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Post your current drawing here and give constructive critique to others!

Please make sure your posted image is clear, downsized to around 1000 pixels wide, rotated to the correct orientation, and that any unused space is cropped.
If you want critique on a drawing from the previous thread, you can delete it there and repost in this one.

>dA /ic/ group :
http://4chan-ic.deviantart.com

>/ic/ Resources/Reference/Downloads/Links:

>General resources :
http://sites.google.com/site/4chanic/
http://sites.google.com/site/artandwhatnot/
http://characterdesigns.com/
http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-3.html
http://finaltrinity.tumblr.com/post/13163064364/art-references-tumblr-accounts

>fellowBro's books :
http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8

>Figure Drawing Tool:
http://pixelovely.com/gesture/figuredrawing.php
http://posemaniacs.com/

>Photoshop Brushes
http://cgsociety.org/index.php/CGSFeatures/CGSFeatureSpecial/tower_of_evilzz
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working on removing contrast
fuckin god damn this is going to take forevvvvvvvver
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Any crits on this? Took around an hour

>>2391174
Removing contrast?
Why would you do that exactly?
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Is this close to how a cup of coffee would look at this angle in real life?

Can somebody red line it?
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>>2391192
Seeing if I can trick my eye to turn form with only minor gradients with color + core shadows
and I like how it looks
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>>2391195
Do you seriously want red line for this?
Circle is not even a circle.
Even 8 years old kid can see what's wrong with your drawing.
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>>2391195
i mean does that look like an ellipse to you ? should be easy to answer yourself m8
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>>2391223
Yeah you're right.
I looked at it and realized I drew a fucked up rectangular oval.

Guess I gotta go practice ellipses.
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>>2391234
Good luck.
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a study thing from reference. i tried i guess...
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>>2391255
You obviously didn't finish it.
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craig mullins study

its really helpful because you learn how to paint like painting on a real canvas instead of trying to sculpt
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>>2391255
>didn't bother to finish the face
>putting down signature

Learn to paint mouth faggot.
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>>2391266
you know what else teaches you how to paint like painting on a real canvas?
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>>2391280
painting on walls
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Only drew this so people have something to crit. Please crit, need crit
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>>2391308
find new subject matter. if you stop drawing that same dog and those same birds over and over again maybe it'll push you out of this style. or at least expand on it.
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>>2391308
it's nice, but that static composition is doing you no favors. and the shading is kind of weird. is the light source directly behind them or coming from the right?
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>>2391308
That's pretty comfy senpai desu
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and done
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>>2391311
>>2391311
>find new subject matter. if you stop drawing that same dog and those same birds over and over again

What? I've never drawn this dingo/gulls.

Only thing you could be referring to is the comic i'm illustrating for someone. But that's got more animals than just dog and birbs.

>>2391317

Supposed to be from the back. Tips on composition/better lightning?
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>>2391325
are you sure? i could've sworn there's a guy that draws nothing but dogs and it's in that exact style. someone back me up on this am i crazy?
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>>2391325
tips on lighting: nothing that everyone hasn't already heard before. break the forms down into cubes/spheres/cylinders.

and this dude is a good read in general but has a lot to say on composition:

http://www.floobynooby.com/comp1.html
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>>2391332

I draw animals but certainly not just dogs (outside of commissions in which people only ask for dogs). My tumblr is http://www.flyingratt.tumblr.com if you want to check.

Though now i'm wondering who this dog-drawing person running around with my style is.

>>2391335

Shit, thanks for the doc. I prefer collecting books instead of PDF's so if you have any recommendations on paper, let me know. I'll read this though.
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>>2391107

You fugg your model yet, OP?
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>>2391324

Could be pushed a lot further if consideration was put into the piece. Stop doing quick "speedpaints" and start doing finished pieces. It'll help you out more, and more quickly. Do yourself a favor and either don't call this one done, or plan the next one infinitely more. I'm talkin' reference, thumbnails, studies, the whole process. See how far you can take something, then address your flaws.
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>>2391308
Looks pretty good. There's just a few issues.
It might just be me, but the fries read poorly. Maybe you could make them longer and thinner or try crinkle-cut?

