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Hi /ic/

please help me make this a great Gigery Steampunky octopus. Looking for crits and help with finishing touches, redlines, paintovers welcome!
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>>2373258
and you just couldn't post it in the critique thread with everyone else because you're just that special and better than everyone else?

back of the line kid
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>>2373258
Nice start. Looks a bit too giger with the color and texture. Put your own twist to it.

Also this >>2373330
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>>2373258
where is the steam?
where is the punk?

i see neither
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I like it OP, but it took me awhile to figure out it was popping out of water. Maybe it looks a bit too much like smoke?
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water should have reflections
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>>2373258
Warm up the submerged bits. Submerged things still don't have a darker value (usually) than things above surface.

You might consider clearly identify a light source to make it easier to read.
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If it were me, I would of changed the entire angle. So you could see more of the face of the octopus popping out of the water. It's a pretty boring angle in my opinion.
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