>>25901314 > Anon adopts a stray Diamond Dog after a cave collapse leaves it without parents > All the ponies think Anon is now a dirty cave fucker. > Anon has to enroll him into Pony School and be a good dad while dealing with the shit other ponies give him and his son.
>Damn, winter in Equestria didn't mess around. >You suppose it has to do with the fact if the head of the weather team says it's going to snow. >It's going to snow. >Didn't make your job any easier since Rarity apparently needed these gems you were working on digging up. >In her words, it's the most important thing in all of Equestria that she gets these gems. >So here you were, standing on the hill filled fields outside of ponyville with a shovel in your hand, and a wagon full of gems behind. >Piles of snow and ice covered the ground, but down in the caverns at least it was warm. "Hmmm?" >From deep down in the caverns you can almost hear a crying whine. >That horrible sad dog noise. "Hello?!" >You move down deeper into the caverns to see a small little dog, above the size of your head, digging frantically at a blockage in the tunnel. >"Mom! Dad!"
>>25915339 >You drop the shovel, and watch for a few seconds as the little pup uncovers a limp paw. >Dear god, that paw could easily cover your entire face if it wanted to >"Mom, please get up. Please....." >The little pup noses at the bloodied paw before you make yourself known to the little dog. "Hey there, what's going on here?" >The dog is startled quickly turning around, and baring it's small teeth at you. >"There......there was a cave in. My Mom pushed me out of the way, but she couldn't get out of the way in time....." "I don't think she's alive, it's not safe down here." >"But my parents." "I'll take care of you until we find someone to take care of you. Please, this place might keep caving in with the way it's been snowing outside." >You hold you hand out to the little dog. "I'm Anon, what's your name?" >"It's Diamond....my Mom used to call me diamond because of my eyes." >You could easily see why she was called that. Her irises had a crystal like shine to them.
>>25915497 >Diamond scampers over to you, and using her large paws manages to somehow climb up to your shoulder, perching there. >Well hey it can't be that bad, you're sure Twilight would be more then happy to tell you how to take care of a Diamond dog pup. >Even then, the rest of the mane 6 should be more then glad to help with Diamond. >You shouldn't have her more then a few hours....your good deed will be done for the week, and life can return to some form ot normalcy. >With Diamond, and your diamonds secure you head towards the exit of the cavern. >Now then, time to get back to Ponyville through this accursed winter weather.
>>25915497 I like the start but... I don't know. It feels like the parents are abandoned a bit too easily. I get it, they are dead. And I appreciate stories that avoid being too melodramatic. But at the same time, the kid just got told by a stranger "your parents are dead, sorry" and barely reacts to it in a shocked or angry/sad way. I like the set up, but Anon should try harder to earn her trust in that rather dramatic situation before she is even willing to take up his offer to be brought to somewhere where it is save
>>25923586 But what if... the parents aren't really dead? Reminds me of that one quest in FO4 with the kid in the fridge. Might be a bit cliche if the parents are alive but it would make the story a little less abrupt if they are still alive somewhere.
Well life called. I'll be back later to work on it more. Have what I wrote so far...or tell me to stop and get gudder.
Day 'Every dog has his day in Equestria'
>You are Anon. >It's been...years? Years. Since you came to Equestria. >Honestly you've lost track. The caladars aren't exactly the same. >Today you're out hunting! That's right you can go kill things and eat them! >Nobody minds as long as you don't drag the corpse through the market in broad daylight. >...Boy did that almost kill you. >But enough about your backstory. You're out hunting boar today. >Easy to kill, but a problem in packs. "There you are..." >Out 50 feet from you is a lone boar. Most likely out scavanging. >You reach into your quiver and nock an arrow in place. >Shut up... you couldn't afford a crossbow. >With a trained eye on target you hold your breath, and then release. A hit through it's eye. "Bullseye!" >The creature squirms and wavers as its life drains away. >To keep it from struggling you jump out from your hidding spot, pull out your combat knife, and slice its neck. >A mercy kill. Old uncle Anon always did say only edgelords and faggots watch it squirm. "Well that was easy, they usally come in-" >"Help!" >SCREEEEEEEEE! >That must be its singular. >"Mom! Dad! Help!" "Oh shit!" >Leaving the boar behind you sprint towards the commotion. >You aren't gonna let someone die on your watch. >Reaching towards your pocket you pull out your flask and knife; you hold the two on each hand and bang on them as hard as you can. "RRRAAHHhh! Get out of here! GET!" >The noise drew their attention and your speeding lumbering body spooked the singular away. "That's right and stay away!" >Damn pigs. They can't even handle this human. >Oh right the kid... >You look around and spot a tiny dog trembling on the floor. "Huh...I wounder where that cry came from..." >The pup stops shaking and very catiously looks up towards you. >"Daddy?"
>>25924334 "Uh... What? You can talk?" >"Y-You aren't my dad." "No. I am not. Last I checked I didn't fuck a dog." >It starts shaking again. Almost threatend by your statement. >Right. It's still a kid... "Look I'm not here to hurt you. I just scared the pigs away, okay?" "Go find your dad. I'm sure he's somewhere looking for you." >You wave it off and start walking away from it... It'll be fine. If it's like any wild dog it will have its pack not far behind. >Searching around you spot your kill from not too long ago. >Thank god nothing else took it away while you were gone. The sun is going down and you're sure as hell not gonna spot anything at night. >...Might as well hold up here for the night. You'll get lost and get caught by some magical wood dog or something. >You grab a bunch of branches thrown about the forest floor. You know nothing too wet, and something hardy enough to last the night. >Also, something to cook that pig with. >If you leave it any longer as it is the flies will get to it first. >Some time jump later. >Fire wood here, a skin there, a bit of choice cuts made, and BAM you have the whole night set... Well except tents. You didn't think it would've taken this long. >The smell would draw out some preditors, but as long as you have the fire going they aren't gonna do jack shit. >SNAP >Spoke too soon. You draw out your knife and face your offender... It's the dog. "What the hell are you doing here?" "I thought I told you to go to your parents." >"I...I couldn't find them." "What do you mean you couldn't find them?" >"I don't know where they are..." >Of course.
