, a bed to sleep on. Back then, we just trying to get by but now we are living pretty good. I feel I could get used to this new lifestyle."
"Well, I hope you get used school next month."
"Don't expect me to convert to your preppy attitude, BLEH."
"I think Aria is best the way she is, haha."
"Me too!" said Sonata, laughing
>you lean over the table to pat Aria on the head
>she swipes your hand after three pats
"Don't touch me." she said
"Glad to see you are back to normal, doofus."
"You were acting really strange today. Like you just changed personalities or something."
"Yeah, almost like magic." said Sonata, chewing a piece of steak
"But yeah, I needed to clear my head for a bit. I don't know why I acted like that to you girls."
>you look at them
"I'm really sorry. I really am."
"Apology accepted!" said Sonata
"What she said." said Aria
"By the way, what's this Christmas Eve thing that pink lady was talking about?" asked Aria
"Oh Dean Cadence? Oh that's right, you girls never heard of Christmas."
"What's that?" asked Sonata
"It's a special holiday where people celebrate peace and joy around the world."
"Sounds boring." said Aria
"Everywhere there's a party with lots of food and drinks."
"I'm liking this holiday already." Sonata said while drooling over her nearly finished steak
"But what has everyone is that everyone gets gifts!"
"/Everyone/ gets a gift?" Asked Aria
"Well it's more like in the spirit of goodwill and giving. You give gifts to friends and family because you love them."
"Eh, I'd rather get the gifts than give them."
"Me too!" said Sonata, "I hope they can give food!"
"They do or gift cards to enjoy fancy restaurants."
>Sonata's face was in ecstasy
"Well tomorrow is Christmas Eve and I can wait to give you girls your gifts."
"You got us gifts?!"
"Haha, yup and I think you girls will like them."
"Can it be Christmas Eve now?!"
"Slow down, you'll have to wait when it's Christmas Eve at night."
"That's too long! Can it be in the afternoon pleeeeeease?!"
>Sonata looks at you with puppy dog eyes
>Aria grins with a raised eyebrow
>it's like she's saying 'why don't you just give it to us already?'
"Alright, I'll give your gifts tomorrow afternoon."
>Sonata gives a 'Woo-Hoo' and high fives Aria
>you finish your steak and clean up the table
We go hard all day all night
>would you fuck the dazzlings?
With a bit of Sonata on the side.
With Adagio, probably 4 or 5 times a day.
More during weekends.
Sonata maybe about once a day.
How hard? Hard enough to make them moan, groan, and squeal.
I'd first try my luck with any of them, then court the one, then marry the one and
have sex in the missionary position for the sole reason of procreation during a monogamous marriage for life and then fuck her senseless
This general is still here? Thats pretty fucking rad.
You have no idea.
no. I'd be besties though. and totally not because I don't have the confidence to really do much of anything else.
>however you just realized Dagi hasn't said a word to you the whole time
>this is getting weirder
>the rest of the day went by quick
>it started with you brushing Sonata's and Aria's hair while they watch television
>you question if this is what you'll be doing from now on..
>Dagi was there just watching happily
>she didn't want you to brush her hair
>she said something like 'If I want my hair brushed by you, I'll tell you.'
>you assume she's still thinking of that 'anything' favor you owe her
>you take this moment to enjoy the peaceful moment you are having with the girls
>you feel like a single dad taking care of his own daughters
>and ignoring all the sexual activities, forced or consensual, that happened beforehand
>you want to brush it off you
>pun not intended.
>you spent the rest of the day cleaning up the apartment while the girls continued watching the television
>seems they are watching some pony cartoon
>looking at it, it fits the description of the world Sonata and the others were from
>ponies, pegasai, rainbows and magic
>the characters have surprisingly realistic personalities
>it's almost like it's their actual world
>you're overthinking it
>it was dinner time and you decided to treat the girls to eat out
>you chose a Chinese buffet with a sushi bar
>you should probably lay off the fatty foods
>you grabbed almost every piece that was offered
>even the sushi bar
>however Sonata had a huge haul from the sushi bar
>she ate those rolls like a shark
>it's bringing attention to the other customers in the nearby tables
>you try and ignore it
>Aria was enjoying her barbecue ribs and Dagi was enjoying the chow mein
>funny, a little change in the color and they would look like Dagi's hair
>you laugh at the thought
"Waffo fani?" asked a mouth stuffed Sonata
"Oh nothing, just noodles. Also, don't talk with your mouth full."
>the remainder of the time at the restaurant was peaceful
>you drove back to the complex and the girls were already sleeping by the time you parked your car
>you tried to wake then up but only Sonata and Dagi woke up
>Aria probably ate too much
>you carried Aria in her arms while she was still sleeping
>you managed to make it back to your apartment thanks to Dagi and Sonata
>you quickly tuck Aria to bed and took off her spiky hair pins
>safety in sleep
>you yawn and walk to the couch
>Sonata waits there and you can see she's really sleepy
"Remember when you said you'd do anything to make up for what happened this morning?"
"Then how's this? I forbid you to sleep with Sonata."