The dog's face is also a bit messed up. The attachment of the ear should be more forward, and the ear is not in the right perspective.
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Crit my TLC?
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>>2391346
no she never showed up! she was all excited and then she never showed up. i guess she was nervous she was pretty young i honestly would've been surprised if she actually modelled for me.
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>>2391347
>pushed a lot further

I honestly don't think I know what that means
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>>2391350

Thanks. My ears are usually better when I draw a dog, not sure what happened. Dingo ears fuck me around.

Chips aren't fries, they're just hot chips. The chunky ones. Not sure what they're called in America, probably steak chips.
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>>2391324
I really dislike these digital brushwork pierces
Just paint on a canvas, then.
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Can I get some feedback/suggestions my what I am working on now?
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>>2391370
Uploaded the unscaled one by accident.
Here is a smaller one
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>>2391373
fuck
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>>2391354
>22 year old man propositioned a high school aged girl he doesn't know via the internet to come "model" for him
Can't imagine why she would be nervous, seems legit.
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>>2391356
There's no degree of finish to anything here. No consideration to placement of different elements, etc. You sketched out a landscape from imagination and said "oh, maybe some eggs would look cool there and maybe add narrative or something". That's not storytelling in an illustration. Note that finishing this or any piece doesn't mean render the shit out of it.

Taking from the troll post that's floating around, you can look at Mullins's piece here >>2390343 and it has an air of being planned/headed toward a finish. Values are planned well, composition is good, he's shape welding intelligently.. etc.
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>>2391374
Boring comp and feels more like an exercise in perspective than a piece. Colors are very filter-y right now.
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Current study, are there any flaws in my construction? I don't know where to go from here how do I add detail and ink?
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>>2391389
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>>2391375
hey man she was the one telling me she'd be "honored"
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>>2391417

I suggest acting as if nothing happened
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>>2391377

alright i'll just paint like mullins next time. no, i get what you mean and you are right, but i paint mainly for fun rly
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>>2391424
why are you posting in a thread meant for critique if you don't want it?
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>>2391429
Are you kidding? There are so many people who do that, it's more reasonable to ask why anyone who does want critique would post here.
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>>2391389
>>2391392

you will find much better feedback in the beginner thread
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>>2391426
Be careful, that's the Wretched Mother!
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>>2391362
>FDA
you should really use your trip,
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>>2391450
I was about to say the same. That shit was so funny I'm glad I got to see it. It ended just how I thought it would.
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>>2391450
You should really remember that different people can share similar opinions :^)

>visible brushstrokes
>99% ugly in real life
>even worse trying to be replicated digitally
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>>2391429

i do want it. 'paint like mullins' is just not too applicable.
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>>2391385
Can you elaborate? Is the sky too saturated?
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Thoughts?
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>>2391443
No one replies in those.
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pretty easy tbqh, though I probably have a better understanding of form than anyone else itt.
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>>2391494
do you hav devian art?
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>>2391420
yeah the whole thing seemed a little too good to be true from the start
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>>2391466
Not saying paint like Mullins. It was just an example. He learned from looking @ the best. Wyeth, Rockwell, any of the golden age guys. They all did the same fundamentals that I spoke of.
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Welp, I'm new here. This was kind of a last resort, honestly, since I can't rely on anyone I know to honestly critique my work. Not sure if I should post here or in the beginner thread, but whatever. Basically I need lineart tips, anatomy, whatever. Also, please excuse my crappy attempt at paw-hands-whatever. Also excuse the crappy picture quality since I took it with my phone. Not entirely sure how fast this thread goes, but I'd like some critique soon.
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i know it's not the best, but im getting better i think....

also...anyone play killer instinct here? gt is xBigBlackWHALEx if anyone wants to play when im online
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>>2391632
whoops, forgot pic....goddamnit
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>>2391174
once i get a microsoft pro 4 i hope to be at least half as good as this, and it isnt even finished yet.....ive got a long way to go
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spent an hour messing with different transparency paints.
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>>2391374

Regardless of the issues you have to sort out, saved.
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>>2391505

Well even if she's real and just had second thoughts, not contacting her and being yourself doesn't come off as creepy as "Why didn't you show up???" does.