>>25924343 "Well you can't just stay here it's dangerous." >"Then what are you doing here?" "I'm- that's not the point. The point is you are not home, and I can handle myself." >With your hand you motion tham out wards. "Now shoo. Go!" >"But-" "I said go!" >... "You don't know how to get home do you...?" >"No." his voice quiverd. "Okay. Okay, stop the water works. Do you at least know what it looks like?" >"*sniff* Yes." >"It has a lot of holes...Oh! and there are some mountains with a lot of caves." >This doge I swear. "Anything else?" >"It had a lot of gems." >Why does that sound familiar... "Hey, by any chance did you guys meet a whiney pony. Probably white." >"YOu mean the whining pony! Yeah she left with her friends a couple years ago. They said that her voice could cause cave-ins." "Okay I think I know where you live." >"Really!?" "Yes, really but I'm taking you tommorow. It's too dangerous right now."
Like I said give me opinions so far, will work more on it later, blah, blah, bleh, bruh.
>>25932809 I want to Cuddle and scratch that little dog's belly and let her[/spoiler| chew on my tennis balls when we play in the park before at home I will scratch all over her back till she falls asleep in my lap.
>>25933704 >>25933467 >>25933664 >Change regular noises to puppy/child voices >Clothing/collar options >Custom dig spots that give resources and sometimes gems that are worth good caps >Can rip bones off of ghouls and animals for treats
>Morning creeps up on you and the light pierces through your eyelids. >Guess it's time to wake up. >With a quick pat down and quick glance around camp nothing seems out of place. >...Except the dog. It's curled up closer than you remember. >You should probably get its name. "Hey." >You nudge with your foot. "Wakey. Wakey. We got no eggs but plenty of bakeey." >The constant prodding of your foot gets it to stir to a slow rise. >"Hmmgh Mommy?... What time is it?" "I'm not your mom, but I can give you some pork." >In an instant it looks like it finally realized it was still lost. >"Oh it's you..." "Well aren't you a ray of sunshine... Anyway, yeah it's me." >You say as you pull out some rations from last light. "Here, the name's Anon." >"...I'm Jasper, and thanks." "It's just bacon." >"I mean about last night." "...It's just bacon." >"You know what I mean!" "Hehe, yeah I know. I'm messing with you." >Gotta liven the mood somehow. >By the way it's eating it's probably been out here for a couple days. >Poor thing... You're glad it's gonna be your hands soon enough. "So, are you ready to go see your parents Jasper?" >"Mmmhhm" said with a fist full of ham in its mouth. >"mhmh mnnhhm-" "Swallow first then talk." >It meekly nods and does as it's told. >"R-Right, sorry... How long until we get there?" "It's about a 4 hour walk from here. Not terribly far." "How did you even get this far." >"I...I don't know. Last I remember is mom telling dad to take me hunting. Something about growing up." "I see." "Well enough of that then." >You stand up eliciting a small peep from Jasper. "Are you done eating?" >"Yeah?" "Good, lets go. Your home isn't suddenly going to stand up and come to us."
>>25935131 >"Are we there yet?" "No." >"How about now?" "Still no." >"...Now?" >Don't answer it Anon you're better than this. >"Anon?" >"Aaaaanon." >... >"ANON!" >In you calmest dmenior you could muster you turn around to face Jasper. "Yes tiny dog from the pit of the seven hells?" >"Are we there yet?" >...If that dog didn't have a wonder struck face it would have wonderd what struck it by now. "I got a better idea. Let's play the 'only talk when it's neccesary' game." >"Aww, but that's boring. My dad always wants to play that one." >Gee I wonder why. "Okay if you don't want to play that then can you keep it down. We don't want to draw attention from anything around here. It's still pretty dangerous." >"O-Okay... Sorry." >"So, how much time do we have until we get there?" "It shouldn't be long infact I can see a couple caves from here." >"Huh? Where I don't see it." "Up here. Look." >Picking Jasper up you set it on your right shoulder." >Light dogs. Be light. >"Whoa! I can see everything from up here." "It's not my fault you're shorter than 4 feet." >"What's that?" "What's wha-fuck!" >You take off Jasper from your shoulder and hide behind a large fallen log. >It's a fucking manticore. "Shhush, keep quite and do exactly as I say." >You peek around the top and see if it's spotted it you yet. >The manticore moves closer to your location sniffing about. >Fuck you just had to yell 'fuck' didn't you...
>>25935153 "Okay Jasper I want you to run home from here." >"But-" "No butts. I'm going to distract it and you are going to run. Your house is not far from here and this thing is too much of a pussycat to attack large groups by itself." "When I break left. You go right and RUN!" >Jumping out from behind you train your arrow on the manticore's face. With a twang from your bow you pelt the large cat in the face. "Jesus this thing is tough." >From the distance you spot Jasper running away just like you asked. "Good, that's one thing less thing to worry about." >A loud roar breaks you from your day dream like stuper. >You still got a manticore to fight. >It's heavy paws swing for your head. You duck down and watch it obliterate the tree behind you. Leaving a gaint scar where the tree use to be. >Thinking it was better to not get close to that thing you pull back with bow drawn. >You fire three successive shots towards it's chest; hoping to hit it's heart, but it only drives it mad. >With loud roar it lunges towards you; With a genious idea you hold out your bow to defend against the impact, but the force was too great and sent you flying towards a nearby boulder. >Your bow lay in ruins and its attack left you batterd and bruised. >The manticore recovers quickly and begins to charge at you. With little time to react you draw out your knife and ready it for imacpt. "So, this is how I die..." >Even if you stab it and make it a fatal shot the speed of that thing will kill you. >At least you saved Jasper...
