PORN THREAD

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>>2355592
Try drawing the figure in a more interesting perspective, the way you drew the face and the upper torso begs for a 3/4 view unless you wanted a profile shot but keep in mind how far the torso can twist and turn.

Overlapping forms and being aware of what you cannot see in perspective will help you provide a more solid drawing otherwise you will end up with a flat and incorrect drawing.

As for the slime thing, try to have whatever it is interact with the figure some more for an exciting drawing, maybe?

>>2359458
I just can't take you seriously. Ever.

>>2359247
As a non-porn artists, I greatly appreciate you guys not using a porno OP image, it could be a bit awkward with roomates

>>2359458
Are you that fucking sperg?

>>2359457
oh my god

>>2359457
Mikufag is actually better than you and that's an accomplishment.

its a bbc-chan thread not a porn thread, scumbag.

>>2359473
kill yourself.

>>2360124

Fuck off bbc-queer.

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WIP'd

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Trying to do more dynamic sexing, also practicing ahegao

>>2359473
What are you doing on an orange board

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Trying to work this shit out

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>>2360124
>>2360147
I guess there will never be a good time for me to post my stuff here. There's always people who will complain about something. Why can't we just have nice things guys?

Also, latest colored artwork I've done. I would appreciate any critique to improve my future art.
Sorry for the big pic.

>>2361761
surface anatomy is horrible, colors are raping my eyes, makes it really hard to focus with such vibrant characters with a vibrant background.

>>2361585
I love how soft and warm the colors and shapes are. Please continue.

>>2361766
Not sure what surface anatomy is. Regarding the colors, is it just saturation, or a poorly chosen color palette?

>>2359457

you're getting there

>>2361773
Same as your scene with Chun Li.
Over-saturated, poorly distinguishing between foreground focus and background scenery, and possibly in need of adjusting your color settings on the actual monitor.

>>2361811
Thanks. I'll grind all the stuff you said. I hope I'll get there soon.

Also, a question for everyone since I doubt that other anon will ever respond. What is surface anatomy? Materials rendering?

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Someone says that the value here is off somehow, what should i do??

>>2361850
Lighten everything up. Your colours look muddy.

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>>2361857
okay, like so?

>>2361761
Did you recycle an old image?

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>>2361761
Not other anon...tried to fix it for you...maybe my way looks worse i dunno. I worked on the contrast a bit and added some red to the shadows and blue to the lighter areas because of blue diffuse light from the sky. Hue shifted their skin a bit similar to the way the background was done and fixed a couple details. I basically tried to reduce the sameness between the background and the characters differentiating them not only through increased contrast but also color since the human female skin mostly blended in with the background.

^ Sorry forgot to mention i mainly did the corrections using overlay layers in SAI

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>>2361537
I really like how you draw the pose, face and the cum.
But for the boobs, here's my suggestion

>>2361861

why no horse cunt tho?

>>2361893
original poster's tits look way more natty imo, yours look like plastic balloons

>>2361878
Nope.

>>2361883
I think your version looks better, but I had to use warm colors to emphasize the fact that they are in a desert and that it's hot. Probably I should have made their skin more highlighted and brighter, but it was hard because both characters have a dark complexity. Your addition of cold colors made the pic look more cold, which is something I wanted to avoid.
Anyway, thanks for your retouches and description of the process. It will help me a lot.

>>2361893
>>2361997
seconded, your tits look fake, original tits are good enough, no need to change them.
hands, on the other hand...

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>>2361525
The legs and stomach area are not the right shape. I would do some feet studies just to learn more about structure. Otherwise its cool. Just my personal preference, but I would've gave the legs an angle instead of keeping them completely vertical.

>>2362093
Thanks for the redline, that foreshortened angle had plenty of issues. Plus plumping her up made me lose structure/proportion. I always wind up making legs longer.

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That moment when you're realising your picture is turning into something really kinky and you start to feel uncomfortable

>>2362193
I love it when that happens.

>>2362314
redlining miku's crap is useless

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>>2359458
Just my two cents. Take it with a grain of salt.

>>2362321
kek okay

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>>2359247
first time i draw hentai, shit's hard yo, almost got busted while drawing it too. Posted originally in the monster princess thread

>>2362193
nobody cares about you being that much of a sperg

>>2362328
Thank you!

>>2359458
Okay I'll keep that in mind. Tbh I just started drawing porn so I've got to get use to draw lewd things and push it from artist to maybe more interactive? I do need to work on perspective and anatomy, I'll try to keep that all in mind.

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Never been very good at drawing entangled bodies, but I feel like I'm really reaching with this leg, didn't think it through as much as I should have, was thinking with penis. Should I just separate them a bit more to give her room? I want this to work but I also don't want it to be really strange, and that's what it feels like currently.

>>2362093
perpsective is wrong and anatomy is wrong.

looks like you cant into foreshortning either

>>2361761
10/10
Is a incredible art

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check out my hardcore pornography

>>2362518
Anatomy and gesture wise I like everything except the hands and lower legs. That's where this piece loses all its appeal, sorry anon.
As for the pose, you should have made the two girls interact better, like kissing each other or something like that.

>>2362530
herpidy derpidy, anon?
you finished all your assburger medicine?

>>2361761
Is there any way you can make the glowing parts of the demon girl less opaque? Or somehow more subdued? I think they should possibly be a little brighter, maybe with softer edges. I really like the idea but at first it didn't read well to me what it was supposed to be.

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Been working on this for a few days whenever i had to take a shit... I spend about 20-25 mins drawing on the toilet since nobody will bother me. No refs at all, but i'm an eraser whore and i still have trouble setting up proportions, perspective, and page spacing. It's supposed to be Wonder Woman and some character named Amazon. Amazon is fucking huge so thats why there's a size difference. Sorry for the shitty scan.