It's up to you, but sending a quick, courteous, professional message to illustrate that you're not reading too much into it and still appreciate the offer is probably good too.
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did a still life
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>>2391827

The strokes really work with the form on the apples, yet the bananas are flattened and it feels like you didnt achieve the same level of polish on the tomatoes as you did with the rest of the fruit.
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>>2391836
i wish i painted them bigger. seemed okay when i sketched it out, but they turned out kinda tiny. and it was hard to get the forms to pop cause they were so small. looks pretty good from a distance doesn't really hold up up close.
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>>2391107
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What im working on
studyng value and trying to draw every day
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>>2391443
shadows are the wrong coloru
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>>2391468
As far as feeling more like a perspective project -- everything is very constructed and there's not much content there to latch onto. There's no narrative, concept, etc. The sky isn't really the problem as much as the local colors don't feel correct. I super duper half-assed the landscape, but here's a quick paintover to demonstrate what I'm talking about. I also tweaked the bot's values a bit to really hit home that sense of scale.
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>>2391909
In fact, I'd probably kick up the blue/values of the bot a little bit more looking at it again, but not too much.
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>>2391450
Lmao. Glad I got to see the crazyness myself. That shit was top-tier kek.
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>>2391462
FDA pls go.
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Warmup
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>>2391909
wow this is awesome
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doing some coloring practice over quick sketch.
I'm not considering realistic shading, but color composition and overall 'gud' feeling.
Skin color is way exaggerated I suppose.
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I was recently brainstorming ideas for a story and I wanted to write and today, I drew furries from stick figures apparently. I have been doing this an awful-lot lately to practice drawing crowds, but never furries until today.
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>>2391988

these are fantastic man
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>>2391988
did you just call putting solid colors on top of lineart "coloring practice" ?

what?
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>>2391374
That middle finger is distracting.
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>>2391324
thumb is great, seriously, but it lacks form, design those volumes forms and edges, don't leave ONLY textuers
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>>2391909
Hey thanks! Great help!
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I'm trying to improve my line art on tablet lately, any advice? also feel free to mock my absolute lack of gun knowledge.
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>>2392229
*and lack of form, anatomy and perspective knowledge
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>>2392248
Lifeless as ever but at least she doesn't have a mile long torso this time.
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>>2392301
>lifeless
Elaborate
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>>2392311
I told you before and you didn't want to hear it, I'm not going to bother explaining again.
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>>2392229
dude, there's not knowing about guns and then there's holding a model of stairs with a decapitated cone tit glued to the side of it. come on, man. just....come on. a single rectangle would have done a better job. two rectangles ideally, but even just the one.
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>>2391174
is this all one layer? why not the usual lines>flats>render process that always works?

Even doing what you're doing there should be a process to this madness, like separating figure from background on different layers.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wm43DEDhrtw&index=1&list=LLEwDBmyGAriNRRZMjO2U1Kw
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>>2391308
Why you draw the dog? Are you a animalphile? You like fucking the dog? You are disgusting, I wish they would collect all you dog fuckers in one place and shoot you. Please save the dog!
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>>2391325
You sick animal fucker. Someone please save the animals!
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>>2391370
You like mechs? You want to fuck mechs then? You sick fuck, someone save poor mechs!
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>>2391827
You like fruits? You sick fuck, I hope you get raped in prison.
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>>2392359
Fuck off nobody has sympathy for the fact that you're ostracized for jerking it to drawings of children. You're jerking it to children whether they're drawings or not, you're a pedophile, normal people are never going to be okay with it, fucking deal with it.
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>>2392325
... I tough it looked cool.
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>>2391372
neat
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>>2392360
No one will ever be okay with you jerking to fruits, fucking deal with it.
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>>2392392
>case in point
>Kai Greene Banned From the 2015 Mr. Olympia
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>>2392392
Thankfully I didn't paint that shit, nor any of the other things you quoted. Mine was in the last thread. I'm not going to speak in defense of Brian though he's just as much of a fucking pervert as you are.
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>>2392350
>>2392354
>>2392357
>>2392359
>>2392392
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>>2392396
what did you draw? i can already tell whatever you like to draw you really want to fuck, you sick bastard.
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>>2392417
I drew your mom and I did want to fuck her but I took care of it last night.
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afternoon /ic/, I'm wondering about color

