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Try drawing the figure in a more interesting perspective, the way you drew the face and the upper torso begs for a 3/4 view unless you wanted a profile shot but keep in mind how far the torso can twist and turn.
Overlapping forms and being aware of what you cannot see in perspective will help you provide a more solid drawing otherwise you will end up with a flat and incorrect drawing.
As for the slime thing, try to have whatever it is interact with the figure some more for an exciting drawing, maybe?
Trying to do more dynamic sexing, also practicing ahegao
What are you doing on an orange board
Trying to work this shit out
I guess there will never be a good time for me to post my stuff here. There's always people who will complain about something. Why can't we just have nice things guys?
Also, latest colored artwork I've done. I would appreciate any critique to improve my future art.
Sorry for the big pic.
Same as your scene with Chun Li.
Over-saturated, poorly distinguishing between foreground focus and background scenery, and possibly in need of adjusting your color settings on the actual monitor.
Thanks. I'll grind all the stuff you said. I hope I'll get there soon.
Also, a question for everyone since I doubt that other anon will ever respond. What is surface anatomy? Materials rendering?
Someone says that the value here is off somehow, what should i do??
Not other anon...tried to fix it for you...maybe my way looks worse i dunno. I worked on the contrast a bit and added some red to the shadows and blue to the lighter areas because of blue diffuse light from the sky. Hue shifted their skin a bit similar to the way the background was done and fixed a couple details. I basically tried to reduce the sameness between the background and the characters differentiating them not only through increased contrast but also color since the human female skin mostly blended in with the background.
I really like how you draw the pose, face and the cum.
But for the boobs, here's my suggestion
I think your version looks better, but I had to use warm colors to emphasize the fact that they are in a desert and that it's hot. Probably I should have made their skin more highlighted and brighter, but it was hard because both characters have a dark complexity. Your addition of cold colors made the pic look more cold, which is something I wanted to avoid.
Anyway, thanks for your retouches and description of the process. It will help me a lot.
The legs and stomach area are not the right shape. I would do some feet studies just to learn more about structure. Otherwise its cool. Just my personal preference, but I would've gave the legs an angle instead of keeping them completely vertical.
That moment when you're realising your picture is turning into something really kinky and you start to feel uncomfortable
Just my two cents. Take it with a grain of salt.
first time i draw hentai, shit's hard yo, almost got busted while drawing it too. Posted originally in the monster princess thread
Okay I'll keep that in mind. Tbh I just started drawing porn so I've got to get use to draw lewd things and push it from artist to maybe more interactive? I do need to work on perspective and anatomy, I'll try to keep that all in mind.
Never been very good at drawing entangled bodies, but I feel like I'm really reaching with this leg, didn't think it through as much as I should have, was thinking with penis. Should I just separate them a bit more to give her room? I want this to work but I also don't want it to be really strange, and that's what it feels like currently.
Anatomy and gesture wise I like everything except the hands and lower legs. That's where this piece loses all its appeal, sorry anon.
As for the pose, you should have made the two girls interact better, like kissing each other or something like that.
Is there any way you can make the glowing parts of the demon girl less opaque? Or somehow more subdued? I think they should possibly be a little brighter, maybe with softer edges. I really like the idea but at first it didn't read well to me what it was supposed to be.
Been working on this for a few days whenever i had to take a shit... I spend about 20-25 mins drawing on the toilet since nobody will bother me. No refs at all, but i'm an eraser whore and i still have trouble setting up proportions, perspective, and page spacing. It's supposed to be Wonder Woman and some character named Amazon. Amazon is fucking huge so thats why there's a size difference. Sorry for the shitty scan.
You are asking me to make an alternate version, or you are giving me an advice how to make the artwork look better?
This was a commission and I don't know if the client would like me to alter the pic for other people.
wth dude if it's a commission and you can't make major changes, why did you post it for crit??? Anyway I think it would look better if you could soften it in some way because right now it doesn't really look like glowing parts, it looks like some sort of clashing color pattern. When i first saw it I thought it was someone attempting to give a redline. I don't know what exactly it needs to come across better, but as a guess I'll suggest just maybe putting a screen layer over it and brushing over it with a soft edge brush. I don't know though, maybe check out how it looks in Avatar for reference.
