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Injured Fluttershy PART 3
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>Be Anon
>You're walking in the local park
>Suddenly you hear whimpering
>You went to investigate and see this.
>Wat do

Pastebin of the excellent and wonderful green made by the main writer in this tread, piece5:
http://pastebin.com/8F0P0v9A
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Rape
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Part 1: >>21667663
Part 2: >>21711365
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And now the ritual to summon Piece5
gather together evrypony
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>>21748606
FUCKING PIECE5 GET THE FUCK IN HERE YOU PIECE OF SHIT

please ;_;
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>>21748606
>>21748637
Kek.
He will be here, calm down anons.
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>>21748637
Calm yoself, It hasn't even been 10 minutes yet.
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>>21748671
>>21748606
I was just tryin to be funny
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>>21748742
And you were.
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>>21748606
>>21748637
>>21748671
>>21748732

Wrote a fucking hunk of story, post it, find out everyone abandoned to this thread. Broken ass auto updater.
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>>21748783
Post it here, while I get to bump limit in the other tread, and update your Pastebin
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>>21748272

>Anon might be asleep, you don't want to wake him up.
>When you step in the room, Anon is sitting in a wheelchair, looking out the window.
>You step behind him, leaning down and resting your head on his shoulder
"Hey..."
>He leans his head against yours
>"Hey..."
"How are you feeling?"
>"Much better. The doctor says I can go home tomorrow if nothing happens tonight."
>You smile, then remember that Anon's dad is dead.
>It's so easily forgettable, so easy to slip into the way things WERE instead of how they ARE.
"Are you...are you going to be okay going home?"
>He turns his head and looks at you. "I'm sure, Flutters. I think I just need a night alone."
>Of course he needs a night alone, then he can figure out how to cut you away in the easiest way possible. You knew this day was coming, but it still hurts. You blink your tears back. You're going to be here for Anon for as long as you can. You'll figure out how to handle rejection when you get to it. It's not the first time, and it won't be the last.
>"Hey, Fluttershy?"
"Y-yes?"
>"What were you doing in the park that made you hurt your ankle?"
>You think back to the day in the park, almost a week ago now.
>You were there enjoying the birds that frequented a tree near the sidewalk. The way they tweeted and chirped at each other always made you happy.
>You needed a bit of happy in your life right then. You knew all your friends loved you, they were true friends, and they always tried to think of you. They made mistakes sometimes, and sometimes those mistakes hurt, but you always forgave them. They would never intentionally hurt you. This weekend, however, they were all occupied doing their various activities and you were left alone.
>You weren't sad, but you definitely weren't happy. Until you began listening to the birds, that is. They were so happy, so FREE, that you couldn't help but feel happy around them.
>You decided you wanted to climb the tree
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>>21748783
No! We are still here!

>>21748735
My prelude lays uncannon and dead in the midst. Totally cool though.
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>>21748843
Well, that explains it all, poor Flutters.
>>21748861
I was thinking about it while reading that.
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Pastebin updated to >>21748843

666 views, hail satan
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As the OP of the original thread. I'm humbled to see so many people that saw potential to it. It is piece5's thread now.
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>>21748861
Yeah, sorry, I just couldn't figure out a way to work Flash in there without totally derailing where I'm already headed. I would also feel terrible sticking Flash with Flutters, especially when she knows how much Flash means to Twilight. Just couldn't work it around.
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>>21748910
All hail, piece5.
>>21748941
I'm happy you started it all, without you, these feels would have never been feel.
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>>21748962
Oh no, I was just messing around. Like I said, just writing for fun. Also, I had to write Flash getting into this epic fight because I listened to too much metal that day.

Is there such thing?!
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>>21748941
There he is! Dude, where have you been?
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Alright guys, I'm gonna game a bit while I figure out this next section. How the frick did Flutters mess her ankle up?
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>>21749000
I read it in your pastebin, (the one about Flash fighting with anon) it was good and funny.
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>>21749001
Life happened. Also I lurked here and there
>>21749000
Nice trips.
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>>21749034
She fell
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>>21749034
She fell from the tree, I don't think she is a good climber.
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>>21749086
>>21749098

Yeah. I just have to figure out how I'm gonna write it.
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>>21749054
Those were my intentions. Usually my writing process is to write some ideas, make a flow of those ideas, write, revise, publish. For that the writing process was more like "OH! And then like, what if everyone joined? And Fluttershy got a hit? O yes, this will be perfect."

Also, how do you do the hidden black post that show when you highlight them?
I.E.>>21749001
Sorry for being new.
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>>21749125
what about slipping whilst climbing the tree?
Possibly landing awkwardly?
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>>21749149
ctrl+s
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>>21749149
Use [ Spoiler ] and [ /Spoiler ]

But without the spaces in between brackets
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>>21749193
I am [spoler] learning [/spoiler]
Thanks guys. I am also writing right now, so expect a continuation of that one Sunser story from yesterday.
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>>21749193
What game are you gonna play?
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>>21749226
Who misspells [Spoiler] spoiler?! [/Spoiler]
Anyways, off to write.
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>>21749125
Slipped, lost her grip?
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>>21749247
You don't need to put the "S" in capitals and don't put spaces between the first, and last word of the message to the brackets
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>>21749237
Bioshock infinite. Bought it yesterday
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>>21749355
Oh, beautiful game, not all people seem to like it, or understand the ending.
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>>21749355
Quite dank
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If you're waiting for Piece's story, I updated the thingy. If you already read what I wrote yesterday, each day I write is separated.

http://pastebin.com/Ue42XJBt
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Thank you Anony Mous!
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>>21749767
It's good, you did better this time, how everyone hates her is better than just being affraid. Poor Bacon Hair. She is one of my two favorite humans (the other being Flutters).
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>>21749943
Thanks bud! I think I can get a bit more down tonight before I head to bed. I got some homework first though. It won't take long. Hell, I my even play some games too and enjoy these new sweet speakers!
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>>21749001
>9001
>nobody commented on those numbers

These times... Where did they go?
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>>21749971
Okay bro
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>>21748843

>Normally you would be afraid to do something like this. This is something that's more suited towards Rainbow Dash, even Applejack.
>You ignore these thoughts and focus on climbing the tree
>You reach up towards the lowest branch. It's inches out if your reach.
>You jump up, grabbing the top. Your fingers hold, and you hoist yourself up until you can bring your leg up. You hear a whistle somewhere close.
>Maybe you shouldn't have worn a skirt if you were going to be climbing trees
>Your face heats up and you climb up another branch, hopefully beyond the eyes of anyone.
>You stand gingerly on one leg, stretching for a branch that would allow you to sit and sway with the tree while you listen to the birds.
>As you reach for the branch, your foot slips
>You start to fall, spreading your arms out. Smaller branches whip your face, arms, and legs. You reach out desperately as a branch appears within your reach
>You cling on, your lower body still falling to the ground. The momentum rips the branch from your hands, and you land on your feet
>One ankle twists on its side, sending pain lancing up your body
>You gasp, too shocked to cry out
>You fall to the ground, clutching your ankle
>You scoot back and lean against the tree. Maybe it's okay, just a sprain, give it a little bit...
>You rest for a minute (You count out to 60), then try to put a bit of pressure on your ankle. As soon as you apply any at all, your ankle screams in protest.
>Yup. Definitely broken.
>The pain and shock get to you, panic creeping in around the edges
>You start whimpering, putting your head in your hands
>Someone walks around the corner
>"Are you okay?"
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>Flashback.exe successful
>"You fell out of a tree?"
>You nod.
>"I'm glad I found you first, then. There's no telling what would have happened if some 'other' people had gotten to you first..."
>You shake your head.
"Well, you did, and they didn't. So we don't have to think about that anymore..."
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>>21750160
This is /mlp/, friend. There are those that don't even know other boards exist.
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>>21750245

>You pull up a chair next to Anon's and sit, holding his hand. The two of you stop talking, instead watching the sunset together.
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>>21750315
I may suppose that this is it for tonight.
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>>21750245
This story is incredible.

This feels like reading a real romance novel
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>>21750406
It's a good ending. I like that silly and joyful ending for the day.
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>>21750418
It's indeed, but he can't, and he won't end it this way. We still have much to know about the next days in Anon's life, and Fluttershy knowing that he won't ever leave her like she thinks he will.
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>>21750495
Oh no no no, I didn't mean for the whole, it's just a good note to end on today. Like the end of an episode in a TV series or a chapter in a book.
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>>21750406
You would be correct
>>21750409
Thank you!
>>21750418
Happy cliffhangs are best
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>>21750518
When you put it that way it's good.
>>21750519
I suppose you are going to go with Mr. Booker Dewitt or to sleep
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>>21750604
It's time to sleep m80
I will green as much as I can tomorrow, but I've got to workout, watch sibling, and go to a concert EXCISION FTW
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>>21750713
I'm hoping to go see him in action soon myself; I plan on going to his Richmond concert in March if I can.
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>>21750713
Okay bro, go to sleep, we will be waiting.
Are you from Albuquerque?
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Alright, I am going to head to bed. Maybe I can write a thing or two tomorrow morning (later today really). I wrote a little more than I thought I would so enjoy the interlude.
http://pastebin.com/Ue42XJBt
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>>21751249
This is so sweet and good, you did grate making this Sunset so sad and so broken, it destroys my heart, good job Guitar.
Sleep well
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bump
I want to feel
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3 am bump
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>>21748492
>Start crying
>Sit beside her
>Hug
>'Accidentally' grope boob.
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>>21752689
Unf
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>>21752689
Wouldn't that be terrifying to Fluttershy?
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>>21748492

>Run to her
>Ask if she's okay
>Quick hug
>Tell her I've got medical supplies at my house
>Help her up
>Lead her to my house

Continue?
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>>21752689
>she shivers but is too shy to say anything
>tries wiggling out of the hug, to no avail
>keep fondling her boob, gently but steadily
>Still crying, unzip pants and remove them
>hug her some more with raging boner going on
>go for a french kiss
>cry some more while getting her naked
>have sex while crying desperately
>after the climax, lie down and hug her some more while crying like there was no tomorrow and waving the hands around groping like some kind of hyperactive octopus
>surprise buttsecks while crying
>after it, stand up while she's still lying down, panting and gasping.
>cry some more while getting the dress back on
>look at her
>cry
>go away.
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>>21752758

I put that into Google Translate.
English - Japanese - English again.
"Welcome to /mlp/"
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>>21752775
Huh, weird. I did the same, but adding german and french, and what came out was "San Quentin - statutory rape - 15 years probation"
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>>21752791
Kek.
This is good.
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Ok, seriously now:
>"Uh, sorry about intruding...need any help?"
>Assist her whatever the problem is
>Wave goodbye
>Go my own way thinking "cute girl..."
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>>21748520
I salute you for your originality, sir.
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>>21749001

>2174'9001'
>"It's over nein sousand."
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I HOPE OLD THREAT IS ADDED TO PASTEBIN.
Or else i will have to call some reinforcment from imperial command.