>>2362846
You are asking me to make an alternate version, or you are giving me an advice how to make the artwork look better?
This was a commission and I don't know if the client would like me to alter the pic for other people.

>>2363266
wth dude if it's a commission and you can't make major changes, why did you post it for crit??? Anyway I think it would look better if you could soften it in some way because right now it doesn't really look like glowing parts, it looks like some sort of clashing color pattern. When i first saw it I thought it was someone attempting to give a redline. I don't know what exactly it needs to come across better, but as a guess I'll suggest just maybe putting a screen layer over it and brushing over it with a soft edge brush. I don't know though, maybe check out how it looks in Avatar for reference.

>>2363273
>why did you post it for crit???
>>2361761
>I would appreciate any critique to improve my future art.

I appreciate the comment. Didn't even think that anyone would be bothered by that.

>>2363284
I wouldn't have been "bothered" by it except that you brought it up, and in context it seemed to say that you didn't want advice that would cause you to change this picture, which you didn't actually specify before. If you weren't going to apply it to this picture in particular, you didn't have to mention it anyway, you could've just asked what would make that effect read better or some other clarifying question, noted the reply, and been on about your business. Throwing out a "I can't change this" after you asked for crit is sending mixed signals to say the least, since you didn't say it was a commission and you couldn't really change it before so reasonably people will assume you want advice you are applying to this picture. I wasn't actually bothered by that, just confused. I am bothered by this though because this is what I was afraid would happen to you here. You're not learning anything but how to be overly defensive because you're mostly not getting valuable feedback.

>>2363299
I didn't mention the glowing parts. I am the one who posted that artwork and asked for critique so I could improve my coloring in general. That's all.
>I would appreciate any critique to improve my FUTURE art.

As for my reply about not being able to change stuff, I asked that because I wasn't sure if this anon >>2362846 wanted me to change the pic so he could enjoy it more, or he was giving me advice. I even asked him that here
>>2363266
>You are asking me to make an alternate version, or you are giving me an advice how to make the artwork look better?

I really don't understand what all this "fuss" is about. I thought I was clear enough in the first place. Sorry if my message didn't get through.

>>2363299
>I am bothered by this though because this is what I was afraid would happen to you here. You're not learning anything but how to be overly defensive because you're mostly not getting valuable feedback.

I missed this part. This is kind of funny to me, since I don't understand where in this thread I came across ass overly defensive.
I would appreciate a quote, since I really have no idea what you are talking about.

>>2363307
It's all been me, just one person talking to you about this, and I know you didn't mention the glowing parts, I did. My critique was that the glowing lines don't look like glowing lines to me. Yes you said that line about improving your future art but that's pretty vague so I don't think it was unreasonable that you were going to get some critique suggesting changes to the pic you posted. You asked me to clarify whether I was suggesting you make an alternate version or make the artwork - note you said THE artwork, not MY artwork or FUTURE artwork- better so I still thought you were looking for crit on the picture at hand, but right after that you told me you can't change anything which confused me, but I said anyway I'm suggesting an improvement not an alternate. And I said you're being defensive because you're bothering to argue me down about why I should've known not to suggest you change this picture when you already knew you weren't going to so you could've just moved on.

>>2363322
>I'm suggesting an improvement not an alternate
That's all I was asking since I didn't understand your question. I wanted to respond, because I didn't want to be rude not replying to that. And because I didn't want to be rude, you ended up saying that I am overly defensive?
I wasn't arguing you down. I was trying to be polite, because I though you were asking for an alternate version.
I hope we are clear now.

I need help with deciding what signage to put on this necklace I am designing for a character. The character's backstory is that he was once a prince but he was captured by the enemy and then turned into a cuck and feminized. Can you guys help me out by givign me suggestions on what humiliation signage I can include?

So far I've got as a list of options:

Slut
Whore
Bitch
Cunt
Sissy
Cuck
Slave
Wench

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>>2363325
Sure BBC, we're clear.

Making things look as though they're glowing is tricky. First it has to be dark enough in the scene so that you can actually tell that it's glowing. It also requires that the glowing object casts light on other surrounding objects which is why it doesn't work too well in a brightly lit scene. I think that maybe adding a tiny bit of SSS on the immediate surrounding skin on the parts where the glowing is the strongest would help reinforce the idea. I think this is what the other guy was suggesting.

>>2363331
No no don't bother, he only wants critique on his future work. Write a critique for the next picture he's going to post, and when he posts it, be sure to reply with a critique for the next one.

>>2363330
And then I am the one arguing.
I intended that genuinely.
Should I have said I hopa I am clear enough, so that you wouldn't be offended?
Seriosuly anon, you got triggered by your own reading incomprehension and by assuming stuff I never said.
I said a few times already what I meant by "refusing" to do an alternate version. But no, you go on and on and on about me being wrong.
What's the matter with you?

>>2363331
I totally understand what he is suggesting, and I already said I appreciate his comment (as I do yours). We are arguing basically because he can't understand the concept of critiquing an artwork, so that I can improve in the future on current fails, as you can see here >>2363333

>>2363334
I said we're clear and gave you a thumbs up, is that me going on and on? I thought we were done. And I don't think I see the word "wrong" in any of my posts. Talk about assuming things that weren't said. You did however say you were looking for critique on your future work didn't you? I was merely clarifying to the other anon what you clarified to me, that you don't intend to make changes to this picture, you just want critique for future pieces. That's all. Good luck with your future work, BBC.