"Last night, I was really upset I didn't get to sleep with you. I miss sleeping on your arms and since you slept with Sonata and then slept with her, I figured it would be hard to leave her."
"I think it's time for payback. I'm going to separate you two so when you go to sleep, you won't be able to sleep with each other."
"Aaaand how's that payback?"
"Sonata loves you. She wants to sleep with you every night and now with my rule, she can't. It'll affect her slowly."
>you look at Sonata
>she's already asleep on the couch
>yeah that plan is going pretty well
"What's so funny?"
"Heh, nothing. Fine then, as you wish Adagio Dazzle. I shall only sleep with you."
"Oho, is that supposed to be a sarcastic gesture?"
"No. Just being polite to my 'master'."
"I think I'll enjoy tonight." she said
>thankfully nothing sexual happened
>just the two of you sleeping on your bed, peacefully
>you especially even with Dagi sleeping on your right arm
>though it felt nice using her hair as a pillow
>it feels really nice and soft
>you drifted to sleep pretty quick
>you find yourself in a blizzard
>like holy crap it's cold
>you hear the song again
>you see the three silhouettes again
>you immediately recognize them
>it's the girls
>you run to them
>but they go farther from you
>every time you keep moving closer they go farther
>you kept going until their image disappears in the snow
>the blizzard grows heavier and heavier
>a giant snowball comes at you
>you need to run
>but it's no use
>the ball comes right at you
>you wake up
>you feel like you're sweating
>you look to your right and Dagi is sleeping peacefully on your arm
>you slowly get off the bed while trying not to wake up Dagi
>you quietly get out of the bedroom and to the kitchen
>you decide to make pancakes
>you grabbed special holiday pans from the bottom drawer to make holiday shaped pancakes
>your cooking woke up Sonata
>she probably smelled the pancakes
"Ngh, goo' monin unon.." she says while walking to you
"Hehe, good morning Sonata."
>she's probably still trying to wake up
>she rubs her eyes
"What are you cooking? It smells great."
"Pancakes. It's going to be special for you girls."
>she leans in closer and kisses your cheek
"Can I have something else before the pancakes?"
"...What do you mean?"
>her hand reaches down your body
>you swipe your hand to hers away
"Sonata, I told you. No more sexual activities."
"Well, not now at least. Maybe after I finish cooking."
>Sonata's eyes widen and she smiles
"Yay." she says quietly
>you finish cooking the pancakes and set them up on the table with light maple syrup, butter and strawberries
>you check the bedrooms to see Aria and Dagi still asleep
>you head back to the kitchen
>Sonata waits at the table anxiously
"Sonata, this is going to be the last time we do this. After this we can't do anymore."
>she looks down in disappointment and then gets on her knees
"Alright then." she says, "Consider this my Christmas present."
>you pull down your pants and underwear revealing your dick, already erected
>Sonata gets closer and kisses it
>she kisses it a few times before putting it in her mouth
>she bobs her head back and forth >her rhythm was almost like a metronome
>she stops to massage your base with her tongue
>she pulls back and takes off her top, revealing her big breasts
>you sit down on a chair and Sonata sits on your lap
>you move the bottom part of underwear to the side, revealing her vagina
>you check to make sure she is wet with your fingers
>you align your dick to her vagina
>Sonata wraps her arms around you and looks at you with soft eyes
"I love you." she says before kissing you
>you push her hips down beginning the penetration
>you both continued kissing each other before you started moving
>however Sonata was the one who started
>she was grinding while you were still kissing
>After you stopped the kissing, she started moving her hips up and down
>no moans or squeaks were coming out of her
>just really heavy breathing
>you grabbed her breasts and started licking her nipples
>you look up to see Sonata had her hands covering her mouth, trying not to let out a sound
>you remembered you have to get Dagi and Aria up
>you need to finish quickly so you grab her hips and thrusted rapidly
>during the rapid thrusts, your dick felt like you hit a wall with your tip
>once you did, Sonata arched herself backwards and her head almost hit the table
>you can hear muffled squealing as she continues to cover her mouth with her hands
>you felt it
>you're going to reach orgasm
>you move your hips the fastest you can
>you're pretty much shaking Sonata silly at this point
>her breasts are bouncing everywhere like crazy
>with one giant grunt, your came inside her
>and suddenly you hear her scream, no hands covering it
>you quickly pick her up from her back and put her in the proper sitting position on your lap
>she looks like she's in a daze
>however she sees you and kisses you deeply
>she let's go for you and gets off your dick
>she stands above you and puts her arms around you, breathing heavy
"Is there some holiday greeting for Christmas?"
"Yeah, Merry Christmas."
"Merry Christmas, Anon. I love you."
>Tell her you love her
What, we're trying to go all the way here or something?
>she nuzzles her head on yours
"Hey, keep it down!"
>that sounded like Aria
>Sonata let's go of you
>you got out of the chair, quickly got your clothes back on and checked on Aria
>apparently she just got up
>quick, act like you didn't have sex
"Merry Christmas, Aria."
>Aria mumbles while rubbing her head
"Yeah, Merry Christ-whatever it is..."