Story is op.
Still.
I want it more.
A lot.
I'm here to read.
Give it to me baby!
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>>21753062
I'll give you something
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>>21753484
Bump it babe one more time.
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>>21753696
Bump it to me baby nice and slow!
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>>21753721
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>>21753787
W-what?
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>>21753811
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>>21753857
>I think about it
>a lot
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>>21753857
>>21753866
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1Npo0cmp-VY&spfreload=10
This threed is a...
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>>21753866
Guitar, you are back!
That last thing you wrote (The Sunset story) was excellent, I almost cried a bit.
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Where'd all the Starwars references start coming in at?
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>>21753857
What happend here?
When it happend?
Why?
Who?
WHY again (because it's important)?

Oh, stop it, you.
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>>21754054
>Shut up
>and
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WrjwGPb0Hvw&spfreload=10
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>>21754097
Someone catch the dogs (whos out)!
It just ran away from /b!
It is ATTTAAACKIING MEEE!

Veni, Vidi, Bump
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>>21754180
Love to bump dont ya?
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>>21753857
>>21754097
>(Who did this ?)

>>21754054
>>21754220
>Who ?
>You all know exactly who I'm
>Say my name !
>I don't have a single idea who are you !
>Yeah You have !
>I'm the newfag !
>Now say my name !
Anony
>You are god damm right !
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>>21754220
Who doesn't?

>>21754257
What?!
How?!
U are supposed to be dead!
U are dead!
I saw u die!
I killed you! I burn your body and tuen buried!
I even cry when someone ask me about you!
And u are alright?!
ARGHT!
I will eat your corpse u this time.
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>>21754283
>Bon appetit !
I have AIDS (Thanks to you !)
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>>21754302
>lel forget namefagging
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BvZgzDiBFYQ&spfreload=10
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>>21750789
Yes I am. 505 Represent!
Jk I'm really white n shit, couldn't be thug if I tried
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>>21754629
U just woke up?
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>>21754629
Finally, hello piece5.
>>21754638
No, he is asleep.
Come on Faps, that was a silly question.
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>>21754657
OH OH! Quiz party?! I love quiz parties! I love parties. I love fap. But fap on parties is after line. No, it's not.
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>>21754629
Are you here dear piece5?
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>>21754760
Good question.
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>>21754760
I'm lurking, gotta fuck with a car before I can get to writing tho.
>inb4 Alcorn reference
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>>21754776
Ok, piece, remember to wear protection.
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>>21754776
>Yo ! Are ya lurkin to bra ?
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>>21754816
I'm lurking for green.
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>>21754908
Do you want to some ? Beacuse I have some !
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Blunt
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Update is going to be comin later, around 1430-1500 Mountain Time

Sorry, friends
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>>21755325
Don't apologize, piece! We're just glad you're making green for us.

While we wait, here's a bouncy chill song I've been jamming to lately
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Co6fB8IKmwo
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>>21755325
>>21755464
Like he said. We can wait.
We have no life. So we can :D
Ok. Who will write for my ending of master work chapter?
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I just want to post this: thread was kill
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>>21755848
Not this suppose.
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slow day today
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>>21756271
probably all busy, im about to head to bed
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>>21756333
What time u got?
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>>21754942
Give it to me baby, aha, aha!
Uno, dos, tres. Rarara.
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>>21757078
this is a fluttershy thread, not a rarity one
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>>21757149

You guys! Give me images of the mane six and sunny shimmer, they might help me figure out the story.


Fucking writer's block, first world problems. God DAMN I hate my life
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>>21757430
sunny shimmer
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>>21757430
Am sorry peice , am on phone and have no access to my archives
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>>21757430
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>>21757430
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>>21757430
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>>21753910
Thanks! I haven't had the best of days today, so you can expect a few tears mate.

I was also just checking the thread before I went to school hell. I am home now though!

>>21757430
I feel you. Writer's block sucks bud. Take your time! Usually I listen to albums front to back, take a small nap, or take a walk outside to get some ideas if it helps.
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>>21757430
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I hope piece5 isn't kill
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>>21760644
piece is kill
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>>21760644
He probably has some personal issues he needs to take care of. Though, I will write for the back up story now! I will be sure to tell when I update it.
http://pastebin.com/Ue42XJBt
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Piece cone back to us! <3
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>>21761149
Updated. Check it out if you want to read something while you wait.
http://pastebin.com/Ue42XJBt
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Where is our green writer?
To what have i fap?
Why is it haaappeeenning to mee?!
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>>21765366
Oh fuck no.
Not you
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Page 7 bump
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bump for cure of writers block
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The thread must Live
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>>21766724
This life must thread.
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>>21766734
mornin Fap, sleep well?
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>>21766739
I have 5:10 PM.
Yeah.
Good afternoon btw.
I just sit here and let time go. I have to end first part of my work, but i dunno how. So it's good point to masturbate.
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>>21766769
bit TMI but W/E. lookin forward tosome green in todays forecast.
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piece5 is no longer kill!

Fucking Excision concert last night, shit was fucking BRUTAL. My ears are still ringing
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>>21767080
So, will u write?
Be my waifu?[/spolier]
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>>21767161
I will be thine waifu. I'll start writing here in a bit.
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>>21767263
always when i go to work though!
guess i'll be lurkin mobile
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>>21767263
you should get a trip m80
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>>21767293

>Tfw I don't know how
>Tfw I have no face because I'm on mobile
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To make trip u write your normal name
then
##
and after this something like a password
then forum replace it with some serious shit
and that's your tripcode
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>>21767342
https://www.4chan.org/faq#trip
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Too much piece5 who don't write green for me.
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>>21767413
Too many tripfags not relevant to the thread for me.
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Like this?
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>>21767435
Maybe u are right...

>>21767450
Yes. Just remember your tripwords and it's done for good. :D

OFC tell about it nobody! NOBODY!

And write pls. pls.
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>>21750315

>You are Anon
>You are being wheeled down the hallway by Fluttershy
>Last night was the first night in a long time that you didn't dream anything. You woke up well rested, feeling refreshed
>You glanced over to your side, where Fluttershy had spent the entire night
>Even in the dark sadness inside you, she was like a bonfire, fighting back the cold inside
>Now you have to go home, something you really don't want to do.
>You don't want to be alone, you don't want to face the fact that both your parents are dead, both ripped from your life before you could even realize what was happening
>You think back to the note, which you memorized while Fluttershy was away taking care of herself
>"Anon, I don't even know if you'll be able to read this. If you do, just know that I'm sorry. I'm sorry that you had to wake up to this terrible news. I just can't handle seeing you lying on the bed, struggling like your mom did to just stay alive. I know that I haven't been the best of fathers throughout the years, but know that I love you. I'm not good at saying stuff like that, something I think you picked up from me. I'm sorry for that.
>"Fluttershy is a wonderful person. Keep her close. Make sure you make her happy everyday, and ensure she knows how much you love her. If I could go back, I would tell your mom how much I loved her, still do love her, every second of everyday. It's one of many regrets I have that I will need be able to fix.
>"I don't know when or where you will be reading this, but just know that I love you. And I'm sorry."
>When you first read the note, the darkness inside you closed in tighter. You fought it as hard as you could, but it was ultimately Flutters' hand holding yours that kept you from falling into insanity
>You yank yourself back to the present, looking at the doors ahead of you.
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>>21767808
Delicious and sad.

Can u add some social workew who want to help Anon? I mean, he has no cash, no work, no parents. Yes, he has got love. But he can not eat love and even Flutters and her mother will help, they can not just... u know take him to familly.
Well, they can, but it would be awkward.
So. This is the thing to plan well.
I hope u have a plan.
Plan as hard as my boner.
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>>21767808
is kill
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>>21768611
Why do you say that?
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>>21748492
Just one

All I want is one genuinely nice green

No death
No rape
No feels

Just a nice, feel-good green where Anon and his girl are both happy

(By the way, consider updating the pastebin)
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>>21770588
but then the story would get dry and boring real quick. you at least need some decent feels or the story wont grab you. I agree there is such as a thing as too much feels but Piece5 is striking a good balance right now. also BUMP
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>>21770794
I guess, but romance and death don't really mix in my book
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Brothers, I'm back, my Internet connection went to shit yesterday and my computer couldn't charge the battery. It was not a nice day.
>>21767808
This is good, piece5, please deliver more feels.
>>21767456
Hello Faps.
>>21765866
Your story, "Redemption", is perfect, Doc. Keep with the good work.
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boomp
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Bump
I want you, piece5. I want you to write some moar, and to update your Pastebin... if you don't mind.
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>>21772885
PasteBin will be updated shortly, I just woke up.
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>>21773059
Okay, piece.
Also, what time is it in your side of the world?
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>>21773109

I've got 1837 right now. You?
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>>21773170

Alright, apparently I have two different tripcodes. Okay then. Sounds good2me
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>>21773170
22:38, But I'm not sleepy though, yesterday I slept like 18 hours straight.
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>>21767808