I was thinking of making her skin green, using red as an accent/blush to make her seem alive and not sickly... or should I just color her skin normally?
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>>2391618
STICKY
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>>2392439
sounds fine. just don't blend the red and green together unintentionally or you'll muddy it up, since complimentaries neutralize each other.
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>>2392040
I guess it was not appropriate word for that. I'm not familiar with English.
What i meant was that I don't have interest in realistic coloring techniques, rather color composition and style. like typical cartoon style. But I'm struggling with it.
Drawing epic muh style art just for testing color schema is not efficient I think so I'm currently doing this.
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>>2392439
it probably is too late, but the horn placement does not align with other features, if you want I can make a redline tomorrow.
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>>2391389
You need more basic shapes. Don't draw hips, draw circles. Don't draw legs, draw cylinders. Break that shit down into its most basic form when you are starting out.
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>>2392482
I cant wait that long, if you can explain it in words (and preferably post some of your own work so I know you know what you're talking about) go ahead
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This is one of many pages I have from high school doodling
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I'm pretty shit with colors, /ic/. Any advice on what I can do to improve?
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>>2392549
limit your color palette to three colors (+mixing) and make do.
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>>2392579
>make do
Dear God I fucking hate when people do this. It's make DUE.
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>>2392580
sry bro
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>>2392580
what. I looked it up and it is make do. how dare you lie to me. I trusted you, bro. no sry.
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>>2392549

idk I think the blues in the windows turned out okay, but it's strange that they would be so different. The ground level window color is weird though, and the height of the windows is weird/too high for basement windows, and first floor windows don't usually run all the way to the pavement. Also the perspective on the bigger round window is making it look bad.
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>>2392549
You should read James Gurney's "Color and Light," it's a great book and sounds like exactly what you need.
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>>2392601
I can't seem to find any good images of the pages I think you'd be most interested in. I'll see if I can find my copy.
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>>2392601
I think I might have downloaded that at some point. I'll look into that. Thank you.
>>2392579
>>2392600
I'll try to limit the color palette. Thanks
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>>2392596
I can't believe it. Now it is I who am sry.
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>>2392609
I found my copy, but if there's any particular points you'd recommend, I'd appreciate it. Or should I just dive right in and read from the start?
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>>2392614
all is forgiven, bro. now you can finally let the hate go.
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>>2392346
Not the painting guy, but that process never works for me D:
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Already know the rendered version is going to look like an overworked laboured piece of crap. Underpainting looks so cool though.
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I have to make myself practice with color so here goes.
How's this block in? I have a feeling it's oversaturated. Anything else?
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>>2392747
get some darks under that horse yo
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>>2392756

That'll happen later. This is just a fragment of full canvas to work the knight to finish. The background is just copymerged in place so I can properly judge values and stuff. Then I move the whole guy over to the actual psd file and blend him into the scene.
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>>2392769
Another thing to keep in mind is that horses dont have very big ears. It sort of looks like the great knight of the grassland water stream is riding a donkey. I think it would benefit you to move the ears more to the side and make them smaller.
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>>2392747
So don't render everything. You'd need to make it fit with some of the armor and other scenery, but you could leave that face as-is and it would be totally fine.

>>2392127
Sure thing.
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painted a self portrait. wanted to try linen canvas so i bought a small pre-stretched one.
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>>2392965
nice impasto
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>>2392994
Stop sucking your own dick.
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>>2392965
also heres a drawing of catt from the other day
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>>2393019
You've definitely skullfucked her, but not in the way you wanted.
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>>2393059
I'm glad someone else said it. She looks like a Zim character but wrong.
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>>2392753
Hey. If you want to get better with color, learn from life first and use real paint. The process of mixing colors will teach you a lot. Beyond that, warm vs cool applies to almost every painting, and you should read Color and Light by James Gurney, also check out ctrlpaint.com for digital painting tips. When you are painting digitally, build a palette before you start - either select colors from a master painting or scan swatches that you made with real paint, then you can mix colors on screen from your palette while you paint digitally. When you pick colors from scratch in photoshop you will often end up with unnatural color choices because the whole spectrum is laid out in front of you with many colors that you wouldn't get if you were using real paint or working from life, it's even harder when you are a beginner.
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>>2393116
Thanks.
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Am I doing this right?