>>25935174 >"Anon!" >"Is he dead?" >"Anon, wake up! Please..." >Oh god your head. "Mergphlageh." >"Anon, you're alright!" "Huh? Jasper? I told you to run away. There's a manticore on the lose." >"It is dead." "Who's there?" >Just on queue a larger diamond dog approches your vision. "Who are you?" >"I am Jasper's father. It is good to see another hunter like me." >"While it was charging I counterd it with my own charge. It did not resist; most likely a last ditch effort to kill you." >Cool you barely took out a manticore. "Well that's great I'm alive, Jasper is home, and now I can go home too." >By trying to emphisize your livlyhood you stand up to streatch; only to immediately regreat it. >It feels like thousands of hot needles are pricking you all over your body. "Geez my freaking everything hurts..." >"Carefull you lost a lot of blood." "Don't worry about it I'll be fine. At least Ponyville isn't far from here." >You walk over to pick up your backpack and broken bow... >Man that's gonna suck to replace. Not even ducktape can fix this mess. >"Aren't you forgetting something?" "Mmmmh-Nope! I got the pig and useless bow. I'm pretty sure that's everything." >"And the manticore?" "I can't lift that even if I tried. You can have it for all I care." >"Thank you... I know you brought Jasper back to me and I'm greatful for it; but can take her with you?" "Her?"
>>25935211 >"Yeah, I'm a girl. Duh." chimmed in Jasper "Okay... why?" >"Because I was born thi-" >"*cough* I think he means why is he taking you with him." >"Oh." >"Well you see... my mate found another..." "I'm not following you." >"I have been overthrown as her mate, and as such my offspring hold no value. I hold no value..." "So you gotta prove yourself in order to keep the family line going? Then what about her?" >"She is a female, and as such she threatends the stature of her mother and her current mate." "I still don't see how-" >"They will kill her." "Oh..." >"I don't want to lose her, but I can't leave my pack." "Only form of security?" >"I'm afraid so..." >"You already proved to be of a good heart. I can trust you with this, even if you are an alien to us." "I'm a human, but I can see where you're coming from." >I just wanted some god dammed meat. "Are you okay with this Jasper?" >She nods her head. >"The others are afraid to help me. They don't want to get in trouble with mom." >Man she sounds like a bitch. >"Plus you already saved me twice! I already know you won't let me get hurt." >You little cheeky fuck I almost died last time. "Fine. You win. I will take you in, but don't think that's an excuse to cause me more trouble." >"I thank you human. Later out in the week I will bring you the meat of the manticore as my thanks." "Yeah, yeah. Come on Jasper. I need to store the pig in the fridge." >"Okay! By daddy!" >"Bye sweetie. Make me proud okay?" >"Kay!" >They take their leave with the father and the dead manticore left behind. >"...I forgot to ask him where he lives...Shit, he said Ponyville right?"
Here are two ideas for short greens, if anyone is interested.
1. Anon taking the little pup to the doctor for treatment, ending up of course at the vet. Followed up by stuff like the pup making a scene there and eventually calmed down with the offering of a pack of his/her fvorite dog biscuits.
2. Something new years related. At least from personal experience I know that dogs don't like fireworks. So here is an idea: New year's eve in Ponyville, all are celebrating, the pup is even allowed to stay up longer for the fireworks. Only for things to get awry when Pinkie lights them up. Dog is shaking, eventually running away and hiding somewhere. Turns out that not only are the loud noises scaring her, but reminding her off whatever took away her parents. This green just ends with Anon tugging her up and going home with her while the other ponies decide to further celebrate (either unaware of what exactly happened or, after Anon reassured them that everything is okay, that they should continue even if he appreciates their concern). Ending is centered around Anon just laying on the couch, sitting out the fireworks outside while scratching the pup's ear to make it relax till it falls assleep despite the fireworks.
>>25943400 >>25943775 Hey I'm jut trying to give the pup the best case scenario. I feel as if ponies especially around Ponyville will make him out as a subclass. Like every other race that has crossed its town. The only reason I gave it to Anon was because he was a commodity as much as he was exotic.Nobody wants to be the one who pissed of an alien from a different planet. Or at least in this story so far. Plus, this gives me plenty of room to do pup things. You know? That thing you wanted...
Oh, and happy new year. Hopefully this time with more diamond doge pics.
>>25946198 >I feel as if ponies especially around Ponyville will make him out as a subclass That doesn't really ever happen in the show though. In grimderp fanfiction it's pretty common, but not in actual canon.
Although given that you've already included Anon, it's pretty obvious you don't care much about being show-accurate, your universe clearly don't have many similarities with the MLP:FiM universe outside superficial ones.
>>25946457 Oh I know. I was just throwing my own bias out there, and don't worry it won't go grimderp. I can promise you that much. They don't give out much on diamond dogs, but I do try to keep their race as canon as possible. I'm not gonna have them start spitting out fireballs and fly through twirling their tails.
>>25935232 >"Woah! Your house is huge." >You are Anon. "It's nice isn't it." >After a short couple of hours you and Jasper made it towards your home. >It's a bit far out from Ponyville, but you don't mind. >Keeps the ponies from snooping about... Not that you have anything to hide. "I was gonna get a regular house, but uh... I figured paying a little extra to get it my size wasn't that bad of an idea." >Fumbling with your keys you open the door. "Go on, make yourself at home. Who knows how long you'll be staying with me." >She rushes in not waiting for you to guide her. "I'm gonna put this in the fridge, I'll be with you in a sec!" >You announce >"Okay!" you hear from upstairs. >Wasting no time you head towards your kitchen and drop the contents of your backpack on the table. >They don't know nothing about your oranization skills. >You open your refridorator and find that it's lacking... well everything. >Aside from the meat you just caught you have next to nothing. "Tits..." >Well you better start storing the meat now before it gets too late to go out and by some essentials. >...And maybe a book on diamond dogs. >"Hey Anon?!" "Down in the kitchen!" >She scuttles down the strairs next to you. >"Hey Anon where are the caves?" "Caves?" >"Yeah. The caves where we will be sleeping at." "You mean rooms?" >"What's that?" "It's where we sleep. Mine is upstairs and to the left and yours will probably be on the right by the end of the hall." >"Why not caves?" "Because it's too cold to live in a cave." >"Nuh-uh I've lived in a cave with mom and dad before and it wasn't that cold." She said proudly. >"But we did sleep together all the time to keep warm." "Well that's too bad. I don't live in a cave and you're getting your own room." >"...Okay." >Wow didn't mean to sound like a dick.