>You keep your eyes focused forward as Flutters wheels you to your car.
>Her mom is going to follow the two of you as she drives you to your house. You're not quite sure how tonight is going to end up, but you are optimistic that it'll go as you planned, with no more surprise visits from other Anons.
>Hopefully.
>You reach your car and awkwardly climb in, your ribs only slightly protesting. Four days in a hospital do wonders for your broken ribs, but your leg still requires a cast for a few more days. Weeks, probably.
>You settle back in your seat and close your eyes. You may have slept for three days, and last night, but you're still incredibly tired. You hear Fluttershy put your wheelchair in the trunk and climb into your car. She starts the car and off the two of you go.
>On the drive there, you feel your anxiety and fear rising up in your chest. When you finally arrive, your heart is pounding, thundering in your chest.
>Fluttershy gets out and sets your wheelchair up next to you. You clamber over into the chair, your muscles tight from the fear coursing through your body
>Fluttershy wheels you up your door and into the living room. Apparently the room had been cleaned up, because you see no trace of where your father...
>Where your father...
>Where he... he...
>Did it.
>You close your eyes and focus on keeping your sadness from overtaking you. You empty your mind, breathing in and out until there is no more emotion.
>To do what you have to do tonight, you need to be able to concentrate. You can't do that if you're crippled by sadness.
>Fluttershy leans down from behind and wraps her arms around you.
>"Are you okay, Anon? Are you sure you want to stay here tonight? We could get you a hotel, or you could stay at my house, I'm sure my mom won't mind-"
>You shake your head and wheel yourself to your bedroom.
"I'll be okay here tonight, Flutters. I need a night alone..."
>She follows you, nodding.
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>>21773450
God.
Poor anon.
>"I'll be okay here tonight, Flutters. I need a night alone..."
>She follows you, nodding.
Well, now Flutters will feel like shit.
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>>21773450

>When you get to your room, you pull alongside your bed and climb into it, settling down on the covers, laying against the pillows.
"Thank you, Fluttershy."
>She nods and clutches her arm, looking down at the ground. "You're welcome, Anon..." She pauses, and glances up at you from under her bangs. "Are you sure you're okay being alone? I can-"
"No, Flutters. I'll be fine tonight. Go home and be with your mom, take care of your animals. And yourself. I'll be okay."
>You hate interrupting her like that, but you can feel your resolve wavering every time she offers to stay. You can't fail tonight, no matter the cost. You know that if you do, you'll not only hurt yourself, but you'll end up destroying those around you as well. Fluttershy, her friends, her mom...
>You stop and think. Everyone you care about is connected to Fluttershy now. Before her, you only cared about one person.Your father.
>Then Flutters came along, and you cared about two people. Then you met her mom, and then there was three. Then you met her friends, and there was nine people you cared about, even though you've only met them for a few fleeting moments.
>Flutters looks like she's about to cry, standing there at the foot of your bed.
>You clear your throat and pat the bed beside you when she looks up. She walks over, still looking like she's about to cry. When she climbs up next to you, you hear a sniffle.
"Hey..."
>"...hey..." It's silent, just enough for you to barely pick up.
"Look at me."
>She picks her head up and looks at you, her eyes watery, just barely keeping the tears back. You want to just stare at those eyes forever, wandering inside them. Unfortunately, that day is a little ways off, still.
"I love you. But tonight, I just need to be alone. Just this one night. Tomorrow night, and the night after, and the night after that, I will spend with you. I'll spend every second I possibly can with you. Except for tonight. Okay?"
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>>21773684
I really needed some feels for some reason.
And this is perfect. Praise piece5 and his glorious green.
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>>21773684
Tearing up a bit right now.
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>>21773684

>She nods at you, then clutches your neck, pulling you closer to her. She cries softly into your neck.
>"I j-just don't want you to get hurt or anything...I want to be here with you..."
>You fight your resolve, bring it back to solidarity. Stay strong, you've got to do this alone.
>You rub her back, up and down, your hand tingling anywhere and everywhere it touches her.
"I promise, Flutters, after tonight we'll be together. But I really need you to go now."
>She squeezes you tighter for one second...
>Two seconds...
>Three seconds...
>She lets go and looks at you, her eyes piercing down to your core.
>"Promise me you won't hurt yourself."
"What are you-"
>"Promise me, Anon. Or else I'm not leaving."
>You can't promise that. Tonight might actually be more painful than any other night, all of them combined, even. What is that saying? 'When all the truth does, is make your heart ache, sometimes a lie is easier to take'.
>You have to lie. A lie to keep the monster within from breaking free.
"I promise, Fluttershy."
>She looks at you, staring into you.
>Please don't call me on my lie please don't call me on my lie please please please
>She sighs and hugs you. "I love you, Anon. Please don't do anything that could hurt you tonight. I can't stand the thought of you being hurt again..."
>She pulls away and wipes a tear from her eyes. She walks to the door, pausing in the frame.
>"See you tomorrow, Anon."
"Good bye, Flutters."
>She walks away, and you hear the door shut, and the sound of a car driving away.
>You are alone.
>Time to go to work.
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>>21774184
I said the exact same words Flutters said, to a friend. Worst part is, she ended up doing it anyway.
Many bad memories.
Please continue
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>>21774184

>You are Fluttershy.
>Anon is lying to you.
>You could tell when you made him promise he won't hurt himself tonight. You could see it in his eyes, the way they went cold and steely when he "promised".
>You're not sure how to react. Should you be mad? Sad? Hurt? Betrayed, crushed, worried, broken?
>All you feel now is cold. Cold and alone.
>All your fears are coming to reality. Anon is pushing you away, making it easier to dump you with distance. He'll do it tomorrow, probably through a text.
>That's how little you mean to him. You won't get a personal, intimate, face-to-face 'break-up', because you don't warrant something that takes that amount of effort. You've just been a burden the entire time, a simple matter of his conscience since he found you in the park that day. He was ready to forget all about you until you gave him your number, and he was too polite to decline you, to reject you from the beginning.
>Instead, he played you along, pulling you on a string, trying to get you to break up with him first. But you, being the coward you are, you let him keep pulling you on, never picking up the hints, REFUSING to acknowledge the signs in front of you, pretending he actually loved you.
>No one could ever love you, your own mom can barely stand you. Your friends only keep you around because they don't want to hurt you.
>Which gives you some small comfort, at least they care enough to not want you to disappear completely. You're just the background, white noise that is only noticeable when it's gone.
>You reach up and wipe tears from your face.
>"Sweetie, he's going to be fine. You're going to be fine. One night alone isn't the end of the world."
>It is, though. It's the end of YOUR world. Anon has meant everything to you since the beginning, a week ago now.
>There you go, reading too deep into a relationship that was never really there. Your actions trying to prevent your rejection actually just set you up for worse rejection.
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>>21774479
Now it seems like she is the one that is going to hurt herself.
More sad memories come to my mind.
Keep it going Piece, good work.
Also, update the Pastebin.
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Lurks in the shadows
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>>21774479

>You pulled Anon closer, tighter, because you knew he would disappear eventually. By hoping to keep him with you, you ensured that he would leave.
>And now, he's preparing for it. This won't hurt him at all, he's just trying to keep his conscience clean.
>He just lost his dad, and here you are, trying to stay with him when he really needs someone to make him feel better, not make him feel obligated to keep them happy, the way it is with you.
>You continue your attack on yourself until you get home, when you run upstairs to your room, locking the door and throwing yourself on your bed.
>Your phone buzzes.
>This is happening sooner than you thought. Here it comes, the impersonal text message, the inevitable empty apologies and broken promises, the consoling words that actually make you feel worse.
>You look at your phone.
>It's Rarity
>Relief washes over you. Safe for now, you can continue to delude yourself into thinking Anon actually feels anything towards you besides pity.
>You read the text message
>"Fluttershy! I heard Anon got out og the hospital today! Can I come over or are you and Anon...busy? ;)"
>You really want Rarity to be there with you.
"No, Anon is staying at his house tonight. Please come over, I need to talk with you."
>If anyone knows anything about relationships and boys, it's Rarity. Applejack and Rainbow Dash have had a couple here and there, but they're just not sensitive enough to talk about relationships. Pinkie Pie had a boyfriend once, but he moved away. Sunset Shimmer probably knows a thing or two, but Rarity knows the most, and knows how to talk to you.
>"I'll be there in a few minutes."
>You put your phone down and decide to take a shower.
>You head to the bathroom and strip down, turning on the heater and starting the water.
>You step in and let the water flow down you, sticking your hair to your body.
>You curl up into a ball on the floor of the shower and start sobbing.
>Why did you have to climb that tree?
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>>21774738
Guitar, finally, good work with "Redemption".
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>>21774656

Pastebin updated to >>21774767

http://pastebin.com/8F0P0v9A
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>>21774781
Thanks! I'm not sure if I will update it tonight. I have had a pretty rough week so far and it doesn't seem to be improving. I need a long night's sleep. I may update it tomorrow morning.
>Is sad
>Reads sad story
>Gets sadder and happier for some reason.
Good work Piece, as usual!
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>>21774767
Well at least it seems that she is not going to hurt herself. Okay, I'm a little happier now.
>>21774829
Thanks, piece.
>>21774849
It's okay, Guitar. Also don't be sad, you are going to make me sad.
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>>21774911

>Don't be sad
>Is on this thread, with this story


U wot?
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>>21774911
I'm working on it. I'm sure I'll get over it. Thanks for keeping the thread alive! (Also, when I am on no one else is, so I should mention it's 9:42 Pm or 21:42 for me right now).
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>>21774956
It's okay it's 00:45 of the Thursday in here. Yesterday I wasn't in the tread, because shitty Internet, and the battery of my Notebook refused to charge
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>>21775035
I will be here for a minute longer but when I finish this power point for my presentation Friday I've got to rest.
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>>21775097
Ok, Guitar, you are a bro, I will be waiting for you in the morning.
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>>21774767
please dont end it for the night...
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>>21775143
Thanks man. Also. don't hold me to it because I may forget to write in the morning but I will try. I can Pinkie Promise I will write a good amount tomorrow after school though.
cross my heart and hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye
I've got to sleep now. Night thread!
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>>21775260
Night, bro.
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>>21774767

>You have no one to blame for this but yourself. You are the reason Anon is 'dumping' you (If you can even call it that, you went on one date and read to deep into the situation and forced a relationship onto him), you are the reason Anon's dad is dead, the reason Anon was unconscious for three days, the reason his leg and ribs are broken.
>Your thoughts break apart into fragmented, incoherent words
>You sob harder, curling tighter into a ball
>You hear a knock on the door
>"Fluttershy? Are you in there, darling?"
>You stay where you are, still crying, the tears mixing with the water from the shower as they pour out of your eyes.
>The door opens, and you hear footstpes.
>"Fluttershy? Are you okay? It sounds like you're crying, honey..."
>You hear her step around to the side of the shower, hear the curtain pulled back a tiny bit
>"Fluttershy! What in the world-"
>She cuts herself short, shutting the water off and grabbing a towel. She reaches down and wraps you in the towel, pulling you up and out of the shower
>You continue crying, albeit not as intense as before, your tears still falling, but now accompanied only by the occasional sniffle.
>"It's a good thing we're not going out in public," she says, nodding to the clothes you grabbed.
>A smile almost (ALMOST) breaks through. Rarity is always looking out for you. She's your best friend, someone who knows you and knows you well
>She helps you get dressed, then walks you over to your room and sits you down on your bed, sitting down next to you, giving you a hug.
>"Now tell me, what happened?"
>You gush everything to her, starting with your day in the park all the way to the meltdown in the shower just now
>She listens close the entire time, nodding and gasping and holding your hand
>"Fluttershy, you need to calm down. I talked to Rainbow while you were visiting Anon in the hospital. From what she told me, he really does love you. You just need to relax. Here, let me tell you a couple stories."
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>>21775233

It's not ending there, but rather here >>21775344
I'll definitely pound out some more tomorrow. This is a small rest for now, friends.
Pastebin updated to >>21775344

Goodnight, friends!