>>2363339
No you weren't merely claryfiying stuff
you said
>No no don't bother, he only wants critique on his future work. Write a critique for the next picture he's going to post, and when he posts it, be sure to reply with a critique for the next one.
Which is clear sarcasm.
Before that you posted a clear sarcastic reaction gif.

So no, I don't buy it.

I don't have the time nor the mental strength to argue anymore.
Say what you want. I am not going to reply to posts that are unrelated to artwork anymore.
Let me give you a final advice. Judge artworks, stop judging artists.

>>2361893
I like that you fixed the shoulder visibility, but yeah now the tits look like there is no gravity applied to them at all.

>>2363327
Why not go for something really regal and medieval like C O N C U B I N E ?

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>>2363342
BBC you're a Riot™

>I am not going to reply to posts that are unrelated to artwork anymore.

>>2363327
If he's been feminized, put female on it?

>>2363701
OR a 'lady' in cursive

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>>2363885

>>2363342
Ignore this shit BBC, keep up with the good work, I really like your style, and I'm sure I'm not the only one, and I'm pretty sure that's true because I can just imagine how many followers you have, and you also make money doing what you love because you deserve that.
Why waste time with those cunts? Just ignore it
Peace man

>>2363934
I see what you mean, originally she was straddling the guy, and I just can't wrap my head around it atm. Can you redline?

>>2363952
redline wont help desu senpai

>>2363938
Yes, poor victimized BBC. If he really thought it was clear he wouldn't be using these crits to edit this pic and was just noting them for the future use it should've been clear I didn't get that in my first post. If he really wanted to reply just to be polite, having made his intent clear, he could've simply said 'thanks'. But he asked me to specify how he should edit the pic, saying he wouldn't edit it simultaneously. Asking that kept me thinking he wanted crit for this pic so I was confused by him yet saying he didn't. He needn't have asked for specifics if he wasn't editing, and my understanding that intent was moot. He could've noted my crit to work on his effect for later and moved on instead of making sure I knew I was an idiot for thinking he'd change the pic he actually posted as he often does. I even tried to give my suggestion gently by making it a question and compliment sandwiching it with "i really like the idea" but fine, fuck me for trying. Never will again.

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wat do fampai

>>2364052
tl;dr

kill yourself jellyfag

>>2364052
wat

>>2364198
suicide for making your file size unnecessarily large

>>2364418
duly noted

>>2364198

Ass and legs look like she is floating above the water and not being supported by the floor of a bath.

I'm a n00b so don't necessairly know how to fix it, I guess you could make ass lines thiner to indicate they are further away and maybe tilt floor a bit in perspective.

>>2364461
Could probably be fixed with some good shadow placement and by making her butt push up against the ground too.
Will consider line tension too like you said.

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Hey! I can't decide which thumb to go forward with. Any input?

>>2364524
I dig C the most, don't have any feedback as to why beyond the pose being the most pleasing imo.

>>2364442
fuck that guy I like the file size >>2364461 is right about the pose I think that's not a very good "sitting in tub" pose probably should bend more forward from the waist and then stretch the legs out

nice perspective and everything else keep it up

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Thoughts before I expand on this tomorrow?

>>2364524
b

>>2364524
need context

without i'm going to just say C

>>2364706
her right hand seems a bit small

Do any of you guys know who Rocky Hardwood is?

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>>2363701
>>2363925
>>2363397

These are all great ideas I hadn't thought of. I don't know much "ye olde english" but I really like the word "concubine".

>>2364742
I do. Why?

>>2364823

>Concubine (male)

>>2364865
I was trying to draw humanized ponies and was worried what I sketched was too much like his. I really like his stuff but I don't want to rip him off. I was gonna ask if it was too similar and for help redesigning it but I think I'm just going to give them human faces so never mind. Thanks though.

>>2364886
I think you are too paranoid anon. Rocky's drawing technique is pretty common and his style isn't that original either. He adds his own flavor to something that you can find elsewhere already. And that you wont ever be able to rip off, unless you start intentionally copying him.
Plus Rocky is the kindest guy ever. I'm sure he'd see you having a similar approach to his as an homage and not a rip off.
Just ask him directly on tumblr what he thinks of this. I am sure he'll say something similar to what I did.

>>2364897
You're probably right. He had reblogged someone else's pony stuff that was similar to his and both designs were pretty close to the show, so I could probably get by on it. When I looked at mine again later I just felt like the face didn't match the body and I want the body more. I can just enjoy that face on Rocky's stuff.

>>2364524
i like b best

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Couldn't pinpoint a fix for the arm even though it's looking weird. Jizz tips would be sweet.

>>2364937
only the gods have opaque cum

>>2364945
oh thank you, anon, I'm flattered.

>>2364886

Link to this guys stuff?

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>>2364706
fug

>>2365081
oh wow as soon as I uploaded it i realized she has no face
>mfw

>>2365059
http://rockyhardwood.tumblr.com/

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1/2
sketch

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>>2365554
2/2
lineart.

r8

>>2365555
that shoulder is wierd m8
also, checked

>>2365555
I just wanna say this is such a boring porn piece.

For one, you're obviously hiding your inability to draw hands and legs by not drawing the hands and legs and making a more interesting position.

Since porn is all visual, if it isn't interesting to look at you're failing. Give her a better pose, look at pin ups for reference.

Also while I know its stylized, tits don't work like that unless they're implants.

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First time drawing stuff like this. Need your help cause I can't see any mistakes, while i know there are some.

>>2365787
I'd argue there are several, anon.

Maybe set up a horizon line.
Maybe set yourself up some perspective.
Maybe set yourself up a coherent composition.

>>2365787
There's no depth and zero appeal.

>>2364524
I vote A, maybe C.