I wouldn't have been "bothered" by it except that you brought it up, and in context it seemed to say that you didn't want advice that would cause you to change this picture, which you didn't actually specify before. If you weren't going to apply it to this picture in particular, you didn't have to mention it anyway, you could've just asked what would make that effect read better or some other clarifying question, noted the reply, and been on about your business. Throwing out a "I can't change this" after you asked for crit is sending mixed signals to say the least, since you didn't say it was a commission and you couldn't really change it before so reasonably people will assume you want advice you are applying to this picture. I wasn't actually bothered by that, just confused. I am bothered by this though because this is what I was afraid would happen to you here. You're not learning anything but how to be overly defensive because you're mostly not getting valuable feedback.
I didn't mention the glowing parts. I am the one who posted that artwork and asked for critique so I could improve my coloring in general. That's all.
>I would appreciate any critique to improve my FUTURE art.
As for my reply about not being able to change stuff, I asked that because I wasn't sure if this anon >>2362846 wanted me to change the pic so he could enjoy it more, or he was giving me advice. I even asked him that here
>You are asking me to make an alternate version, or you are giving me an advice how to make the artwork look better?
I really don't understand what all this "fuss" is about. I thought I was clear enough in the first place. Sorry if my message didn't get through.
>I am bothered by this though because this is what I was afraid would happen to you here. You're not learning anything but how to be overly defensive because you're mostly not getting valuable feedback.
I missed this part. This is kind of funny to me, since I don't understand where in this thread I came across ass overly defensive.
I would appreciate a quote, since I really have no idea what you are talking about.
It's all been me, just one person talking to you about this, and I know you didn't mention the glowing parts, I did. My critique was that the glowing lines don't look like glowing lines to me. Yes you said that line about improving your future art but that's pretty vague so I don't think it was unreasonable that you were going to get some critique suggesting changes to the pic you posted. You asked me to clarify whether I was suggesting you make an alternate version or make the artwork - note you said THE artwork, not MY artwork or FUTURE artwork- better so I still thought you were looking for crit on the picture at hand, but right after that you told me you can't change anything which confused me, but I said anyway I'm suggesting an improvement not an alternate. And I said you're being defensive because you're bothering to argue me down about why I should've known not to suggest you change this picture when you already knew you weren't going to so you could've just moved on.
>I'm suggesting an improvement not an alternate
That's all I was asking since I didn't understand your question. I wanted to respond, because I didn't want to be rude not replying to that. And because I didn't want to be rude, you ended up saying that I am overly defensive?
I wasn't arguing you down. I was trying to be polite, because I though you were asking for an alternate version.
I hope we are clear now.
I need help with deciding what signage to put on this necklace I am designing for a character. The character's backstory is that he was once a prince but he was captured by the enemy and then turned into a cuck and feminized. Can you guys help me out by givign me suggestions on what humiliation signage I can include?
So far I've got as a list of options:
Making things look as though they're glowing is tricky. First it has to be dark enough in the scene so that you can actually tell that it's glowing. It also requires that the glowing object casts light on other surrounding objects which is why it doesn't work too well in a brightly lit scene. I think that maybe adding a tiny bit of SSS on the immediate surrounding skin on the parts where the glowing is the strongest would help reinforce the idea. I think this is what the other guy was suggesting.
No no don't bother, he only wants critique on his future work. Write a critique for the next picture he's going to post, and when he posts it, be sure to reply with a critique for the next one.
And then I am the one arguing.
I intended that genuinely.
Should I have said I hopa I am clear enough, so that you wouldn't be offended?
Seriosuly anon, you got triggered by your own reading incomprehension and by assuming stuff I never said.
I said a few times already what I meant by "refusing" to do an alternate version. But no, you go on and on and on about me being wrong.
What's the matter with you?
I said we're clear and gave you a thumbs up, is that me going on and on? I thought we were done. And I don't think I see the word "wrong" in any of my posts. Talk about assuming things that weren't said. You did however say you were looking for critique on your future work didn't you? I was merely clarifying to the other anon what you clarified to me, that you don't intend to make changes to this picture, you just want critique for future pieces. That's all. Good luck with your future work, BBC.
No you weren't merely claryfiying stuff
>No no don't bother, he only wants critique on his future work. Write a critique for the next picture he's going to post, and when he posts it, be sure to reply with a critique for the next one.
Which is clear sarcasm.
Before that you posted a clear sarcastic reaction gif.
So no, I don't buy it.
I don't have the time nor the mental strength to argue anymore.
Say what you want. I am not going to reply to posts that are unrelated to artwork anymore.
Let me give you a final advice. Judge artworks, stop judging artists.
