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What kinds of things do you think Dashie got in trouble for as a filly?
TripAnon - http://pastebin.com/MNAHUhVq
WNrite - http://pastebin.com/6s4Ufecn maybe?
Bunch of pastebin links from last thread:
She is really the best pony.
Thanks for new thread, Anon
There once was a pony named Dash
whose pussy did have a bad rash
it had a bad smell
and some scabs as well
Anon said "I'll lick it for cash"
The pony sat down and she thought
'I need to get rid of this rot"
she lifted her tail
for that human male
a thorough tongue-cleaning she bought
Anon put his hands on her rump
and in his throat formed a big lump
He started to gag
The pony did nag
"you're not getting out of this, chump"
Anon's tongue then parted his lips
as Rainbow Dash wiggled her hips
he caught a big whiff
as his penis got stiff
and pus from her pussy did drip
"Why the fuck is this turning me on?"
"of gross unwashed cunts I'm not fond"
he then dove right in
to his face came a grin
"Oh well, soon enough she'll be gone"
As he tasted that crusty old snatch
the flakey scabs became detached
pus slime and mold
he scraped from her folds
that foul pussy had met its match
Rainbow Dash trembled and groaned
"You'd better keep going!" she moaned
she pushed on his face
with no tact or grace
her pleasure would not be postponed
She grunted she squirted and squealed
as the years of neglect became peeled
from her tunnel of love
she continued to shove
Anon's boner he tried to conceal
She farted she queefed and she came
as Anon grabbed a fist of her mane
he pulled her head back
as he finished his snack
her crusty cunt finally tamed
>Dash will never accidentally nom your ballsack in her sleep as she dreams it's a cotton candy cloud
>she'll never be startled awake by your blood curdling scream of agony and bite down even harder from the surprise
>she'll never let you have anal every night for the rest of your life out of guilt
Alright, uploaded two greentexts to pastebin.
My greentext (WIP): http://pastebin.com/AscK2K4n
Improv by me and Tim Rorik (WIP): http://pastebin.com/SpyZqLB5
I edited the improv so that the perspective is consistent. When we're done I'll see if I can make an alternate second person current tense version.
Continuing the improv we started in the last thread:
>Anon steadied himself, then slowly guided his cock into Rainbow Dash's vagina.
>Rainbow Dash gasped quietly, flicking her tail as she felt the warm tip make contact with her marehood.
>"Aaa... I want you so bad..."
>Anon grunted, squeezed her flanks tightly and drove his penis deep inside her.
>Rainbow's cheeks turned a deep red as thoughts of sex took over her mind. She had been dreaming of this moment for so long now.
>"Rut me, Anon!"
(I might be a bit slow while working on this part of the improv, because it takes me a while to write sex scenes the way I like them.)
>Anon pulled himself out again, then slammed back in with full force, earning another erotic moan from his mare.
"Mmm, you have such a hot body, Dashie..."
>Anon rubbed her flanks a little more, savoring the feeling, then started thrusting into her at a regular pace.
>"Yes! Rut me hard!"
>Dash raised her butt a little and shuffled her hind legs, wanting to feel him as deep inside her as possible.
(I still lack some experience with sex scenes tbh, so Tim's gonna have an easier time with this than I will)
Sorry I didn't get much written tonight, but I'm planning to return tomorrow night.
Need to get some sleep because I'm getting up a bit earlier to watch a movie.
In the meantime, here's some lovestruck Dashie.
May you all have blissful dreams of hottest pony. Except for this guy:
why even live
>tfw you will never be able to hold Dash in your arms
>tfw You never feel her soft, warm fur laying up against your chest, with your arms wrapped around her
Dashfags, would you still screw Rainbow Dash even if she looked like pic related?
>She will never sleep on you
>You will never feel her warmth
>You will feel her warm breath on your face and the rise and fall of her chest as she sleeps
>tfw it still doesn't fill the hole inside
I now have enough RD photos save mankind and this damn thread bump
This pony has taken my heart away from Rainbow.
Do you think she will hate me?
Probably. I lost my virginity to my cousin, and ever since.... Well, it's a very long story, but I will say that I'm ashamed of what I did, not because of the incest thing, but because I'll never be a thirty-year-old wizard virgin.
I hope all you fucks who say yes botch it and get killed by that very same family member. While you're dying, Dash appears before you and whispers how she'd never love someone this disloyal. You die knowing your waifu hates you.
Oh shit. I misread that. I thought it said, "Woud it kill the family member closest to you if it meant spending eternity with Dashie?"
In other words, "would my cousin be emotionally distraught if I left for Dash"
i have good reasons i gad a sister treated like an angel while i was what they called a "devil child" my sister was spoiled rotten after a car accident she was in and always got me into trouble i never had a say in anything now i am a very hateful person
really she broke her neck in a car accident with my dad then she was treated as an angel got spoiled rotten got me in trouble a lot for things i didnt do i became the devil child hate my family all because of my sister
Same here, only reason I'm using mine is because I have a few greentexts in progress... still waiting for Tim Rorik to take his turn on the improv though
I'm writing the other one solo, but I'm not feeling "Up2It" enough to do Part 5 yet.