>you leave the bedroom to check on Dagi
>you check your bedroom
>she just woke up as well
>she looks at you
"Good morning Dagi! Merry Christmas!"
>Dagi stays silent
"Anyways, I made breakfast. Come to the kitchen and eat up!"
>Dagi is either still trying to wake up or wanting to go back to sleep
>you head to the kitchen and you waited with Sonata for the other two to come
>twenty minutes later, they arrive
>both were still in pajamas
>they sit at the table
"Alright, I know it's only Christmas Eve but I've made a special breakfast for you girls so you can expect Christmas itself to have a feast for breakfast."
"Thanks, loser." said Aria
>the morning was spent with eating breakfast and cleaning the kitchen
>the girls headed to the bedrooms to change their clothes
>when they came out, you were surprised
>they were wearing the same outfits they wore when you first met them
>almost like they are going somewhere
>however you notice something on their necks...
>Dagi faces you
"So Anon, you like our new necklaces?" asked Dagi while holding the gem on her neck
"Ha-how did you find those?!"
"Easy. I looked under the bed."
>you hid them there..
"These were under the bed?" asked Sonata, "Why?"
"These were supposed to be our gift from Mr. Anonymous."
>Sonata runs to you and gives a big hug
"Oh, thank you Anon! I love it!"
"Yeah, it reminds me of our old gems bit the gold makes it look really nice." said Aria
"Ahaha, I'm glad you like it."
>something's not right here
"Oh Sonata dearie, does this make you feel happy?" asked Dagi
"Don't you feel so happy..."
>where is she going with this
"That you feel like singing?"
>wait a minute
"Haha, I wish!" said Sonata
"Why not sing a bit? I bet it won't sound bad at all."
"PFFT, yeah right." Aria said while rolling her eyes
>she's not seriously gonna
>Sonata takes a deep breath and let's out a tune
"Ahhh Ahhh Ah~ Ahhh Ahhhh~"
>it's the same tune from your dreams
>but wait I thought they couldn't sing
>so why is Sonata singing so well?
>you look at her gem
>there's some green mist coming from her clothes and into the gem
>you go back a few steps
>what was that?
>Dagi laughs but it felt dark
>you turn to her and she has a huge evil-like smile on her face
"How is she singing again?" asked Aria
"It's simple Aria, do you still have your old gem shards?"
"Um, yeah they're right here." Aria said, taking a broken, shattered gem out of her pocket
"Good, Aria. Now sing."
>Aria looked at the shards with a confused look but took a deep breath and started singing
"Ahhh Ahhh Ah~ Ahhh Ahhhh~"
>you notice as Aria is singing the same green mist came out of the gem shards and into the new gem on the necklace
>Aria's eyes widen
"I can really sing again?!"
"Yes, and not only that. Our magic has finally returned to us."
>Dagi walks up to you
"And it's all thanks to you, Anon."
>you tried to find something to say
>but its no use
>you're completely frozen
>from what you're not sure
>fear, shock, unable to comprehend what you have witnessed
>probably all three
>you just looked at them
>Sonata looked at you all worried
"Anon? Are you okay?" she asked, "You look like you saw something scary."
>like that wasn't obvious
"Let Anon be, Sonata." Said Adagio, "We are leaving."
"Where are we going?" asked Aria
"To Canterlot High.
"But what about Anon?" asked Sonata
"He will wait for us. For now, let's plan out revenge on those Rainbooms. After that, we can sing and play with Anon as much as we want."
>Adagio walks to the door and opened it
"You girls go first."
>Sonata and Aria left the apartment
>Dagi walks to you
"I must thank you Anon, if it weren't for you we would've never gotten this far."
>She walks to the door and waves
>Adagio closes the door
>you need to catch up to them
>The Rainbooms Make a bow in front of the entire student body of CHS in the auditorium.
>all 7 girls holds their hands together and take synchronized bow.
>No doubt their good. But since the dazzlings joined, you felt that your band had gotten the upper hand.
>Rainbow dash Is good on the guitar, but your better. 10x’s better. No, 100x’s better than she ever will be.
>Your band stands there, waiting for the crowd to finish applauding the Rainbooms.
>You never liked their music but that cover of ‘since you been gone’ was pretty over the top.
>But, your set is going to blow them away.
>”Anon” Adagio says
“Yea?” you answer
>”Let me get one good look at you before we go on,”
>Adagio turns you around and seems to examine you up and down.
>”My, my, my. You do look like the little rockstar.”
>You did your best at dressing up like Stevie Ray Vaughan, and You gotta admit. You did pretty good.
>You hear Principal Celestia talk
>”Please give another round of applause for CHS’s very own RainBooms!!” she exclaims
>Your getting more giddy by the moment.
>Rainbow dash comes off stage to the side and see’s Adagio with her hands on you.
>”You guys have no chance, this Talent Show has already been won” Dash says
>She walks off quickly.
>She’s followed by Rarity who ignores you, then fluttershy who tilts her head down., Then Twilight sparkle, then Applejack….
