>>7620006 wrong. if youre unnatractive tear that shit up in her face and watch her meltdown. dont be a pussy. she will probably berate you and you will feel like a total pos but it will be hilarious to think about afterwards.
>>7619994 Identify one thing she did wrong and one thing she did right. Lead off with the thing she did right, and then talk specifically and in detail about the thing she did wrong and work with her. She's revealing something she perceives as a weakness, which is REALLY good for you. Show that you're gentle and precise.
How good friends are you btw?
I think that a lot of people will have these really complex conversations, and then not even consider making their writing as complex. I used this method on someone who is just starting writing, and she took away most of a poem but kept its good core
Show her some of the work which you think needs work. Reveal some of your weakness
>>7619994 >qt3.14 asks me to edit her essay after she sees that I got a 100 on a different writing assignment >take a look >it's worse than shit I had to peer-edit in 6th grade >multiple instances of the wrong "there/their/they're," random capitalization, and infantile repetitive prose >couldn't find her thesis >tell her I have to leave class for an appointment, but her essay looks "decent" from what I saw >speedwalk out of the lecture hall in the middle of class
>send an old friend (cute girl) some poetry on her request + curiosity >hate them >know they're shit but send them anyways >she actually just didn't say anything about them >(might not've read them yet but cmon thats a slim chance) >i feel nothing does this mean i secretly think they're really good or am i becoming some super narcissist who actually doesn't care?
>>7619994 >be 15-16 >girl from hs in love with me >she gives me a piece of paper with some shitty rhymes >starts with how i'm her white knight >don't even read past the first 2 lines >she waits expectantly >i'm just moving my eyes left to right at this point >give her her poem back >she asks me if i liked it >"yes" >"what's your favorite part, Anon?" >"the white knight thing" >she figures me out >starts sobbing and runs away >i still feel shitty about it
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