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Hey D/ic/knoses!
Just raring up for the new year and a new chapter in Hybrid Zero. Gonna post some work to ring in the new!
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Power Girl piece of work.
1/3
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Next up, Refinement.
2/3
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Finally, the finished work.
3/3

All in a days work.
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>>2330880
lmao
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>>2330886
Care to elaborate?
I could easily say the same about you... but, then we'd be at a stand still. Only, I guess I have the upper hand.
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>>2330892
not the same anon, but the face looks super flat with facial features that feel slapped on. the cape doesnt make much sense, im not sure it's attached to where it should be to be blowing like that.
the proportions around the waist get pretty dang thin for how strong this character should be.

the overall color choice is nice, but you need to back it up with a solid drawing.
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>>2330910
Now that, I can work with.
However, My work ethic is such, that I dont return to an image after I finished<?> it. Best to move on. At this point it's quantity over quality. But, the crit is useful for the next one.
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On to the next!
1/2
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1/2
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>>2330880
Looks kind of like you went to rendering halfway through blocking it in, skimping over adding any kind of detail work.
- Face looks absolutely retarded
- Her trapezius muscles are uneven as FUCK they don't follow tilt like this at all. I get that you're trying to tilt the ribcage but it just looks really off overall, breasts too.
- Balloon left arm, completely wrong area for biceps to connect on right. Big area below her right shoulder armpit should be showing - but for this pose the shoulder would be lowered instead - seeing how tilted the ribcage -tries- to be.
- Hands are round and puffy, not how hands look at all unless you're severely obese.
- Massive gust of wind on cape but hair looks stationary.
- Her abdomen go out almost to the edge of her midsection, abdomen muscles are
- It seems random which part of the thigh muscles you highlight, it looks like you either don't know how they intersect or don't know them at all.
- Boots and leg outline glide into one making them into socks (no thickness).
- Lazy as fuck feet.
- Gesture is boring, nothing happening. Just floating in space
- Overall lack of symmetry, like top of abdomen.
- Generic and superficial design - nothing functional.
- Flat looking rendering, despite a very muscular woman.
- She's missing a foot.

Overall: Learn anatomy.
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>>2330936
>>2330937
blog?
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>>2330976
>,
http://www.hybridzero.com/

http://oni2030.deviantart.com/
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>>2330962
Man, I guess I asked for it. Thanks for taking the time, at least.
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>>2330878
>>2330879
>>2330880
>1/3's shoulders were significantly better
why did you change it
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>>2330937
>work on clothing, hair, facial symmetry, hands
>don't neglect basic anatomy/skeleton studies
I like how you color, it's kinda neat, but you should make sure the drawing itself is correct before you start polishing.
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>>2330877
pls go back to >>>/co/ with this bullshit
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>>2331015

Thanks, I made the mistake of learning to paint before anything.
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>>2331019

I'll post my comic work later. ;)
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>>2331031
pls don't
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>>2330880
It looks like a blowup doll
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>>2330985
prepared lmfao
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>>2330880
>>2330880
God that down syndrome face, shit mouth, nasty no knowledge basketball fake ass neckbeard chest, jacked up diaper crotch.

Cringing right now.
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>>2331030
Your painting is good enough and everything for now, so if I were in your position, I'd just stop doing it entirely and focus solely on studying anatomy, proportions, perspective, etc. until your drawing catches up.
Then, you'll be able to quickly re-learn whatever it was you've forgotten about painting, just because you've done it before.

I'd also reccomend watching some youtube artists' anatomy lessons, etc. (In particular, Sycra, Feng Zhu, Sinix) if you're still having trouble with figuring those things out on your own.

It might also be worth changing up the way you draw from doing straight lineart to blocking in thumbnails and refining.
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>>2331205
Dont know who you are, but, thanks. You seem to be the only one saying anything useful.
Yeah,
I tried to learn everything at once. I began the process kind of a learn as you go. I can see now that I still need some refinement...
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Well, here's a page out of the next chapter...
I'm already thinking of postponing it and taking a few weeks to study, but this one is already done...
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2/2
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3/3
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4/?
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5/1,000,000,000,000
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Some Sketchwork, and anatomical study.
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TOP KEK

You literally look like a shittier version of BBC

I think he's laying eggs
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>>2331435
Mugatu?
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>>2331767
BBC?
Do tell
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A Chun Li piece. kind of boring pose, but working on basics.
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>>2331767
Who is BBC?
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Some more studies. Anatomy ans Perspective.
1/2
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2/2
Trying to force the perspective a bit more
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>>2331808
This one looks a lot better than the first few pics you posted.

