okay got you, so where you came from was exactly like our earth except everything was like perfectly fine and impeccable and you came to our earth. compare from a perfect one to the one we have now, what impressions would you get? Its for a school assignment idk im dying her
>>2391949 And how'd that somebody be? Would he, coming from a place where perfection is total, be perfect as well, or just as unstable as a regular human being? What's wrong with Earth? Doesn't have to be general, just your opinion'd count. Is your artwork for shit and giggles or to criticize your fellow men, maybe even on a purely observational tone?
>>2391955 No worries, friend. I'm not going to do it for you, but I can try and help you question the "right" things, in the most accessible of ways. Just answer what I previously asked you, and we can go from there. One of the things I've learnt from High-School, which wasn't that long ago, is that you'll be valued by your textual or intellectual backing slightly more than the final product itself; it may be bullshitting, or not, it just depends on your grade of honesty.
Okay so the person coming from the perfect place, would be perfect right? Never experienced hardship/displease/basic problems a normal earth person would face. never seen anything short of perfect. comes to our world, views our problems as a globe ie war, poverty etc and also personal problems such as dealing/understanding love and whatnot sorry maybe ive chosen a concept too subjective
>>2391964 It's okay to pick broad themes, but you can't expect to tackle everything at once, despite the temptation.
It seems that your idea of perfection is of a somewhat "robotic" or "guaranteed" assurance, it would also mean that the person in cause would need to be extremely short of ambition, thus reinforcing the thesis that he is not humane at all - he might not even be able to feel any negative emotions, en route to his predisposition of mutual symbiosis.
You've got to go deeper on the character's profile, otherwise expect heavy contradictions.
If not, why not venturing through one issue at a time, Love'd be the easiest, since your first heartbreak is, regardless of educational or societal ways, dealt with the same way, quasi-"universally".
Think about the powerlessness, or even the vigor one might feel from such disillusion, if it's something continuous, try developing your "someone" step by step.
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