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Sup /ic/. First time poster, long-tiem lurker.
Plz rate: some of my old stuff. Oldest to newest.
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>>2363148
that's horrible
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>>2363150
How so? Plz be gentle with my autist pleb self...
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>>2363155
Its way too busy, there's no sense of what the focus of the drawing is.
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>>2363155
you need gesture drawing, asap
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>>2363182
also perspective. and to make it easier for you, don't think in lanes, that comes later, think what is higher, lower, to the right, to the left etc of the point of view while the point of view is where the one who see the action his eyes are located
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this is worse that the christ chan comics
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>>2363206
That's a compliment
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I'm not really great at crits but;

I dig your line quality and skilled use of geometry.

I'd say work on gesture. Also, your smiley face dude with the big hat seems... ummm... out of place compared to the grand context? Just my opinion but I feel like the goofiness of his style takes away from the rest. Like his style doesn't match the scene. I'd say if you like his feel, modify him to keep his original vibe but upgrade him for the setting. Just my opinion tho :)
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>>2363135
As a sketch this works really well

But for the rest its all too unfinished, they look like doodles form the back of school books that you have spent too long on. I dont want to be mean but maybe focus on doing lots of smaller works and get the fundamentals of the image worked out before trying to turn it into a finished work, and when you do >invest in better materials, brush and ink dip, nice fineliners pens good paper.

They show some pretty good foundations to build on keep it up!
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>>2363439
Lmao most of these posts have been doodles from back in high school...
I never draw that much, don't really care for the human form, and have a limited collection of my works posted, but I really thank you anons :
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>>2363374
for your input.
My smiley faced character is something I came up with in 8th grade..post apocalyptic scifi story, that I still sometimes wistfully doodle, but I'm nearly 28 now.

Welp, time to start practicing figures!
Oh yeah, I have some computer drawlins as well, brb
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>>2363812
deets of >>2363178
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>>2363822
femto attempt on a asus tablet
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>>2363817
moar deets of >>2363178
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You got something interesting interesting going on, but linework is just atrocious.
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Your attention to detail is admirable.
I think you should keep drawing.
Especially the figure.
Keep it up.
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Cool stuff, you'd be pretty great if you solidified some fundamentals.
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>>2363135
weren't you the anon talking shit in a murata thread until you posted some of your work and got roasted?
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>>2363148
You're that shitposter from the Murata thread, aren't you?
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Your shit is dope keep doing you and also try tagging, like big murals. all your drawings would look sick af on a big ass wall.. Insta famous
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>>2363812

>takes time to scan and upload shitty pictures and start a new thread to ask for feedback
>haha yeah these were just doodles I don't actually care
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