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Is this the prettiest picture in all of art? I know it's awfully subjective but I want to see what you all think.
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>>2965749
>leave
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:(

I just want to see pretty art!
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>>2965749

No because

Digital anime > traditional anime > digital art > traditional art

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Didnt see one up, so please stop making individual threads thank you!

-State your request
-Wait for someone interested
-Be nice

Its that simple
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Can i commission this naked character dressed up as famous waifus https://i.warosu.org/data/ic/img/0029/63/1493808916792.png but in layers so it looks like she is stripping?

For example, every time anons roll a set of dubs Ill post the next layer until im on the last where she's nude. I know weird request yes but let me know if interested and price!

Pic related, a sad attempt to convey what I mean
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>>2965351
Heres the official ic/ commission discord
Invite. Welcome to Studio Spark.

https://discord.gg/6cB9U3J
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>>2965463

Much appreciated

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Sai 2 has been in development for like 6 years and there isn't a complete version yet and the last cracked version is the beta from July of the last year

I know manga studio is superior in many things but the line art and the vector system of Sai is completely superior to any other software
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>>2965305
I think vector graphics are stupid and only have use in certain moments like graphic design.

Krita is way better for artists overall. Sai babies your hand too much.

Everyone i met at art school that used sai was a shit-tier animu artist that refused to even try other programs and bitched their whole way through digital painting. One even stopped using photoshop partway through the class and kept using sai instead of learning an industry standard program.

Fuck you sai babies. There's way better shit out there.
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>>2965305
CSP is literally sai you mong.
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>>2965305
>vector system of Sai is completely superior to any other software
Try CSP.

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So the file image is where my skill level was 4 years ago, roughly before I started attending college. Basically what happened was that before entering college, I was a nerd that drew a lot but after entering college I became a normie, attended lots of parties, fucked a lot of bitches and completely abandoned art since I only did art as an escape. Anyway, I'm done with college, got a degree in business and now I'm back to square one.

My girlfriend left me and because it was out of state, I'm not in touch with my friends anymore. I work a full time job at best buy and honestly I feel depressed all over again. So I figured, I'd go back to art to alleviate it. The problem is that I practically lost all my drawing skills. I've been practicing diligently for the last 6 months and I can't seem to get past this beginner stage(which i will link in my reply) wtf do i do?

At least back when I didn't have friends i was good at art. Now I have no friends, no gf and bad art.
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Thanks for the reminder. I will make sure to never let myself go like this.
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The canvas will never care for your past. If you care about this, it's your eternal duty to work until you are doing your artwork justice.

WTF do you do?

Grind and dont stop. Self examine, critique everything you do, and work hard. Nothing and no one will save or help you.

Begin working with that attitude.

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Rev up those helpful critiques! because I am sure ready for-
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>>2965458

CAN'T YOU SEE WE'RE /ic/ !!

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Looks like there's a new Bob Ross style show on Geek and Sundry.
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She is too hyperactive to be as comfy as Bob Ross.

For now the tittle of Bob Ross' successor belongs to Peter Draws.

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“You are fired” were the last words I heard as I left the job where I worked for over 8 years and that is a long time, time so long enough that one can develop a strong bond with the job they so hate but then again money make people do cray things. As I left the building after surrendering my work authentication card which read my name “Stan” in big bold letters just then a fellow employee who was smoking outside the office building came over and asked me “Now what” and left abruptly as my former boss called him back but those two words never left me. As I walked near the parking lot and pulled out the keys to enter my car a cold feeling ran through my spine I thought it was guilt at first but then I looked back out of fear and saw a bleak shadow which had a similar figure like mine staring at me with cold dark eyes or at least that’s what I thought they were and as I stared back at them I kinda froze in my position due to fear and I stayed still until it passed leaving traces of cold and fear as I gained back control of my body and entered my car a twenty minute journey began to my home with nothing but absolute fear as my thoughts focused on deciphering who or what the shadow was and also “What Now”
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You're on the wrong board, try >>>/lit/. On that note, your sentences are far too long-winded, "cray" doesn't fit the rest of the tone whatsoever, and you changed "Now what" to "What Now".
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I was gonna just make fun of you I remembered a classmate who wrote great stories for class if english hadn't been his second language so i'm gonna try and help you smooth this out since I don't know your backstory.

>"You are fired"
Change it to "You're." Unless the character is a foreigner, almost no one speaks without contractions like this. Dialogue has to be natural after all.
Re-write that whole first sentence though. it's a huge run-on.

I suggest leading it into the part where he leaves the building THEN talking about the bond.
>ex: ...were the last words I heard as I walked through the familiar building, one I had worked in for over eight years. Almost a decade. I surrendered my authetication card, looking down at my own name, "Stan" as it exchanged hands, before turning to walk out the front doors.

You can insert more about the time at the company here but honestly, just emphasizing the length of time like I did above will get that point across without getting needlessly wordy. Less is more sometimes with writing.

The part about the smoking employee seems pointless, and why is your character saying "Now what?" to the guy going back inside? That doesn't make sense. A "Hope he fairs better than me.." line would make more sense if this is what you mean by that.

>As I headed to the car, <maybe some description about the sound. Is it a parking garage or just a lot? If it's a company they usually use garages, so describing the foot echoing would help build up the atmosphere for the next part> a chill ran up my spine.

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>>2964935
<Also no, no one confuses the feeling of dread with guilt. Describing it as a pure anxiety feeling that turns more into dread as he turns to see the shadow will be much stronger> I turned back slowly, body stiff with fear as my eyes fell onto a <Descriptor word that isn't bleak because that doesn't work in this context> shadowy figure staring back at me with cold dark eyes (if those were eyes). <you already mentioned him being afraid so don't mention it again, or not with the same word. There's times for repitition that can work well but this is not the way to use it friendo>

So that's how i'd write this if i were to do it just for example. You have a neat idea starting but you need to start using a thesaurus (Just use online ones they're fucking FREE), checking your run-on sentences, and making sure shit flows better. If you were telling this story to a friend, you wouldn't put all of these boring details. Less is more if you use the write wording.

