Animenative Art/Stylization General

What are those japanese words suppose to mean?

>>2348998
>Animenative Art
goddam just go to /a/ drawthreads already

>>2349000

The pleasure of being cummed inside.

>>2348496
maybe i'll try to give the original one the arm form the 2nd
>>2348503
those are for work, man. and i don't get to draw and qt fit giant demon lolis at work
>>2348511
i'll fix up the values and her hand, thanks for pointing it out.
>>2348827
a mix of colour/hard light/overlay/gradient map layers

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I'm trying to copy Darkest dungeon style over that scene from "The Road to El Dorado" and i want to animate it.
I want to ask.
I'm on the right path?
Can you give some tips?
It looks like shit?
By the way i'm using mouse and photoshop.

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Just wondering what color do you guys think complements White the best?
Personally I think Red really pops

>>2349031
>those are for work
you're saying someone paid for them or you're some company wage artist? because don't take it as an offense, but you really don't seem even close to a professional level

>>2349108
>you really don't seem even close to a professional level
This never stopped anything or anyone

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>>2349114
>>2349108
is this at professional level?

>>2349125
Closer than the giant loli guy for sure
>>2349114
well, can't deny that

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>>2349001
No.

>>2349108
company wage
sorry. i'm trying my best :(
if it counts for anything, i did a bunch of weapons for phantom of kill and random assets for dragon genesis.

>>2349144
Well look, your company wage work already puts you one step over 90% of /ic/ users, me comprised.

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i posted in the draw thread as well, but im guessing it belongs here more so..
any tips.?

>>2349157
save it as a jpg and resize it

>>2349144
Got a site with them? I'm interested.

>>2349108
>you really don't seem even close to a professional level

Are you blind? His rendering could easily land him a company job. That just goes to show your own shitty knowledge of the job market. You might want to start doing some research.

>cuffing this 1 guys balls instead of posting work

How many times do I have to say it?

>>2349231
I need to actually look for them on a wiki to look for the specific ones, but this page has a few.
https://pk.fg-games.co.jp/sp/story/weapon.html

>>2349316
Don't have them on your computer? Was more interested by your monsters and stuffs like that also.

And wait, you're japanese?

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drawing giant boobs squishing on the floor from the side feels weird
eh, might scrap the whole sketch and go for a more fisheye lens effect cause the dynamic angles would be way more fun

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Rough wip, went full retard on design, thoughts?

>>2349408
I really fucking like this.

>>2349339
Unless that's suppose to be Jessica Rabbit, that waste is way too think for my tastes, kek. You really should look into studying value more though if you haven't already. Your construction method and lines look pretty solid. Adding values will help pop your forms more.

>>2349408
I wouldn't call that full retard. It's pretty simple and readable. I dig it.

>>2349512
>waste
Kek, I meant waist.

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>>2349108
You're a fucking idiot.

>>2349408
remind me of the gameboy megamans

>>2349108
What is "professional level" then?
Muscle loli guy is way ahead of the majority of the "professional" art industry.

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It is probably too late to fix anatomical mistakes but still wanna finish this. This is like my3rd attempt at a colored piece and I'm having difficulty making it not flat.

>>2348998
Man, don't just run things through google translate to look cool, you just end up with cringeworthy japanese.

>>2349556
Its obviously a narrative on how cringey these threads are.

>>2349556

I did it on purpose.

>>2349567
Absolute madman.

>>2349319
No, I'm Singaporean. And they're all on work computer

>>2349194
sorry for sounding like a noob, but what will that do?

>>2349723
file size. 1.66 mb is somewhat bloated for 4chan. Just saving as jpg should be enough though.

>>2349727
>jpg
>not even once

>>2349754
it's fine for posting wip's

>>2349657
Why the fuck you gook are so good at drawing?

>>2349544
>>2349516
>>2349269
>everyone barks how obvious it was he's working in a company
>after he said so himself
Rub me one /ic/

>>2349767
>obvious
noone said it was obvious, just that his skill level is clearly enough for it.
there are plenty of skilled artists not in the industry.

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Daily doodle again.

>>2349339
That's pretty hot anon.

>>2349408
I'm loving this cute design. Very neat wip. Would love to see the end design.

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trying to work with light a bit.

>>2349800
Gallery?

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Another daily doodle.

>>2350020
Love your stuff

>>2349754
jpg a max quality is exacty the same as png. Latter is only interesting for transparent backgrounds.

>>2350020
That's some good Guren Lagann shit here.

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>>2344312

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I am going to try to make a real background this time. I found some good refs to steal. I guess more coloring tomorrow.