>>25965007 "Err I mean..." >"It's okay. My dad just wants to protect me from my mom." >I swear man orphans are just downers sometimes. >You didn't notice until you finished storing did you see how devistated she actually looked. >She got ripped away from her family. >Told her mom wanted her dead. >And given away to a total stranger. >All on the same day. "Hey Jasper?" >She looks up to you with tears welling in her eyes. "Things might be a little tough right now, but your dad trusts me enough to take care of you, and I don't intend to let him down." "Everything is going to be alright." >Without warning she burst into tears and threw herself at you. >She was hurt. You weren't that stupid to figure that out. >You pet her head gently trying to calm her down and reassure her, but that only made her cling tighter and cry more. >So you sat there for a good half hour comforting her. It's all you could really do.
>When her cring subsided you finally found your voice to speak. "Hey Jasper. I have to go out and buy some food. Okay?" >"But-" "Don't worry I'll be back. In fact, I have a treat for you." >"You do?" "Have you ever had ice cream?" >She shakes her head no. "Well you're going to get some today. Do you want to come with or would you rather stay? >"I'll stay. I'm feeling tired." >It has been a long day for both of us. "I'm gonna be gone for a bit. Just sit tight and relax for today." >You head towards the door and dawn your jacket. "I'll be back in a bit, okay?" >"Okay." >And with that you're out the door.
>>25965014 >You are Jasper. >The fluffiest diamond dog in Ponyville. >Probably the only one in Ponyville. >But that's fine, because you just had one of the greatest naps ever. >It's been a long time since you slept like that and it was thanks to Anon's couch. >Oh, and Anon was even nice enough to take care of you. >Even if your mom... NO! >You don't want to think about it. She can't find you. >And even if she did your dad or Anon will help you. >They said they would... >But now there is a bigger problem. >How are you going to thank them. "Hmm I wonder if they like drawings..." "But the better question is where can I find something to draw with." >Saying to nobody in partucular. >Looking around in the living room you don't find anything that would help. >Lots of pictures with ponies and a couple with gryphons... >You decide to venture further into 'your' room. >Skulking about you find a blank notebook. >Why would he have this? You don't know, but you're not gonna start asking questions. >Now all you need is something to write with... "To Anon's room!" >You really need to stop talking to yourself. >Anyways, to Anon's room. >Going at full speed you burst into Anon's room, but immediately regret it. >It stinks. "It stinks like moldy cheese." "Ew, what's that smell." >Curiosity taken over disgust you start searching around the room looking for the smell. >Totally not forgetting why you were here in the first place. >First you try his closet.
>>25965023 >It smells like... puke, firewood, and pee..? "Okay?" >Without questioning it you sniff around under his bed. >...There a strong punjent smell... maybe you're getting closer..? >You take one more wiff and find that it isn't the smell that hit you earlier. >Taking a better look you find what has been giving off the oder. >It's like a comic book, but with wierd looking things wrestling. They kinda look like Anon, but with boobs. "I'll ask him about it later." >You put it back losing intrest no sooner than you picked it up. >And then it hits you. >That awful smell... >That smelly smell. >It was coming from the basket right across from you. "That's gotta be it. >Walking over it there is without a doubt in your mind now. >This basket with Anon's clothes is the thing that stinks. "Bleh, I think I'm gonna be sick." >You walk out of the room and firmly close the door. "I definatly don't want to go through that again..." >Now what where you doing..? Oh yeah! Something to draw with. >Heading downstairs you go to the kitchen this time. >And wouldn't you know it. There is a blue marker on the table. "Good enough for me!" >Hopping up to the nearest chair you pull out the notebook and take the marker. >After a couple minutes you you think you know what to draw now. >So you get settled and start doodling for what seems like ages. >...You still can't belive Anon isn't here yet.
>>25965036 >KNOCK KNOCK >"Hey Anon open up! I know you're back from your trip so don't try to lock me out." >Flaming poo! Who is that?! >"I'm coming in anyway. You promised to dri-" >The door opens and in comes in a pale blue pegasus with a rainbow colored mane. >She sees you doodling on the table. >"What the heck are you doing in Anon's house!?" "I- uh.." >"Are you trying to steal from him?" >Where is Anon?! >"Answer me or you're gonna have a hoof full in a second." "He- I" >"Answer me!" "HE'S TAKING CARE OF ME!" >"He's what..? You think I'm gonna believe a lie like that!?" >"Who would want to be with a diamond dog like you? You're all a buch of no good filthy mutts." "N-No!" "He said he would take care of me..." >You barely whisperd out. >"Pfft hah yeah right. Like Anon is ever gonna take care of anyone. Let alone some runt." >"Shit talking about me in my house while I'm not home is pretty low, but bulling a kid. Are you serious Rainbow?" "Anon!"
>>25965041 >"Anon!" >You are Anon. >Things were going fine and dandy. >Even had a strawberry ice cream for Jasper. "Is everything okay Jasper?" >It's hard to tell with the groceries in your hands, but you can feel her clutching on to your leg. >You're pretty sure she doesn't like Rainbow. >"Jasper? What the heck is going on?" spat Rainbow >You make a motion towards the kitchen and set the bags down. "I am her caretaker." >"What? I thought you said you went out hunting?" "I did. I found a little extra." >"Well you should return it before her mother doesn't take her back." >At that remark you can't help but to notice Jasper fidgeting in place. >It okay Anon don't be mad, not yet. >She didn't know... "Rainbow I think you should go." >"Go? Why? I just got here." "Rainbow if you really want to go out and drink with me you will leave right now." >The turn of events made her hesitate but comply. >"You better tell me what's going on later." "Good bye Rainbow." >Rainbow flys out without another word, and you firmly close the door. "It's okay now she's gone." >You shake your leg. "Um... You can let go now." >"Y-You don't think I'm a bad diamond dog do you?" "What?! No never. Don't let Rainbow Dash convince you otherwise... or anyone else. "Come on. Let's get you that treat I promised you." >"Oh yeah! I did something to show you my thanks." >She scrambles over the table and pulls out a drawing. >It's a picture of you and her dad over a dead manticore. Cute. It looks like we are roaring. >There are also squiggles in the background. You can't tell if it's the forest or fire because of the same color. "Wow. Thanks, it's great." >"Really?" "Eyup, so great in fact that it's gonna go right on the fridge. So I can see it everyday." >To anyone you might sound sarcastic, but her goofy smile says otherwise. >You can't just not like that ecstatic face.