>And then at that moment Adagio Gives you a peck on the cheek. Right infront of Applejack,
>”C’mon Anonymous, we have a show to play.” And gives you a wink and she grabs your hand and leads you to the stage,
>You saw applejacks expression. And the least it looked like she was broken.
>You walk past sunset shimmer with Adagio Pulling you. You wave to her and she gives a quick wave back.
>Welp, Here we go.
>”Now please give a warm welcome to our last Talent act. Another Band playing 3 songs for you. Please give a round of applause for, The Dazzling’s And the Zero Boys!” Principal Celestia claps with the microphone in hand.
>Norman is the first to walk out with his Blue Bass, Next Jonny who is giving the devil horns.
>Then Sonata, Aria with her stern pissed off look, Then Adagio and finally you….
>Adagio is waving like she won a beauty pageant
>You don’t do anything but put your guitar strap on your shoulders and begin sound checking your guitar. This is Standard procedure for you.
>Jonny sits at behind the drumset and ready’s himself.
>The crowd of students still clapping and whistling.
>Sonata and Aria stand behind two microphone stands
>You look towards norman and he gives a nod of approval.
>You grin back.
>You turn around and Strum your guitar One signifying you are ready.
>Adagio gives a cute air kiss towards you and winks.
>You look towards jonny and give him the signal
>He nods, And Raises his drumsticks in the air.
>”One, two, One two three four!”
>The Crowd is Jamming with the beat.
>Your jamming and holding your guitar close to you.
>Then Adagio begins to sing.
>”Well you’ve heard about love giving sight to the blind.”
>She holds her microphone with both hands,
>Her voice is so calm and beautiful.
>The only way you can sing is practically yelling with a raspy voice.
>”My baby’s lovin’ cause the sun to shine” She looks at you with bedroom eyes.
>You grin under your hat.
>”I’m his sweet little thing” She walks over to you, more like strutting.
>You lean into the microphone stand infront of you.
She’s my pride and joy!”
>She looks at you, almost touching your face with hers
>”I’m his sweet little baby” she says giving you a cute smile.
”And I’m her little lover boy.!” You sing into the mic.
>She then struts away from you. Goddamn she’s such a freaking tease.
>You know you try not to get involved with younger girls but, goddamn Adagio is freaking smokin’!
>”Yea, I love my baby. Heart and soul!” She continues
>”Love like ours will never grow old!” Her voice could make a man fall to his knees,
>”He’s my sweet little thing! He’s my pride and joy!”
>”I’m his sweet little baby-“
“And I’m her little lover boyyyy..”
>your turn to sing. You take the front stage.
”Yea! I love my lady! She long and lean!”
“You mess with her you’ll see a man get mean!!”
“She’s my Sweet little thang!...She my Pride and joy!”
>”I’m his sweet little baby!-”
“I’m her little lover boy…”
>Now it’s time to show off.
>You begin your solo, and keep it bluesy as possible.
>Adagio made her way back over to you and is dancing in a provocative way, kinda like grinding on you.
>Its hard to keep this solo without noticing her.
>You stand there, with a beautiful girl pretty much showing her ass to you and all you do is keep playing the solo.
>Your such a badass.
>You keep strumming, but Adagio has moved away from you.
>You finish up the solo and get near the mic
“Well I love my baby like the finest wine! Stick with her until the end of time!”
“She’s my sweet little thing” you look over to Adagio as you say this. “She’s my pride and joy!”
>”I’m his sweet little baby!-”
“And I’m her little lover boyyy…”
>”Yea I love my baby, heart and soul!” She flicks your chin with her index finger.
>”Love like ours won’t never grow old!”
>”He’s my sweet little thing! He’s my pride and joy..”
>”I’m his sweet little baby!-“
“And I’m her little lover boy!”
>You begin your second solo. And end the song.
>The crowd erupts into applause
>Adagio is smiling and your getting ready for the next song, which you can get a little crazy on….
>You look over to sonata and tell her to grab her guitar…
“You remember what I taught you right? The cords, the progressions? All that. Don’t worry about the solo ill take care of that.”
I want to, but I can't.
You can't impregnate something that's not real.
Just saw this and thought I'd share since it's only like 3 hours old. Made me laugh.
I liked it, but I'm not sure it was for the right reasons. The whole thing feels really weird, like an alien trying to convince me it can be funny like a human, but I liked...the timing, I guess..I don't know.
Adagio, while out of character was the best
>Alright you fishys hurry up because I need to get money and eat
>Nope, with a gun everything will be easy
I'll admit these made me laugh harder than I should be right now considering the paper thin walls of my apartment.
I'd watch more.
>He doesn't want Boobdagio
>get Adagio pregnant
>one of her most common cravings is
Lesbians suck. For some reason when I see it, even when it involves attractive women I find disgusting.
>you got the feeling in your legs again a few minutes after they left
>you look out the window and check if you can find them
>be thankful it's snowy outside
>hopefully it'll be easier to find them
>especially with Adagio's hair
>and there they are
>looks like they are heading to the park
>you grab the keys
>bolt out of your apartment
>lock the door
>moved as fast as you can to get outside
>the elevator was too slow so you used the stairs
>a few minutes later, you made it to the first floor
>you have to be careful
>it's snowy outside
>you run out of the building and headed east
>you pass two blocks and find yourself in the park
>there you see the Dazzlings at the same place where you first found them
>on the snowy hill
>they were heading up
>you run to them
"Sonata! Aria! Dagi!"