>>2364524
B

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here is some mutant tit bitch

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>>2364937
aay ripper, left arm does looks pretty short, noses a bit low and the right hand fingers look wonky

>>2364524
C
Your thumb makes it look like Elsa getting raped by Abomasnow.

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Pin-up of my Dnd character...

I don't draw figures too often, so I know some of the anatomy is a bit off.

Looking for some crit before I go to refined lines

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I don't understand how you get smooth ass lines.
Drawing at 4k uhd at 72dpi. In anime, are those lines all really in 1 go? Every single frame too? Holy shit. Is there a secret to a continues straight/curved line that I don't know? A pro-tip?

Bonus question: Is there a good line of action for this girl? (Google Destroyer hime) She's literally missing her legs from the thighs down. All of the poses look stiff.

>>2365505
Nice

>>2366155
See you in 3 days

>>2365787
You are still a beginner, it's normal you don't see mistakes.
The main problems with this are stiff poses, bad line work, insecure gesture and really really bad perspective and thus sense of depth.
Porn isn't easy and it's something beginners will never be able to do right. Sorry anon.

>>2366042
Ayy buddy, thanks for the tut & headsup. I need to fix my ways.
>>2364945
Duly noted.

>>2366133
I think smooth lines involve confident strokes

>>2366156
Are you butt blasted?

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rate my dog

>>2366656
Draw it I double dog dare you

>>2366656
8/10. Reminds me of Loomis' dog in Creative Illustration. Draw that doggone dog, famm.

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Has anyone got that Paypal security guide infographic?

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>>2363219

P1;
Don't your cohabitants get suspicious when you stay on the toilet for so long? Nothing's as horny as drawing steamy porn wile there's aktion in the hallway. I'd propose to arrange that room for getting enough time to put it away when someone enters. This problem taught me fast sketching.
Concerning the eraser delusion; I wouldn't erase too much. At least in the sketchpart. Starting from an, to me important part of the scene, for example the face, I then tried to develop different poses and later on, varied the proportions - all in that same picture. Just to avoid loosing a good idea or form. and just erased as far as to continue with another idea.

Furthermore it's not important to have the full figure shown, except you need the long leg to make some point clear, e.g., Amazon is much bigger. (even thought their heads are almost equal in size-if you reckon the shortening from the perspective). That was the innovation coming from japan at the beginning of the last century; It's the cut-out detail that tells enough about it all. If this should seriously be a problem for you start with a rough shape and a light pencilstroke you can easily erase that later. And if you think this makes you a whore I can even push a little further, ever heard of eraser-stencil? This is perfection!

>>2366656
what race? i have a mutt and weve forever not known what race he is, but this is like a copy of my dog.

7/10

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>>2363219
P2; (non-erased linework)

Exaggeration especially with toon-like porn is a good point for starting - make wonderwom smaller. and she'd fit perfectly(no need to cut off her head so unpolitely).

Add some props, dress or other stuff and you won't have to explain, "It's supposed to be this or that..."

And here's a fundamental criq; Who's the domiator? I may be old-fashioned, but this ought to be clear to me! If both are, it's gonna get a fight, if none is, it could end up real boring. So i'll have to guess it's wonderwomb; she sits on top and rides the Valkyrie, looking deranged as if she was tired? But her legs, damn they look like the copy of a bathing beauty from a 50ies magazine. Make wonderglue grab her huge legs and force em down to show she's really in controll!!!(and please forgive me allthat wonderstuff)...

>>2366862
this is what happens when you draw with your dick, kids

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>>2366853
This dog looks really close to some sort of border collie mix.

>>2366853
>>2366903

She's a border collie.

>>2366896
If you could draw that with your pussie, I'd insure it.

>>2366896
O.K. - I'll try to be more, you know... . what you probably meant was, that it looks shitty and scratchy. But you read the comment, yes I know it's long. Try anyway. Non-erased line-work had a meaning. Now I hope I havent ashamed you too much. But if ouy just doodle through the pix go ahead , and if you're looking for something serious to jack-off, try the sexy beuatyful women or adult requests nad shut the f...

>>2366932
this is what happens when you type with your dick, kids

>>2364524
Is that so?..

>>2366937
this is what happens when you think with your dick? NNNAAAAGGGHHHH!!! Sorry it was a pussy wasn't it...

>>2366862
>He has to erase his lines
Bruh lmao

>>2366977
I-WILL-ERASE-MY-LINEWORK!!! -I-MERELY-PROMISE. -I-AM-NOT-A-ROBOT---

>>2366862
>>2366848
dude what the fuck are you even on about?
Holy shit.

>>2366848
>>2366862
Please, take your autism elsewhere.

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its furry but at least its something

>>2367161
You don't get me ?

>>2367438
most of all it's shit. is shit better than nothing? don't think so.

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bump

>>2368015
thats cute

>>2368015
May i know how you render? it would be really great.

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Thing I did for /y/

>>2367438
I think this is pretty cute, my main issue is the blobby undefined heads. I have no idea what species I'm looking at. The feet are tiny and very flat looking. The bottom also looks kind of bored.

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>>2366704

>>2364524
Really like the pose in C.

>>2366704
http://shit-bin.tumblr.com/post/102578761652

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Another cow girl.
>>2368015
Do you have a blog?

>>2368734
>ugly shitskin
I don't want you to be following me.

>>2368734
Her tits are horrible and disproportional unless you actually want her right tit to be twice as big as her left one
My suggestion is that you should actually study a bit of figure drawing, download some pics of cute girls or something and dedicate a week to mastering their forms

>>2368753
On the close full body or both? I had been having trouble with the full body for a while. In any case thanks, I'll go back to studying.

>>2368015

George Petty/Steven Stahlberg pose

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One of the best things I've drawn in a while, most of the base colours are on so I can get a sense of moving forward, but I'm still open to fixing obvious things like the hands. Thoughts?