And that's all I wrote. Sorry for the late night update.
>>25901314 >you peak over the news paper you were reading "Yes, sweetie?" >"How was I born?" >you mentally groaned >you dreaded the day these questions would pop up "What makes you ask?" >"the ponies at school say diamond dogs and huemons can't have babies. But if that's true, how was I born?" >part of you just wanted to say 'because magic' but you knew that would be good enough for your child's near limitless curiosity "Well, grab a seat and I'll see if I can't answer that" >you little diamond planted herself on the floor where she stood >tail already wagging "It started years ago, when I first met your mother"
basically, two opposing gangs fighting for supremacy, player group is making the final attack on the enemy compound. Fliers take the upper entrances to the fortified mansion the other gang is using as a base.
Pegadog runs into a horrifying stitched together mass of flesh and chains and hooks and has to fight the thing to get to the boss.
after the thing throws her bodily through a couple of lockers she pops a healing potion she had acquired earlier from some weird tribals that had some weird blood in it but she had been told it was fine.
Que painful mutation of half pegasus, half diamond dog, all rage and she pretty much killifies the thing.
>>25973102 fucking forgot to mention. post apocalyptic horse world setting. so mutated blood in the potion caused violent mutation. The immediate effects faded in a few weeks time. now mostly she has thicker fur, dog ears, dog nose and more noticeably thicker muscles.
>>25970551 Alright let's see how well I can keep this going "It all started about five years ago" >"that's how old I am!" >not a coincidence "Yep. Anyway, I was trying one of my 'get rich quick' schemes and decided to try and 'borrow' some gemstones from a local diamond dog colony." >"Borrow? You were going to give them back?" "Uh, yes. So, after a bit of spelunking, I found the treasure troves of gems. Unfortunately, they belonged to your mother." >"Unfortunately?" >those puppy eyes were starting to look sad "Ok, fortunately" >her face lit back up along with her wagging tail >"That being said, she wasn't too happy to see a human 'borrowing' her gems. Also didn't help it was her 'time of the month'" >"You mean those times when you say she becomes like a hellhound?" >you look around to make sure your wife wasn't within earshot "Uh, yes" >"why does she act like that?" "That ones a bit hard to answer, one day you'll understand" >"am I going to be like that one day?" "Maybe, only time will tell" >"Oh" "So, your mother, not too happy, decided to get in a bit of a sparring match with me." >"Did you hurt each other?" "Your mother knocked me around a bit. As time went on though, it devolved into a ummm...wrestling match" >"Wesling?" "Yep, uh, 'full body wrestling'. Your mother had me pinned but it wasn't anything I couldn't handle. Especially once I got ahold of her legs" >you eyes drifted off to the side as some of the more vivid memories came back to you >you daughter tilted her head as she tried to process what you were telling her "But anyway, once we managed to wear ourselves out, your mother calmed a bit. I got to hang onto some of her gems as long as I hung around to tend to her 'needs'" >"Needs?" "You know, relationship stuff. And then, a few months later, you were born." >"So huemons can have babies with diamond dogs?" "Yep, humans are weird like that" >"But the kids at school say it's not possible" "Well the kids a school are full of poo. Don't repeat that."
>>25973567 >your daughter giggled >"Ok, daddy" "Com'ere you" >she hopped into your lap as you have her a hug "I love you, fluffy or not" >"love you too, daddy" >and with that, she scampered off to her room >you leaned back in your chair and went back to reading your newspaper >only to be interrupted by something big and fluffy crawling over from behind your chair and into your lap >something you'd become very familiar with over the past five years >you peaked once again over your paper to see your wife staring right back "So, how'd I do?" >"Well, you managed to tiptoe over the main bits so I'd say you did pretty good" "I try" >"Now, about that 'hellhound' remark" >you bit your lower lip "Scale of 1 to 10, how in trouble am I in?" >"1 to 10?" >your wife draped her arms over the back of the chair >her chest right in your face >"Sex" >you paused for a moment "See you in the bedroom?" >she was giving a toothy grin now >"Don't be late"
And that's it for now I almost ended it with an inception style ending where he's telling his second daughter this story on how SHE was born, but it felt kinda silly
>be outside with dog daughter >she's lying down bathing in the sun >crowd of guys start to gather around and stare hard at your daughter's ass "Damn it...I was afraid this would happen..." >"What's wrong daddy?" "N-Nothing! Now get up and pack your things, we're leaving!" >"But daddy! These guys invited me to-" "HELL NO! First things first, we're getting you some clothes. No more walking around without them!" >"But what about my vest?? Mom said that was enough!" >you notice your dog daughter's unusually large breasts just hanging out the vest bouncing around as she walked to you >you curse your godlike breeding genes "We'll talk more about it when we get home!" >"D-Daddy..." "Yes?" >"I'm starting to f-feel funny..." >you then glance down and see your dog daughter's paws moving between her legs as she pants heavily >you hear other dogs howling in the distance >NO >FUCK NO >this is not a drill, Code Heat! >you run towards her and rush to pick her up >"Daddy?! What a-are you doing?!!" >you start carrying her as you run to your home >your legs pick up the pace as you hear the trailing howls intensify
>>25976184 >Anon attempts to haul his daughter out of Equestria and to the Crystal Empire to try and keep her from getting romped >it's either ends comically well, or goes horribly wrong right out the gate
>>25976773 no, that ain't my thing "bad end" would probably be that he manages to get her onto the train to the empire, but at the last second loses track of her, and finds her plowing one of the staff (happens to be a diamond dog) in the utility closet though I'm sure afterwards his wife will chime in saying it's just one of those things that happens and as far as diamonds dogs goes is relatively normal
>>25965049 >You are Jasper. Who else would you be? >Yesterday was... pretty long. >Leaving the heavy covers of your bed you stretch out. >First thing you see when you open your eyes is Anon's guest room. >The walls lack a bit of color, and the only other thing in here besides the bed is a dresser. >Well that and an open closet. >He said if dad was planning on letting you stay longer than a month he'd let you make it your room. >Speaking of which... "Anon!" >You say as you clamor out of the door. "Anon?" >A faint smell of sweet bread wafts in the air. "Maybe he's down in the kitchen." >Bolting towards the stairs the smell gets stronger. >But still no Anon around. "Anon?" >Turning into the kitchen you spot the culprit of the smell on the table. >It looks like flat bread stacked on top of each other, but it smells sweet. >There's a glass of water with a bottle next to it. >...You wonder if that's for you. >And on the flat bread is a piece of paper. "Hmm, he definately left it for me." >Getting a hold of the paper you examine it very carefully. >... >You forgot that you can't read equestrian. "..." "This is gonna be tougher than I thought." >Making a quick glance around the room you are certain that Anon left this for you. >I mean why else would he leave food out like this? "You know that's probably what the note says." "It probably says 'Dear, Jasper. Here is food. Eat it.'" >Altough, it does have a bit more squiggles than that... "I know!" >Of course it was so obvious. "I'll ask somepony to read it for me." >You're a genius. >... "I have to stop talking to myself."
