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I have decided to stop being an arrogant piece of shit. I know my art isn't the best but I took advice and it got me where I am. I have taken another peak in my skill where I am trying to learn more again and make my stuff look better, but I really need help with pointers. This is a couple months old but I feel like it represents what I am capable of right now. I know proportions are not satisfactory for everyone but it is recognizable, in other words I may have developed a style for myself. I'm still trying to learn how to make beautiful yet simple hair. Right now I feel like I am doing the illusion of fabric-like hair. And fingers still frustrate me no matter how many tutorials I have looked at and tried. They just don't match my drawing procedure so I gotta figure out what works for me.
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Anti-aliasing jesus christ
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I like it. Keep workin' bruh. The only way you'll get fingers/hands down is by drawing them hundreds if not thousands of times.
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>>2393987
When it comes to anti-aliasing, I have experimented with levels and methods. I actually like the aliased look when I work digitally. I like having the low-res look. It has also helped me do some rom hacking on old games just so I can get my hand into programming.
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>>2393984
ayy our favorite fuck boy is back, stop worrying about style and draw from life. Treat hair like you would normally treat form study basic forms and learn how to apply these forms in perspective.

Find perspective made easy from ernest norling from the resources thread i'm sure its there somewhere in the archives.
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>>2393988
Thanks. Maybe it wont take 1000 hands for me. It may take 10,000. I have probably drew Evie about 7000 times since I even thought of posting on here again.
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Looks good enuff to fuck. She 18 years right?
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>>2393998
While you're drawing a lot the fact is she's your character and you won't improve just drawing her if you don't take the principals of art you can learn elsewhere into account when doing so. You gotta leave your comfort zone brah; I'm struggling with that myself.
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>>2393995
Trust me, I have taken that advice, I never post my pictures from life on the internet because it's drawn in the nightmare of a sketchbook with charcoal that I'd never shove into my scanner. Plus lots of it is just unsatisfactory and I don't want to post it.
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>>2393984
well is better than before
>tutorials
you don't need tutorials anon, read a fucking book, look hands, draw, repeat 100 times, 1000, 10000 if required
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>>2394001
Not in that picture.
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>>2393994
It looks like it comes out of ms paint. It's not smooth enough to look like a polished drawing, it's not blocky enough to look like pixel art. It just looks messy.
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>>2394009
Thanks. Tutorials never worked for me. I always interpreted from life and just made it cartoon styled.
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>>2394015
I used gimp which is much more capable. I am still trying to figure out how to resize an image to take the heavy pixel aliasing out, while not making it look nasty. The plugins for that program are a mess to find. Until I figure out how to get rid of the aliasing the best bet for me would just to leave it messy instead of what I initially pictured.
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Any NSFW content for the girl? Share mr./ms. Krom
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>>2394044
I don't have any as she is not that kind of character, but I have other characters in that realm.
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>>2393984
you... can't even keep the lines defining the soles of the shoes parallel...

Are the thumbs supposed to be vastly different sizes or is she supposed to have one monster, one noodle thumb?
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Where would that sauce be? I like your style, that girl is drawn like yummy.
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>>2394054
I'm not perfect yet. I understand. I still struggle with hands, feet and legs.
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>>2394058
In a drawer in my bedroom in what I call the secret drawer to happiness. I want to figure out a way to post some of it but I don't want it to mix with my SFW stuff.
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>>2393984
>I'm still trying to learn how to make beautiful yet simple hair
What hair do you know has bangs that look like stiff, evenly spaced isosceles triangles and are considered either simple or beautiful?
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>>2394072
I'm not taking about her hair being simple yet beautiful. I am not going to change something on her that I don't have down yet. If you notice, I have given her a figure because I taught myself that and added it to her. In a way, whenever I get better at something I just add it to her as a puzzle. A meter of where I am at with my drawing ability when it comes to cartooning.
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>>2394064
Can you draw parallel lines? Also why with every piece of criticism you receive, you need to to either brush it off or give an excuse?
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>>2394082
I'm not brushing it off. I can draw parallel lines. I give reasoning and I am merely agreeing and taking notes.
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>>2394082
inb4 long explanation from op
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>>2394085
So why don't you apply that ability to the soles of the shoes?
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>>2394088
She's not standing with her toes at the same angles. She's not a character of good posture.
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>>2394091
No the waves are due to an unsteady hand and an artist unwilling to try until they make the correct stroke, not purposeful perspective. Even if that wasnt the case, it wouldn't account for the random waves in the sole's thickness.
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I could eat her shoes, i f that would inspire the Krom to post some NSFW for us all
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>>2393984
I want to fuck evie
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>>2394104
me too
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>>2394101
I am not trying to make excuses but I don't have a drawing tablet and my trackpad on my laptop doesn't run at the correct ppi in GIMP sometimes. It's not wavy in my sketch. I just need to get better at digitally drawing. I also got super impatient because I already drew and redrew the feet about 10 times correcting lines over and over.
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>>2394091
Lol that doesn't effect the fact that you can't draw parallel lines.
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>>2394111
>I am not trying to make excuses
So first it was the angle the feet are presented, then it's your equipment. Yup. Not making any excuses. Totally.
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Patience is key for an artist, so just deal with that. Can't be?Draw some rule34 and be like the crowd. send it to us too
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>>2394107
She's my ideal girl.
You guys could have a piece of Tracy though.
Pretty old sketches.
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>>2394111
>nice trips

