Namaiki page was already updated, but no new preview pages besides the one from the author's blog, just a little teaser sentence:
Someone uploaded chapters 1 to 3 of Ayamachi Hajimemashite on e(x)hentai:
I think we should get spoilers for chapter 23 of Netoraserare within the next day or two.
I can't help but think that the timeskip is partially because Shikishiro wanted to show them celebrating Christmas or New Year.
Anyway, Merry Christmas to all of you.
These guys visit them over the course of the year, actually, not all at once. I guess we could see their parents again in this chapter, complaining about them still not having kids, blaming Shu for it again, and then finally Haruka is revealed to be infertile after they visit a doctor. At least that's what I think could happen.
Sorry for the thumbnail in the OP.
No, genius, those are differentguys coming between the change of seasons during the year.
It shows that even when a year has passed Haruka isn't getting pregnant.
She is fucking Barren.
>No, genius, those are different guys coming between the change of seasons during the year.
Read what I said:
>These guys visit them over the course of the year, actually, not all at once.
I guess you replied to the wrong person. I implied the same thing.
Does anyone here anticipate for Haruka to actually turn out pregnant after the time skip in this chapter?
One of the guys is still coming to their house even though it's been almost a year so I think not. They would have most likely stopped if she got pregnant.
No, because it doesn't have the same effect if she got pregnant with randoms as opposed to getting pregnant to someone like senpai. Unless Shu's boss starts to regularly fuck Haruka then it would be pretty anti-climatic for Haruka to get pregnant by some guy she met once.
Looks like it went full retarded and now Shu's father is supposed to fuck Haruka... I hope that's false information.
From the author's blog:
Haruka still didn't get pregnant, but everyone is as dense as ever about it, both in the story and the Nip readers.
I dunno, Shikihiro could pull something stupid like that off.
Most of the posts there are really trash, though.
A majority either said that Haruka would still get pregnant with Senpai's child when months passed in chapter 21/22, that Haruka would become a public toilet, gang rape / gang bang or that she would do AV. In fact, the latter two are still a big part of the comments. Not a single poster even came up with the possibility that she could be infertile.
I hate that they bring in stupid fan fiction even when they talk about or summarize the current chapter.
Shu is perfectly fertile and she didn't get pregnant after two years of sex. Senpai came inside her twice compared to probably hundreds of times Shu did.
Her fertility wasn't tested because the entire story would have never happened then.
This spoiler looks legit:
What I could gather with machine translations: Shu doesn't really get a kick from cuckolding anymore after Senpai left (it's really like a drug addiction) and they showed his father a video of Haruka getting fucked.
They asked him if he wanted to try it as well, I think? He refused (?) and said something along the lines of if they take couple counseling or something.
I hope someone can translate that properly.
Shu went full retard.
>his own father
Okay. If this isn't fanfiction then the story has without a doubt gone down the shitter.
What the fuck. Out of all his characters to include into this, he throws in Shu's father? Oh fuck off.
So basically, this manga is trying to rip off No Longer Human by replacing drugs with a NTR fetish. Shit manga anyway. Seriously, a Dall-Young Manga gave me more erections done this one.
MC basically degenerates so low that he become disqualified with humanity. MC discovers saw his wife being raped but didn't help her. Wife atones and did everything for the MC. MC transforms from being human to being a slave to his own reasons (demonstrated from his hair becoming white overnight [This is of course, symbolic]). He become addicted with drugs and ask his wife to sleep with men for money, the wife agrees. After some time, MC become totally addicted to drugs and the dad of his wife got involve (Revealing that she was pregnant when he forces her to sleep with other men and due to the miscarriage of her pregnancy, she become barren). Wife leaves and MC got worse. He didn't accepted the rich inheritance from his father and become homeless and left for dead in the streets at the final chapter. During the final chapter, one of his former workers pass by him but ever notice since he changed so much.
During the course of the story, he was suffering from the burden to prove himself as a rightful husband to the parent's of her wife.
>MC discovers saw his wife being raped but didn't help her.
Maybe that corresponds to the Senpai flashback somehow?
A lot of that really sounds oddly similar to Netoraserare, just that Haruka was likely barren from the start.
>Shu went full retard.
Nah, it seems Haruka was the one who came up with the idea of fucking Shu's father.
Also, I think this spoiler doesn't mention anything about Shu being aware of this idea, so maybe Haruka is persuading his father to fuck her without telling Shu first. I can be wrong about this though.
Finally had some time to check in.
I'm going to try to get our version of Ch 2 of Ayamachi out by this weekend. I just knew I wouldn't be able to work on this sooner than I've hoped.