Check em, two dubs posts
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>>21775380
Night, piece, sleep well, you did a grate work, you almost killed me, but you did a grate job at it.
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>>21775380
Don't choke on your tongue in your sleep!
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So many feels.
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>>21775344
Fluttershy got issues yo.
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>>21771882
Hello Mr.!

>>21772885
This.

>>21773450
>Where your father...
>Where he... he...
>Did it.
I love this story <3

>"I'll be okay here tonight, Flutters. I need a night alone..."
>She follows you, nodding.

>"I need a night alone..."
>She follows you.

KEK!

>>21773577
This!

>>21773684
>"I love you. But tonight, I just need to be alone. Just this one night. Tomorrow night, and the night after, and the night after that, I will spend with you. I'll spend every second I possibly can with you. Except for tonight. Okay?"
MARRY ME ANON.

>>21774184
I almost started to cry.
Wow.

>>21774253
I know man, i know that. We all has got some special good friend who was eventually stupid as shoe.

>>21774479
>You are Fluttershy.
>Anon is lying to you.
OMFG THAT FEEL

>You could tell when you made him promise he won't hurt himself tonight. You could see it in his eyes, the way they went cold and steely when he "promised".
MY mind explolDED.

>You're not sure how to react. Should you be mad? Sad? Hurt? Betrayed, crushed, worried, broken?
>All you feel now is cold. Cold and alone.
So much feel. Addictive stuff. Want moar.

Jesus Christ. All this post is awesome. Is sad. But i like to feel feellings so much.

>>21774656
This.

>>21774767
RARARA for rescue!
I like Flutvision.

>If anyone knows anything about relationships and boys, it's Rarity. Applejack and Rainbow Dash have had a couple here and there, but they're just not sensitive enough to talk about relationships. Pinkie Pie had a boyfriend once, but he moved away. Sunset Shimmer probably knows a thing or two, but Rarity knows the most, and knows how to talk to you.
Yeah! Reduction and deduction! Sherlockfap.

>>21774911
I'm going to make u masturbate.

>>21775344
Tfw Anon and Fluttershy are compatible even in minds, think way, and even fears and insanity.
Tfw that would prop never happen to me.

>>21775380
I love your work

>>21776628
>>21777398
>>21777572
>>21777931
He loves your work too.
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>>21778384
Faps, hello, finally you came (hehe), Where were you, bro?
>"Tfw Anon and Fluttershy are compatible even in minds, think way, and even fears and insanity."
>"Tfw that would prop never happen to me"
You killed me here, I had one women in my life that was like me, but she went to... well you know... >dead
This is partly why I love this green.
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>>21778384
Well, talk to me Faps, you are killing me right here.
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>>21778529
Hello Mr. A. M.!
I was in church. As i said earlier, i'm bloody organist in bloody cath church.
Yea. I'm agnostic.
Yea. I fap like creasy.
Yea. I'm fapman.

So she really did that to herself?
Then i hope u two weren't really this same - and hope u will not do that too, brother.
Netherless i'm sorry this happened to you.
But
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nNr5nj_NjjQ

Because reasons...

>>21778658
Oh. Ok. Brother. I will not leave you. Not like Flutters thinks about Anons feellings
Hail green.
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Morning m8s
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>>21778672
She did it because she believed she didn't deserved me.
That day I was at home living my life when I receive a call to my cellphone, it was her, I answer the call, happy, because I was going to talk to her, but no, It was her dad, he told me that she killed herself, and the suicide note said it was because of me, obviously, I couldn't believe it. But it was the truth.
In her funeral his father gave me her letter, when I read it I was going to kill myself, but I dind't, I still can't answer why I didn't.
She was the women I loved the most. And no one will be able to fill her place.
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>>21778780
Morning, Doc.
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>>21778850
My gosh.
I have nothing to say.
And i even can not help by my superpower.
But... You see... i'm quite non feel well and good guy.
So... maybe look at the bright side?
U would not want your kids kill themselfs because... do not be mad at me, mental problems taken from one of parents other than u, u ponyfag ;)
Thinks possitive. U can not save her from herself. U can only take your live go and flow.
It's weird and creepy, but u have to. Take it like... chapter in Baldur's Gate. One has to end, to start other.

>>21778780
Hi Doc Holliday.
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>>21778904
I have let that chapter of my life go, I kept on "living", but I don't feel alive, my life with her was like a roller coaster, and now everything is grey.
I mean even if I know that it wasn't my fault I can't do but blame myself for it.
I will just "live" my life, and try to live the best of it, but without the best of it, love.
Thanks for the nice words, Faps, I really appreciate it.
I am going to sleep a little now, please, bump the tread for me while I am gone.
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>>21778970
Ok brother.
Good night.
I will be charity bumper again.
As long as i can.
Do not worry. We all will find love, but before that we must take more part of cake called life. And move to Equestria
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Please

Please let this story have a happy ending

Just this one

Please
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>>21779199
Pls let this story go for eternity.

captcha: yPerv
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Updated Paste bin. It's not a lot but I didn't have much time this morning. I hope you enjoy it.
http://pastebin.com/Ue42XJBt
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>>21779778
>http://pastebin.com/Ue42XJBt
It's good. Please more.
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storytime soon?
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>>21780827
Soon. Idk when, gotta clean the car out and then head to go take my driving test.
>inb4 underage b&
I'm 18, just lazy.
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My goodness, haven't had so many feels in a long time, this thread is killing me. But it's so good!

Also bump
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>>21779778
This is just getting better Guitar, this is lovely
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>>21779778
But will there be Anon? The new guy in class? Who just moved to town and Shimmer will help him in something?
Will be Anon there?
Will be?

>>21781248
Hi. Slept well?
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>>21781321
Sort of.
I'm a little sad. But hey, At least I am not sleepy any more.
How's your day going, Faps?
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>>21781372
I did nothing productive.
HAHAAHA!
I'm trying to kill my old self, and build new one. But is so hard. I can not crush it with hand. So i have to touch it gently
Day as day.
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>>21781400
Change is one of the best things one can do for himself, but it is one of the most difficult things one can do. It takes babysteps, but it just takes one look to the past to destroy all the progress you made. Be strong Faps, also yes, touch it gently.
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>>21781465
I will.
Oh yes. Gently touch but srong in this same time.
HAHA! The fun has been doubled!
I have to make something with my life.
Be stonk like Polandball.
Be funny like Momlestia.
Be honest like Maud Pie.
Be loyal like Discord.
Be friendly like Trixie. Or Stalin.
Be gently and kind like Fapman.

Meh. At least one instant fur mich.

What will u do today?
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Hello guys ! I've been far away this thread beacuse school and real life and growing up and bla bla bla !
What did I miss ?
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>>21781533
Glorious gree.
Love.
Insanity.
Death.
Inner demons.
Flutvion.
More glorious green.

U missed sense of life!
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>>21781545
>U missed sense of life!
Reason to live ?
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>>21781533
Sad things, sad sad things
Also, hello Anony.
Read the tread, and be prepared to feel sad.
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>>21781545
Oh I alredy read the green ! But i didn't reed your comment yet !
But I read some comments !
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And I really kiled what happend with Anon ! In mental way ! He is ready to fight those demons what he left behind in her soul ! If I'm right !
>>21781563
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>>21781599
"liked"
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>>21781599
And I really /kiled/
"liked"
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>>21781560
OHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSH!

The sadness has been doubled!
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>>21781599
I don't think he is ready, but I think he just has to do it for the sole purpose to not to become the "deamon Anon"
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>>21781632

Dear Mr. Anony Mous !
I just read your comment about what heppend with your life !
Please take my condolence ! /I really don't know how to say things like that in english !/
And I think Aa simple Im sorry is not enough !
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>>21781632
There is an "expressive" phrase those horrrible things and death !
"Fogadd részvétem"
Which is trnaslete to english mean
"accept my condolences" or something like this ! /just wrote this beacuse an "I'm sorry is not enough expressive !/
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>>21781632
Did I say something wrong !? In that case I'm sorry !
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>>21781774
No bro. In my country it;s the same.
"I give u my condolences"
After death of someone close.
But only on funerals and in close date after.
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>>21781663
It's nothing really, that is just the past.
But just the sole thought of her is enough to make me sad, it shakes my day upside down. And I can't seem to forget her, she was my everything,
Thank you, Anony, you are a bro.
But let's talk of happier things. I don't want to be this sad anymore.
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>>21781809
Sorry Thats waht I'm afriad ! Before I posted my condolence I thikning a few minutes to post it !
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>>21781828
So lets talk about the story of Anon and Fluttershy !
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>>21781828
And How good is our beloved Gitar Guy's story ! I haven't read yet !
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>>21781851
Good enought to fap.
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>>21781859
Thats what I wanted to know !
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>>21781851
At the start he did a good job, but he needed to make of Sunset more hated.
And he really improved, it's good if you want some feels.
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>>21781874
What kind of fells ! Just thinking cause I love the storys about Sunset Shrimmi !
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>>21781889
"feels"
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>>21781874
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>>21781889
Read it and feel the feels.
Sad feels, but happy feels when Sunset is happy.
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>>21781920
>>21781923
Thanks guys ! I'm gonna check it !
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>>21781923
What will u do today?
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>>21782024
I will be in this tread, and pretty much that.
Oh, and watch some TV.
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>>21782091
"Fat" Thursday ?
Friday the 13th?
Vallentines?
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>>21782106
Triangle of modern and stronk women?
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>>21782106
I have not valentines since, well, then.
Fat Thursday? That is a german celebration, I think.
Friday the 13th is an spooky day I didn't realiced it was tomorrow.
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>>21782155
Polish!
Polish celebration.
And internet is polish.
So poland strong.

