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been writing what I plan to publish as an ebook about my experiences as a semi successful camboy. Anyone up for reading a short extract and sharing some feedback with me? Need to know if it's any fucking good so far
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Meh
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>>7628746
that'll be a no then I presume?
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>>7628742
>how newfags think /lit/ works
"Hey guys, if you ask nicely I'll let you critique my work!"
"Okay anon, please post more! Here are my thoughts about your prose and structure: ..."
>how /lit/ actually works
"Hey guys, critique my work! http://google.docs/shit.doc"
"Bump."
"Bump."
"Bump."
"Bump."
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>>7628754
You're wrong though

I'll gladly critique it. It's a cool idea if you have the ability to pull it off.
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a camboy is too fucking lame and gay, no way im reading it unless it involves your blackmailing the president of GE or something
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>>7628770
Thank you. I'm a semi-successful camboy (documentary and magazine featured) with a history of small time writing jobs behind me.

Books in it's early stages - it lies somewhere between an autobiographical account of how I wound up in the job I'm doing and a how-to/tips guide for aspiring camboys/girls. I don't expect it to be relatable to everyone, least of all here but I'd appreciate some feedback and advice. I can post a short snippet if anyone is genuinely interested, I dont wish to bore anyone with a long winded work in progress
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fucking post some then

> Don't mean to bore

> Is talking to people on /lit

if we weren't already bored we wouldn't be here
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>>7628898
ONE
I suppose I've always been an extrovert. As a child, I had a dressing up box at home filled with all kinds of quirky flamboyant attire I'd acquired from jumble sales and car boots over the years, and loved putting on little shows for the relatives or neighbors whenever I got the chance (or more often than not when I could convince then to quit their adult chitter-chatter for 5 minutes (which was always more like 15, just to watch me)

I've forever loved to sing. I'd say I was a born performer but that sounds a bit arrogant doesn't it? Fuck it. I'm leaving it in there.

My singing voice wasn't, and still isn't half bad (though perhaps a little huskier due to my smoking habit and certainly a lot lower since my balls dropped - as expected) but my dancing left a lot to be desired - I had all the grace of a bull in a china shop, so more often than not I felt there was a good chance they were probably laughing at me rather than with me. It didn't really matter though, I may not have been Freddie Mercury or Michael Jackson but I had an audience and that was more than enough to satisfy me at the time.

I guess in a funny kind of way, things haven't really changed that much. Sure, as a child I certainly wouldn't be donning BDSM style fetishwear and parading my arse about on webcam but through my time as a camboy I've learned to embrace my kinkier side and still to this day have a forever-expanding dressing up box full of outfits I love to show off to my viewers.

I forget what's in there half the time because there's so much to rumble through and I'm not the tidiest of people so it sometimes gets tangled together but it's essentially made up of leather harnesses, rubber shirts and shorts, latex bodysuits and tight fitting underwear, along with heavy chains and of course my trademark wrestling singlets.

TIPS ON WEAR TO BUY FETISH CLOTHING FROM

Leather and rubber gear, if you're looking for quality stuff, can be rather expensive but believe me it's worth saving up for as you get what you pay for. Go with a trusted brand like MR T or COLT and you won't regret it because if you take good care of it it'll last you much longer in the long run. Just to be sure to get measured up right if it's something that isn't too flexible or 'one size fits all' as if you're investing a lot of money in something you want it to fit you just right.

By contrast I don't believe any of my singlets have cost me more than £20 at a time and I love each and every single one of them. I'd estimate that I own about 12 now in various colour combinations and materials (from mesh to spandex) but by the time you read this I'll probably have amassed about 30 more or so due to the nature of my spending habits...
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>>7628909
Cont..

Not all of my singlets are backless but the ones with a nice round cut out at the arse area are a particular favourite of mine (and my viewers... who'd have thought?) because of the easy access they supply when it comes to any kind of ass play (generally with my trusty big black dildo of course!)

I do the majority of my shopping online when I can because I find gay sex shops to be vastly overpriced an awful lot of the time. Ebay and Amazon are pretty good but I really recommend AliExpress - they have a lot of the exact same stuff only often much cheaper. The downside is all their stock is shipped from China so if you're looking for fast delivery you aren't going to get it there, but if you're not in a hurry and have the time to spend browsing you can definitely get some amazing bargains there without breaking the bank - it's a really good place to start!

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I can't honestly remember when it was that I very first considered seriously the possibility of being a cam boy for pay. I was, of course, somewhat familiar with the nature of the job. Anyone who watches porn online will have, undoubtedly come across those fucking annoying pop up ads that bounce up on your screen where you see a guy, (or more frequently a girl) sat topless in their own little space, posing seductively into a webcam lens, accompanied by what's usually an invite along the lines of 'come join me now in my live chat for flirty/sexy/ fun' - I still to this day don't know how many of those ads are genuine, or if the footage is even live (doesn't it seem to always be the exact same clip each time on loop!? Even the best of cam models aren't always fully engaged 100% of the time and perfectly poised in dazzling HD!), needless to say I was aware of the occupation and had a pretty good idea of what it entailed..
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This wouldn't be good enough to post on your blog. Go read about a hundred classics come back and rewrite this trash.
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>>7628909
>I suppose I've always been an extrovert. As a child
nope.
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>>7628930
sorry, do you know me?
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>>7628934
I see you all the time, in the trash by the bargain bin.
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Tbqh, I've always thought one of the super successful camgirls from MFC should write a biography. Something along the lines of "Memoirs of a camgirl". I figure they must have a shit ton of good stories from all the crazy/fucked up things they've been asked to do on cam, to having weirdo stalkers and all that shit.

It's probably because I'm a straight male, but your previews really didn't interest me much. You should cut out the "tips for aspiring camboys" section though. Aren't there already a shit of wiki's/how-to's on the internet for that sort of thing? Stories/unusual experience and your past/how you got started are probably what would be most interesting. I bet your "fans" would enjoy reading it, but outside of that, I'm not so sure.
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>>7628934
Yes, you're a stereotype.
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>>7628909
>I suppose I've always been an extrovert.
... this probably isn't the place you should come to for feedback. Try (and I don't even mean it in a derogatory way) reddit maybe.
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