>they turn and see you
"Anon! Sorry we left you!" said Sonata
>you couldn't make it up the hill despite it being short
>you were breathing heavy from all that running
>after recovering from the deep breathing session, you confronted Adagio
"Why, Adagio? Why are you doing this? How did you know..? WHEN did you know?"
>Adagio kept a stern face
"You want me to tell you?" she said, "Fine. A few months, I found our magic can be transferred to other gems however we didn't have any other gems of our own nor so we couldn't fully transfer our magic. We tried to steal some from people as stores but all our attempts were unsuccessful. That's when I thought we needed to find someone who is willing to get gems for us."
"And that someone was me."
"Well, it just happened to be you. It could've been anyone really. But I must say, you chose high quality jewelry."
"But how did you know?"
"I was watching you from a distance when you went shopping for gifts and when you were unpacking the bags when we got home. You really are bad with hiding this stuff."
>when you think about it, under the bed was probably the most obvious spot
>makes it more obvious since she slept in your room the whole time
Wake up, see this, wat do?
"So all of you just used me?"
"I didn't use you!" said Sonata
>she ran to you
"I was really happy how you took care of us! I didn't know anything, I swear!"
>she hugs you tightly
>you look at Adagio as she laughs
>the wind starts to grow in force
"Sonata is very helpful but sadly she's not the brightest and not to mention she's very fond of you. If I told her what we were going to do to you, she would've spilled the beans sooner or later."
"And what about Aria?"
"I told Aria about the gem transfers but nothing about my plan."
>Aria looks at Adagio
>she seems upset
"So that explains all the things you did back then, it was so I could take you in my home."
"That's not all I did."
"What do you mean?"
"While you were sleeping after having sex with Sonata, I managed put a spell on you. A spell of.. intimacy. The spell worked quite well especially with your personality."
"Wait, you mean?"
"The reason you were acting like that to me in the shower was because of the spell? It was, though I didn't expect it to go down like that, you perverted monkey.."
"I wanted to test how well our magic is once we transferred it to the gem. After I finished the spell, I put the gem back in your 'hiding spot'."
"Now that we have our powers back, we can exact our revenge on those Rainbooms and take their magic! We will rule this world!"
>she says it with her hands and head up high
"You expect me to just forget about this?"
"Oh don't be so over active, Anon. You can be our faithful servant. You'll help us with food and shelter as we plan to take back what should be ours. It's just like how everything used to be."
>yeah, servant doesn't fit you at all
"And if I refuse?"
"It would be a shame. Not to mention the horrible, excruciating pain we will have to deliver to you."
>Sonata lets go of you and brings herself in front of you with arms wide open
"Sonata, what are you doing?"
"I won't let you hurt him!" said Sonata, "He's done so much for us! Why would you treat him like that?!"
"Ugh, this is why our plans tend to fail. It's because of you!" said Adagio, "You're too naive and soft! You would've never made it here if it weren't for me and Aria!"
"...I know." said Sonata with her head down, "I'm not that smart. Being pretty is all I'm good for. I've done nothing for Anon but eat his food and play around.. But now, it's my turn to help him! If you use magic on him, I'll use it on you!"
>Sonata stands her ground
"Hmph, you were so obedient before and Anon would've been a great servant. Aria, let's get them."
"No." said Aria
>Aria leaves Adagio's side and walks to you and stands next to Sonata
"You know what I finally realized? Everything that happened these last few months was because of you Adagio. All the nightmares we've dealt with day after day was because of you and your stupid plans. Well, I'm damn tired of it! I just want to sing again! I don't want to lose my voice again! I want to eat and sleep on a bed not concrete and trash cans!"
>Aria points to you
"This loser was willing to give that to us even after we made his life a living nightmare. I'd rather go with that than end up getting my butt handed and living in the streets again and it feels WAY better than listening to you bragging how great you are."
"Aria.." Adagio grumbled,
>she walks down the hill and you were all on even ground
"You're willing to give up everything we worked for hundreds of years for this?!" yelled Adagio
"You wanted to know what I've worked hundreds of years for?! I wanted to be a singer!" said Aria
"Yeah, we all agreed to that when we started forming the group!" said Sonata
"That was then, this is now!" Adagio yelled, "You both are completely missing the fact that we have the power to take over the world! Why settle for measly dreams like that when you can go bigger?"
"You can keep your big dreams." said Aria, "I'll keep my /measly/ dreams and become a singer."
"And I'll sing with Aria." said Sonata
>oh how that will turn out
"Grr, fine! I don't need you two!
>Adagio is seething
"You two were nothing more than backup singers to me! Wanna know why we are called the Dazzlings? BECAUSE I'M THE LEADER! I'M THE REAL STAR! I DESERVE EVERY THING THIS WORLD HAS TO OFFER AND I WILL TAKE THEM WHETHER THEY LIKE IT OR NOT! YOU TWO WOULDN'T EVEN LAST A DAY WITHOUT ME! YOU WANNA GO WITH HIM?! FINE, I DON'T NEED YOU!"