Well... day before vallentines is the day of "last hope of stupid girl"
U can try to find one for yaa.

But.
Well.
I would go on some convent with mlp and there find a gurl.
Nice gurl. Pretty gurl. Horny gurl and fapful.
But i dunno when and where those places gets to be
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>>21782274
I'm not in the mood to find a girl.
Poland is strong.
I believed Internet was made by an English Sir.
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>>21782274
I think I find you a gurl !
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>>21782384
Yes ! This cutie is mine I brought my first pony merchandise today ! Oh my god I brougt a pony merchandise !........

>I feel the autism overtkang me !
>...
>It's a good pain !
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>>21782398
Did you liked Guitar's story?
Also, nice pony.
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>>21782383
I see. Do not worry. There is wet pussy for everyone with balls.

>>21782384
>>21782398
Did u bought this figure?
Why is it so polish?
I thought Hasbro sell nicer thinks. like dildos.
[spoler]Did u cum on it and that's why it's so shining?

Fight against autism!

If u are warior u have mace.
If u are mage u have staff.
If u are ranger u have juvenile animal.

Choice wisely! Because u have to choice how u will fap for eternity!
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>>21782442
We have jackie chan on thread!
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>>21782463
Wizard überraffe of course ! And I'm a little bit proud to myself beacuse before I bought it I hade a little talk with the seller/shop assistant ! An I'm outwitted her ! The talk liked this !
>Can I help you !
-No thakns I'm just serching !
After 10 second searching !
-Can I ask you something ?
>Yes of corse !
-Do you have a prank type of gift ?
>No we really don't have these kind of thing !
-Dosen't really need to be prankster ! It's just enough to be girly or pink !
>Oh I see ! So you are buy something to prank a girl as about your age ?
-Lady ,I'm searching for some pink girly thing for girls around 5-12 years old ! Of course I gonna buy to my same age male friend !
>She laught !
After fake searching about 5 seconds I took a blind bage and an engagement ring box ! And told her a fake story about how I put this cute pone in the box and gice to my friend !
>She laughd agian !
I sai goodby and walk out the star fell like some kind of superninjagangsterprankstermeganigger2000x !
>That moment was the best moment of my day !
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>>21782442
Sorry I haven't read the story ! YET !
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>>21782642
But u boight it for yourself?
Right?
We are doomed
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>>21782713
Bought* wtf this keybord. wtf my fingers. wtf me.
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>>21782713
>>21782728
WTF with my name!
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>>21782713
Of course I'm not bought for myself !
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>>21782738
Can I ask you something Fapman ? How did you become a brony (or ponyfagott if you like that way !)
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>>21782713
Yes I bought myself ! I tricked him ! I lied him !........................I'm a bad person !
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>>21782642
You should ask that girl out
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>>21782799
First.: I have a girlfriend !
Second .: She was not exactly a "girl" . She was like between 38-47 years old !
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>>21782799
Maybe she was nice for him not because she want to sell it... but because she knew that he is lieing! OhMyGosh!

>>21782796
Good. Being bad is good. Being good is sad. Being sad is retarded. Friendship is magic.

>>21782780
Yes. Good question i think. That's how equestria was made.

>>21782833
Aunt Georgina?
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>>21782843
>Good. Being bad is good. Being good is sad. Being sad is retarded. Friendship is magic.

>Dear Princess Celestia

>Today I learnd ! If you want to be reall happy you just need to be FUCKING LIE TO EVRYPONY !

>Your faithfull student !
>Twiplot Spikle
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>>21782883

>My best student, Princess Twillight Sparkle

>Remember why i send you to ponyville.
>Now, when other ponies loves you, you at least can make good move.
>I wait for it too much.
>Do it fast.

>Use your princess power if u have to.
>I wait for last year taxes too long.

>Your favorite princess.
>Momlestia.
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>>21782833
1-Oh
2- OH!
So have you "do the do" with your special other?
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>>21782942
Do not answer!
We do not REALLY want to know that!
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>>21782953
It is just curiosity, he doesn't have to say anything if he doesn't want to.
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>>21782942
It' a little bit personal.......

YESSSSSSSS
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>>21782986
Curiosity is the first step to hell!
And what if Cerbersu will be taken back to Tartarus by Twillight Sparkle when u will just stay at fist step because curios about curiosity?

Hmm?
U will try to explain this awkward situation to bloody cerberus?
Or became prince of hell?
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>>21783040
>Curiosity is the first step to hell!
And the devil's favorite sin !
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>>21783035
Well done, sir
>>21783040
Well if the contract of becoming the Prince of Hell says that I can have free pizza for eternity, I would do it.
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>>21783040
And the hells alreda have a price !

The prime minister of Hungary
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>>21783106
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BSsGXCHMAKY&spfreload=10
Hey guys I just watched this thing ! And I think the guy who directed this is take the probems of the bronys to seriously ! I mean come on ! Their parents thught he is a "pedophile" beacuse he's love cartoons about horses ! I mean really ? Pedophile ? Maibie autistic or have love problems but pedophile it's just ridiculous !
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>>21783173
All the people who don't like Bronies is mainly because they think we are pedophiles (or how I like to call them .pdf files).
Or they "leave the fandom" because they don't like rule 34 content made of a little girl show, while everything ever created has r34 content.
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>>21783173
>>21783345

I watch it for the plot!
I masturbate on fanfiction!
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>>21783345
But I think It's not a big problem to be brony ! I mean come on ,those who say things about you beacuse you are a brony just easily judging peopla who are don't really give a shit about you beacuse they just want to hate someone ! This is one type of haters ! The main problem is they don't want to understand why a grown man watch tv shows for originally made for girls ! They don't care about bronyes beacuse if they supposed to be care about this "mentally ill" people they try to help them to overcom their mental illnes ! But no ! They just want to hate becuse it's an easy wa to them !
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>>21783411
I too watch it for the plot.
>>21783442
I really don't know why we have so much hate, I think it is mainly because our fandom was born on this site (4 chin).
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>>21783442
Shit. It's not like it is show for little girls.

Flowers are colorful and smelly for bugs.
Not for cutting them and give them to woman.

If something is universal then it is universal.
Like europa univeralis, but without europa.

Captcha: UROPA
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>>21783631
>Flowers are colorful and smelly for bugs.
I undertans this part of your metaphore !
>Not for cutting them and give them to woman.
But I dont Understand this !
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>>21783616
>Still watch for the plot !
>Still stronk
>Still polish

Don't watch this !
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QCy68CWDKVE&spfreload=10
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>>21783744
KEK.
That video made my sides separate from my body
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>>21783834
Now you can feel the power of poland
Fear the slav
They are strong
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>>21775380
Yo, piece, are you alive?
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>>21783690

>Flowers are colorful and smelly for bugs.
I undertans this part of your metaphore !
>Not for cutting them and give them to woman.
But I dont Understand this !

If u know what flowers do to convince bugs to fly to them, then u should know what people do.
People plant flowers for sell and to use them as gifts.
Nature didn't plan using flowers as a gift from man to woman.

In this same way.
They made show for little girls, but it just is too good, to not use it by us.
They didn't planned, but it happens.

Like socialism too.

>>21783744
Ooo kurwa.
This actor is really good.
Communist killed his only boy, cos he split on communism.
Then his wife in a year after this commit suicide.
He is so sad... and bright person...
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>>21783880
No ! He's dead beacuse he's watched the cursed video !
You know ! What I linked !
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>>21783880

>>21783880

Very much so. Just took my driving test, I think I might have to do some stuf before I can be home tho.

Fear not! Green shall be delivered on this day!
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>>21783909
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QCy68CWDKVE&spfreload=10
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>>21783893
>Then his wife in a year after this commited suicide.

Well not after this clip, but after their only kid death (hanged on fence of their family house).

>>21783903
This is not funny.
Communists killed too much good people in my land.
Rly not subject to joke.

This guy play in some tragic/farse "World by Kiepski".
He was so good before his tragedy...
Eh...
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>>21783909
>>21783933
Fuck ! Wrong video ! DO NOT WATCH THIS CURSED THING !
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>>21783744
Btw those words in clouds are not that what he sing. I'm el polaco. Trust me.
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>>21783933
Want me to translate it for you?
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>>21783909
Ok, piece, we shall wait till your return. Do your stuff.
Also, did you passed the test?
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>>21783935
Listen Fapman ! I don't have a single idea hat this man singing about ! And still dont have ! I just linked beacuse I thought this is some rondom shit from the internet !
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>>21783990
U will pay for it! In bitcoins!
Or in feellings... Because piece5 is going back :D
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>>21783933
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DLTZctTG6cE&spfreload=10
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>>21784021
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cH-yA8U2XgI#t=29
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>>21784021
Thi is supposed to be the video waht I originally wanted to link !
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>>21784039
>I'm gonna sing a song for youuuuuuuuuuuuuuu !
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Heyo, "Redemption" got mentioned! That's cool. I will write in a bit for all who are interested. I haven't ate anything all day.
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>>21784140
Eat, then write
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>>21784140
>>21784168
This.
And write.
We enslave u to get tasteful green!

Captcha: ahour

U have a hour to eat xD

I go sleep.
See yea guys.
Have a nice read. I will back after 10 hours back.
SEE YEA
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>>21784354
See you, Faps.
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>>21784354
>>21784379
I go tos sleep to ! Se ya guys next day !
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All I can eat is some stupid leftovers of cruddy soup and I have to wait 45 minutes for it. It is just not my week!