>>2331863
>>2331917
You should work more on anatomy before you start pushing the perspective, but you did a lot better with the second image. The legs are still a messed up, but you're getting the hang of it.
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>>2331808
drew a centerline so you can see how much you offset the torso (minus the shoulders i guess) compared to the rest of the image
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>>2332475
forgot image
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>>2332476
Hmm... I didn't realize how messed up it was. You get used to just accepting things after staring at them for a while.
Thanks
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some more work. Living and learning in the '16!
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i have to keep studying.
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Digital inks on this one. I might color it later.
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>>2330878
>>2330879
>>2331808
Your sketches have a lot of potential but it seems like you jump to coloring too quickly.
Like this one >>2330880 I have no idea how you go from the "refinement" sketch to this mess. Like holy shit.
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>>2330931
>My work ethic is such, that I dont return to an image after I finished
You should. You really fucking should consider it.
The sudden quality drop between the preliminary sketch to what you call finish is jarring.
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>>2335091
I'm still learning how to draw digitally. I got a Cintiq 24hd last year so I can work efficiently and not have to buy tons of blue line paper.
It's been tough trying to get used the slick surface. I think that's where a lot of my problems come from.

Here's one of a character of mine. Her names Cassandra.
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Your bodies are pretty well done but your faces, in particular the lips, are terrifying. You should probably look into that family man
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>>2335494
>pretty well done
>see this: >>2335079
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>>2335494
I'm trying to give them full lips. Bubbly but not bimbo.
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>>2335501
Once again, I can only work with what Im given...
So, care to give a bit more insight?
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>>2330878
I felt this sketch deserve more than what it got. I'm no master but I tried to give it another chance at life.
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>>2335570
You're technique and color choice aren't as good as the OP. Looks really bland imo, but I still like it more than what OP did.
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>>2335482
Bullshit. Blaming the tablet or going digital is a cop out. Your art has glaring anatomy flaws all around, your problem is you're try hard attention seeker.
Want to know how I come to that?
The fact that your art is at such a low quality yet you're pushing a comic, a website, and posted "muh character". I see it all he time and not just here on /ic/. People who can barely draw, or can't draw a hand, or have body parts all over the place, acting like their professional cartoonists. You can try to cover it up by drawing giant tits and smut but face facts, your skills are lacking. Blaming a fucking Cintiq 24hd which should be a leg up isn't fooling anyone.
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>>2335570
I like your line work.
Did you ink it at a higher DPI and then down scale it to get the line that clean?
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>>2335846
Well, yes. Im seeking attention. I'm trying to push a comic. Its called marketing.
Im not using the Cintiq as a cop out. Its not the same as drawing on paper. Ive been drawing 20 years with pen and aper, so the transition is going to be rocky.
And Araleas breast are huge because its a commentary on the sexuality of women in a futuristic society. DID YOU EVEN READ THE COMIC? I posted most of it on my website.

I am a professional cartoonist. This is all I do. And some commissioned work on the side. How many comics have you made?

Newest Piece I've been working on...
1/300
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Next/2983
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And then/1337
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After which/4328796
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Finally/6437835
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6/6

Finished Piece.
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I know I said I dont return to pieces I finish, but I might work through this one. I posted it here >>2335954 for some constructive critism...
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>>2335911
>How many comics have you made?
I'm working on one right now. It's about your mom.
Tried to get your style down I think I nailed it.
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>>2336010
Whats with the changing hairstyles? We got mom from dexter, then Goku, then marge?

I have to admit, though, I chuckled.

Really, though, if im going to take you seriously, I need to see where your coming from.

>3/10
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Stop drawing with your dick
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>>2335926
Your work is unappealing as fuck. I'm by no means one of those "muh anatomy" autists, but for the love of god, learn at the very least the simplified surface anatomy of the human body. Everything you draw is just so overdetailed and bumpy and the details are all wrong, which makes it ten times harder to look at than if you just drew a simplified, much less detailed figure but with decent proportions, proper rhythm to the surface anatomy and appealing contrast between curves vs straights.
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>>2336126
But he's a professional with 20 years under his belt. Who are you to criticize his work. How many misshapen humongous tits have you drawn in your life time? How many under the radar comic have you made?
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>>2335911
>And Araleas breast are huge because its a commentary on the sexuality of women in a futuristic society
Genuinely curious, mind giving a summary?
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>>2336383
Here:
Set in the far Future “Hybrid Zero” is the Story of a half human alien girl and her strange family. In a place and time, in which sexuality isn’t taboo, but violence is. This group of Aristocratic soldiers. who just happen to be related, must face down their own petty problems and stop a trans-dimensional creature of unknown origin.
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Forgot pic. Heres the Alien girl in question.
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And another, but the same.
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Close up of the details.
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>>2336521
hand is a fucking trainwreck, what are those balls and why are they attached to different places on each arm, wtf is up with her tits
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