Story seems interesting though you need to work on your writing ability. Comics are hard in the sense you need to be able to both write and draw. Another thing is I feel like it's a bit rushed? It might have been more interesting to have started with the grandson and his grandfather talking. I feel like too much happens in the first panel. I think even if you don't add them it should be a bit more broken up, or lose the who grandkid and grandfather talking part. Then have it show later it's a story being told. The way you have it, I can't really get into it.
There is no right way to do it - while your comic has rigid panel placement and is more text heavy than conveying action with pictures, there are plenty of professional comics which also do that. Read comics, take a notice of what you like, what form speaks to you. Things to pay attention and think about are maybe text-image relationship, level of detail, panel placements, dividing of time, symbols used. And "reader time" - does the reader flow forth in your comic as if in an animation or do they have to concentrate, move on slowly.
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