>how does one flip image on iPad
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>>2391477
Is this horrible?
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>>2393122
What are some things I can do to create better shapes with line and pen? Cap is off for instance. Any practice methods?
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>>2393122
you didnt even try, im pretty sure youre baiting
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>>2393126
>draw a shit ton anon

I know I know
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>>2393127
It was a 5 minute still life, not bait
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>>2393131
come back when you have something worthwhile and not something you shat on to paper in 5 minutes please
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>>2391988
you using photos or...? I really enjoy the shit you post.
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>>2392808

Lol good point. Don't want the mighty lord somethingsomething from somewheresomewhere to be riding a donkey into battle.
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>>2393130
cute turtles
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how to render cloth
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>>2393220
Thanks anon, cupcake and tiny
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>>2393138
Just looking for criticism.
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How's it going? It's more stylized than anything
I'm having trouble with the lights/colors

It's leia
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>>2393252
how to render cloth
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This is actually starting to look really good. The edges are sloppy and vulgar but that's an easy fix later on. Crazy how you can actually get shit done when you buckle down and draw.
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>>2393300
Looks much worse, man. The only thing better is the crop. You took out almost every iota of energy you had going for you in this piece.
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>>2393300

>Crazy how you can actually get shit done when you buckle down and draw

You said it, man. Crazy progress is made when you get to work at the moment when you feel like you'd rather do anything worse.

Keep it up my dude!
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>>2393322

Aw fuck man are you serious? I mean a lot will still happen... horse ears and the textile stuff need plenty of work still... I dunno I have to keep morale high
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>>2393330
I liked it a little better before, but it still looks fine.

It really all depends on what sort of style you're going for with it.
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>>2393280
how to render cloth
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>>2393328

Thanks anon, means a lot! It's honestly been a year since I've felt good about painting and a bit of the joy is back I think.

>>2393335

It'll will all come together at the end (yeah right haha)... gotta tread carefully now
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Tell me if something is fucked while it's in the sketch phase, thanks in advance
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>>2393348

post said cloth? There's only a tiny bit showing in the pic of inmate-dude. I think cloth mainly just low specularity??
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>>2391107
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Acrylics. Tried not to do an underdrawing this time, it feels more satisfying this way.
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>>2391137
Thanks for the paintover! The way you did the bouncing light on her head is amazing, looks so warm. Now i definitely want to put your advices to work - brb, studying some bark and moss references.
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progress
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>>2393203
Thank you. It's always happy to know someone likes my thing.
Yes it's heavily referenced. I'm not good at imaginary drawing but trying hard for it.
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How do I achieve murky water effect?
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some scribbles from work today on some scrap paper.
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>>2393599
Not sure if this is some sort of stylization of yours... but the way you're doing your foundation lines/circles is wrong. Your eyes are too high up. Try drawing your circle lower.
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>>2393605
i assume you're talking about the front view near the bottom. and i need to work on that. not trying to do it as a stylization. will try to work on it~
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from life, 9 x 12, vine charcoal.
it's the best figure drawing i've ever done to this date. how can i improve further?

personally i want to get somewhere like Gustav Klimt's early sketches :s
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>>2393664
>it's the best figure drawing i've ever done to this date. how can i improve further?

you keep doing them
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>>2392055
fun composition, fun idea.
hit the books and keep doing anatomy. venture into value a little more. your painting right now is mostly gray with dark gray birds. i want to see a few drastic highlights and dramatic shadows. really push yourself.
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>>2393278
the only thing ive got is where you places the orb - it looks like it's just hanging out between the pointer and the thumb. lowering it just a little would make it feel more situated in the hand.
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Should have posted here sorry..
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>>2393665
that's a given. please give me specific advice.
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one more
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>>2393669
wat
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Made a thread but should have posted here.
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>>2393664
>>2393672
ok, more specific request:
this was done fairly quickly. i want to know how my intuition is, or if any specific anatomy part stands out in a bad way. so, is there anything for me to be aware of when i'm quickly sketching from life? any body part that i clearly lack knowledge in?
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>>2393669
>>2393673
How big is that coin?
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>>2393693
about 2.4cm, 1 inch
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>>2393666