I do it, because I used to be popular here.
I know, popular on an image forum about pastel-colored ponies!
It was the one year anniversary of the CYOA I got involved with and I namefagged up again. Am too lazy to become anon. And I like my Namefag
If you're here TripAnon, I want to let you know I am fucking hyped for the next update!
>"I'll have you know Anon that I'm 'Top Unf' of the Equestrian Sensual Wrestling League!"
>you will never get a Rainbow Dash for your birthday
Trust me Anon, I'm gonna find a way now.
As soon as I'm ready to continue, I'm gonna put this in there eventually. I think it would fit well as an "Epilogue" thing.
I want to give her a good morning kiss.
>tfw you will never gaze into her deep, loving magenta eyes every morning when you wake up, trading numerous kisses and flirtatious remarks
>tfw you will never get out of bed and walk with her to the living room, hand in hoof
>tfw you will never make passionate love to her every night, whispering reminders of how much you care for that beautiful rainbow pegasus
>tfw you will never try in vain to impregnate her, knowing that your seed is not compatible with glorious marehood, but still enjoying the effort anyway
>tfw you will never embrace each other warmly as you drift off to sleep, knowing that this isn't a dream and she'll still be with you tomorrow to repeat the procedure all over again
I'd better do Part 5 of my greentext before people start to think I'm gonna end up cancelling it. It's still possible that could happen, but might as well do what I can, right?
>"I made us some pancakes this morning. Yours is probably cold now cuz it's been sitting there for an hour already. It's your fault for sleepin' all morning, so don't expect me to warm it up for you."
"It's fine, I don't really care if it's cold. Sure, warm pancakes are usually better, but in the end, it's just a pancake. You already ate, right?"
>"Well duh, did you really think I'd want to eat a cold pancake? "
>There is a brief moment of silence as you take your first mouthful of pancake. You notice that Dash isn't doing anything, just watching you. You decide to ask her about it between bites. Unlike her friend Rarity, she doesn't mind if you talk with food in your mouth.
"So, uh, anything going on with you today?"
>"Nah, Twilight's off to some egghead award ceremony up in Canterlot. Most of the interesting stuff seems to happen when she's around, so my schedule's pretty flexible right now. Figured I'd sit here with you and chat. What, is that a problem?"
(Psst, if anyone's still following this greentext, I work better when I'm getting positive feedback. If you like what you're seeing so far, just leave a response for me and I'll feel more motivated to write the next part sooner.)
"No, it's just that usually you're out doing something active."
>"Hey, you're my friend. I figured since you spend a lot of your time cooped up in this house with nopony to talk to, you could use some company."
>You consider mentioning Tank, but after thinking it over you realize that the turtle hasn't really interacted with you since he doesn't know your language.
>"Yeah, I'm not a fan of small talk either, but I bet it gets pretty boring here when you can't leave the house without my help."
(Gonna end it here, sorry it's another short one but I need more time to think before I decide what happens next.)
You get to go to Equestria and be with Dash. Married, able to have foals, etc. You'll both be immortal and will spend eternity together. The only thing is you have to be her personal toilet for all eternity, eating and drinking anything that comes out of her, no matter how foul.
Thanks for the support, anons. Here's part 7.
(Extending the estimated length of the story again because at this rate I can't wrap it up in only 16 parts, heh. I probably won't have a solid idea of how many more parts are left until I'm near the end.)
"Well, thanks for sticking around. I really appreciate it."
>Rainbow Dash smiles back.
>"Of course, what are friends for?"
>There is another brief moment of silence as you both try to think of what to say.
>For a second you make eye contact with her. This doesn't happen very often because she doesn't like staying in one place. Well, unless she's reading Daring Do.
>Gosh, those eyes are so pretty...
>You hastily look away, blushing a little. What were those thoughts doing in your mind?
>Maybe... well, she just has really nice eyes. That's it. Nothing else.
>You shake it off and try to move on to another subject.
"So, what now?"
>"I dunno. I was hoping that you already had something in mind."
>You both chuckle a little, realizing how pointless this is.
>"Well, I just got the newest Daring Do book recently. Wanna read that together?"
"Sure, I can't think of anything better right now."
>There are some much better things you can think of, but you're choosing to ignore them because it just doesn't seem right.
>You walk up to Rainbow Dash's bedroom with her, taking the book from its drawer and flipping to the first page.
And now we reach the first hint at what I'm sure you're all wanting to see... wink wink, nudge nudge.
yeah thanks for that anon, I need my heart for tomorrow.
give it back
Thanks, I'm glad you like it. This better land me a spot in the first post next topic... (friggin copy-paste...)