"Then leave." said Aria, "I think we can manage without you."
>Adagio's eyes widen
>the wind howls loudly
>the snow on the ground is picked up from the wind and blows past all of you
>Adagio takes a step back
>you notice she has a worried expression on her face
>she starts to take more steps back
>she's about to run
>you move forward
>you stop with Aria and Sonata behind you
>Adagio stops when she saw you walking forward
>her hand is on her chest, holding her glowing gem
>you can tell by her face that she is upset with everything
>she squints her eyes at you
>probably cursing at you in her mind
>you just stand there
>what should you do?
>Adagio has been lying to you this whole time
>from the day you met her, you were just a tool
>just a pawn in her plan to get her magic back
>you should leave her and let her deal with her own problems
>yet you have this feeling that you shouldn't let her go
>you worry how she'll be without Aria and Sonata
>will she be okay even with the magic she has?
>you look straight at Adagio
>she's ready to leave
>you have to make your decision now
>will you help her or will you let her go?
>she has the child
>she never loses the baby weight, becomes fat
>becomes a bitter bitch of a woman you can't even stand anymore
>she divorces you and takes everything from you in a vindictive rage
>she has no love for you anymore
I gotta stop being so negative, she's my waifu and i'm depressing myself just thinking about this.
>you walk towards Adagio
"Dagi, you don't have to do this. Please come back. No one will be there to help you if you leave."
"You still think you can stop me from taking my revenge, you monkey?" she said, "How foolish. Nothing you can do will stop me."
>Adagio prepares herself
>her gem glows
>she closes her eyes
>she's about to cast a spell
>she starts singing
"Ahhh Ahhh Ahhhhh~"
>you feel the wind blowing right at you
>you started to run as fast as you can towards her and put your hand out
>the wind kept pushing you
>but you pushed harder
>you got near enough to grab the necklace
>Adagio suddenly noticed and opens her eyes
"Wha-what are you doing?! Let go, you imbecile!"
>she holds on to the gem
>you both had your hands on the gem, fighting over it while the wind was blowing in different directions with intense force
>Adagio was screaming the whole time
>you eventually let go and held on to the strap and snapped it off
>Adagio became focused on her necklace being taken off
>you got the gem off her hands and took a few steps back
>Adagio screams loudly
>the gem started shooting out a blinding light and the wind was going crazy
>almost like you were in a tornado
>the scream from Adagio echoed many times as if you're hearing different people screaming
>you can hear the screams leave her and turn into green mist
>the mist moved to the gem which eventually stopped glowing
>the winds have calmed down
>Adagio was on her knees with her head down
>she looks up and sees the necklace in your hand
>she opens her mouth but nothing came out
>her eyes widen
>she tried to speak
>but nothing came out
>she kept trying to make a sound come out of her mouth
>but it was no use
>she became mute
>she looks down and pounds on the snowy ground in anger
>you walk to her
>you put the gem near her
>she looks at you
"What?" she said, "You want to mock me?"
>she realized what just happened and tries to grab the necklace again
>but you moved away quickly
>huh, so Adagio's voice is in the gem now?
>you can see tears in her eyes
>they show humiliation, anger and regret
>you looked down at her with pity
>alone, powerless and mute, Adagio Dazzle truly has hit her lowest point
"What will you do now, Adagio Dazzle?"
>she opens her mouth and slams her fists on the snow repeatedly
>you assume she's screaming in anger
>you think she deserves it after everything she did to you
>all the lies and manipulation she's done since you met her
"I think you've learned your lesson, Dagi."
>you extend you hand to her
>even after all that
>you can't help it
>you're a teacher after all
>she looks up
"Come on, Dagi. Let's go home. You're gonna catch a cold if you stay here."
>she just looked you with wide eyes and the tears kept on flowing
>she takes your hand and stands up
>you hug her
>Aria and Sonata come over and join the hug
>thanks to the gem being near her, you can hear Adagio's mix of cries and attempts to speak
"I wonder though. Is there a way to give Adagio's voice back from the gem?"
>Aria and Sonata look at each other
>they started singing
>Adagio started to as well
>all three gems were glowing
>the green mist exploded out of the gems
>it surrounded all of you and swirled around
>the girls kept singing until the mist disappeared
>after the mist was gone, the sky cleared
>it was sunny with a few clouds
>you bask in the light
>it wasn't that cold anymore
>you turn tonsee Aria and Sonata hugging a tearful Dagi, trying to comfort her
"It's okay." said Sonata, "If Anon forgives you, I do too."
"You need to relax more often, Adagio." said Aria
"Ev-even after everything I did, I lied to you girls. All the things I said. You two really are idiots."
"But they are /your/ idiots."
>You take off your coat and put it on Dagi
"Come on, girls. Let's go home. We still have the rest of Christmas Eve to enjoy."