>>2369048

>that fit lady
my dick
Looking forward to seeing this finished.

>>2369048
who did you ref for frida kahlo?

>>2369050
I didn't ref, but I'll make a note to fix her eyebrows - thanks bro.

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Redrew the tits.

>>2369048
The serratus anterior muscles (under-arm of the brown girl) don't look like a bunch of tree roots fambo, consider looking closer into that.

>>2369052
while im at it, whats with her reverse tear duct?
also all of your hand have small palms, and lefts hand is huge

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>>2369048
here's a redline. right girls eyes are misaligned. left girl's serratus anterior is looks like a tree branch and her tricep is wrong too.

>>2369064
Have you received any animation commissions yet? I'm interested in having one done. How much would something like your Lilith one run for?

>>2369048
Holy fuck. Where can I lurk you?

Can I post realistic sketches here? As I can't use t hentai or adult cartoon boards for that.

>>2369418
I mean nudes and porn of course.

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.>>2369339
Looks unfinished but the done part is smooth and proportional.

Lord I really shouldn't use such shitty paper.

>>2369451
You also really shouldn't critique things without looking at context.

>>2369375
>Holy fuck.
Seriously? I mean, he's not completely bad, but Holy fuck? Seriously?
I thought ic was a critique board, not a place where noobs run wild.

>>2369451
Not sure if that big of a newfag or simply so fucking dumb.
>looks at attached pic
Probably both.

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>tfw

>>2369541
Either child porn illustrations (shota, loli and stuff) or a non liberal country where selling porn is illegal.

>>2369544
Worst Korea

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Friend said I draw dicks weirdly and as he has one and I don't I'm concerned about how I draw dicks. I thought they where ok and I don't aim for realism salami but /ic/ where am I going wrong?

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>>2369340
I guess $30 for eight frames with flat colors ans no background. It took twice as long to render as it did to draw so that may double the price.

>>2369541
Who?

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>>2369548

>>2369548
Your friend was hoping you would ask to whip his out so he can show it to you and possibly stick just the tip in, he promises.

>>2369581
erodoll, some south korean artist

porn is banned there in return for disgusting internet speed

>>2369597
that's pretty much shit

>>2369548
This is seriously such an easy problem to fix, just find some photo references for cocks (there's tons on /hm/)! Draw some peen studies from refs => expand your visual library => profit!

>>2369681
Forgot to mention, even if you're not going for realism in your drawings, in order to draw sexy the general anatomy of the genitals needs to be in place for it to work. Stylizing is never an excuse not to look at real-life references.

>>2369684
Yeah I have tons of tutorials on placement, shape and other studies but no real reffs, thanks I didn't think of checking /hm/ for them actually

>>2369959
Were you the guy that drew a girl in a beach with a big ass and a cock with a big vein?

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>>2369967
yeah, this one? unfortunately never got to finish it because the guy never paid me.

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>>2369986
You're really good I really like your work, I've never been much into drawing pr0n, but do you have any ideia how could I start painting and render the left one? or both maybe, I have no ideia how to pass from a line to a painting as im too newb on that,i I drew on paper for like, 4 yeras, and half of 2015 I started to use a cheap tablet.

>>2369994
I'm about to go to bed but I'll paint it for you when I wake up.

>>2369997
Wooah, that's nice, thanks bro =)

>>2369530
>Seriously?
Considering how dead the threads have been, and bunch of low quality stuff, and considering I like the subject manner:

You're a faggot. I'd say post your work but I literally don't care because I don't draw.

>>2369986
>Kyle doesn't make sure his clients pay him 1st after he does the initial sketch

lad...

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Long time Doodler just got a graphics tablet and since I've started visiting /ic and /i I seem to be almost exclusively drawing this kinda stuff. I really need someone to point out what I'm doing wrong and where to go would help even more thanks !

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>>2370140
also dis

>>2370114
>I don't draw
I can tell, faggot.

>>2369959
Sweet rendering, but the two small toes on the left leg are a tad broken.

>>2369986
>...and then she farts!

>>2370185

So basically somebody praised someone who's not you and you had to lament the "noobs" ruining your community?
Get your head out of your fucking ass.

>>2370329
>So basically somebody without taste praised someone who's pretty bad and you had to lament the "noobs" ruining your community?
ftfy

and yes
that's the reason, fagmaster

>>2370372
What a child

I don't see you providing any redlines nigger. The fuck worth do you have?

Probably a autist who lives on welfare anyway.

>>2370382
cry me a river tardo.
if my post will make that idiot and other useless fags that "don't even draw" (his words) stop coming here, then thank fucking god for me.
I didn't redline or criticize that because other anons already did that and I simply didn't have anything to add.
now fuck off before you hurt yourself, princess.

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BJ0xBCwkg3E

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Tips or tutorials on drawing BBWs, /ic/?

>>2370422
Shut up and draw faggot. There is no reason why that comment should have triggered you. Check you're worthless bitter attitude. You should know /ic/ is filled with beginners. Stop being a dumbass.

>>2370521
Dont.