i would recommend to get a drawing tablet, stay away from small ones, and mischief and do a lot of gesture drawing and iterative drawing

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k0ufz75UvHs
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>>2394115
I'm just gonna sit here and realize that I did make excuses. I don't always mean to though. So many posts and everyone under Anon. I forget that it's many people.
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>>2394125
Sounds like an excellent idea. I have been saving up to get a drawing tablet. I just don't know what one I want yet.
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>>2394131
Get the Huion Giano, son.

>>2390710
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>>2394122
MORE
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>>2394134
Thanks! I will put money towards that. I really appreciate it.
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That ass, YES! Is that Evie's sister or someting? do a double feature where they lick each other mmmm
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>>2394122
hahaha, I like your style man, I honestly hope you get better; but you're going to have to practice a lot and not just draw your characters. Just keep them close to your heart while you draw other stuff.
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>>2394135
Hold on. Maybe I will take crappy pictures of what I have in my drawer.
>>2394141
Tracy is a girl not related to Evie. She is just this horny chick.
>>2394142
Maybe I would draw my characters when drawing from life/ bending reality.
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>>2394135
This was for a lesson I was giving someone on drawing breasts. I was showing what happens when they are at different sizes. I just like how the whole sketch turned out.
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>>2394156
It was on it's side. I fixed it.
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Ayyyyyyy YEAH them titty tits!!! So fukin delicious.. I like it so if you got more to post don't be afraid sir
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>>2394160
I like boobs. I spent a lot of time practicing boobs and the womanly figure.
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>>2394168
Here is a high test alpha female from an interesting perspective get to work faggot.
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I found some of the stuff, and it makes me hard.. espcially this one dude you should draw a naked version. Cmon do it please!! sexy stuff!
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>>2394179
She's too chunky for my likes.
>>2394182
That image looks horrible from my standards.
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BUT titss!!! Please :''''(
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>>2394176
wheres my fucking make a wish
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>>2394186

You have a nice style I hope to see some of your work later on, if you keep working your ass off that is, but stretch out a bit it hinders your ability to do other things, think of it like sitting down at a computer with bad posture and you never stretch or anything it makes it harder later on to get back to at least a normal looking posture, what I am saying in conclusion is be "FLEXIBLE" while you can be I am not a good artist by any means.. (not being a humble little shit)
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I know you can do it cuz you got some hot stuff going. like yes look, just uncensor her tits for me! yumyumyum
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>>2394206
It's a good idea and I take those words to mind.
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Wait, good idea for tits for me? Pleeeassee Im so banging hard right now, you know how to do it with your sexyness art!! You are the saucy maker and i need your help ;) ;) ;)
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Oh no... My thread has attracted knights wielding their erected willies and tissues.
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jesus christ this board has really gone to shit
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>>2394213

