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i made this story a bit ago, looking for criticism and an idea of what i should work on next assuming i do well with these kinds of stories its horror/suspense i tried to go for physiological horror

https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/52802631-where-am-i
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its the first thing i have really done and shared with people
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>>2344809
>-where-am-i

The wrong board
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should be able to click on the title for the story
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>>2344812
>>>2344809 (OP)
>>-where-am-i
>The wrong board

what board should I go to then faggot?
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>>2344815
LOL

>what board should I go to then faggot?

>>>/lit/
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oh shit, sorry kinda new here
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>>2344809
Get your shit together
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>>2344823
lol

>kinda new here

sure buddy
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i do admit to lingering around the random section but outside of that i haven't really explored much
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>>2344809
like the other guy said, get your shit together. You keep referencing your characters actions in random tenses.

We all have to get beat up a lot before we learn to fight. this is an early defeat, go back to the drawing board
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