So many feels are going to come.
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>>21784428
See you, Anony, sleep a nice Hungarian sleep, in your Hungarian bed.
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>>21784446
Oh, feels bad man.
Can't you call for a pizza or something?
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>>21784473
I only have 10 dollars on me. I would but then I think they'd be upset at me. It's whatever. I will deal with it until tomorrow and then I can be a freaking pig with food. It just isn't a good week for me.

And while I get to writing, I was thinking about linking a song for each part of the story that would go with it. What do you guys think of that?
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>>21785007
I'm okay with that.
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piece comes back when?
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>>21774479
>>21774767
>>21775344
Goddamnit piece! It really hurts seeing flutters blaming herseherself like this, seeing her so damn sad.
But it hurts so good...
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>>21785406

When we perform the sommoning ritual


I'll get the chalk, you sacrifice the goat
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Alright, here's the update! http://pastebin.com/Ue42XJBt

I was going to do a song per chapter, but now I think that is excessive. If you want I can link some albums and soundtracks that would be good for it if you'd like though!

Sorry for the long wait time, It took me some time to write this for some reason. I will update once or twice more I go to sleep again, and then I will write a lot this weekend!
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>>21786538
You made me cry like a bitch, and I love you for that.
Good work, Guitar.
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>>21786705
Thanks mate. I will give more to read in a bit here. I think I may go to bed earlier than last night. Maybe Friday will be awesome. And on the bright side, I will be here when the thread is active over the weekend because it slows down every time I get home from school.
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>>21787009
Oh, okay bro.
This weekend is going to be awesome with you and piece!
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>>21787053
Yeah, I'm looking forward to it. Also, Piece is the main writefriend here still. I don't want to outshine him (and I think I'm doing alright on that). I still look forward to the next part of his story.
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>>21787094
Me too. We all are, really.
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Bump for text.
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>>21786538
http://pastebin.com/Ue42XJBt
Another update! It's the last one for the night. I've got to sleep. See you all tomorrow!
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>>21788445
See you, Guitar, sleep well
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Bump
>>21783909
Also, Where are you, piece?
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>>21788927

I am here!
Let's get going, shall we?
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>>21789007
Jeez man 90% of the thread is bumps
People must love dat >green
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>>21789007
Finally, we are dying here
Also, what took you so long?
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>>21789007
And now that piece is here, it is time for me to go to bed.
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>>21775344

>Rarity had a lot of stories, it turns out. Not all of them were relationship-related. In fact, a couple of them were just downright out of the blue random stories.
>They did make you feel a bit better. You weren't beating yourself up anymore, at least.
>"What you need right now is a make-over. Nothing will make you feel better than looking your best."
>Rarity stands up, pulling you with her. The two of you walk to your bathroom, where she sits you down in front of the mirror and begins pulling a comb through your hair.
>"This is so tangled...have you been using that shampoo I got for you?"
>You nod your head. It was a nice shampoo while it lasted, but you ran out and didn't want to bug her for more.
>"Darling, did you run out?"
>You nod again, still not trusting your voice to be able to work in a register below that of a dog whistle
>She sighs and goes back to combing your hair, teasing the tangles out.
>When she finishes with your hair, she moves on to makeup. Foundation, then blush, then some mascara and a hint of eyeliner.
>When you open your eyes and see yourself, you're stunned.
>Rarity managed to bring out your eyes more, make them seem fuller without being wider. She gave them a depth you didn't think was possible. She gave you a beauty that you could never have imagined to be applicable to you.
>You reach up and delicately touch your face, feeling to make sure it's really you in the mirror.
>Rarity laughs. "I keep telling you, five minutes a day. In the morning you just dab this here, put this there, and you'll be the most gorgeous girl at Canterlot High."
>You smile.
>If only Anon could see you like this...
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>>21789254
The green!
My withdrawals have subsided, for now.
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>>21789254
So cute, I love this.
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>>21789254

>You are Anon
>You're crying, yet again.
>It doesn't surprise you. You knew this would be tough. You just didn't think it would be THIS tough.
>"You think this is tough? This is NOTHING! This is the opening act, the band is still tuning up! Come now, I believe you know yourself better than that."
>Other You is a dick. Sincere, honest, cool guy. But a dick.
>"Of course I'm a dick. I'm you with self-confidence. I'm the you that would have come if your mom hadn't died. But nooo, you had to go and create the monster we've got to COMPLETELY destroy now. This is really all your fault."
"How is this my fault? She's the one that died. It's really her fault."
>He spins around and gets in your face. "Don't ever say that. Pushing blame is what the other one does. Not us. We take responsibilty, we fix the problems we create, not shove the blame on someone else and say 'Poor me, life sucks.' Nut up, Anon."
>You flinch back, but at the same time feel a bit of courage flow into you. You're going to do this. This is going to be easy.
>"No it won't, but keep telling yourself that. Wipe your nose, I can see the snot dripping down from here."
>You focus your mind and call up tissues to you.
>It's actually pretty cool, being able to control your surroundings. Lucid dreaming is the shit.
>"Of course it is, it's basically like being god. Except we don't have time to play around. Even though you want to end this, there are parts of you you don't have control over. Parts of you that want to see Him take over. Remember ten minutes ago?"
>You shudder at the memories.
>You had just fallen asleep and were walking through the mall when Anon joined you.
>"You ready to do this?"
>You nodded, anxiety building in your stomach.
>"No you're not, but this is as ready as you'll ever be. Follow me, I'll tell you what we're going to do on the way."
>On the way to where? You shook your head. He knew what he was doing.
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>>21789396
This is some Avatar The Legend of Aang kind of thing. I like it. Then we will see some Confrontation (Les Mis or Jekyll&Mr.Hyde). I love this.
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>>21789396
You also made a reference to a thing Fluttershy said back in their first date.
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>>21789396

>"Our mind is really quite fascinating when you look at it. You are so devoted to keeping your mom alive in your head that you actually re-created her here, inside of you. It would be touching, were it not for the fact that it is the reason He was able to spring into existence."
>You were still confused about that part. Why did he show up?
>"Because you couldn't let yourself be happy. Deep down inside you knew it was wrong, that you should just let her go. But you couldn't, so you created Him to attack you, to counter balance the praises she gave to you. She, of course, being a figment of your imagination. It's a most intriguing case of narcissism. You so desperately crave the attention of others you will actually create them, just so they can love you. It's a good thing you found Fluttershy when you did, otherwise who knows how deep you would have gotten. You would have probably killed yourself within ten months. Twelve at the latest."
>You paused, thinking. Would you really kill yourself? No one ever really notices you, and when they do it's because they need something or other. Flutters is the only one who actually likes you because of you, not what you can do.
>"Yes, yes, good! Cling to that hope, cling to her memories. She's going to be what pulls you through tonight."
>You smile.
"So what's the plan?"
>"Oh, yes, the plan! As I was saying, you created your mom, but it's not really her. It's just a collection of all the good memories you have of her. Oddly enough, if you were to put the two of them in the same room, neither one would get along with the other. So what we need to do is actually find the portions of your memory that are 'bad', the ones that are part of what made your mom..well, your mom. Then, when you realize that your mom isn't perfect, isn't invulnerable like you think she is, then you'll be able to let go and we can see what we need to do about your father."
>You nodded your head, thinking over what he said.
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>>21789636
Anon breaking his chains.This is getting even better.
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>>21789636

>A thought popped into your head
"Why do you say 'your' mom or 'your' dad. Aren't they yours too?"
>"Well, yes and no. I'm only the you that could have been, not what you are. I am really a non-existent figment of your imagination. Technicalities and such. It doesn't really matter, after tonight I'll probably cease to 'exist', because you'll have no more need of me."
>You nodded your head. What he said made sense.
>"Of course it made sense, I'm the one who said it. Now come on, we have to find those memories."
>You felt just a hint of a smile on your face
>You continued walking through the mall, looking around you. All the people looked familiar, for some reason.
>"It's because they're all memories. All the things you've done in life, they're here."
>That made you a bit sad. It wasn't empty, but it wasn't full.
>"Don't worry, this is just the beginning. Just think of all the times you'll have with Flutters."
>That made you feel better. Anon could be a total condescending dick, but he had his moments.
>"Thanks."
"It wasn't really a compliment, but whatever."
>As the two of you walked, the memories started getting darker, more angry
>"Alright, start looking for your mom."
>You nodded, scanning around
>You saw her, leaning against a wall and angrily twirling her hair
>You pointed, and the two of you walked over to her
>She gave the two of you a disgusted look, then went back to twirling her hair
>That hurt. Your mom NEVER looked at you like that.
>"Yes, she did. It wasn't common, but she did. Now quick, touch her forhead."
>"What the fu-"
>You reached up and placed your pointer finger square in the center of her forehead before she could finish
>Instantly, you could remember everytime she had ever looked at you that way, in utter disgust.
>It hurt, but it was also real.
>"Real is good. We need real."
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>>21790358
Keep fighting, Anon, you can do it.
This is going to be a looong part.
Good job, piece.
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Go Anon you can do it!
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>>21789254
>Rarity laughs. "I keep telling you, five minutes a day. In the morning you just dab this here, put this there, and you'll be the most gorgeous girl at Canterlot High."
>You smile.
>If only Anon could see you like this...

>>21789396
>You are Anon
>You're crying, yet again.

SWEET CELESTIA! Why it moved my stomach ache!? Why!? Cos it's good.

>I'm the you that would have come if your mom hadn't died.

Oh. Glorious. Glorious! Luna for help!

>It's actually pretty cool, being able to control your surroundings. Lucid dreaming is the shit.

True.

>>21789636
>"Our mind is really quite fascinating when you look at it.
"Life looks like shit, when you look at it".

>"Because you couldn't let yourself be happy. Deep down inside you knew it was wrong, that you should just let her go. But you couldn't, so you created Him to attack you, to counter balance the praises she gave to you. She, of course, being a figment of your imagination. It's a most intriguing case of narcissism. You so desperately crave the attention of others you will actually create them, just so they can love you. It's a good thing you found Fluttershy when you did, otherwise who knows how deep you would have gotten. You would have probably killed yourself within ten months. Twelve at the latest."
Move to my mind, you ass!