As far as the rest of the translation project goes, if this mystery party decides to carry on and translate the rest, honestly that'll take a load off of us here. I need to talk to Icebarrier18 on what he wants to do.
As far as Neto goes, please refer to the pic. Me and K-Slice have put in our order and as soon as it gets in we'll get to work on it.
I've finally got myself a new scanner so hopefully that'll help.
I dunno about these "spoilers". They tend to be historically wrong for the most part.
Merry NTR-ing to you all!
>They tend to be historically wrong for the most part.
Not really. What's wrong most of the time is the things we interpret from machine translations which twists the meaning.
It would help if you provided a human translation for it.
It's not fanfiction. The spoler for the last chapter was correct. The only thing some people didn't want to get is that Gotou came on Haruka's ass, not in her ass.
Same thing goes for the chapter before that. Almost all of the stuff in that was true. It will be the same thing here.
Either we misinterpret machine translations (e.g. who came up with showing it to Shu's father) or we get a properly translated summary.
The more we see of the 3rd novel the more it feels like it was forced.
The senpai arc really should've been the conclusion to the series. Shit like getting Shu's father involved in any shape or form is just plain retarded and unnecessary.
I agree. It could have been interesting if Kawai was to be involved in some form, but it looks like that was thrown out of the window.
I wonder why artists so rarely try to write a NTR where a man is stolen away. It would be a nice change of pace.
eh, is that the mind set of those people over there in 2chan,coming up with the most incoherent/dumbest fan fic,and for what?
lets be honest here, the last chapter didnt really have spoilers, it was heavily implied that gotou was going to fk haru at the end of the ch before,and thats what we got. Nothing happend in that chapter besides gotou fking haru and haru trying to shove shus sperm in her vagina,thats it.
As for this next chapter seems like something pivitol is going to happen just hope it doesnt degenerate into the partents joining in on the cucking, moreso hoping it focuses more haru getting a fertility tests,without shu being present and the physiological problems that comes with that revelation,but thats just me.
Normally, it goes like this:
>One or two days before the chapter comes out there's extremely stupid fan fics (such as Haruka fucking Senpai in front of a crying Shu in hospital).
>Once the chapter releases, we get normal summaries / spoilers
In this case it was the second one from the beginning. It was posted on the 26th and the guy got a legitimate copy. Nothing in the 2ch thread or the author's blog say something to the contrary.
So I'm very sure that the spoiler is correct. It would be nice to know who actually came up with this BS idea by having a proper translation of it. Might really be Haruka instead of Shu.
And the other important thing is whether Shu's father agreed or denied (I'm guessing it's another cliffhanger ending before he answers).
She's a Yandere now after all.
Ok, this is what I got from reading the spoiler (excuse me if my wording seems a bit off, english is not my native language):
Despite many different men fucking Haruka, Shu is not as satisfied as he used to be when Haruka was doing it with Senpai.
In order to spice things up, Haruka proposes the idea of fucking Shu's father to Shu. (Apparently, he accepts this idea).
Haruka shows the videos where she is being fucked by other men to Shu's father, exposes Shu's fetish in between and finally asks the father to sex her up.
He refuses at first, but then Haruka mentions she witnessed him stealing her panties from laundry the previous time they (Shu and Haruka) were staying in Shu's parents' house. Haruka uses this information as a blackmail material to urge him to agree.
He finally agrees, but says he's doing it only to help them out with their fetishes.
In the end, he asks whether Shu and Haruka still have sex with each other and gets a positive reply. It's unknown if it was a lie or not.
This is stupid. This manga goes from bad to worse. Also Shu's dad stealing her panties!? Maybe his wife. This is Shikishiro's worse manga alright. His one shots are more interesting than this. With less than 5 chapters left, what is he doing?
Man, I really think he should have either stopped at volume 2 or involved Kawai instead of this Gotou and parents crap. It's really weird that we haven't seen any sex scenes with Shu and Haruka for a long time. Do they even still have sex with each other?
So after this 4 chapters left. Maybe something slips out to Haruka's parents, all hell breaks loose, the families cut all contact with each other and we get the confirmaton for Haruka's infertility in the last chapter which turns her into a vegetable like Casca from Berserk. The End.
Trying to make Shu suffer as much as possible?
It got into his workplace and now his father involved. Perhaps something drastic is gonna happen in the conclusion seeing the bar is set higher and how much it's affecting their everyday lives.
If he really wants to go stupid, then Haruka goes full on public to make Shuu suffer.
At least, that's what it feels like to me. Shiki wanting their little play to affect their lives and those around it.