>>2350304
Is it supposed to be missing a pinky?
Judging by how her hands are the pinky would be visible in that gap opposite of the thumb, unless its touching her ring finger or she's a 4 fingered person.

>>2350237
Isn't edgy teen's right hand a bit small?

Can someone post that 'how to render' tut made by some anon. it was a chick with a chair in greyscale. I lost it.

>>2350122
Best one ITT
Everyone else sucks. Go read sticky, Loomis, etc. You are all retarded
Blog? Tumblr? Street address?
4chan infested with edgy teens i swear on me ma.

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>>2350521
Why are you mad though.

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Hey /alt/
Instascum filtering and brush aside, thoughts?

why are so many artists drawing children?

>>2349547
"this is my x attempt"
fucking teenies

>>2350556
>he doesn't want to draw children

>>2350536

I prefer the original illustration

>>2350567
Original illustration?

>>2350571
The illustration you drew from.

>>2350580
I didn't. I looked through Katsuya Terada's Zelda stuff and Kim Jung Gi's vids at most.

>>2349800
i love that style of yours

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lol.. fan art to attract people...lol

I know chicken scratch...

>>2350237
Hey man! Kuwabara getting cut off into the corner?
You can't do that to him!

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here comes the boogieman ;)

>>2350792
...Blog?

>>2350792
Are you the Christ chan guy? Dude why dont you take commissions, literally offered you 80 doles and you declined in the mail.

>>2350557
Projecting much?

Any tips on drawing dynamic poses?

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Doodle. phone sucks.

>>2350133
Thanks man!
>>2350173
Yea I figured it looked like tengen toppa a little bit aha.

>>2350171
>implying 100% quality jpg is the same as lossless jpg
>(it's not)

>>2350987
just kidding. it actually looks like eyeballed shit.
learn some construction your work looks flat as fuck

>>2351304
Yea man its not too good looking now that I think of it. not my best work aha. Thanks.

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I think it's looking better than the horrendous initial sketch but then again I'm still slow at identifying my own mistakes..

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>>2351349
Looking cuter desu, but you still have to fix the jaw to unfateen it. and turn her eye a little inward and lower it like 4px

>>2351349
Things like this are why people give you shit, firez. You were told exactly what to do to fix it, and the response? More turd polishing. Learn construction. Stop deliberately cropping images to hide what you clearly do not understand.

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>>2350483
oh man you're right, and his other hand was huge, hope this balanced it some

>>2350740
dont worry, the canvas is a lot longer. hes just not colored yet

>>2351349
Please link the previous version so we don't have to go searching for it Firez.

To me the part where the left cheek meets with the jaw still looks really weird.

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here's a wip.

>>2350594
thanks!

>>2351349
>girl
check
>staring into the endless abyss like a scarred vietnam soldier
>check

Yep, it's firez.

>>2351484
come on give him +1 credit, she's actually looking at us this time.

>>2350521
>Blog? Tumblr? Street address?
erm.

tumblr.com/blog/rolandoortiz

>>2351401
pretty cool. would love to see a step by step. your color application is neat. are you using flash by any chance? something about it reminds me of flash.

>>2351512
what's up with guns, you plan to kill someone?

>>2351528
I am replicating an M60 machine gun in pixel form, its very relaxing work.

>>2349478
>>2349512
thanks

>>2349520
one ref was from megaman zero, good eye

>>2349791
ty, wont finish anytime soon, ill save lineart and rendering for a rainy/snowy day, probably

>>2351361
what happened to the other eye?

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>>2351349
>>2351484
>>2351489
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TLV4_xaYynY

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>>2351361
Thanks, I think I kind of see it now,

>>2351369
I hardly rendered it more than it was instead I focused in fixing the proportions and perspective.

>>2351397
Thanks I will try to revise it tomorrow, this was the 1st sketch: >>2349204

>>2351484
Do you feel so empty that you consider yourself an endless abyss? oh well..

Pic related is something I resumed from a sketch in order to use it for a song I finished recently. I will probably reduce it scope I feel at loss in many parts.

>>2351585
im trying a new style and am currently struggling for the first time in months to find a style for the eye. I have done roughly 30 attempts and have yet to be satisfied. I have tried to draw over the previous eye and getting a better and better eye but it isnt working either. Will not let go until that eye is drawn within the new style and at a decent level.
At this point, im willing to take suggestions to be honest.

It may be that ive created an eye with no good looking coherent representation at the angle that i want. which i know shouldnt exist. God Im gonna go back to it now...

>>2351649
there ya fucking go firez, thats nice. good job. If you didnt ref thats a good improvement. I tried construction and symbols. fuck my life.