>>21790358
>"Why do you say 'your' mom or 'your' dad. Aren't they yours too?"
I spotted it, and wanted to ask about it, but u are faster! Timing! Timing!

>"Don't worry, this is just the beginning. Just think of all the times you'll have with Flutters."
>That made you feel better. Anon could be a total condescending dick, but he had his moments.
Oh yes, he can.

I love this story.
I will fap now.
Or after a hour.

>>21788445
It's so tasty! It's so glorious too!

I love u all.
I can fap in peace.

Captcha: Retar
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>>21788445
U should open your own thread. And add savetrip.
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>>21790986
I was about to get to sleep, being unsure of the future of this tread, until you, Faps, my saviour, showed up. Now I know that the tread will still be alive when I wake up.
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>>21788445
What is it?
>"657-394- four four two two"
Can someone tell me what is it?
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>>21791028
Well. Have good night broter Mr. Anony Mous ^^ I will here for another 12 hours for sure :D
Being lazy is full time job.
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>>21791052
Night, bro, fap well.
>>21791045
That's Fluttershy cellphone number.
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>>21791087
I know, but if u would call on it then would i talk to Guitar Guy?
Or to random lesbian hooker from Brooklyn?
Because if this second then i might call.

Good night brother. Pray Luna by your sleep!
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le boomp
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This bump need attention!
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>>21791113
I don't know who it is. It's not even my area code. Ha ha!
>>21791020
I would but I don't know if the story is all that good to make a whole thread over... Not to mention if the thread dies, the story falls with it so...
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>>21792173
Nooo. It's good. Veey good. Better than i can write.
Well... that means nothing, but it is still worth own thread.
And if thread die, then story is still on pastebin and (if updated) continued from point of death - shitstorm kills every thread!
Do not worry!
I believe it's OP.
Ask others, they will say their points.
:D
Keep writing greed Guitar Guy :D
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being sick sucks
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>>21792251
Wut?
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>>21792274
Im sick m8
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>>21792186
Well... I may give it a shot after school. It seems good enough only for a back up story though. I like that we have two awesome new writefriends up in here. This is my first green as well. (Off to school!)
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>>21792302
Sick why? U do not like Guitar Guy pasta?
Or u take cold?
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>>21792321
Ok. Back from school and write as writefag should :D
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>>21792322
I have flu and strep
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>>21792427
Good u are alife.
Sick is sick. Retard is retard. Friendship is magic.
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>>21793127
>retard is retard

Ha
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>>21793171
Poetry is poetry.
Doc is Doc.
RARARA is fashionist.
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>>21793213
I'm back, Faps.
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>>21793967
Hi bro.
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>>21793967
How did u sleep?
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>>21795039
Pretty well actually, I had some things to do out at around 11:00AM but colleages called while I was sleeping (didn't understood shit, except that they couldn't go out) cancelled this things so I just said fuck it, and whent back to sleep I woke up two ours ago.
So you are going out in one or two hours, or just to sleep?
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>>21790358
Sorry guys, I fell asleep last night

>You closed your eyes, trying to fight the sadness, the hurt.
>"No! Nonono, you have to let it in. You have to acknowledge it."
>You stopped fighting, let the hurt flow through you. It was pain, complete and utter pain, a million times worse than getting hit by a car, two cars, THREE cars.
>Oddly enough, after feeling all that, you felt your love for your mom actually grow stronger.
>She was only human, after all.
>"Yes! This is going to work, fuck yeah."
"Wait, you mean you didn't know what was going to happen?"
>"I knew of two possibilities. One, you would die. Kill yourself, actually. You would have gotten completely and utterly wasted, called Fluttershy and told her how much you love her, and drowned yourself in the tub. Or, you would have been able to handle it, like you just did."
"So no, you didn't know what was going to happen."
>"Yes, I fucking did. I just told you. It was a toss-up between those two possibilities. I knew 100% on of the two would happen, I just didn't know WHICH would happen."
>You shook your head. It didn't matter.
>You saw two security guards walking towards you, pulling their batons out of their belts.
>"Well, fuck." Anon had noticed them too, and was now trying to look for an escape route.
>The two of you turned and started walking down the hall, towards the end of the mall, ignoring the calls to stop.
>You glanced back, and immediately wish you hadn't.
>Two more guards had joined the first two, shoving people out of the way as they walked towards you
"Who the fuck are they?"
>"Those are the parts of you that don't want to let your mom go. The parts of you that want to keep her immortalized inside of you."
>They picked up pace, almost jogging towards you.
"Can we get rid of them?"
>"Nope. They are a part of you. You can only wrestle them into submission. You can't destroy parts of you, only dominate them. You have to fight for control of yourself."
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>>21795426
Continue fellow writefriend, I am hooked
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>>21795426
>"Wait, you mean you didn't know what was going to happen?"
>"I knew of two possibilities. One, you would die. Kill yourself, actually. You would have gotten completely and utterly wasted, called Fluttershy and told her how much you love her, and drowned yourself in the tub. Or, you would have been able to handle it, like you just did."
>"So no, you didn't know what was going to happen."
>"Yes, I fucking did. I just told you. It was a toss-up between those two possibilities. I knew 100% on of the two would happen, I just didn't know WHICH would happen."
This good anon is a fucker, A good fucker at last.
Continue my friend, I believed something has happened to you when you didn't said good bye last night
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>>21795145
Hour and half. Or more if fap.

>>21795426
Do not worry.
Also.
It is happening! Again!

>>21795505
This.
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>>21795426
>>"Yes! This is going to work, fuck yeah."
>"Wait, you mean you didn't know what was going to happen?"
>>"I knew of two possibilities. One, you would die. Kill yourself, actually. You would have gotten completely and utterly wasted, called Fluttershy and told her how much you love her, and drowned yourself in the tub. Or, you would have been able to handle it, like you just did."
>"So no, you didn't know what was going to happen."
>>"Yes, I fucking did. I just told you. It was a toss-up between those two possibilities. I knew 100% on of the two would happen, I just didn't know WHICH would happen."
MY SIDES.
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>>21795516
We have simmilar taste. Good for us.
Want some mine complitaion of best fap material?
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>>21795587
Maybe.
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>>21795426

>The two of you reached a dead end, turning to face the guards.
>You decided to try an experiment.
>You focused your mind and willed the guards' weapons to disappear.
>Instantly, the batons rose up into the air and flew off.
>You felt a surge of courage, building inside of you.
>You ran forward, tackling one of the guards to the ground, your fists slamming into his face over and over until he was unconscious
>Anon2 had taken down another guard, wrestling him down and wrapping an arm around his throat, choking him until he passed out
>The other two guards had taken a step back, settling into a fighting stance.
>You jumped up and approached one, the two of you squaring off, sizing each other up.
>You lunged forward, fist connecting with his nose, followed by a kick to the ribs. He stumbled back, leaning down and clutching his side. You ran forward, jumping up and slamming your knee into his face, feeling his nose crunch from the impact.
>The other guard had called for backup before Anon2 could do anything to him.
>The guard was now backing up, keeping both of you in sight, one hand extended outward as if it could hold both of you back
>Behind him, a security team armed to the teeth ran towards you
>Two of the guards ran forward, placing their shields in front of them. Two more guards stacked up behind the shields, pointing their submachine guns at you and Anon
>The last guard slid behind a pillar and went prone, aiming his rifle at you.
>You could feel the laser sights on your chest and head
>You raised your hands, your fear setting back in.
>One guard stepped out from behind the shields, his gun still pointed at your chest. He walked up to you. "Kneel down on the ground!"
>You knelt, watching him.
>He slung his weapon behind his back, reaching for a pair of handcuffs.
>You sprung up, spinning him around, pulling his sidearm out and pressing it against his head.
>The other guards opened fire
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>>21795693
>You ran forward, tackling one of the guards to the ground, your fists slamming into his face over and over until he was unconscious
>Anon2 had taken down another guard, wrestling him down and wrapping an arm around his throat, choking him until he passed out
Contra. Like good old Contra.

>The other guard had called for backup before Anon2 could do anything to him.
>The guard was now backing up, keeping both of you in sight, one hand extended outward as if it could hold both of you back
Matrix, not so old but funny matrix.

Inception. Nice epic inception.
Can i moar?
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>>21795693
>You sprung up, spinning him around, pulling his sidearm out and pressing it against his head.
>The other guards opened fire
Shit just got real.
Please, go on.
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>>21795693
dream sequences

not the best for a story
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>>21795693

>You ducked behind the guard, feeling his body twist and jerk as the bullets peppered his body, tearing through his armor
>You looked over to the side, where Anon2 had dived behind a planter, bullets whizzing around him
>You counted, waiting for the reload
One...


Two...


Three...

>You dropped the guard, aiming your pistol at the guards, squeezing rounds off at the guards, running forward.
>You dropped down and slid the last few feet to the shields, slamming into them and knocking them over.
>You stood up, punching the guard that had been standing behind the shields. He staggered back, trying to bring his gun up to shoot you
>You beat him to it, firing three rounds into his chest before his gun came up.
>One of the shield guards had gotten up and was running towards you, low and fast
>He ran into your waist, picking you up and slamming you against the wall.
>Your breath rushed out of your body, and you dropped your gun.
>The guard dropped you and kicked your head, his foot connecting with your jaw
>You fell to the side, feeling blood dripping out of your mouth
>You struggled to catch your breath
>You saw the guard draw his pistol and aim it at you.
>Anon2 slammed into him from the side, shoving the guard's arm up to the sky, dropping down to the ground with him
>You finally caught your breath and crawled over to where you had dropped your gun
>You dropped the magazine, checking to see how many rounds you had left
>Four rounds, plus one in the chamber.
>You reached out and strapped a shield to your arm, running towards the last guard
>You felt the bullets bouncing off the shield, cracking the glass in the viewhole
>You jumped over the guard, spinning and landing on his back, flinging the shield off of your arm
>You wrapped your arm under his head, pulling it up to the sky, pressing the barrel of your pistol into the base of his neck, sending three bullets tearing through his neck into his head
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>>21795885
Well... i see a lot of action here ;)
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>>21795693
>>21795885
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>>21795885
This is like Batman with guns. I like it
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Will we get more for today?
I hope so.
I want to see new way of Anon the prime.
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>>21796154
And I want to see dear Fluttershy not hating herself so much.
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>>21796196
This.
And i want to see them happy. Truly. And her with friends.
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>>21795885
Anon in a hospital bed, broke as shit and sad, 10 posts later anon is one man arming trough a trigger happy SWAT team, the fuck did I miss?
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>>21796304
He is having a lucid dream.
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>>21796304
He just got a pair of
>balls of stell !
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>>21796304
He used his exp to buy instant heal.
Now he safes for two-handed dildo and specialisation in anal-balls.
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>>21796304
He finally snapped.
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Well, if someone want fap material for this weekend...

http://www.file-upload.net/download-10296819/1Pla.rar.html
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>>21796683
I'm not saying that I want it. But, I do
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>>21796737
^^ Have good fap.
See yea!
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>>21796906
Thanks.
See you, brother, come back safe to us.
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>>21795885
That's it for now, friends. Computer/phone troubles, gonna fix it.