>You are the saucy maker

Jesus christ, horny little bastard get your dipshit ass the fuck back to /ck/
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What have you done man? 0_0
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>>2394221
I see what you did. Clever.
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>>2394219
its mikufag's fault
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Its not hard to see how fucking good that art is to make me get hard.. havent been this bonered in a while and I can use girls! FUCK I wanttttt :D
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>>2394223
kek thanks
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>>2394230
:D
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>>2394229
>>2394213

I sense something.........
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I missed out on the original thread so I can't tell whether OP is a troll or the real deal. Someone shed some light on this.
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I found more good stuff loooook!! HOT
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>>2394241
Question away.
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Krom is getting meme'd on again by a butthurt /b/tard. Nigga just go do Fun With a Pencil or something, you're not going to be able to have a good time hanging around here.
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>>2394241
>Can't make your own opinion
>Relies on others to form an opinion

How mentally incapable are you in doing that?
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>>2394249
kek
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>>2394241
Last year we had someone that got lost on their way to DA and wound up here or someone referred this innocent soul to this place and so OP posted his OC on a thread he made, /ic/ gives critique, OP replies muh style, feelings got hurt, shitstorm ensued.
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>>2394252
I'm being chill this time around. I was a dumbass in highschool with his head too far up his ass. Now I have seen the real world. The world isn't about how much better you are than others and thinking that. I realize that my skill sits somewhere in a lower spectrum. I just hope to hone my skills as I get older.
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>>2394244
I don't even like this image.
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>>2394260
^ Agree looks like I smeared my shit on it

>>2394244
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>>2394261
why would somebody do that now
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>>2394261
I love this gif. I laughed so hard.
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>>2394266
open yur eiyes see the woruld liek neber sein befor
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>>2394267
Yeah I always get a good laugh out of it
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>>2394271
It would be so evil to find a toilet like that and do that. Just imagine the janitor.
--Jim-bob Bob Billy the janitor quit his job on Tuesday afternoon after he vomited on the toilet seat that appeared to be frosted like a cake.
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I put my skills to the max and made it better but you shoulddo it to!!! Look, TITS YAYYY!!!!!!
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>>2394275
kek
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>>2394276
>>>/b/
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>>2394249

Ok sweet you are a troll, good to know. Thank you for informing my opinion.
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>>2394276
You get the award of best photoshop of 2016.
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>>2394284
Whatever you think, you fucking autistic retard
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>>2394287
Whoa hey, cool it. I have friends who have autism and are much more capable than 90% of people I know.
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>>2394276
To think you would of at least made it transparent to save us some cringe just do us a favor next time and spoiler pls
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>>2394292
I like the estimate, kek
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>>2394292
Where do you think you are?
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>>2394296
kaaawaiiii-desu
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>>2393984
Where you posting your superhero transexual whoring for laptop stories? So sad you deleted that.
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>>2394294
>>2394296
A lot of people in the USA are fucking idiots.
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>>2394302
?
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>>2394306
The real Krom would know exactly what I'm talking about. I've improved since I drew futa Evie, shall I try again?
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>>2394240
>u r a fag lel xddd.gif

youre no better than them
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>>2394328
I remember all of it.
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>>2394219
This delusional shit should be deleted.
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>102 posts
>17 posters
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>>2394540
Not my fault that nobody takes me serious.
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>>2394659
yeah i mean it is really not my fault
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>>2394689
I never pinned it on you.
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>>2394692
Take perspective seriously so you can actually do stuff with your drawings.
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>>2394750
That's my goal
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>>2394757
You haven't yet touched on perspective, don't you lie to me. Get your ass in gear, not expecting you to be a master but your latest stuff since you improved are stiff as ever.

Not expecting you to be a master but at least get a good grasp of the concept of 1/2/3 point perspective.
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>>2394766
Can you break that 1/2/3 for me?
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>>2394766
How can you not know what I mean? Go google it. Better yet open a book. Treat all examples as exercises. You could probably spend an hour a week on perspective and improve dramatically.
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>>2394774
>Hour a day for a week.
Your lack of improvement over the course of the last time we bashed you frustrates me to no end.
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>>2394776
You must need glasses.
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Draw more ass poses.
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>>2394790
I bet you'd like that.
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>>2394798