>>2351666
>I tried construction and symbols. fuck my life.
was not meant for Firez

>>2351666
i think you are worrying too much about an eye and about a style, to be honest!! i think you should just drop it and move on, draw a different face and a different eye. don't try to force a style, just draw what feels natural. it might not be what you want at first, but it's OK to have drawings that you're not satisfied with. just keep making /new/ things instead of fretting over one thing for a long while-- you'll learn more that way.

>>2351671
Its a special occasion when i struggle on something simple. This may be the key to a breakthrough.

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>>2349050

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>>2350797
http://gijinka.blogspot.my/

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time for sleep

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Just sketching some more animoo

>>2351761
I like your style, good balance between manga and western, I do think you should up the contrast thought since you have two very direct light sources.

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>>2350304
More colors - open to any color palette ideas

going to try detailing the BG before doing shadows

>>2350364
Added a pinky - thanks

>>2351793
Your lines are good, may I know what do you use to do them? i have a hard time with lines in general, but my sketches are fine, but when i t comes to lineart my butt hurts

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Hi, moar idiot sketches.

>>2351796
>lines
These are pretty bad. I am still learning how to do digi lines, and I'm trying a bunch of new stuff. My traditional inking is noticeably better, but still pretty amateur.

Anyways here are some things that work for me (they might seem a bit obvious)
1) Do your initial sketch on a different layer, then reduce the sketch opacity, make a new layer and ink on top.
2) hard round still ends in hard round, so I use a hard round eraser to make the ends more acute (pointy) if the line doesn't terminate into another line.
3) I try to do similar traditional inking tricks like "webbing" intersections. Basically anywhere that 2 lines meet at an acute angle, I fill in a bit more
4) Other traditional tricks I picked up - I add small scratches and panel lines to imply form

>>2351807
Thanks

>>2351737
Thanks

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Can't decide which version choose, any opinion?

>>2351834
right, left feels like a clown.

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>>2351793
Did some shading. I was working on the BG, and I have never been so bored in my entire life...

BGs are so miserable

I guess I'll finish up tomorrow

>>2351834
how about a middle ground

>>2351883
Like?

>>2351666
Glad you like it Nose Bro, btw I'm only referencing the nebula.

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>>2351737
NEW CHAPTER FUCK YEAH
Thank you so much based malaysia

>>2351761
Hey, anon from last thread, I like your solution.

>>2351942
Don't encourage him otherwise he will never slow down and take a break from his comfy zone comics and work on fundamentals.

I'm new to this stylization thing how do you guys figure out what "style" you want do you just go what works for you or things that you like or does it come naturally?

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i think this is closer to what i want, more fisheye lens-ish, face is definitely just a temp place holder tho

>>2349512
i really do need to work on values... but perspective is soo funnn

>>2349791
danke~
hopefully i was able to retain some of that in this newer one

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..

>>2351885
like not having her skin white god damn you
>>2351800
that generic pose for the feet
>>2351764
gj
>>2351761
longer palm and impossible hand position on top guy, try it yourself, if its not 2 fingers it really hurts.

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>>2352010
went back and tried to push it farther

>>2352103
I don't think heads can't rotate so much. Then again, I know the whole thing is stylized.

>>2352098
How to not make a generic pose for the feeet when the character is standing ;-;

>>2352106
you're actually right, i'm kinda stuck between a rock and a hard place because the way i like to draw heads is leaving me with ???'s as to how to represent it properly from the angle i want to. maybe i'll just go full side view, it'll be simpler, but the character has a big pony tail that would get in the way of the composition i'm going for, haha

or i could just leave it as is and keep going cause nobody would care really, but then it'd be wrong and it'd have a really bad tangent between the chin and the shoulder and it would drive me crazy every time i looked at it ;-;

>>2352098
>longer palm and impossible hand position on top guy, try it yourself, if its not 2 fingers it really hurts.

Not the OP, but I can make all of those hand poses myself without issue. Do you have arthritis or something?

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Watercolors. I can't into cute, the figure is skewed too. It's nice to practise anime on this medium though, will try it again.

>>2352121
look at how far your second finger goes up
>>2352112
that is literally the only generic pose for feet. anything else is fine, but spare the one forward one sideways.

>>2352176
> look at how far your second finger goes up

Not this anon, but just hold it on your palm, it's easy as shit.

>>2352176
>look at how far your second finger goes up

But...it doesn't at all?

I think this is just one of those things that's different for everyone, like how far you can splay your fingers or something.

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>>2352183
>>2352186
i guess this is what i have,

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>>2352183
>>2352186
and this is what you have?