>>2370521
Apparently bones will respond to the weight of the individual, so for bigger girls their femurs' shafts will actually be larger as well, so that's something to consider in any anatomy studies you do for this sort of thing. Literally look into where fat is most prominently deposited on the female body (pelvis, ass, thighs) and you should probably already have a folder of fat chicks to reference with regards to your preferred body type. Experiment with your figure construction and see what's appealing

judging solely by the pic you posted, that's pretty reasonable in terms of size, otherwise if you wanna be going like SSBBW then god help you son

>>2370540
one thing is being a beginner (are you one, little shithead? oh, are you? o you poor little buhgeener, are you okay? awwww, you are so cute!!!), another is being a beggar. a dumbass that doesn't even draw and his sole purpose of being here is to fap to shitty drawn porn and ask for artists' galleries, because he thinks with his fucking dick instead of his head.
now go back to drawing your stick figures you little buhgeener.

tl;dr get a brain or fuck off

>>2370521

looks a bit like my gf, srs

>>2370924
You're a fucking beginner. You being here, or on this board means you're a beginner. Your shitty know it all attitude tells me you're a beginner, despite probably having tried for so long. You have not displayed a single sign of being more skilled or more knowledgeable, you've just talked down to people with shitty writing and zero input.

You think you look smart by shitting on everything, but everyone who isn't jacking off to themselves thinks you're fucking stupid and a joke. Keep talking because I like hearing little faggots like you talk big despite having nothing to show for it.

tl;dr
You're fuckin pathetic nigga

>>2370996
I'm not shitting on everything. I'm shitting on you and other idiots who can't draw nor give critique. go away cancer.

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>>2369994
ok boss dawg here you go.

>>2371062
>>2370996

kek u 2 are bad.

On that, I'd rather see shit getting flung at people than let the carebears like you
>>2370540
have their way with the world.

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>>2371104
Thank you so much, saved to my folder that is completly amazing, Actually I tried to paint it But I think I oversaturated :|

any tips of what im doing wron/do you have a blog?

>>2370466
her arm is a mess. and her hand has bad form, no palm

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Did a study today

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I can say that I have a grasp of anatomy but I am still not confident if what I am doing is right or wrong so yeah I need to learn a lot. That plus coloring/shading/hue/etc are needed too so I might have to experiment on that. Any critique are welcome.

>>2369986
how much do you charge and would you be willing to draw guys? not too nsfw if that helps

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>>2371363
>not too nsfw

Go all out faggot make him draw boi pussy.

>>2371349
>that face
kek

>>2369986
I bet you got stiffed because it's perfectly fappable in it's unfinished form.

>>2369986
Why dont you update your blog anymore Kyle?

>>2369994
Is there somewhere you post or an email I can hit you up at?

>>2371474
I'm trying not to get too many followers. Im bogged down with work as is.

>>2371198
You're pillow shading. You need to paint a distinctive shadow shape and use more hard edges and less saturated colors.

>>2371363
Hit me up at at kairucommissions at gmail. I've dont femboy stuff before. Have done manly men yet but I'd be willing to try.

>>2364524
as much as i love b, i gotta give it to c

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>>2371366
>be grill
>want fallout husbando body pillow
>do not want shota bb
life is tough

>>2371524
Perfect! I'll message you soon!

>>2366042
Dat fukin tittle

>>2364493
no, the legs are just drawn wrong. if you pull your legs up past your waist, there's no way your feet are touching the floor. It's an anatomical error, not a perspective error.

>>2371503
I have a blog where I post some stuff btw I use facebook more, if you want it.

>>2371512
thanks, but I never know where I should use the hard edges, how they come up?

Like in shadows some of them are hard and some are really smooth

And what is pillow shading, i never heard of that , sry.

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Help me internet wierdos, I cannot get this guy's ass to look right

>>2371560
have you considered not sucking

>>2371579

not even for one second

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>>2370550
>you should probably already have a folder of fat chicks to reference with regards to your preferred body type.

>758 files, 5 folders
Yeah, I got that covered.

Also, thank you very much for the advice.

>>2370544
You the same guy from /aco/?

>>2371551
Sure, give me them links.

>>2371541
aye'
>>2371586
nay'

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>>2371593
http://lienum.tumblr.com/
>>2371512
It's still pillow? i think it looks better now, i was doing nonsense light direction last time, sorry.

>>2371512
fucking this >>2371557

how to use hard edges?

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>>2371560

Made some progress, think he's a bit more anatomical now.

Not that anyone gives a shit.

>>2371654
misinterpreted it, lol. sorry.

>>2370924
Get a day job and give up on art. With that shit attitude you'll never amount to anything in life.

>>2371668
Look at the size of her foot compared to the size of her palms

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>>2371856

Thank you, fixed + progress

>>2371892

Oh and sorry... not a girl

>>2371895

Maybe i... shrink the chest? If that looks more like a titty than a pec...

>>2371892
Get your form straight
Look at the angle that the body is supposed to be titled at, parts of second tit are meant to be visible at this point
The reason why it looks like female tit's is not because it's too big, nor will shrinking it fix it, just try to actually fix the figure

>>2371926

I see what you mean, let me see what I can do about that...

>>2371104
Sweet tutorial Kyle. Props.

>>2369064
I think your tits are placed a bit too high on the body
also a tad bit of realistic weight on the close up is a lot better than full perk up of the full body
Try to do similar tits on full body and lower the tits

>>2371696
kek
already living off art
I'm not a beginner like the idiots who keep posting in this thread and think a good way to learn art is drawing porn
super kek

>>2371952
you sound like the worst kind of faggot.

Have you ever read your own posts? Are you constantly cringing at yourself?

>>2371940

I might do a female AND male version of this just because i feel like im dissapointing those of you who keep thinking this is a girl lol

>>2371632
Looks a lot better but the right femur is still too short.

>>2371958
sorry for making your ass ache.
I hope you'll be able to recover.

>>2371980
K bro, thanks for tips, i'll fix the femur, people like you make my day i mean for real, improving is the best drug.

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>>2371940
>>2371926

Alright chest is somewhat fixed but im still having trouble situating the pecs realistically without making them gigantic.

The advice has been great so far, any more would be really appreciated

>>2371998
No prob man. My days been extra shitty. Guy went nuts and a Swat team locked my apartment down.