>>25977235 >Before you could belittle yourself anymore your stomach let out a low growl. >Maybe you should eat before you do anything else. >Looking over the flat stuff you take a careful sniff. >It looks safe, and your stomach can't complain. >You take a small bite... and it was one of the best things you have ever tasted. >Without a second thought you grab the top layer with your paw and shove it in your maw. >It was like a creamy softness melting in your mouth. >Definatly one of the best things you've had. >As you're munching away you almost forgot the bottle that was sitting next to it. >Curiosity getting the better of you, you grab it and start trying to find a way to open it. >A quick tug here and a twist there and... POP >Off goes the top. >Always the careful one; you take a sniff at it. "Myyhhmmhhhnnnyh!" >Right the food... You swallow the remenants of your cake like bread. >It's honey! >Being as gracious as possible you turn the bottle upsidedown and attempt to pore its content on your plate by shaking it vigarously. >Needless to say you did a good job of it. >After letting it settling you do the only thing you could do. >You take a bite out of it face first, but it proved too much! >It was falling at the sides and crumbling as you brought it up to finish it whole. >...Maybe you used too much honey. >Using both paws you grab the parts that fell back on the plate, stack them, and finish it off. >You've tasted honey before, but never this much in one sitting. >If breafest was this good you can't wait to see what's for lunch. >Content you put the dish away and wash off your paws. No you didn't lick them. >They got a BIT sticky during that whole ordeal. "Oh yeah! The note." >How could you forget. You were gonna go out and find somepony to help you out. > Grabing it off the table you stick it in your jacket's pocket and head out towards the door. >You're sure Anon won't mind you leaving. >I mean, what could possibly go wrong?
>>25977241 >You are so wrong. >Oh top dog were you wrong. >It started out with following a cart into town, and then I asked them for some help; but they were too fast and they didn't stop. >And then you took a wrong turn. >You tried going back, but it looked different from where you came from. "Oh Alpha, Anon is gonna be so mad!" >These stupid ponies won't even talk to me either! >They always give you that stupid huff and turn away. >Activly ignoring you! >Like you stole their muffins or something. >You didn't do nothing! >Nuffin' I tell you! >"Hey there, rough looking one." >"What are you doing out here at the market." >Rang out a slow female drawl. >Looking over your shoulder you spot an orange pony with a hat. "Who me?" >"Yes you. What are you doing here all by your lonesome." "Do I know you?" >"Afraid not, but I do know Anon. I heard he adopted diamond dog from Rainbow. Couldn't believe it really... Names Applejack by the way." >Oh... she's one of her friends. >"Now don't give me that sour look. If Anon thinks you're alright than you're fine by me." >This seems sketchy "Umm... Since you know Anon... Can you tell me what this says." >You pull out the note and hand it to her. >"You don't know how to read?" "Can you just read it? Please." >"Alright, Alright..." >"Dear, Jasper. I'm going to be out working for a bit. Sorry I left you alone this morning. I left some pancakes on the table, and I'll be back for lunch. Don't make a mess or eat all the honey. Signed Anon" >Woops. >"Hmm... Looks like he left you with some time by yourself. Hey I got an idea why don't I introduce you to the Cutie Mark Crusaders. A bunch of fillies just around your age." >That didn't sound wierd at all. >"That way you'll have somepony to show you around... and keep them off my back for a while." she whisperd. "What was that?"
>>25977251 >"Not much. They're up at the plaza watching Scoots do tricks. Common I gotta set up my stall soon." >You know she could be lying to you... >Then again she said there would be fillies to play with... >...Nope, don't see anything wrong here. "Okay. Let's go" >A quick walk a block away and there you spot the three filles. >An earth pony sitting next to a unicorn waiting on the side of the road. >Then you hear it buzzing. >Low at first then rapidly increasing in volume. >You see a bright orange pegasus speeding down the road on her scooter. >Entranced by her sudden appearance you forgot that you were in the middle of the road. >With her creaping closer towar-OH SHIT! >She collided with you. Sending you and her back a couple feet while her scooter flew off to the side. >"Hey watch were you're going!" "Me? Maybe you should watch were you are going!" >"I wasn't the one standing in the-... you're not a pony." "No. I'm a diamond dog. So what?" >"Pfft whatever... You were still in the way." "Was not!" >"Was too!" "Was not!" >"Was too times infinity!" "You can't do that! >"Yes I can. I just did!" "But that's cheating!" >Applebloom and Sweetie Belle just watch as you two verbaly assult each other...kinda. >"Alright. Alright! Stop it you two." Interjects Applejack." >"I came and brought Jasper here so you Crusaders can show her around Ponyville. She's kinda new in town and is living with Anon. So be nice." >"You live with Anon? Isn't he that Alien weirdo that lives near the woods?" "He's not a weirdo! He saved me from a manticore yesterday." >"What no way!" "Yes way, and dad is going to give him its meat to prove it too. >"Ew... You guys eat meat?" "Well yeah... What do you guys eat?"