>>2352205
>>2352210
a huge majority of the google images ones are showing my version, are you sure you guys arent the odd ones out
?

>>2352210
>>2352205

I can make my hand do the second pose, but its difficult and hurts a bit trying to force it all the way down

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>>2352215
source material on anime seems to favor my version.

Kung fu kids probably have great finger flexibility anyway, I think it's a shaky critique to make.

>>2352225
the finger is still too long.

>>2350237
I love yu yu
can't say the same for the faces you gave them though

>>2352226
Perhaps a small bit too long, yup. I could understand if he wants to keep it that long for extra emphasis though

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>>2351764
Finished

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>>2352264

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Some help with the colors and composition ?

>>2352269
ayy lmaos truly possess the golden ratio

>>2352264
I really dislike this shoujo style
Underage female magaka mostly use this

>>2352264
Neat, I would try to introduce a bit more value into her face and hair though. That's what struck me.

>>2352302
The most popular Josei mangaka (Karuho Shiina, Yumi Unita, Chika Umino, Akiko Higashimura.) are in their 30s-40s.
Even Ai Yazawa was in her early 30s when they started publishing Nana.

>>2352307
I will try, even though high contrast and soft shading never turns out the way I want it to for some reason.

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>>2352205
>>2352219
I was looking at my hand and I see what you mean, but its also supposed to be pointing behind him a bit so the knuckle would be the most visable. But I do think I made the finger too long

>>2352331
I knew that was a womans artstyle...

anyways, yeah shorten the finger and its 10/10

>>2352331
very creative way to put your finger on the screen for effect, almost didnt notice. isnt your finger going inward in space though?

Also, nice hands.

L O N D O N

>>2352331
those hands make me want a gf

but then I remember what its like to live with a woman

I'm good

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something something battlesluts

>>2352312
Yeah, I understand if you're going for a low contrast look. It's something about the face that bothers me, though. Perhaps it needs to be lighter. Take my critique with a grain of salt though, not sure myself.

>>2352103
You really need to fix the anatomy. Even stylized you wouldn't be able to bend like that. It took me a second to realize it wasn't strange mermaid/merman with a huge tumor on it's back. (Because the back looked more like the front anatomy wise.)

>>2352459
> Even stylized you wouldn't be able to bend like that.

That's not how it works retard.

>>2352462
Lmao really? Stylization still has grounds in reality bruh. Your spine would have to be snapped to bend like that, and extending your arm in that direction. You can exaggerate things without looking broken as fuck.

>>2352459
>Even stylized you wouldn't be able to bend like that.

what the hell lmao

i agree that it could use some work, but that statement is ridiculous

>>2352381
whats this from?

>>2352465
Look really shit redline(not claiming to be a master ) but if you just move the neck you can still have exaggeration and the face. Also you can totally ignore this but unless her tits are really saggy, her boobs would bunch a little more at the bottom and top. Mine's a bit off but maybe you get the idea. The other problem is the chest would probably be more curved the other direction than straight up in that position.

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>>2352471
Dropped my pic bc I'm a faggot.

>>2352464
> Your spine would have to be snapped to bend like that

Except if it's stylized. There are plenty of pro artists that draws unrealistic curves.

>>2352480
And there are copious amounts of blogs dedicated to making fun of them. What's your point? This is a critique board. It's for improving your art, just because some "pros" do it doesn't mean it's an automatic pass that makes it not look like shit. The person who posted the image is talking about pushing perspective and using a fisheye but if you don't understand the basics of not having your characters spine broken they'll never understand how to push their style well. If it's just for hobby, grand! My input should just be tossed out the window, but if they want to improve, you want to be able to break things "aesthetically" that way it doesn't take away from the picture.

>>2352485
> What's your point?

That you should stop being retarded.

> spines bending being stylized is forbidden because I said so! It doesn't works as a stylization!

>>2352381

>freckles on boobs

is there any better thing in life?

>>2352490
no, so I added more

>>2352488
I'm saying he needs to fix it because it looks like shit. Regardless of it being stylized. Lmao lemme guess you're one of those kids who draws really shitty anime and cries about "muh style". I'm legit saying yea you can stylize things but his honestly looks like shit. The problem is the first thing you see is the broken back with the tits melting off the torso. Yes you can push stylization.
>Pic related

But if you do, whatever you broke needs to have some balance.

I'm not sure if you're the original artist or just a rabid fan with a boob inflation fetish, but between the two of us either way you haven't got any idea what you're talking about.