>Sonata grabs on to your left arm
>Dagi holds on to your right arm
>Aria holds your right hand
>you all walk out of the park
"This sure beats all the television specials I watched." said Sonata
"Sure was." said Aria
"Anon..?" said Dagi
"...I'm sorry and Merry Christmas."
"Merry Christmas to you too."
>It's been three months since the Dazzlings started living with you
>you sit in your office looking at the mirror that brought them into this world
>was it fate that made this happen or was it sheer coincidence?
>either way, you had a really exciting holiday
>apparently bringing Dagi's voice back drained most of the magic out of the gems
>they can't do any magic anymore but they can still sing
>you hope they don't find a way to recharge them
>the bell rings
>you walk out of your office and see Sonata in her new school uniform running past you
>she turns and give you a wink before heading to class
"No running in the halls!"
>you continued giving cooking lessons to Sonata
>you also decided to accept her being your lover
>though you had to keep it a secret from the school
>you also had to limit sexual activities
>though that didn't stop her giving you a blowjob in your office before school began
>occasionally, she asks Aria and Dagi to join in which resulted in your protests and scolding
>she's also taking one of your biology classes
>apparently she likes to learn more about the ocean wildlife
>you continue walking in the hallways and notice Aria heading to the gym
>due to her rebellious behavior, she has gotten in trouble a couple of times by the staff
>unfortunately, it also caused them to find out you were their legal guardian
>ohhhh boy, that was a fun day...
>she seems to have a friendly rivalry with Indigo Zap over athletics
>you bump into someone while pondering
"Hey, watch it!"
>you bumped into Adagio
"Seriously, Anon? You need to stop that habit."
"I thought I told you to call me Professor when we are at school."
"Oh but I'm soooo used to calling you that."
>she speaks in sarcasm
"Just don't be late for class."
>Dagi turns and walks to the stairs
>you're still surprised she took one of your AP chemistry classes
>...and doing so well
>she's also a member of the after school beauty club
>clearly it was her poof that got her in
>the girls reformed the Dazzlings and occasionally sings for the school
>it was a bit strange at first but the students seems to like it
>as a result they are beginning to gain fans
>you head to your classroom where your students were waiting
>Sonata is sitting at the front row
>she looks at you intensely with a smile on her face
>you had to make an announcement that Dean Cadence told you to speak about
"Alright class, today we are going to see who will qualify for the Friendship Games."
>Sonata raises her hand
"What are the Friendship Games?"
>some of the students snicker
"The Friendship Games is an annual competition between Crystal Prep and Canterlot High. Every year we win but according to sources, Canterlot High may have a chance of winning this year."
>the students complain and here
"Which is why I've been chosen to help find the students who will compete to ensure out victory."
"YEAH!" Sonata yells with her fist raised
>the students laugh
>Sonata looks around and blushes
>you pat her head
"Alright, let's begin."
Thanks to everyone who read my story
I honestly didn't expect to go this long... Nor planned to write any sex in there
I thank everyone who gave me feedback, positive and negative
Now if you'll excuse me, going back to Lurker status
Calm yourself. If you had finished your first story, wouldn't you want to acknowledge people?
That's fine, but the whole thing sounds like he just published it on his blog and in opening it up for dicksucking.
Don't exaggerate m8, it wasn't like that at all.
>Thanks to everyone who read my story
>I honestly didn't expect to go this long... Nor planned to write any sex in there
>I thank everyone who gave me feedback, positive and negative
>Now if you'll excuse me, going back to Lurker status
That's exactly how it sounds. Maybe wording it differently would have helped, but it is how it sounds.
>being grateful for feedback
>thanking people for reading your story
>talking about the writing process
>saying they don't plan on writing anything else soon
Which of those equates to inviting people to suck your dick?
1 and 3 especially, but even 4 could be an invitation for people to beg him to stay. Granted it's fine for him to tell people that he's down, my point that wording would have made it better still stands.
That's how his post sounded to me.
Is English your fifth language, you mongoloid?
Only desperate people would respond to number four, and those types of people would beg for more no matter what he typed. Being grateful for feedback in a thread where, historically, first-time writers are often passed over or not given feedback is in no way telling people to worship you. Telling people that he hadn't originally intended to include smut is a way of subtly apologizing to reader who disliked the smut sections.
I get that, but all that is needed is "I'm done with this and don't plan to continue." That way there won't be a "When will TS Punk return?" as you'd have proof that he's done. Just look at >>26019167 and >>26019491
He says he's done and already people are wanting him to cough up more. My whole point was just be short and concise.
Considering the people you always claim to be samefag usually have at least one other person agreeing with them and always have some kind of argument as opposed to what we had back in the day, a meme is exactly what it is. You just throw it around whenever someone disagrees with you. See >>26020452
If the content bothers you why are you even here? You hate this general that much?
The thought of someone enjoying something you don't upset you that much?
Because that my friend is what barneyfag is, some poor bastard who patrols 4chan far and wide with his RSS feed looking for any /mlp/ threads outside of /mlp/ so he can go on his one child crusade of shitting up the thread and wishing death on us.