ty friend will do
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This is my first painting of a humanoid. It's a kobold from Warcraft.
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going for a pouty eventually grizzled pissed dark knight in straight black and white with some grays
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>>2392482
if you're still up for it, I'd love that redline
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Opinions?
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>>2393913
Look at your finger joints. Spaghetti fingers look bad.
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best way to learn perspective?;
also, opinions please;
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Probably my favourite figure drawing I've done. Each pose was five minutes, hands and feet are kind of wonky. Thoughts?
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Getting out of my comfort zone with some drawing. Tear me apart!
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>>2393965
Did you have a reference? It looks a little rough to start judging to quick. Build shapes instead of lines. Really look at proportions.
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a figure drawing attempt after a break in a few years of no-drawing
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>>2393963
These look greeeaaat! Thumbs up
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>>2393950
left building has really huge windows
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Trying to paint a snapchat I got from memory.
I think it's turning out quite alright . But I'm sure you guys don't, crits?
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>>2394155
>some chick sent me a picture of her tits guys, no biggie tho happens all the time so i'll just do a painting of it cuz i'm a real artist guys #humblebrag
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>>2393777
this is really disgusting.
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Some progresso. Bg is more or less done.
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>>2394163
wow. this amount of jealousy.
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>>2394216

super muddy. like the textbook example of mudcore noobness.
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>>2393950
Start off with doing really simple one and two point perspective drawings
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>>2394220
I knew it. That post was total bullshit. Supposedly you're painting something from reference but you "casually" mention it's a snapchat, and oh it just happens to be boobs, cropped just enough not to show the "good bits". You think it's impressive to say you're painting it from memory but it's stupid because you're still using reference, you're just not using it right which would be using it to make corrections. You say you want critique but this is all supposed to be a tease to make all the d/ic/ks jealous so you didn't and obviously aren't going to post the reference because you don't actually want anyone to tell you what you did wrong you just wanted reactions. Only you didn't count on a femanon being the one to call you out, so your plan to discredit me by calling me jealous won't work. I have my own boobs I can reference if I want, I couldn't care less some camho sent you her pasty nubs. Check and mate faggot, go draw.
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>>2394239
How do I not?
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figure painting from today. the figure took about 2 hours
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>>2394245
no one cares. please stop.
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>>2394264
I'd advise you to remember that next time you think of making a stupid post like that one. Come here when you actually want to learn not to play school yard games.
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>>2394262
That's a big nose.
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>>2394245
what the fuck are you even going on about.

Whats with faggots getting all riled up about people posting art in the draw threads? Are you fucking autistic aspers?
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>>2394273
yup. mediterranean girls.
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>>2394273
don't worry, it was an artistic choice, not a mistake
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>>2393950
This is really cool. I really like the style you have going on.

Honestly I would crop out the entire left side and just keep the building with the trees and plants. Just cus thats where most of the interest is.

Also like the other anon said you have some weird scaling issues with the windows. They are like 2m x 2m huge.
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>>2394262
>today
>2015 by signature
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>>2394283
lol fuck. it's only february gimme a break haven't got used to 2016 yet
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>>2394278
it wasn't an artistic choice or a mistake, that's what her nose looked like
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>>2394255
learn how color works. work in lab spectrum (protects your saturation when you have a tendency to blend lots of brushstrokes ontop of eachother with low opacity). work without any pen-pressure-opacity. try to systematize your saturation, just to get a better feel for how to control it. similar to how simplifying values, and edges helps develop a feel for controlling it's variations. you know? like say pick 6 values, 3 in the shadows and 3 in the illuminated areas. now pick 6 levels of saturation, towards both warm and cold. now pick 4 type of edges (lost, soft, normal, sharp), and now you paint. and stick to those rules.
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>>2394288
>that's what her nose looked like
Doubtful. It's what you thought it looked like, not what was there. You'll never learn to draw what you see and not what you think you see.
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>>2394304
see
>>2392965
>>2391827
>>2391107

some people have big noses anon. you seem to be the one with notions of what people should look like.
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>>2394289
not op but thank you
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>>2394307
You can't see how terribly flawed and warped your own works are because of your inability to look at anything objectively, and thanks to your ego you will never get past that.
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>>2394277
You mean Jews.
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>>2394335
i can't tell jews, italians, and greeks apart. i was thinking of asking her but it seemed rude cause i really wanted to say "where does your nose come from"
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can't decide on which composition looks better. Drawings are shit but get the point across.
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>>2394245
haha wow.
>Only you didn't count on a femanon being the one to call you out
>femanon
sure. sure
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>>2394360
The top one makes more sense visually, and looks less clustered
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>>2394270
Well.
Could you give me some crits instead of shitposting like a total fucknugget?
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>>2394377
Shitposters deserve shitposts. Didn't you read what I said? How is anyone supposed to critique it without seeing the reference image you wanted everyone to beg you for. And since you have a reference image, why aren't you referring to it on your own to see how it could be better? That's the whole point of it being reference. You could be working on it independently, you could have posted the picture and painting together without the snapchat bit because it's not like uncovered boob photos are hard to come by so nobody cares where you got it and people could actually critique it, but you came here fishing cuz lel boobs.
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>>2394376
yeah I like the the top more. top has a better flow imo, but wanted to see what other people thought.
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>>2394289
>lab spectrum