That being said, I don't know how much critique you'll get on /ic/ since it's more of an art board than a writing board, and I don't know if /lit/ is open to that or not but its worth a shot.

Good luck bruh hope this helped you understand what you could be doing a little better.

Also don't use cray like that unless you're writing from the perspective of a teenaged girl from 2007.

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Can we all agree Dark Souls has god-tier character design? The bosses and characters are unique as fuck.

Which other video games come to mind when you think of truly great character design?
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Why can't we have a containment board for videogame concept art faggotry?
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>>2964684
A concept art general might do the trick.

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aight, havin some trouble with programs here, any of you can help?
so since yesterday i've been using paint tool sai, worked perfectly, no probalo. so today when I plugged it in and tried doodlin a bit (as seen on the right) I had a few errors - firstly whenever I drew something It came out all janky, and secondly that there was no pressure sensitivity. now at first I thought it was a problem with my wacom drivers, so I uninstalled and reinstalled them, and they worked perfectly, but still I had troubles with sai. now just to be absolutely positively sure it wasn't my tablets fault I installed the trial for Clip Studio Paint (on the left) and as you can see, works perfecto.


i've uninstalled and reinstalled drivers for the tablet, uninstalled and reinstalled sai, deleted preferences for the tablet, fucked around with settings in sai, but nothing seems to work.

I'm on a wacom intuos draw (don't laugh) and windows 10

>inb4 ">Intuos Draw >there's your problem"


left is clip studio paint, right is sai
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>>2964637
whoops left the imgur link in. I just copypasted this from a discord I was using for help - none of the solutions they gave me really worked. hoping /ic/ might have a solution
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>>2964637
The problem is the drivers.

CSP uses it's own, that's why the pressure sensitivity works. Maybe something to do with Win10? Did you installed with the highest permissions?
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I usually have to unplug the tablet, stop any wacom services in task manager, and plug tablet back in. All with sai or whatever art program off. I have the issue a lot with a Bamboo on Win10

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Do you feel bad if you don't give a client a finish product in the time you quoted them for?

I'm 3 weeks over my deadline for a painting. Should I be feeling guilt?
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you should be finishing it instead of shitposting on /ic/ about it
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>>2964430
>client
>/ic/
lmao
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Most people probably won't care as long as you continue to keep them posted regularly.

If you don't like the feeling of being late on your deadline, learn to paint faster. The more you paint something, the faster you get at it.

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Whenever I tone my paper (when rendering) with pencil on Strathmore 500 series sketchbook paper, I get this annoying texture with these pockets of white throughout my tone when I really just want it to be a solid tone of gray.

Will card stock or bristol board (with vellum finish) fix my issue?

For now, I am actually doing all of my traditional work on plain printer paper since toning the paper on an extremely smooth surface (I'm using glass from a picture frame) tends to MOSTLY do the trick.

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To answer some replies I'm anticipating:

Yes, I can repeatedly go over the same area with my pencil but that offsets my values to be darker and it puts more graphite on the page (which increases shiny-ness).

Yes, I know that charcoal creates dark values without shine. However, I have seen comic book pencillers lay down tones with a drafting pencil without the annoying texture issue as in pic related.

Yes, I know this issue is caused by the "tooth" of the sketchbook paper. I know it can be useful for some things, but I personally don't prefer it for pure pencil works.
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>>2963677
>Will card stock or bristol board (with vellum finish)
No. Vellum has a similar tooth to sketchbook paper. Try plate bristol, it's much smoother.
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Try smooth newsprint. It's heaven to draw on, and it's cheap af. Might not make sense for graphite, but it's ideal for charcoal.
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>>2963677

Pretty much wondering the same thing as OP. What is Steve Huston working with here to get this kind of finish?

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This thread is meant for artists who might want to try to make anime works in-between their studies. It is strongly recommended that you use this thread in conjunction with learning the elements and fundamentals of art. You can also discuss the visual elements of various professional artists as well if you keep it relatively articulate and civil.

Submit your drawings, receive feedback or critique others! Share your knowledge and remember to thank those who've critiqued or red-lined your drawings. Most importantly, have fun!

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Have any suggestions on helpful resource links? Leave a comment anytime ITT and I will look into it.
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We have a discord where you can make best friends! Join us here https://discord.gg/xC7eJvS
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>>2961229
>>2961231
worst 2hu
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>>2961230

Reposting from old thread because my timing is worse than my art.

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[your style]
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>pls draw fanart of my favorite character
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>>2953937
I want to know how i can make such cute designs like this one
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im starting to think these threads are started by 1 person who is trolling us into drawing stuff for them for free.

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okay /ic/ there is a question that i made since a friend tell me about her first day of art school, her teacher says her "you must forget your aniem style", that was kinda hilarious because her style was like tim burton and really far away to be anime, i guess but back to the first topic, why some art teachers that? and how to GTFO of the anime style and "git gud"?

PD:image not related
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OP here
edit: why some art teachers say that we must forget about our anime style?
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those who can't do teach
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>>2964655
Because you should focus on the fundamentals in fundamental classes. Without knowing what class she was taken I can't give you much more of a response than that.

What I hated is I don't draw anime I draw a western cartoon style so I had trouble doing realistic faces too but he kept saying "too anime." Fuuuu.

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:Thinking Emoji:
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>>2963810
how did you manage to make it worse?
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>>2963813
xD
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>>2963810

wow reelisticer anatomy so good wow xd where u study wow u should be famous artist

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