Ignore this shit BBC, keep up with the good work, I really like your style, and I'm sure I'm not the only one, and I'm pretty sure that's true because I can just imagine how many followers you have, and you also make money doing what you love because you deserve that.
Why waste time with those cunts? Just ignore it
Yes, poor victimized BBC. If he really thought it was clear he wouldn't be using these crits to edit this pic and was just noting them for the future use it should've been clear I didn't get that in my first post. If he really wanted to reply just to be polite, having made his intent clear, he could've simply said 'thanks'. But he asked me to specify how he should edit the pic, saying he wouldn't edit it simultaneously. Asking that kept me thinking he wanted crit for this pic so I was confused by him yet saying he didn't. He needn't have asked for specifics if he wasn't editing, and my understanding that intent was moot. He could've noted my crit to work on his effect for later and moved on instead of making sure I knew I was an idiot for thinking he'd change the pic he actually posted as he often does. I even tried to give my suggestion gently by making it a question and compliment sandwiching it with "i really like the idea" but fine, fuck me for trying. Never will again.
Ass and legs look like she is floating above the water and not being supported by the floor of a bath.
I'm a n00b so don't necessairly know how to fix it, I guess you could make ass lines thiner to indicate they are further away and maybe tilt floor a bit in perspective.
Hey! I can't decide which thumb to go forward with. Any input?
I was trying to draw humanized ponies and was worried what I sketched was too much like his. I really like his stuff but I don't want to rip him off. I was gonna ask if it was too similar and for help redesigning it but I think I'm just going to give them human faces so never mind. Thanks though.
I think you are too paranoid anon. Rocky's drawing technique is pretty common and his style isn't that original either. He adds his own flavor to something that you can find elsewhere already. And that you wont ever be able to rip off, unless you start intentionally copying him.
Plus Rocky is the kindest guy ever. I'm sure he'd see you having a similar approach to his as an homage and not a rip off.
Just ask him directly on tumblr what he thinks of this. I am sure he'll say something similar to what I did.
You're probably right. He had reblogged someone else's pony stuff that was similar to his and both designs were pretty close to the show, so I could probably get by on it. When I looked at mine again later I just felt like the face didn't match the body and I want the body more. I can just enjoy that face on Rocky's stuff.
Couldn't pinpoint a fix for the arm even though it's looking weird. Jizz tips would be sweet.
I just wanna say this is such a boring porn piece.
For one, you're obviously hiding your inability to draw hands and legs by not drawing the hands and legs and making a more interesting position.
Since porn is all visual, if it isn't interesting to look at you're failing. Give her a better pose, look at pin ups for reference.
Also while I know its stylized, tits don't work like that unless they're implants.
First time drawing stuff like this. Need your help cause I can't see any mistakes, while i know there are some.
aay ripper, left arm does looks pretty short, noses a bit low and the right hand fingers look wonky
Pin-up of my Dnd character...
I don't draw figures too often, so I know some of the anatomy is a bit off.
Looking for some crit before I go to refined lines
I don't understand how you get smooth ass lines.
Drawing at 4k uhd at 72dpi. In anime, are those lines all really in 1 go? Every single frame too? Holy shit. Is there a secret to a continues straight/curved line that I don't know? A pro-tip?
Bonus question: Is there a good line of action for this girl? (Google Destroyer hime) She's literally missing her legs from the thighs down. All of the poses look stiff.
You are still a beginner, it's normal you don't see mistakes.
The main problems with this are stiff poses, bad line work, insecure gesture and really really bad perspective and thus sense of depth.
Porn isn't easy and it's something beginners will never be able to do right. Sorry anon.
Has anyone got that Paypal security guide infographic?
Don't your cohabitants get suspicious when you stay on the toilet for so long? Nothing's as horny as drawing steamy porn wile there's aktion in the hallway. I'd propose to arrange that room for getting enough time to put it away when someone enters. This problem taught me fast sketching.
Concerning the eraser delusion; I wouldn't erase too much. At least in the sketchpart. Starting from an, to me important part of the scene, for example the face, I then tried to develop different poses and later on, varied the proportions - all in that same picture. Just to avoid loosing a good idea or form. and just erased as far as to continue with another idea.
Furthermore it's not important to have the full figure shown, except you need the long leg to make some point clear, e.g., Amazon is much bigger. (even thought their heads are almost equal in size-if you reckon the shortening from the perspective). That was the innovation coming from japan at the beginning of the last century; It's the cut-out detail that tells enough about it all. If this should seriously be a problem for you start with a rough shape and a light pencilstroke you can easily erase that later. And if you think this makes you a whore I can even push a little further, ever heard of eraser-stencil? This is perfection!