?
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>>2394400

LAB instead of RGB / CMYK
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>>2393912
Are you that anon who drew the girl & wolf in the last thread? Anyway, love your stuff
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>>2394387
> How is anyone supposed to critique it without seeing the reference image
I don't have the snapchat. I didn't screencap it.
>why aren't you referring to it on your own to see how it could be better?
The whole point of this thread is to post for other people to crit.
>so nobody cares where you got it
Clearly you care where I got it.

And to end this.
My friend sent me a snapchat showing a necklace she had bought.
What you see in the painting is what you saw i n the snapchat.
Nothing sexual about it, I just thought It would look good painted.
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>>2392579
how dose it work ? like put three main colors and mix them and then eyedrop the results and use those new colors ?
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>>2394450
The fact that you went straight to "wow so jealous" instead of just saying "wait what I just want an honest critique" when I called you out tipped your hand but sure.
I don't know why you wouldn't save the picture if you were going to try to paint it, there isn't much anyone could say is right or wrong with it without knowing what it was supposed to look like. I will say it needs some texture or something to sharpen the edges because it looks like you airbrushed it all with a soft edge brush and it just looks blurry instead of blended. The necklace string doesn't look like it's being affected by gravity or laying on the forms of the chest and the pendant is slightly out of perspective and if it's metal, should have sharper edges. I don't know what the lighting was like, but I would desaturate some of the top planes and add some kind of purple or blue to the lower planes to make the shadows more interesting. Use a similar reference if you have to. Next time come correct.
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>>2392248
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please help me to be less shitty at figure drawinf
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>>2394488
These are wonderful. The shading on the woman is great your proportions are iffy though, she kinda looks wonky. I suggest, really looking at what you see and drawing that, not just thinking what you see, but besides that she's great. The man is a great start I see no issues with the proportions.
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study of a picture I found in the reference thread
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>>2394449
yes, that was one of mine. And thanks anon, it means a lot.
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My attempt at making Starfire with no ref. I know face is a bit strange. Drew on paper first and then went over with tablet.
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>>2394577
This image is giving me BoR flash backs.
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>>2394595
Whats BoR?
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absent-mindedly posted this in its own thread, waiting for that to disappear

reiterating from that thread; is there anything that strikes you as off with this image right off the bat? aside from the drapery issues and general wonkiness with the anatomy
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>>2394677
legs are a bit short but I like it
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>>2394751
that was intentional, was going for a chibi-ish look for lack of a better word, does look a bit wank now that you mention it though.

thanks for the feedback man!
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>>2394677
Why not learn how to draw a human, then a lizard, then combine the two and make your chibi character?
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Took a half hour, I still hate the eyes I did
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>>2394805
the head is off from the body but since theres pretty much no body that kinda doesnt matter. looks neat
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>>2394786
it's a grey-cheeked salamander that I drew w/ reference. I feel like I got the human*oid* part right, right?
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Once you get construction and anatomy at a decent level, how do you go about drawing the features on the body?
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Very, very messy, but I just wanted to get SOMETHING down on canvas for tonight. Looks like I need more practice with getting a figure's legs to balance how much I throw the upper body into an extreme pose, because right now these just look stiff.

>>2391988

Man, wish I could draw with that kind of flow.
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>>2391650
stop using line paper
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>>2394811 Thank you
Another small baby tiger study, took 20 minutes
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>>2394863
This one looks better, its very cute but the legs are off, maybe take more time on the understructure next time
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>>2394853
very nice. as you mentioned, the poses could be pushed more to help show the force of the action (esp for the right most one) but good work.
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some recent stuff
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>>2393019
holy shit just draw someone elsw, this is the third fucking time i see you in a thread drawing her
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>>2394879
I see dem grumps and hadels
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>>2394360

do like 10 more variations

I would include tyr's hand, maybe some more references to the mythos
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>>2394885
i got more, but they're shite
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>>2394900
I like em.
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>>2393667
thank you very much.