>>25977254 >"Hay, duh." >You can't help but to scrunch your muzzle in disgust. >They eat grass! >Practically dirt. "You guys are wierd." >"Yeah well... Rainbow Dash is cooler than Anon will ever be." >"Scoots that's enough. I said play nice. I don't have time to babysit all of you all day." >"Ffffiiine... Let's go crusading I guess." she says dejectedly. >This looks like fun already... >Applejack starts making her way back towards the market. >"Have fun y'all! And if you need any help with something just hollar!" >Leaving the four of you behind. >"Did that just happen?" spoke Sweetie. >"I guess... I wonder if diamond dogs can get cutie marks." responded Applebloom. "I don't think so." >"Can we just go! I want to finish this so I can see Rainbow Dash's stunts." interjected Scootaloo >You're starting to not like this Scootaloo. >"So, is there anywhere you want to go see first?" spoke Applebloom. "Actually I do. Is there anywhere I can get honey?" >"what do you need that for?" "Uh...Well this morning I had what Applejack called 'pancakes' and I accidently used all of the honey when Anon specifically said not to eat it all." >"How do you accidently use all of the honey?" interrupted Scootaloo. "It was good okay!" >"Alright, geez..." >"Anyways, Mr. Beelzibub Comb runs a bee farm not too far from here. I'm sure if we help him out he'll give us some honey." stated Applebloom. "Cool let's head there first!"
>>25977260 >You are now Anon. >Man has it been a busy day. >In the morning AJ had you running around in the farm helping out Big Mac for a while. >Then Rose wanted you to trim her bush, but not before running down to the market to get an extra bag of sugar for the Cakes. >These ponies are needy you swear. >...At least you left some food for Jasper; hopefully she won't get bored. >"Well hello their sonny." "Mr. Comb! Don't worry I'm almost done moving the bees to their new home." >"Oh don't rush yourself. I got time to waste, and please call me Beelzibub. Mr. Comb is my father's name." "Okay Mr.Bee." >"Hehe, you youngsters and your Nicknames." >You swear these old ponies from this world act like big old cats. >Without the hairball...and sometimes without hair. "So what brings you over?" >"Oh not much. Just talked to a couple youngsters they were looking for honey, but they had no money." "That's a shame." >"There's no need. They offerd to collect it themselves along with a bit of extra work for it." "Well that was nice of them." >"Sure was... I think their names where Dopplerdoom, Sweaty Tail, Crudeloo, and Plastard." "The Cutie Mark Crusaders?" >"Yup, that's them." "Huh... I wounder why they wanted honey." >Hopefully nothing bad. >"Celestia why! Not the bees!" you heard off in the distance. >Totatly nothing bad.
Alright that's all I could shell out for today. I don't know why, but I thought it was Monday.
>>25977340 Well that's a shame. This was just some puppy play. There a couple scenes I've been working on that would be implemented later in the story.Like conflicts with the mother and the other diamond dogs... Among other things. But if I lose a thread bumper I guess that's my fault. Sorry to disappoint.
>Day hot day in Equestria. >You are a human. Probably Anon. >And it has been one of the hottest days Celestia could ever create. >Seriously fuck that bitch. >Here you are in the living room with a small fan blowing on your face, sitting on a leathery couch, with your wife beater, and shorts on. >It has been two hours since you woke up and you already hate today. >"Anon... it's hot." "No shit." >"Give me the fan. I want a turn." >That was [redirected name]'s sister. Crimson. >She wanted to stop by and visit her little sister. >The only problem is that it has been 3 months and she hasn't left. >Damn diamond dog stealing all my pork. "Fuck you it's my fan." >"Come on. You don't even have fur! How can you get hot?" "Gee I don't know maybe the 98 degree weather that's been going on." >She can't help but to give out a low whiney growl. >"Fine! I'll find another way to cool off." >Giving her a shrug you sink deeper into the hot leathery couch. >...Damn you really love this couch right now. Not gonna toss it if you start getting burns from it. Nope. >Sometime later your blissful ignornce is interupted by a loud splash comming from your back yard. >Feeling that you have nothing better to do you meander your way towards the back. >You spot Crimson pouring a tub of ice into a kiddie pool. >Where she got the ice and kiddie pool you don't know, but you want in on that pool. >Coming out out of the house just in time to watch Crimson fall backwards into the pool you decide to speak up. >"Ohh~ this is great..." "Yo! Whatcha got there Crimey." >"Don't call me that... and you can't come in this was my idea." "Ah come on don't be like that. I'll trade you the fan for it. >"No deal. This is better than that dinky fan of yours... Besides you didn't even let me use it when I asked." "But that's not fair! I have one fan, you get an entire pool with ice." >"Too bad." >... >You just had to hog the fan.
>>25989297 "...Where did you even get this stuff?" >"Used a couple of gems for it. It's not that expencisive." she says while lounging on the pool. >Damn, should of thought of that sooner. "So, when can I use it?" >"Never." "But it's hots balls out here." >"I don't give a fuck." she says as she rolls around in the ice. "Come on, I'll do anything. Just let me use it." >Stopping mid roll she sits upright and turns to you. >"Anything huh? as she says that she gets a good look at you. >...All of you. >It's making you kinda nervous really. >"Okay." "That's great! Now what do I have to do?" >"Me." "You?" >"Yes, me. I'm already a week into my heat and not nearly enough cute guys to do it with." "Oh..." >OH?! >That's all you can say? >She wants you to fuck her and all you can say is 'Oh...'? >"I mean I have been dropping hints for weeks to get your attention, but I guess you didn't notice them." >She picks up one of the ice cubes and gently rubs it on her nipples while massaging her inner thighs with her other paw. >Weeks she says weeks! >"But guess that's fine since you did care for my sister while she was in trouble." >Lifting the ice cube she starts licking it while staring intently at you. >You never thought of fucking her to be honest. Or anything around here. It seemed too... alien. >"So how about it? Let's make each other a bit more comfortable." "O-okay." >Don't studder now you idiot. >Your nervousness elicits a small giggle from her. >"You're cute. How about I start it off." >Crimson gets up from the pool and it feels like you're looking at her for the first time. >The fur gleams in the sun from all the moisture it absorbed. >Her nipples errect looking egar for your attention. >And all the way down you spot her hips swaying side to side along with her tail. >One look to her face and she give you a knowing smile. >She knows you've been checking her out and licks her lips.