P2; (non-erased linework)
Exaggeration especially with toon-like porn is a good point for starting - make wonderwom smaller. and she'd fit perfectly(no need to cut off her head so unpolitely).
Add some props, dress or other stuff and you won't have to explain, "It's supposed to be this or that..."
And here's a fundamental criq; Who's the domiator? I may be old-fashioned, but this ought to be clear to me! If both are, it's gonna get a fight, if none is, it could end up real boring. So i'll have to guess it's wonderwomb; she sits on top and rides the Valkyrie, looking deranged as if she was tired? But her legs, damn they look like the copy of a bathing beauty from a 50ies magazine. Make wonderglue grab her huge legs and force em down to show she's really in controll!!!(and please forgive me allthat wonderstuff)...
This dog looks really close to some sort of border collie mix.
O.K. - I'll try to be more, you know... . what you probably meant was, that it looks shitty and scratchy. But you read the comment, yes I know it's long. Try anyway. Non-erased line-work had a meaning. Now I hope I havent ashamed you too much. But if ouy just doodle through the pix go ahead , and if you're looking for something serious to jack-off, try the sexy beuatyful women or adult requests nad shut the f...
Thing I did for /y/
I think this is pretty cute, my main issue is the blobby undefined heads. I have no idea what species I'm looking at. The feet are tiny and very flat looking. The bottom also looks kind of bored.
Her tits are horrible and disproportional unless you actually want her right tit to be twice as big as her left one
My suggestion is that you should actually study a bit of figure drawing, download some pics of cute girls or something and dedicate a week to mastering their forms
One of the best things I've drawn in a while, most of the base colours are on so I can get a sense of moving forward, but I'm still open to fixing obvious things like the hands. Thoughts?
here's a redline. right girls eyes are misaligned. left girl's serratus anterior is looks like a tree branch and her tricep is wrong too.
Looks unfinished but the done part is smooth and proportional.
Lord I really shouldn't use such shitty paper.
Friend said I draw dicks weirdly and as he has one and I don't I'm concerned about how I draw dicks. I thought they where ok and I don't aim for realism salami but /ic/ where am I going wrong?
I guess $30 for eight frames with flat colors ans no background. It took twice as long to render as it did to draw so that may double the price.
This is seriously such an easy problem to fix, just find some photo references for cocks (there's tons on /hm/)! Draw some peen studies from refs => expand your visual library => profit!
Forgot to mention, even if you're not going for realism in your drawings, in order to draw sexy the general anatomy of the genitals needs to be in place for it to work. Stylizing is never an excuse not to look at real-life references.
yeah, this one? unfortunately never got to finish it because the guy never paid me.
You're really good I really like your work, I've never been much into drawing pr0n, but do you have any ideia how could I start painting and render the left one? or both maybe, I have no ideia how to pass from a line to a painting as im too newb on that,i I drew on paper for like, 4 yeras, and half of 2015 I started to use a cheap tablet.
Considering how dead the threads have been, and bunch of low quality stuff, and considering I like the subject manner:
You're a faggot. I'd say post your work but I literally don't care because I don't draw.
Long time Doodler just got a graphics tablet and since I've started visiting /ic and /i I seem to be almost exclusively drawing this kinda stuff. I really need someone to point out what I'm doing wrong and where to go would help even more thanks !
cry me a river tardo.
if my post will make that idiot and other useless fags that "don't even draw" (his words) stop coming here, then thank fucking god for me.
I didn't redline or criticize that because other anons already did that and I simply didn't have anything to add.
now fuck off before you hurt yourself, princess.
Shut up and draw faggot. There is no reason why that comment should have triggered you. Check you're worthless bitter attitude. You should know /ic/ is filled with beginners. Stop being a dumbass.
Apparently bones will respond to the weight of the individual, so for bigger girls their femurs' shafts will actually be larger as well, so that's something to consider in any anatomy studies you do for this sort of thing. Literally look into where fat is most prominently deposited on the female body (pelvis, ass, thighs) and you should probably already have a folder of fat chicks to reference with regards to your preferred body type. Experiment with your figure construction and see what's appealing
judging solely by the pic you posted, that's pretty reasonable in terms of size, otherwise if you wanna be going like SSBBW then god help you son
one thing is being a beginner (are you one, little shithead? oh, are you? o you poor little buhgeener, are you okay? awwww, you are so cute!!!), another is being a beggar. a dumbass that doesn't even draw and his sole purpose of being here is to fap to shitty drawn porn and ask for artists' galleries, because he thinks with his fucking dick instead of his head.
now go back to drawing your stick figures you little buhgeener.
tl;dr get a brain or fuck off
You're a fucking beginner. You being here, or on this board means you're a beginner. Your shitty know it all attitude tells me you're a beginner, despite probably having tried for so long. You have not displayed a single sign of being more skilled or more knowledgeable, you've just talked down to people with shitty writing and zero input.
