What's your least favorite thing about your own writing? Or, what are some problems you need to work on with it?
>I use conjunctions like "but", "however", and "although" too much
I have weak spatial and chronological control. I offer meaningless details relating to travel and vistas when the core of the narrative is interactions between people. Then when the interactions come, they go on word for word interminably, so the meaningless descriptive details in between become padding for overgrown dialogue sequences.
Then when I start cutting, the narrative seems rushed and super-intense when it should be leisurely.
When I write nonfiction I tend to write too little. If I was DFW (minus his long-winded style), "E Unibus Plurum" would only be about ten pages long. They say brevity is the soul of wit but it feels off when I get everything I want to say out in only a few pages.
It's weird shit.
Always, I cant write coherent stuff, its always like its something between Maleev and some Magical Realism thing, it's just that mine is shit.
Also little describing. Charakters are, things happen, little more.