>>25989310 >Crimson walks over to you and lays her paws on your hips. >She's about half a head shorter than you. >"Here let me." >Getting on her knees she pulls off your shorts in one swift motion. >"~Hmm not bad." >With her paws firmly on your waist she slowly licks your balls >Inhaling the musk that is coming out from you. >The sudden attention awakens your memeber from its slumber prodding her cheecks as she continues licking. >"Finally up I see." >Working her way over to the base of your shaft she licks the underside of it to the top. >Lapping up any precum that's has made it's way down. >You can't help but moan at this. >Finally noticing your approval she envelopes your memember in her muzzle. >Letting you bask in the warm velvot feel that surrunds you. >Looking at Crimson you have her a nod. >Her deep blue eyes peirce you as she begins to move again. >At first it was slow and every time she retracts it sends a small shock of pleasure down you spine. >Then her momentum slowly started building up. Her eyes no longer looking up at you; now they look forawrd full of lust. >Reaching your breaking point you couldn't handle it any more and placed your hands behind Crimsons head. >It caught it her by surprise, but she didn't pull away. >Moving a bit more forcefully you pump into her hungry maw; her tongue sliding side to side trying to savor the taste of you. >Until one last pump and came in her mouth. >She didn't let go and kept her mouth shut as you released your cum in her; She swallowed as much as she could. >After what seemed like minutes she released you and your penis. >Leaving you slightly flacid. >"About time you finished. It's your turn now." said slightly out of breath.
>>25989324 >Coming out from a daze you look down to her. >Crimson is leaning on the pool presenting her snatch to you. >Her eyes full of anticipation and vigor. >Not being the one to let her down you remove your white tank top and move towards her. >You get on all fours and lightly play with her vagina by rubbing your hand between her folds. >"Ohh~ Come on Anon. Show me how much you really want it!" she let out in a snarl. >Doubling down you wrap your arms from under her legs and bury you face in her muff. >Widing you tongue you start lapping upwards towards her clit. >"That's better." she lets out an satisfied sigh. >But before you let her get settled you peirce your tongue through her folds. >Drawing out a small yelp from her. >"Hey CArefull you mightAH~!-" >You ingore it and start working harder. >Licking the side of the walls and prodding deeper into her vagina with your tongue. >The taste is driving you mad. >What once was a limp dick is now returning back in full force. >You want to fuck her. You want her. >Making a return towards her clit you swirl your tongue around it, and gently suck it. >Crimson arches her back in responds. >Given your chance you suckle on it a little harder and she lets out a loud moan. >It sounded like a mixture of a howl and a low growl. >Your constant attacks finally yeilded results as she climaxes. >"A-Aah~! Anon that was-" "I'm not done yet." >You say as you wipe your mouth. >Positioning yourself over her you use your right hand to insert both your middle finger and ring finger. >Her face contorts from a confused face to an elated one. >Using your hand you start pumping in an out; causing her leg to twitch from the constant attention. >Your fingers carving a path deep into her walls while her hips thrust towards your hand. "Somebody is eager."
>>25989331 >"A-Anon why are you doing this? You don't have to-" >You press your face up against hers and give her a quick kiss on the lips to shut her up. "You said you were intrested in me for a while didn't you?" >She nods her face lights up blushing. "I didn't have many suiters, and you already offererd. So, Why not?" >The grip on your fingers gets tighter. >Taking out your hand reliveing her for a moment you position yourself over her hands on the pool wall. >With a labored breath she looks at you than down at your member proding the walls of her vagina. "Just say the words and it's all yours." >It takes her a second before she can finally mumble out. >"R-Rut me..." "What was that? >"Fuck me!" >With full force you drive your dick deep into her until you hilt. >The sudden jolt made her clamp down on your dick. >It feels like furnace radiating from your loins. >"Breed me!" >Her large paws grab you from behind pushing you deeper; making your dick rub against the back of her womb. >More than willing you start to retract from her entrance and thrust back in harder than before. >And again, and again, and again, and again! >With each thrust your momentum builds faster until her moans start to sound like humming. >Crimson lets go of your ass and wraps her paws around your torso rubing her supple breast against you. >It goes on for minutes before the pressure is starts to bare down on you. "C-Crimson I'm gonna-" >"Inside, inside!" >With a frim confirmation you overwork yourself for the last stretch. >She locks her legs around your waist greedly waiting on the recieving end. >Until...You came. >Your body was shaking from the climax and exhaustion. You couldn't hold out any longer and collapsed on top of Crimson. >Not that she minded.
>>25989340 >She seemed to enjoy it from your perspective. >"That was.." she catches her breath. "I mean I really enjoyed that." "Glad you liked it." >She lets go of you and you roll off of her. >"You did mean it when you said you wanted to be together, right?" "Yeah." >Looking over at Crimson. "Why would I try to back down now." >She gives you a comforting smile. >"No reason." "Good..." >... "Can we get in the pool now? It's hot as fuck."
I know. I type slow as fuck. Anyway here is my first pronz. Enjoy, hate, what eves I gotta wake up early to work.
>>25989297 >You are a human. Probably Anon Too meta. >That was [redirected name]'s sister redacted* >>25989310 >using the word nipples twice Lack of vocabulary skills and pushing the anthro way too far.
And I'm not going to bother reading the rest. I expected kinky DD sex but got baby's first greentext. Try lurking actually lewd and learn how to not be shit at descriptions and characters.
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