I wasnt trolling I was being legit. lol
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>>2394800
I'm capable, just lazy.
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I'm gonna sketch a much more dynamic pose. Give me a few minutes.
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Here is a pose I just drew using>>2394179
I couldn't go quite as extreme, but I tried. Soon I will be able to do a perspective that damn near looks like you're gonna be looking into the crotch and up between the titties.
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HEy you made a sexy pose! only one problem, she isnt naked like I advised.. Do it pleaseeee ;)
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>>2394937
no
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>>2394901
I like it. But the eyes seem kinda off-centered?
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>>2394944
Head angle. I think it might be that I didn't sketch the eyes in their entirety. Got me puzzled a little myself.
Thanks though. It was an hour to sketch.
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>>2394937
Calm your tits
>>2394901
You are not thinking in 3d, use basic forms and apply these in perspective.
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>>2394901
Nope, not good enough to show perspective at all. It's got that snap-to symbol drawing effect going on of memorized positions. Is it better than others, marginally so, but not the extent of what months of learning should result in.

Hit the books and understand the concepts of the fundamentals before you get back to it.
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>>2394950
Give me another while. I will muster something else up.
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I missed you friend

I was the anon that tried to get you to commission porn of evie. Your reaction to it and the following fanart was great. Glad your back though, everyone always comes back, no matter how brutal their first experience is. not to mention comparing you to current shitposters like illustrat means your the sane one

but, here comes the bad news; You have had no progression buddy. The only thing I see progressing in your work is Evie's bust size. You need to take time out to work on mastering realism before doing abstraction or stylization. To put it simply, you need to understand how somthing works before simplifying it to make the artistic process easier. This means doing the nitty gritty work with drawing from life, a lot of gesture and a lot of studies. But if your really in for it, then buckle down and join the beginner thread, its wear most of our artist are and a few people there dispense great help.

>>2394901
Now compare that to the reference image. Your saying that you can't go that extreme, but what you really mean is that you dont want to step out of your comfort zone. Take the time. look at the refrence and break it down into simple shapes in your head before trying to re-create it. Use these shapes to build a foundation and layer up from there. You, like most beginners, need to learn to draw what you see, not what you think you see. take another shot at this, I'm interested in seeing the results
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>>2394952
Pushing your limits is what matters most, striving to make each better than the last. But been following your DA for a while and what little activity has resulted in insufficient improvement.

Go draw boxes and cylinders and stuff with the power of perspective, then use those forms for the human body, then be amazed at the new compositions available to you.

Or just keep on making baby steps.
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>>2394965
>been following your DA

You niggers actually follow other people?
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>>2394965
>>2394959
It's been difficult for me to try to do this stuff with lack of motivation and lack of direction. I seriously though I had grips on things because people I surround myself with aren't that good at drawing so I guess that's not a good way of metering myself.
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>>2394996
it certainly isn't. Most normies will give you empty praise, and while empty praise sounds nice, praise from someone you respect is much better. Surrounding yourself with people worse then you makes you better in comparison, but in the end your work needs to stand up for itself. Here's another thing. the only thing you will get here is direction. what to read and watch, ext, ext. Motivation is all you. There is nothing I, or anyone else can say on this planet, that will be able to motivate you more then you can motivate yourself. Draw for you. get better for you, and take in all you can to get better, all the positive and negative feedback

/ic/ is like an older brother. We don't care that much. We will pick on you and call you faggot and show our dominance over you. But we will be honest. And honestly, as you know, your shit now. But we are all varying levels of shit with the same goal, and the only way to get better is to learn and grind. Someday you will get a compliment here, and someday you will get a compliment from an artist many times better then yourself. Just find the motivation in you and try man. You owe that much to yourself
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>>2395013
I see this as an opportunity to grow. I may decide to be regular on here and get as much help as I can get. I am not going to be an anon either.
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>>2395020
>I am not going to be an anon either.

Lose the namefagging people would recognize you from your drawings anyway unless you want people to shitpost everywhere you go.
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>>2395052
More reasoning?
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>>2395055
Nobody cares who you are
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>>2395062
But I'm not part of the collective.
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>>2395065

Draw some booty shots and we'll let it slide
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>>2395096
I'll make some booty stuff.
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I'm glad I didn't get the autism
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ITT:
>Literally who?
>Samefagging to the cringextreme
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