Legitimate question of my own. When did I say I hate the content or the general? I simply told a writer to just make a point and be done with it.
Another question. Why are you people always so upset over someone with such a different opinion, someone who doesn't always hold the same view as you?
I never said I hated the content or the general. When did I tell TS Punk to stop writing, or that his work was shit? When did I tell him to stop writing for attention? Are you people this blind that you can't see how you act just like those same shitposters that you always bitch about whenever anyone says anything negative about a contentfag?
Go ahead and call me a samefag who just wants to chase away everyone who provides for you because I hate this general and want it gone. That is your response to everything you don't like.
You never have said you hate the general and on topic of samefagging, I couldn't give two squirts of piss if you do or don't, but answer me this if you woul be so kind. How often do you come here to complain about something?
Not often at all. This is the first complaint I've had in awhile. It was pretty chill during the holidays from what I saw. Granted I wasn't looking for a fight. I just saw his post and didn't want him ending up like that one Capitalism guy.
Ease up on the guy. It's his first story, it came out longer than initially thought, attracted more attention than expected and was just finished. He has reason to celebrate.
If you're planning on writing again then you might want to get a pastebin (unless you already have one and I wasn't paying attention).
Yeah that's my headcanon too, with the exception that they were seaponies instead of ponies. I think Hasbro should do that. They should introduce seaponies. Manchildren would love it, and the company would produce more merch to sell. Like the Breezies episode.
But headcanon or not, I think using different ideas helps prevent stagnation. Plus it's fun. Imagine if Starswirl was like Rick and cooked up the sirens for some idiotic reason like
"Iiiiiit's a novelty portable music player, Morty. It comes with needlepoint teeth. You know, so people won't touch it and fuck with my presets. These four, Morty. These four little embryos will be the first. The test run."
>"Umm, Starrick? There's only three jars on the table."
>Starrick looks at the now-empty jar he was drinking from earlier
"Huh. That'd explain the butterflies in my stomach earlier. Ehh, can't do anything now. But I bet the other three will come out great!"
Okay, not too good an idea but you know what I'm trying to say.
Capitalism? I'll have to check the archives, but I don't recall who he/she/it was. I imagine it was a writefag who left name/trip on after finishing a story for attention if your reaction to the way the previous writefag signed off is anything to gauge off of.
Take it easy m8.
I just told him to make his statement and be done with it. Never did I say he couldn't thank people or celebrate. Also, all stories here attract a lot of attention. Unless they're really bad or you're an ass, it will be pretty well received.
I think he does have a pastebin.
I have to wonder why you always throw your two cents in at the last minute. Things were calming down and I thought we were actually moving away from this whole thing.
He was the guy who grew a huge ego from a mediocre story and tried holding it for ransom. I thought he started off nice until he got a few fans. Maybe I'm wrong.
Have a nice day yourself.
>I have to wonder why you always throw your two cents in at the last minute.
Generally speaking I'm on a cellphone and paying by the mega. I get in, I refresh, I get out. That's why I reply to old posts.
But in this case I was just busy earlier.
Capitalism King. He was a writefag. He had a fight with others here because he was strict-theme (wanted only fics and pics, no fun and socializing/conversation) as an anon. Things got heated when people told him to shut up because he wasn't providing anything, he revealed his name and then deleted his pastebin and left after making a few threats.
That's how I remember it but don't take my word for it. Search and see for yourself.
>Generally speaking I'm on a cellphone and paying by the mega.
Where are you from again? I can hang around all day on my cellphone. Also, I was wondering why you always jump into every conversation.
Strangely enough I'm unable to find anything of him in the desu storage other than a couple mentions.
Seems he reuploaded his story though. Perhaps it was lost during the move from moe archive?
I'm going to pass the fuck out fellas, I'm out.
I'd rather not say anything more than yuropoor. Btw, another thing that prevents me from replying in time is that fucking captcha that keeps giving me errors and a 502 bad gateway error.
>Also, I was wondering why you always jump into every conversation
Bother, I did it again? I was trying not to in this thread. Well one reason is that I don't notice it and another is that some times it's better to have a conversation going rather than an image bump every time we hit tenth page.
Man, I feel you. I need to go to bed too. Maybe his posts were removed by a mod before the thread was archived.
Yeah, captcha is shit. Worst in when your
reportingand you constantly get letter captchas that never work.
I was just wondering is all. Discussion is a good thing as it's what's been keeping us alive.
[Jabba the Hut laughter] I wonder why the mod chose to remove the post rather than just erase the image.
Sometimes I like to listen to organ music as I type and pretend I'm playing it. Yeah, music helps me with ideas too. Can't say the same about focus sadly.
Are you me? This is exactly what I do right down to the full seasons. But as motivating and fun as it is, having something playing slows me down to the point that a work of minutes can take hours (even when the music is fast paced), so I'm trying to stop it.
I was curious as to if others do this too and how it affects their work.
When i draw I need some sort of background noise. I think having a movie or a tv show is kinda of silly because you can't really pay attention to two things. I usually play some sort of mellow music and get into a zone where im not really even paying attention to that either. some like this https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ycvvwrXMTjw