Sup /ic/. First time poster, long-tiem lurker.
Plz rate: some of my old stuff. Oldest to newest.
also perspective. and to make it easier for you, don't think in lanes, that comes later, think what is higher, lower, to the right, to the left etc of the point of view while the point of view is where the one who see the action his eyes are located
I'm not really great at crits but;
I dig your line quality and skilled use of geometry.
I'd say work on gesture. Also, your smiley face dude with the big hat seems... ummm... out of place compared to the grand context? Just my opinion but I feel like the goofiness of his style takes away from the rest. Like his style doesn't match the scene. I'd say if you like his feel, modify him to keep his original vibe but upgrade him for the setting. Just my opinion tho :)
As a sketch this works really well
But for the rest its all too unfinished, they look like doodles form the back of school books that you have spent too long on. I dont want to be mean but maybe focus on doing lots of smaller works and get the fundamentals of the image worked out before trying to turn it into a finished work, and when you do >invest in better materials, brush and ink dip, nice fineliners pens good paper.
They show some pretty good foundations to build on keep it up!
Lmao most of these posts have been doodles from back in high school...
I never draw that much, don't really care for the human form, and have a limited collection of my works posted, but I really thank you anons :
for your input.
My smiley faced character is something I came up with in 8th grade..post apocalyptic scifi story, that I still sometimes wistfully doodle, but I'm nearly 28 now.
Welp, time to start practicing figures!
Oh yeah, I have some computer drawlins as well, brb