You think you look smart by shitting on everything, but everyone who isn't jacking off to themselves thinks you're fucking stupid and a joke. Keep talking because I like hearing little faggots like you talk big despite having nothing to show for it.
You're fuckin pathetic nigga
Thank you so much, saved to my folder that is completly amazing, Actually I tried to paint it But I think I oversaturated :|
any tips of what im doing wron/do you have a blog?
I can say that I have a grasp of anatomy but I am still not confident if what I am doing is right or wrong so yeah I need to learn a lot. That plus coloring/shading/hue/etc are needed too so I might have to experiment on that. Any critique are welcome.
>not too nsfw
Go all out faggot make him draw boi pussy.
>want fallout husbando body pillow
>do not want shota bb
life is tough
thanks, but I never know where I should use the hard edges, how they come up?
Like in shadows some of them are hard and some are really smooth
And what is pillow shading, i never heard of that , sry.
Help me internet wierdos, I cannot get this guy's ass to look right
Made some progress, think he's a bit more anatomical now.
Not that anyone gives a shit.
Get your form straight
Look at the angle that the body is supposed to be titled at, parts of second tit are meant to be visible at this point
The reason why it looks like female tit's is not because it's too big, nor will shrinking it fix it, just try to actually fix the figure
I think your tits are placed a bit too high on the body
also a tad bit of realistic weight on the close up is a lot better than full perk up of the full body
Try to do similar tits on full body and lower the tits
Things are uh... getting a little out of hand now
>I simply know my shit when it comes to art
If you honestly did, you wouldn't have the free time to be wasting your time here. You're full of shit and you aren't fooling anyone. You're just another random in an ocean of medicore artists who don't have a real name for themselves. You're in the same spot everyone else here is. Your ego makes no sense. That's why you're a joke.
ok, just sharing one of my drawings, which obviously is far from perfection...
>The same old argument that good artists would never come to ic.
They don't. The only ones who do are low to mid intermediate level internet nobodies with too much time on their hands. They have no real presence in the art world or industry. You're one of them.
Don't try to explain it to him. He's a retard. It's just funny seeing him try to defend himself even though he knows he's worthless as an artist. Hence, his bitter attitude and why he's here shitting on beginners to feel better about himself.
keks intensify. yeah, EVERY good artist out there and in here (I for example) have a real presence in the art world or industry. hahaha, you crack me up, my dear autistic friend.
keep posting your butthurt. I'm actually enjoying this.
You've never done anything to prove that you're a decent artist, and thus you have no means to say that your existence is proof of some amazing artists who just have no presence and BOY I JUST CAN'T CATCH A BREAK HUH? IT REALLY SUCKS BECAUSE I'M SOOOOOO GOOOOOOD, Y'KNOW?
are you dumb or have you zero reading comprehension.
i am not shitting on beginners because they are beginners, you dumb faggot. i am shitting only on stupid people who don't understand that this thread is not suited for beginners.
and all this butthurt from everyone who is against me here, started from a post where I wasn't even shitting on beginners, but on beggars that lurk here and try to get links to people's blogs.
i don't hate beginners. i hate only stupid people. people like you.
Porn is among the lowest form of art there is because it's commercial trash. You don't need to be that good at art to sell porn. Why else do you think artists that aren't worth shit and aren't even good resort to doing it just to get some kind of following? You're a moron for trying to preach "git gud" in the a porn thread because the standards for what sells and what gets attention isn't and never has been high.
I don't need to prove you anything. when i post critique i don't act like the douchebag I'm at the moment. especially if i do redlines. i don't want to risk ruining my reputation because a bunch of idiots trigger me.
right now i am simply arguing about the uselessness of beggars that "don't even draw" but keep coming here to ask for gallery links of shitty arists because they can't think with anything but their dicks. oh yeah, I'm also saying that beginners shouldn't come here, since porn is too hard to grasp for them.
but I definitely understand your reasoning, since if beginners stopped posting, you would have to stop posting too.
well,. I like these threads, sometimes they tend to encourage me to draw again...
sure thing buddy. every kind of art can be drawn by beginners. good art and especially good porn art is something beginners can't even comprehend. but yeah, sure. keep telling yourself that you can draw porn, you are gonna make it one day. soon you will start making big bucks with your beginner level commercial porn. everyone will start throwing money at you. you are great.
it's lazy retards like you that make porn art a joke. fuck off cancer.