How about now?
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>>2394880
>third

you need to lurk more
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>>2394658

Bones of Ruin

A hyper autistic shitter that used to draw and post here.

http://jesse-the-art-maker.deviantart.com/

He would cloud draw threads with "sketches" every few minutes and expect lips on his dick.

The face in that post is screwed up in almost the exact same way BoR fucks up his faces.
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never posted on ic before, heres some sketchz
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I am taking another crack at this.
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>>2394900
I don't know if your purposely doing this, but you draw eyes really close together
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>>2394999
I really like these, cool stuff man. I'd love to see them colored
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Started a sketch. Not sure if i like this tho
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>>2395001
Looks way better than that first attempt.
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>>2395010
has potential, but your proportions are varying wildly.
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>>2395010
Hips look kind of strange, but I like this
She's cute
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>>2395014
Thanks! Ill try to fix that. I dont plan to render this soon because something is kinda not right and im trying to figure out what.

>>2395015
Ill fix that, thank you!!
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>>2395012
That's nice to know.
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>>2395005
how far away should they be?
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hands
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>>2394900
i love you
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Dont usually post here, but I guess I'll my current WIP.
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i added some color to this. i think im getting better at mixing colors on the canvas and getting interesting colors.
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>>2395103

you need to read up on color temperature
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>>2395060
It's all depending on your subject, but I've never seen humans with eyes that close. Eyes usually should be more far apart than the width of the subjects lips.
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redrawing the ****ing rocks
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>>2395130
>sining shit before its done
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>>2395080
and I love you anon!
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>>2395151
I haven't the slightest idea what i'm looking at.
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>>2395152
>signing shit
ftfy
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>>2395143
ah right, I read about that awhile ago. thanks
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>>2395159
c'mere
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>>2394465
You're obviously retarded
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>>2395078
i'd like to see more than hands from you.
>>2395130
i like this anon. keep it up.
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>>2394462
pretty much. pick a blue, a red, a yellow (for example) and mix from there. in traditional painting you would also use a black/white to adjust value but you can do that easily in photoshop without changing the hue. neutrals can be created by mixing complementary colors. the goal is a harmonious palette.
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Since it's sometimes difficult to tell how well you are in certain areas I was thinking of a away users could reply showing them how well they think their particular image scores in each area
Sometimes people comment things like "Your perspective is fucked" or "your sense of colour is great" and the artist hadn't realized

What do you think? How can I determine the scale of the graph?
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>>2391352
The way sample 4 and 5 blend together really speaks to me man, although i guess your Rf values probably should be further apart.
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That is a little better... not really beautifully designed shapes though
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>>2395476
I like the idea but there are two main problems I foresee. You couldn't make the scale in numbers because that's virtually as meaningless as saying it's shit. You'd probably have to make it something like beginner, amateur, intermediate, etc. The second problem is there are people here who'll call anything less than Mullins amateur or lower and other skewed perspectives so anyone getting a grid critique might still end up no greater informed of where they stand than before. It would be cool if there was some kind of standardized critiquing process though, it might cut down on some of the shitposting.
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requesting frog, size of a fly, with wings of a fly
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Cc is appreciated
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Is anyone going to bake some new bread?
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This is my artwork I'm working on in Painting III. It is a painting that was drawn from reference but we were asked to abstract it. It was basically a huge mobile with triangles and circles hanging. Critique the shit out of it.
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>>2396258
Don't use pure black man, it deadens everything. Mix the black with some other color. I was fond of mixing it with a really dark purple, blue, or green.
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>>2396269
Yeah, I was told the same thing today at a university Open House, I'm going to go back in and make it a pretty strong blue instead of black. It's brown, but it still looks like garbage to me. Thanks for the feedback, always looking for it.
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Flipped the right way, and cropped.
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So what do you guys think
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>>2396359
He looks like Detective Stabler. Also why is his face all the way pressed up against the edge of the canvas? If you haven't been, you should give yourself more room to work because running up against edges like that makes you distort things, and right now it looks like that half of his head is being pulled into a vacuum or something.
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