See you soon
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>>21795885
Well that escalated quickly...
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>>21797370
That gif explains how we feel when you go.
See you soon, piece.
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>>21797398
Hello, Guitar.
"Redemption" is perfect, you made me cry last night.
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>>21797434
Cool, I suppose. I mean, don't be sad, but it's meant to be a sort of "Redeeming" story. (Song that gave a large portion of its inspiration - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=urcomLdiock) I don't know if I will make my own thread for it. I need some votes on it while I go make something to eat.

>Post 1: "Finds a sweet girl hurt under a tree"
>Post (what number even is?): "Anon Proceeds to put three bullets into the Swat's neck while inside of a dream that he is in to prevent himself from becoming a suicidal, narcissistic maniac with the help of another, more confident Anon"
Joking aside, I am still loving it Piece.
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>>21797593
I suppose you should do a tread.
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Bump
>>21797593
You don't have to do a tread if you don't want to that is.
If you do, can you post the link to it?
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>>21798224
If I do then of course. I'll probably just lurk on this thread for now on after that. I am just stuck between actually doing it because I'm curious how long it would take me to write all of this out (and if it's worthy of its own thread. I personally don't care if it goes to its own thread or not, which is why I ask all of you).
Be right back, going to bike to the store to buy soda and all of the ridiculous combos of junk food possible to enjoy my Friday.
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>>21798289
Ok, I will wait for you.
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Pastebin needs to be updated badly, thread is about 60 posts from new thread territory.
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>>21798586
Yep
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This story has turned from anon helping a cute, injured girl in the park, to anon in a gun fight with the guards of his mind with the help of his subconsciousness in his imagination world.

What the fuck?
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>>21798381
I have returned! A packet of Fave Red Starburst, a packet of skittles, a two liter of Mtn Dew and another of DP.

I am set for all the writing (and video gaming) in the world
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Give her comfort, bring her to the police station to file a report, then bring her home and shower her and make her tea. She'd put her foot on mine under the table to connect with me for being so nice to her.
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>>21798586
It doesn't really matter, he has like a fuckton of time after Bump limit to update it (It takes long to go from page 1 to 10 and it takes longer to banish into archive or oblivion).
>>21798643
You are prepared for today.


In a note appart, I will do a new tread when it gets to 490-500
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>>21798697
Hell yeah I am! And today was probably the best day of my week in all honesty. A really cute and sweet friend gave me an awesome note, and it's just been good. Still a little bit of a pain, but you know how it goes.

In a more important subject, I think I will make the thread whenever this one is remade.
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>>21798740
I'm glad that you are happier.

Commenting on your more important subject: Okay, that will take some time sice I'm planing on doing it when this tread gets to 490 replies, and it is going slower than I thought it would.
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>>21797370
I started a story last summer with a different premise that evolved into, in essence, the same story. I write things during the day, waiting for updates in this thread, and find that you wrote the same things, the only difference being that it happened to a different character or the order was a little bit skewed.

I haven't scrapped it because I've already typed some 100,000 characters and I feel scrapping it would be a complete waste.

Fuck you, piece. I love you.
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>>21798806
I will write here in a sec so that should help a little.
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>>21798819
Okay.
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>>21798819
http://pastebin.com/Ue42XJBt
Sorry, it's not a ton but I am having so much fun with music, speakers, dancing, and singing.
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>>21799387
No problem bro, take your time.
Also, Dancing? Alone? I like that. You must have your house for yourselve then.
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>>21799428
My Mom is downstairs, but like...
My room is my territory.
no girls allowed
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>>21799387
God, that made me hungry.
>>21799471
Well that's even better.
I am singing some of the Les Miscérables songs, and no one can stop me.
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>>21799532
If you mean about pancakes, I can't help you. I imagined it like my first trip to IHop if that gives you a general direction. If you are hungry for more writing, it's on the way.
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>>21799613
Both, but I am eating so the first hunger is gone.
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>>21799387
Updated once more! I need to stop for a bit to go over what I need to fix over the album I created a few months back. I am going to start remaking it in March so I need to start getting ready.
I'll lurk on the thread though and be back to write in maybe an hour.
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>>21800253
Ok, Guitar, I will wait for you
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>>21800253
That Biology teacher is a fucking bitch, my god.
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>>21800512
She is the history teacher. Sorry if I didn't make that clear. Sunset: 1st period is History, 2nd is ?, third is Pre Calculus, 4th is Gym, 5th is lunch, 6th is ?, 7th is Office Assistant, 8th is ?

She was just making a comment about the food chain and said "but that is Biology. This is history" or something like that.

Also, halfway down with the album. I've got A LOT to fix.
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>>21800616
Yep, sorry, I confused myself with that a little (I don't know how, it's pretty clear, maybe I am retarded).
Also, don't worry, take your time, I'll be here.
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>>21800616
>When do you see Pinkie next? You have Gym with her. That's good! When's that? 4th period!
>Then you eat lunch with her! 5th period!"
">7th period you have Office assistant with her."
">After 8th period ends, you start walking from your Science class" (We'll say it's Physics).
>"I have to go to Art class. I'll see you in Pre-Cal Sunny!"
>You nod and wave as she walks the direction you both came from and into a class nearby.
(It's not cannon that it's third period but it can be assumed to be. Pinkie may have switched classes or I forgot the schedule when excitedly writing)
Which leaves 2nd and 6th period a mystery. One is English and the other is an elective or a free period based on the schedule that's cannon in the story.

I got way to involved in a stupid school schedule for the plot.
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Bump
(Use sparingly)
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>>21789396
When anon is arguing with the other anon,
I always think of the Hotline Miami music.

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=FvsItN23fSU
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Ive been on hard lurk mode when is story time?
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>>21800748
Well this is almost obsessive, but it's good for the story.
Also, Do you have the same classes every day in the U.S.? That is like, pretty boring
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>>21800880
When piece5 comes out of his cave.
I think he has computer and cellphone issues but he is working on fixing them.
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>>21800893
Yeah, but I have it somewhat interesting because I am in an advanced academy inside of a normal high school that is selective about who gets to go (less than 125 are accepted freshman year and this year we have 52 as sophomores). It adds interest but we have the same class every day pretty much for at least a semester and they usually don't change much until the next year. It is boring but if you know how to handle it it isn't the worse thing imaginable.
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>>21800893
Also, I didn't mean to have the classes organized. I just was giving evidence based off what I said, and I wrote that because of sudden thought.
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>>21800975
>>21800988
No problem bro, that was just something I questioned myself since I was a kid.
Here in Argentina it is a little different, we have the same classes all the year but every day you have something different (or in different order) than the day before
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>>21800988
Guitar, Are you alive?
You are starting to worry me.
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Holy crap, I wrote eight pages of writing and planning for the remake of the album and it's going to be awesome. I will get to writing here in a second. I'm going to grab some food downstairs first though!
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>>21802085
I'm good, I just got carried away for a bit there. Being a musician is some good work. When I finish all of my works I think I will post links to sell them on /MU/.
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>>21802101
Ok, go and get that food.
>>21802110
Now I know why you named yourself "Guitar Guy".
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>>21802171
Yeah. I would post the music I have already made on here but I don't know if I trust 4Chan enough with the information so it's for the best that I don't.
Also, if any one wonders why I take food breaks so often, I don't like meals. I eat a lot of snacks throughout the day slowly. Just a fun fact.
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I was going to ask you what you were going to eat.
Also, don't trust 4 Chin in work issues, that never goes well.
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>>21802359
Noted. I will get to writing here in a second but I am listening to some of the Orchestra soundtracks I have made recently.
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>>21802376
Are you in here?
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>>21803399
Present! Just had some homework and stuff and side tracked and stupid things. Onto writing!
Captcha: ISuri
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>>21803481
Oh, okay.
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>>21803481
http://pastebin.com/Ue42XJBt
Sorry for the wait on this one but you're going to like it.
Warning, feels may be a side effect. I may write a little bit more tonight and if I do I will let you guys know.
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>>21804313
Poor Sunny, well, at least she is making friends or at least gaining their confidence, by showing them that she is not an evil bitch. This feels are welcomed.
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>>21804313
Im just now reading your story and so far i am impressed with it. The feels are always welcome
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>>21804313
Gosh Dang it! My freaking computer froze while I was writing. Only to the write friends. I am just going to rewrite what I had real quickly and head to bed.
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>>21804995
Thanks, Guitar.
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>>21804995
http://pastebin.com/Ue42XJBt
it's a little altered from what I originally wanted but it's pretty much the same. I look forward to seeing Piece come back! His story is still pretty good. Refresh it when you finish reading to the bottom. Night everyone!
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>>21805200
Nights Guitar, sleep well.
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>>21805200
Night man
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>>21805200
That was gold, real gold.
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>>21797593
All this.

>>21797682
This.

>>21798586
And this.

>>21798814
KEK'd

>>21799471
If u want to good fap material, call me.

>>21800512
Show her evolution of your dick in her ass.

>>21800855
Very well choice brother.

>>21802110
What is /MU/? Can i sell my music there too?
How to earn on bitcoins?

Where is piece5 for emperor sake?

Also: Hello folks!
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>>21805432
Hello Faps, I was counting on you to show up, I didn't wanted to leave the tread alone
I will make a new tread, but first I am going to save this one on "4archive". So that piece can upload everything into his pastebin.
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