>>2371981
oh anon I just feel kinda bad for you. You are just oblivious of yourself. I bet you think you are clever, funny, and just too cool for school.

You have our pity anon.

>>2371940
I thought they were too high i moved them down a little in >>2369579 I Might try drawing them again

>>2372043
I don't think any of that stuff. I simply know my shit when it comes to art and I don't give a fuck if I come across as a douchebag.

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>>2372030

Things are uh... getting a little out of hand now

>>2372049
>I simply know my shit when it comes to art

If you honestly did, you wouldn't have the free time to be wasting your time here. You're full of shit and you aren't fooling anyone. You're just another random in an ocean of medicore artists who don't have a real name for themselves. You're in the same spot everyone else here is. Your ego makes no sense. That's why you're a joke.

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ok, just sharing one of my drawings, which obviously is far from perfection...

>>2372131
figure and background are in completely different perspectives

totally agree, everything in this one lacks of perspective and proportion... I only feel a little happy about the shades.

>>2372128
I love how you beginner tier "artists" always resort to the same old argument that good artists would never come to ic.
keep consoling yourself scrub.

>>2369986
Tapeworm veins/10

>>2372183
>The same old argument that good artists would never come to ic.

They don't. The only ones who do are low to mid intermediate level internet nobodies with too much time on their hands. They have no real presence in the art world or industry. You're one of them.

>>2372235
haha, like you have to have real presence in the art world or industry to be a good artist. you have all my keks, pathetic retard.

>>2372241
The point isn't that it's what makes an artist good, it's that a good artist would. Faggot.

>>2372250
Don't try to explain it to him. He's a retard. It's just funny seeing him try to defend himself even though he knows he's worthless as an artist. Hence, his bitter attitude and why he's here shitting on beginners to feel better about himself.

>>2372250
keks intensify. yeah, EVERY good artist out there and in here (I for example) have a real presence in the art world or industry. hahaha, you crack me up, my dear autistic friend.
keep posting your butthurt. I'm actually enjoying this.

>>2372263
You've never done anything to prove that you're a decent artist, and thus you have no means to say that your existence is proof of some amazing artists who just have no presence and BOY I JUST CAN'T CATCH A BREAK HUH? IT REALLY SUCKS BECAUSE I'M SOOOOOO GOOOOOOD, Y'KNOW?

>>2372261
are you dumb or have you zero reading comprehension.
i am not shitting on beginners because they are beginners, you dumb faggot. i am shitting only on stupid people who don't understand that this thread is not suited for beginners.
and all this butthurt from everyone who is against me here, started from a post where I wasn't even shitting on beginners, but on beggars that lurk here and try to get links to people's blogs.
i don't hate beginners. i hate only stupid people. people like you.

>>2372268
Porn is among the lowest form of art there is because it's commercial trash. You don't need to be that good at art to sell porn. Why else do you think artists that aren't worth shit and aren't even good resort to doing it just to get some kind of following? You're a moron for trying to preach "git gud" in the a porn thread because the standards for what sells and what gets attention isn't and never has been high.

>>2372267
I don't need to prove you anything. when i post critique i don't act like the douchebag I'm at the moment. especially if i do redlines. i don't want to risk ruining my reputation because a bunch of idiots trigger me.
right now i am simply arguing about the uselessness of beggars that "don't even draw" but keep coming here to ask for gallery links of shitty arists because they can't think with anything but their dicks. oh yeah, I'm also saying that beginners shouldn't come here, since porn is too hard to grasp for them.
but I definitely understand your reasoning, since if beginners stopped posting, you would have to stop posting too.

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well,. I like these threads, sometimes they tend to encourage me to draw again...

>>2372271
sure thing buddy. every kind of art can be drawn by beginners. good art and especially good porn art is something beginners can't even comprehend. but yeah, sure. keep telling yourself that you can draw porn, you are gonna make it one day. soon you will start making big bucks with your beginner level commercial porn. everyone will start throwing money at you. you are great.

it's lazy retards like you that make porn art a joke. fuck off cancer.

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workin on a thing in between more *serious* projects

>>2372277
>it's lazy retards like you that make porn art a joke. fuck off cancer.

Cry me a river you worthless faggot. Porn art and the people who obsess over it tend be virgins and/or have next to no active sex life. That's why it's commercial garbage with low standards.

>>2372287
That bandy shit you've got goin on really isn't attractive dude, there's a reason why pixel artists avoid that sort of thing.

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would you say this is clean enough to be inks or is it obvious that this is still pencils?

>>2372339
The lines are nice but I'd go for another refine pass to call it inked.

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>>2372339
This is great as it is anon. Even though there are some parts with double lines I think you don't need to fix that, since this kind of gesture gives character to your style. By refining this kind of "errors" you will just lose spontaneity (check the pic I attached to see what I mean) to fix details that will never bother anyone.
Also, I really love your stylization. Keep this shit up anon.

Also, regarding my pic. Yesterday when I finished drawing this I didn't see any major errors that would bother me, but today I am just, holy shit this looks so fucking flat. Now, the problem is I don't know what is the main culprit for the flatness. The lineart (I probably spent too much time refining it and I lost the spontaneity of the sketch) or bad perspective/anatomy (I guess her pelvis should be a bit higher, but I don't think that's the reason for the flatness) or maybe everything combined?

>>2372384

The lineweight seems a bit too uniform, it almost has a art noveau look to it. Also there are some details like the sweat drops on her thighs that do not appear to follow the underlying form and makes the legs look like card board cut outs

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they say i draw penises too big
but it only makes me draw them bigger

>>2372394
You are very good at copying anyme simbols when it comes to faces (you actually manage to make a decent perspective), but you are bad when it comes to the rest of the body both with the anatomy and perspective. Your gesture is pretty stiff too.

tl;dr you have the same problem any other beginner tier porn artist has. good at copying anime faces and very bad fundamentals.