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>>2352493
>

>>2352493
>pic related
>forgets pic, again

wow you're on a roll

not the guy you're responding too by the way

>>2352496
Nah it's just my cellphone is a piece of shit so it drops pics. You should really be making fun of me for being a poor fag instead.

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>>2352485
>And there are copious amounts of blogs dedicated to making fun of them. What's your point?

Like Eschergirls, the blog that tried to claim that Kinu Nishimura couldn't into anatomy. Those blogs only ever make fools of themselves. Do everyone a favor and fuck off with your dumb nonsense.

>>2352500
Somebody's ass hurt. The difference is the picture you posted you can tell the person knows about anatomy. The person I'm talking shit about doesn't. That is the difference.

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Any help? Also, who are some good artists to use brushes from? I'm using Ahmed Aldoori's.

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>>2352502
The fact that you even tried to mention those blogs as if they are valid at all means you're opinion is already worthless. No one in their right mind would take you seriously.

>>2352506
>those knees
>those elbows
How does she do it?

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>>2352506
I wasn't taking about a certain one, I was just saying there are tons out there.
But please tell me about Muh Styles

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>>2352509
>This level of butthurt

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>>2352513
>related

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>>2352509
You're a stupid novice pretending you have intermediate knowledge when you don't. Shut up and draw faggot. Grind enough and maybe one day you'll be able to give critique worth a damn.

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>>2352509
Not any of them but there's a difference between stylization and actual lack of knowledge. If you can't tell the difference (which in this case was very clear) then you shouldn't be critiquing for everyone's sake.

>>2352523
>>2352519
I can pic I already posted related. That's what it looked like. I'm fucking laughing though because you plebs think that person has any knowledge? Considering that's not how tits work, that's not how your back works, that's not how a neck works, that not how most of anatomy works. But please feel free to engage with me further.

>people still responding to obvious bait

>>2352538
I'm genuinely surprised how long that went on, people on /ic/ are stupider than I give them credit for. I agree with tumor mermaid though, I can't unsee it.

>>2352550
>people on /ic/ are stupider than I give them credit for. I agree with tumor mermaid though,
Good on you for admitting you're one of the stupid one.

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>>2352568
It's not bad if we're all retarded together. I'm sure with enough man power we can beat two trees.

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>>2352526
None of that is going to stop me from fapping to it when it's done.

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>>2352504
guess imma start painting over areas now

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Guess I'll add a background or something

>>2352746
Bad construction with lots of negative space, also with such a strong light source there should be more contrast between the shadows and highlights.

>>2352748
Learn how to draw hands, the pose isn't very organic either.
Other than that it looks good.

>>2352755
>Learn how to draw hands

I'm trying

please kill me

>>2352748
that little radar turret on top is cute

also approve of the freckles

>>2352749
how is it bad construction?

>>2352760
Google images?
Your own hand?
USE REFERENCE
lol sorry but you're just like the people who still buy porn dvds

>>2352770
I dunno why, but hands just #wreck me

>>2352768
Like I said, lots of negative space, the light streak thing in the background takes away from the subject instead of drawing my eyes to it.

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>>2352777
oh, fair enough. I thought you were talking about the position of the subject. Well I changed the bg. I got the strong light source thing so I tried to change it to show hard light. I could cut down some of the top area but idk if that makes the picture look better if I cut off that negative space.

>>2352786
You didn't have to get rid of the streak, maybe move it around a little but honestly it looks a lot better like this, now all you have to do is fix your shading and highlighting.

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>>2351361
your stuff reminds me of something every time, this isnt a redline
>>2351349
good thing your ignore my redline cause everything is still fucked.

>>2351349
It sounds like you keep going back to your sketch to fix stuff. That seems like a tedious way to go about it. Why not get the sketch to a point where you're absolutely satisfied THEN start rendering. That way you're not polishing a turd. This looks better than your usual btw

>>2352495
hot

wait, are you in hiveworks?

>>2352749
>implying negative space is a bad thing
>implying the negative space was badly used here
holy shit you're stupid, don't critique if you're retarded.

>>2352871
bad use of negative space >>2352746
good use of negative space >>2352786
>y-you're stupid!
and your reasoning is?
>y-you're retarded!
They took a step back and improved their piece, what's your deal in all of this? Who are you helping with your post? Who are you proving wrong?
Go draw instead of being so angry at the world.

>>2352507
The art of this woman makes me want to have sex so fucking badly.

>>2352878
>resorting to stutter posting to hide your lack of knowledge
well done.
The amount of negative space is unchanged, whats being done with it has, but that's not an issue of negative space, that's an issue of having a bad background.
The amount of negative space as well of the way it goes into the composition is correctly done.