>it's lazy retards like you that make porn art a joke. fuck off cancer.
Cry me a river you worthless faggot. Porn art and the people who obsess over it tend be virgins and/or have next to no active sex life. That's why it's commercial garbage with low standards.
would you say this is clean enough to be inks or is it obvious that this is still pencils?
This is great as it is anon. Even though there are some parts with double lines I think you don't need to fix that, since this kind of gesture gives character to your style. By refining this kind of "errors" you will just lose spontaneity (check the pic I attached to see what I mean) to fix details that will never bother anyone.
Also, I really love your stylization. Keep this shit up anon.
Also, regarding my pic. Yesterday when I finished drawing this I didn't see any major errors that would bother me, but today I am just, holy shit this looks so fucking flat. Now, the problem is I don't know what is the main culprit for the flatness. The lineart (I probably spent too much time refining it and I lost the spontaneity of the sketch) or bad perspective/anatomy (I guess her pelvis should be a bit higher, but I don't think that's the reason for the flatness) or maybe everything combined?
The lineweight seems a bit too uniform, it almost has a art noveau look to it. Also there are some details like the sweat drops on her thighs that do not appear to follow the underlying form and makes the legs look like card board cut outs
they say i draw penises too big
but it only makes me draw them bigger
You are very good at copying anyme simbols when it comes to faces (you actually manage to make a decent perspective), but you are bad when it comes to the rest of the body both with the anatomy and perspective. Your gesture is pretty stiff too.
tl;dr you have the same problem any other beginner tier porn artist has. good at copying anime faces and very bad fundamentals.
I think it's kind of absurd to just dismiss this as 'beginner's work' with somehow horrible fundamentals. But then.... maybe that's just cos he's better than me :/
The fact is people make a living drawing worse porn than this, and this image has a lot of character and is pretty hot! All it really needs in my opinion is to get the lines on the cock tidied up slightly and try to think of a more interesting composition perhaps?
danke, i tried inking it since i normally don't cause it never turns out okay but i think i may have actually figured something out this morning (other than holy poo do i need to study hands a lot)
once i figure out colors (and hands (probably feet as well (a whole lotta shit still most likely ;-; )) then i'll have earned a name
>The fact is people make a living drawing worse porn than this
>make a living
That's a bit of a stretch imo. Yeah, there are artists that make money by selling worse stuff than what anon showed here, but doing some side money or making a living is a different thing. (and b4 Shadman lol)
But any way you put this, anon's work still has the flaws I mentioned.
And I'm sure if anon put a bit of time into proper study, he'd actually be pretty good.
Yeah, that's probably the main problem with this pic. I simply cannot into thin lineart. I probably am not accurate enough to make it look confident. I will probably just switch back to my usual thick lineart, because I can handle it easier.
Something I'm still working on (kinda), I think the anatomy is ok ( by my standards) but the lighting is all over the place and the colours are bland
in b4 loomis in b4 smudge tool abuse
This is gorgeous both color and lineart-wise. The only thing I would call a "flaw" is the stiff/boring Elsa's pose and facial expression. You could have made her back more arched and the expression more lustful or excited. But then this pic would be perfect and we can't have that, can we.
Keep up the great work anon.
apart from erasing the whole thing kek
no but seriously what can help me here? loomis? her neck and his legs are a nightmare I can't get them normal
Please go to the beginner thread or better yet acknowledge the human figure and do a whole bunch of references before you even get near the beginner thread.
Sucks to hear but its the nicest way of putting it.
Need some help with this pose. I've never seen it before and I can't find reference for it. Trying to get the arms pulled back.
I think it reads pretty well right now, actually. I don't know if you'd be able to exaggerate the shoulders coming out more without it looking like it's breaking the anatomy of it.
Trying to figure out how to use hard/soft edges.
Do you guys just use a feathered brush or eraser for it? That's what I've been doing, but I feel like there might be a better way.
It's not begging to ask for a blog, you moron. You want us to go to /aco/ and ask for those guys' blogs when they've posted in this fucking thread?
/aco/ isn't even a request board. Just go away, retard.