>>2372396
sadface
but to be honest i dont think i want to be anything more than "beginner porn artist"

>>2372410
I see. Fair enough. But then, I'm not really sure what are you doing here.

>>2372422
well shit, this is art critiques board, isnt it
i sometimes completely forget about it
anyways, thanks. ill try harder on studying fundamental

>>2372394
>>2372396


I think it's kind of absurd to just dismiss this as 'beginner's work' with somehow horrible fundamentals. But then.... maybe that's just cos he's better than me :/

The fact is people make a living drawing worse porn than this, and this image has a lot of character and is pretty hot! All it really needs in my opinion is to get the lines on the cock tidied up slightly and try to think of a more interesting composition perhaps?

>>2372339
you need a name. :/

>>2372293
what's bandy shit?

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>>2372342
>>2372384
danke, i tried inking it since i normally don't cause it never turns out okay but i think i may have actually figured something out this morning (other than holy poo do i need to study hands a lot)

>>2372456
colors first
once i figure out colors (and hands (probably feet as well (a whole lotta shit still most likely ;-; )) then i'll have earned a name

>>2372445
>The fact is people make a living drawing worse porn than this
>make a living
That's a bit of a stretch imo. Yeah, there are artists that make money by selling worse stuff than what anon showed here, but doing some side money or making a living is a different thing. (and b4 Shadman lol)
But any way you put this, anon's work still has the flaws I mentioned.
And I'm sure if anon put a bit of time into proper study, he'd actually be pretty good.

>>2372482
Heh, man, you draw better hands than 99% of people who post here. Don't look down on your art. You are solid, trust me.

>>2372486
The way he pushes himself is admirable, though.

>>2372390
Yeah, that's probably the main problem with this pic. I simply cannot into thin lineart. I probably am not accurate enough to make it look confident. I will probably just switch back to my usual thick lineart, because I can handle it easier.

>>2372488
Indeed, cow anon's got the right mentality imo.

>>2372493
the lineart looks good, it just flattens the image a bit too much. I'm sure with some color it would read much better

>>2372485

I guess you're right, I just wanted to inject a little positivity since the thread was getting even more angry and horrible than usual

>>2371104
Thanks for the tut, Kyle! Very helpful.

>>2369048
athena, bellona and amaterasu?

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Something I'm still working on (kinda), I think the anatomy is ok ( by my standards) but the lighting is all over the place and the colours are bland

in b4 loomis in b4 smudge tool abuse

>>2369579
IF the movement isn't complex (as in just a moving arm, static everything else), can I get $30/12 frames?

>>2372839
Sure, sounds fair.

>>2372482
Bretty noice, what software did you use?

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>>2364524
>>2366049
Thanks for the feedback on the thumbnails everyone! I went with C because it had the most positive responses. This is the finished piece.

>>2372458

prob the shading.

>>2373193
This is gorgeous both color and lineart-wise. The only thing I would call a "flaw" is the stiff/boring Elsa's pose and facial expression. You could have made her back more arched and the expression more lustful or excited. But then this pic would be perfect and we can't have that, can we.
Keep up the great work anon.

>>2373193
perfection

>>2372761
That's right
I know someone else who posts in these threads did the Bellona demon skin and some others with some dicks recently

>>2372458
The bands meant to be gradation

>>2373193
Nominated for next porn thread picture.

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Wat do

apart from erasing the whole thing kek

no but seriously what can help me here? loomis? her neck and his legs are a nightmare I can't get them normal

>>2373392
>apart from erasing the whole thing
not much
you need to into the figure beyond tiddy.

>>2373392
Please go to the beginner thread or better yet acknowledge the human figure and do a whole bunch of references before you even get near the beginner thread.
Sucks to hear but its the nicest way of putting it.

>>2373395
that's cool man, no prob. It's too bad I can't salvage it because wakka back there is looking so mangled

maybe I can say he was in a car accident

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sketching again

>>2373146
clipstudio/manga studio 5 tho you could probably get similar results in sai

What the fuck happened to SundryAddams' tumblr? His other social media outlets seem to be up but not updated.

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Need some help with this pose. I've never seen it before and I can't find reference for it. Trying to get the arms pulled back.

>>2373706
Find it at other angles. Look for bondage pics with the arms back, study those and come back to it.

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>>2373706
I think it reads pretty well right now, actually. I don't know if you'd be able to exaggerate the shoulders coming out more without it looking like it's breaking the anatomy of it.

Trying to figure out how to use hard/soft edges.
Do you guys just use a feathered brush or eraser for it? That's what I've been doing, but I feel like there might be a better way.

>>2373253
>>2373390
Thank you!
>>2373208
Thank you for the feedback! I think you're right. I'll try to push my next piece to be a little more dynamic pose/expression wise.

>>2371506
>I'm laying low because I'll get too many fans

I wish i had these problems.

>>2368015
blog?

>>2361893
Who are you? Blog?

>>2375463
>>2375467
go back to aco, fucking cancer

>>2375529
go away

you're not funny and no-one likes you

>>2375539
this is a critique board. not a beggars board.
if you think with your dicks instead of your heads, then I suggest you better kill yourselves as soon as possible. fucking idiots.

>>2375550
It's not begging to ask for a blog, you moron. You want us to go to /aco/ and ask for those guys' blogs when they've posted in this fucking thread?

/aco/ isn't even a request board. Just go away, retard.

>>2375560
keep thinking with your dick, beggar.