Who are you helping with your horrible critiques? nobody, in fact you're confusing them. The fact he was able to fix it is irrelevant to the fact your critique was absolutely horrible and misleading.


tldr, you're a fucking idiot.

>tldr, you're a fucking idiot
everyone here is a fucking incompetent idiot that doesn't understand shit about drawing. that's why we're here instead than makingmoney on patreon
so please stepping out the line of bearable faggotry at every given chance, because this has become just pure elementary school "NO U!" bitching.

>>2352885
>no its everyone that's an idiot not just me!
its a critique board, giving horrible advice and telling people to fix what isn't wrong is detrimental. just post your art in the beginner thread while not replying to anyone.

>>2352882
>The amount of negative space as well of the way it goes into the composition is correctly done.
Dude, you're so angry you're not making sense.
The negative space referrers to anything that's not the subject which in this case was used to set the mood, the drawing had no "background" as in any solid object or wall and was just light, the streak of light was awkwardly placed and what I wanted them to do was to re-position the streak and crop the image.
You're just spewing random buzzwords to sound smart when you're barely making sense, your replies boil down to
>you're stupid!
>you're a retard!
>bad background!
>horrible critique!
but when it comes to /you/ actually criticizing their artwork it's just a jumbled mess of comas and buzzwords, take a breather and stop being so angry, you think you know better than everyone but you don't.

>>2352896
>buzzwords and commas
why can you not understand english?
>Negative space refers to anything not the subject
okay? the amount "lots of negative space" was not incorrect, what was inside the negative space was bad, but that's not "negative space"
>background is a solid object
background is anything that exists in the back, ie the light stream. it was bad, but not negative space.

>you're posts are just insults
maybe because you're incapable of understanding that you don't know what negative space in despite telling people to correct it.

fuck off kid, you're helping no one and your over defensiveness of something you got completely wrong isn't helping your case.

>>2352900
So you want me to spoonfeed people?
You think good critiques come down to redlines and paintovers?
I thought there was too much negative space (referring to anything that's not the subject) and wanted them to crop it, yeah, the fact that they found a better use for it doesn't mean what I said couldn't have worked.
>maybe because you're incapable of understanding that you don't know what negative space in despite telling people to correct it.
You tried explaining why I was wrong (emphasis on "tried") but it just came up as a nonsensical burst of anger and buzzwords.

>you don't know what negative space [is]
>Negative space refers to anything not the subject
>okay?

>>2352906
No, what you need to do is stop giving people bad advice on topics you don't understand. And now you're resulting to pretending anyone who disagrees with you is just spouting buzzwords despite telling you precisely how you're an idiot.
But this is /ic/, I can't be surprised I'm dealing with an idiot incapable of logic.

Just fuck off or get a name so we can filter you.

>>2352919
>And now you're resulting to pretending anyone who disagrees with you is just spouting buzzwords despite telling you precisely how you're an idiot.
>Just fuck off or get a name so we can filter you.
>we can filter you.
>we
As far as I know the only one using buzzwords because you don't even understand how to use English.
And wow, look at that crown rallying behind you, you are so knowledgeable that something as simple as negative space triggers you so hard that you make it so overly complicated just because you want to feel smart.
>despite telling you precisely how you're an idiot.
Oh yeah, you sure told me with your "you're stupid!" and "you're retarded" Very compelling first arguments. I bet you can't even quote where you "told me precisely how I'm an idiot."

You sure hate /ic/, you hate it so much that you want me to get a trip so you can keep lurking. How pathetic, but you love this, don't you? You love the attention.

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>>2352927
>>2352906
>>2352900

Why wont you two just fuck each other already?

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>>2352928
b-but he's a baka who just doesn't understand!
It's not l-like I'm just trying to get his attention...

If you sad sacks of internet arguing spent a bit more time drawing and less at trying so hard demonstrating you're right, maybe you won't suck so badly

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>when u ugly but still tryin

I'm out of practice af. Not like I ever knew anatomy/backgrounds anyway.

>>2349408
I like it.

>>2350020
I'm really liking the confident linework you got going on with the hands there.

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>>2352933
>tfw isn't using photoshop

>>2352941
>tfw using pirated SAI copy

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>>2352941
>>2352944
>>2352933
>tfw when why didn't you just pirate photoshop.

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>>2352946
>tfw I got the whole adobe suite as a gift, but still only use my pirated copy of SAI because the interface is much more user friendly

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>>2352952
>tfw i have never received a gif in all my life

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>>2352966
mail something with improper postage, and it will be shipped back to you

its kinda like getting a gift

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>>2351401
i think i'm gonna call it done here. any critique on the style specifically would be helpful, i feel like i've just been winging it for the past few months!

