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My littlest brother (11) and I are very close....
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My littlest brother (11) and I are very close. He loves anime, so as a Christmas gift, I want to draw him as an anime character. I drew a sketch on paper and will draw over it on my tablet to make it look nice and official.
But before I do that, I'd like some constructive criticism because I don't normally draw in this style that he likes.
I plan on rotating things and playing with the proportions once I've put it on my tablet- so please point out any flaws you see that I can fix. Thank you!
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>>460587
Hate the artstyle. Can't just increase the head size of an adult and call it a kid.
Draw the hands, lazy.
Perspective is way off. Too many flaws to point out.
Eyes too close.
No hair part.
>Try harder next time.
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>>460590
Also, learn 2 gender differentiate.
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>>460590
Got it- I'll make the eyes further apart and head smaller.
drawing cartoon hands isnt difficult, i just don't know what to even put in them... Would it look awkward if they were just dangling next to him or something?
Lil bro doesn't have a hair part.
Also not sure how to fix the "style"- he specifically wants something anime.

Any other specifications? I can literally change the proportions/rotate/redraw anything here so specific things are helpful and nothing is "beyond saving".
He's a kid and I'm no artist so there's no need to be rude with your critique- I'm just trying to make my kid brother a meaningful present.
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>>460598
perhaps you should google "how i can draw teh anime?" and then it will show you, since there is a specific way to draw anime. unlike western cartoons, there is a standard way to draw anime.
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>>460600
I looked at a few of those and tried to keep them in mind as I drew-
I guess I got confused since there are several different styles of "anime"
Is there anything you can specify that stands out as "non anime/ out of place"?
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now that I think about it, I looked at a few "chibi" tutorials too- maybe I shouldn't have incorporated those

Thanks for you help so far by the way, guys. I appreciate it
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>>460598
here some instructions from your friendly ngeightborhood spipderman
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>>460604
its showing different proportions. for adult kid and baby. notice how they are not the right size, but they look the right age for their prportoins.
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>>460605
>>460604
Aaaaah I see! Thanks!
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>>460587
That fucking necks s ginormous
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