>>2351520
thanks! maybe i'll increment save next time and compile them into a process picture. it's funny that you say it looks like it was done in flash! flash was my main sketching and drawing program since i was 14, but within the past year i've switched over to photoshop because i felt i was stagnating. the lack of opacity in flash has sort of carried over to how i work in photoshop, i think.

>>2352952
did they die?
or did they open the door

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>>2352977
>Hello darkness my old friend>>2352977

>>2352978
comfy as fuck

>>2352978
>critique on the style
Hmm, I'm kind of liking the previous version without as much outline desu. Something just works better with the simplicity.

Your style's pretty cool though. I'd love to see a gallery page if you have one.

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>>2352821
ive seen it, i have no reaction to it nor do I know exactly what it is you see, but i want you to know that i acknowledge your drawing since you clearly put some effort into drawing it

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Drew this during classes for a daily doodle and could only take pic with phone. oh well.
>>2352933
Thanks man.

>>2352103
>making me fap to a WiP
You should be ashamed.

>>2353037
>INTERNET EXPLORER FUCK OFF MAN WTF

>>2350020
>>2353037
is it wrong that i find your work kind of arousing?

>>2353052
Yes.

>>2353052
I don't mind honestly. jerk of to it for all I care.

Anybody up?

>>2353161
Hello?

>>2353162

Hey, how's your art going?

>>2353163
Not well... /ic/ says I'm shit...

>>2353164

Sorry man. Can you link me to your stuff?

>>2353164
Knowing is half the battle, anon

>>2353165
no blog today, blogman...

>>2353166
I'll keep it up, senpai

>>2353037
really amazing, you do it with mouse?

>>2353219
>Mr I'm gonna quit cuz I'm a quitter

Nice helmet though.

>>2353224
i do not plan on stopping drawing, i just don't want to use a half finished site.

>>2353272
you fapped to it havent you?~

>>2353273
>making excuses
Whatever helps you sleep, quitter.

>>2353274
Of course I did.
Not sure how I deleted it, disappeared after the page refreshed itself. But yeah, wondering how to make a head like that (for anyone who saw it).

>>2352264
For what it's worth, I adore this style, anon! Keep at it, shit's adorable.

>>2353277
well, where are you at currently skillwise when it comes to 'cute' ?

>>2352362
find a better woman then or get a submissive.

>>2352025
That gun.. jesus. What is that?

>>2353022
Work on your lineart. Your art seriously loses fluid movement and style when you color/lineart. Think about the weight of the lines and compare it to your sketches.

>>2353321
Not sure how to approach cute. Creating faces viao Head to Hands and learning from Hampton on the construction of the face as well as Proko for portrait drawing. As to how to make a "cute" and simplistic face, I'm not sure.

>>2353337
i hate to say it, but post your 'cute' work

>>2353347
I actually would, but currently at work. May later tonight if possible. But as to how to approach cute and simple, I'm not sure. Only used to drawing realistic faces.

>>2353351
the way to approach anything: literally copy pics that look like how youd like your stuff to look like, do a page a day at least and make mental notes of things, eventually youll come up with your own construcion and cues and will be able to draw 'cute' from imagination

>>2349339
Woah, don't scrap this.
Turn it into a praying mantis monster babe.
That's what the proportions/lengths remind me of, especially the smaller head combined with the thin waist and the longer arms/legs/body.

Just needs some changes so that it has mantis booty sticking up in the air, and so that the arms/hands look more raptorial.
You're welcome.

>>2353275
what?
fine ,think what ever you want to think, ill just go back to drawing everyday before the comp thing opened..

>>2353043
>Triggering intensifies

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>>2350237
>Yu Yu Hakusho

>>2350304
It seems like you oversimplify body masses sometimes, tableguy. Makes things seem a little too flat.

>sketch inspires long ass chain of poo-posts
maybe it's time to take a break from /ic/

>>2353040
apologies for my sluggish speed in execution, glad you like it so far tho

>>2353471
Hey, what's your blog? I remember you saying something about advice but I was never able to find you. It was from a couple of weeks ago.

>>2353489
oh yeah, i was gonna do some arm anatomy tutorial for you but my computer crashed like 3 times while trying to do it and managed to corrupt the file the last time, sorry about that ;-;

(also i don't have a blog yet)

i'd suggest http://kitasite.net/b/musmob/ tho (use google translate)
i was pretty much just paraphrasing what they do, but with a lil more emphasis on how forearm muscles work in regards to rotation of the wrist
(also be sure to cross reference all their diagrams with photos of actual humans, i suggest people with a fair bit of muscle tone so you can more easily make out which muscles are which)

>>2353501
>http://kitasite.net/b/musmob/
Thanks! Hopefully I haven't forgotten how to read too much.
You plan getting a blog soon?

>>2352978
Love of god please blog

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should i go with the upper one or just stick to the lower one
getting real tired of this...

>>2353618
I like the lower one better

>>2353618
I like the upper one better

>>2353618
I'm liking the lower one better.Upper one just seems like too much, a little bit of an angle outward of her left leg with it coming back in would probably suit it more. But of the 2 choices, bottom looks better.

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>>2352272
Updating. Any advice on how can i make this image more appealing ?

>>2353618
lower one fits her face and upper body posture better

>>2352103
what brush is this.

>>2351842
Do you have a blog? Give. Me. It.

>>2353333
i guess i have to stop using a 100% min size brush for lineart.

>>2353501
>(also i don't have a blog yet)
Are you not keppok?

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>>2352103
I can't handle those curves, anon. Hot as fawrk.

>>2353190
Yea man. usually all my digital stuff is done with mouse.

>>2353907
head looks a bit uncanny, maybe simplify its shape to match the body?

>>2353862
You have a terrible eye for spotting artists. His work looks nothing like keppok's. I actually like it better.

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Pushed out of the draw thread. Told to come here instead.

>>2353942

Get out and go to the beginner thread.

>>2354006
post your work.

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I don't care for drawing or painting. I use video to express my failings.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gMJEHrSPiNQ

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>>2354007

>>2354007
Some other anon being shit won't somehow make you not a beginner.

>>2354006
fml

>>2352103
It's very off putting how tiny the head is

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>>2354052
good news, they made the head bigger

>>2354062
Just move on, you'll be more productive and might learn something on your next drawing.

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>>2352821
I appreciate the red line, however with it you aesthetically destroy the state of being that I'm aiming for, I do try to grasp the fundamental corrections of the red line but as a beginner I frequently fail at this

>>2352860
In part is what I explained before, I do a sketch, finish it thinking it looks correct and then start developing it along the way i notice I either destroyed the proportions due to my work and/or my sketch was simply not correct.

Idk but I kind of love this sisyphean process, I feel isn't as bad as it was in the past

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>>2352264
It honestly doesn't feeeeel finished. I love what you have going there but it needs more. Patterns maybe in the clothing and scarf. Perhaps a graphic element or more rendering. That style reminds me a lot of Jumei. Take a look at her stuff and see if you find any inspirations.

Also I finished this shit finally.

>>2354062
good news, guess who's getting his ass beat when i get home

>>2354120
Why does she not have a top on you paedophile?

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>>2354116
I wasn't too sure what was wrong with her face so I sketched out the basic and found that the angle of the eyes was slightly off, her chin is too high up which was throwing everything off and neck's too stretched out.
Hope this helps.

>>2353648
There's not enough color balance in the picture. There's just straight up green everywhere, with no interesting colors added or any contrast. It's ugly. Look up other artists and how they paint landscapes.

>>2354120
Really aesthetic and well-executed. The armpit/ribcage area looks off, though, like more of her arm should be visible.

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made a windwaker version of some internet girl. guess ill post it here?

>>2354145
like where it goes black? lookin at it yeah I should probably do something with that.
>>2354143
I don't say this often in IC but thats a good edit and advice.

>>2353332
iunno, i was just playing

>>2354148
Looks like an old granny.

>>2354062
I'd just start over or grind the fundamentals some more. I kind of agree with the back looking broken, and her eye seems to be oddly slanted and too long.

>>2354148
theres too much detail on the face, it makes her look old

Sooo where do I start with shading and values and what not. Where can I find tutorials for this stuff???

new thread when

>>2354300
OP nominations?

>>2354307
Either >>2351842 or >>2354120 if you cover the tits

New thread.
>>2354328
>>2354328
>>2354328

>>2354143
Thanks it does help!

>>2350020
Fucking awesome, I love it

>>2354332
I, honestly getting super mad everytime you can get a redline that refuses to address the things i want to be addressed.

Such as the ear/eye distance

>>2354120
jesus fuck she's hot
Is she based on a model?

>>2354120
jace you monster.

>>2349005
Nakedashi?

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Am I stylish now?

>>2356951
exaggerate more, and put some effort into the line work

>>2352464
>>>2352480
>>2352103

https://youtu.be/eH1c6cDdzss

>Get out of the basement fucker