Setting the bar higher? He should end it. The plot is the worst I have ever seen for a long time. Every incoming chapter feels stupid and bland. It should have end with Sempai taking Haruka. Shikishiro doesn't know what to do anymore and keeps throwing surprises to keep the manga from falling apart.
Why is his father even involve now? Bringing Sempai or Kawai into the fold could save this series. How people still translating this surprise me. What happen to Gotou? Everything is failing apart. Why people are still defending this is beyond me? The chapters after the Senpai Arc has no more purpose. Ayamachi never suffered from this
This is his worst manga series ever. In my opinion, Ayamachi wasn't either. Ever since he went to Namaiki, his work become worse and worse.
>It should have end with Sempai taking Haruka.
Get over it, that wasn't going to happen.
It should have ended with Shu and Haruka making up but Namaiki told us to fuck off.
>The chapters after the Senpai Arc has no more purpose.
It wasn't supposed to be an arc to begin with.
Introducing Sempai is easy as Haruka and him meeting up and having no strings sex. Love him or hate him but he made this series relevant. I would welcome his arc stretching to two volumes since he can provide hot sex scenes. The void he left is simply impossible to fill. Only Kawai could have replaced that void and Shikishiro didn't even use her character.
Sempai should have taken Haruka and Shu marrying Kawai. How is that bad? He could easily add a twist in the end where Shu suffers from his NTR syndrome again and ask if Kawai to sleep with other men. I bet this is the real ending.
Ah, I see. Your issue isn't that it's getting dragged out or the plot but that Haruka stayed with Shuu instead of getting stolen by Senpai.
Keep rambling on. Maybe you find someone else you can leave out your butthurt.
>I bet this is the real ending.
No, it's not. Doesn't look like Shikishiro even acknowledges Kawai as a character that could change up the story. Seems like her naked love confession was just to have colored pages of a character other than Haruka. Man, I'm pissed.
My issue with Senpai? My issue is how the author is incompetent and wasting his characters. What the fuck happen to Kawai? He made her look like a slut and just dump her, she doesn't even have a chapter. I would welcome Haruka fucking off with Sempai and Kawai taking her place. She is the most underused character in any of his series so far. Her build up went to nothing.
The author planned it to end with the Senpai route. In fact he wanted to end it as early as volume 2 to start on a new series with Senpai. Look how much build up he had. Sempai is more important to the plot than you think. Are you too blind to see the gap he left? Namaiki was forcing him to keep the series going after the Senpai Arc and therefore explains the stupid divorce papers scene.
Have you read the manga?
You're blind. No one will deny Volume 2 is the hottest out of the series. Kawai already had an established as far as chapter 1. Shikishiro is just incompetent or being threatened.
That's a mistake. He wanted to start a new series after the Senpai Arc. Has anyone here read his rant? Oh well, stupid people who can't read between the lines will remain stupid no matter how much information you throw to them.
Read the fucking manga again.
Filler? Have you read the manga? His declaration alone is enough to destroy every single filler argument you have. He even breaks the fucking fourth wall.
Post this so called ominous rant. It was extremely obvious that the Senpai arc was stretched out and fillery. Two chapters until it even gets to the sex, one sex scene stretched out over two chapters, a pointless chapter 17,etc.
I do agree that Kawai is wasted, though.
The thing is that's where the fault of the editors. Shikishiro decided to end the manga at that time to fit in two volumes but because of the popularity of the manga, he was forced to extend it to three volumes.
You just shown how stupid you are. Do you editors draw and write the dialogue too?
Doesn't the fucking chapter show that? The fucking drawings, the dialogue and the fucking expressions? Do you even know how to read? These editor words dot have basis if it weren't for Shikishiro.
Read the manga. She dated him in high school.
>Do you editors draw and write the dialogue too?
They do change up the dialogue if they think it doesn't fit. Do you even know what an editor is? The main reason Sasugay was so prominent in Naruto was because of editors.
Wrong, most freelancer authors do not have editors.
That's why you Comiket is so damn popular.
That's why Web Novels became a boom these years.
Because no editors that will fuck up your work.
Look at Naruto, Uchihas every fucking where.
Raildex, Mikoto Misaka around for marketing whoring, a character that literally is irrelevant plot wise but relevant for sales.
No, do you even know Bakuman? Nozaki?
If the editor tells you to draw dogs because he thinks they're popular, you HAVE to draw them.
The fuckers in charge of censorship goes to the guys from the print department.
Dialogues is done by the Author, the editor then comes and cuts what he deems innecesary and adds what he thinks is right.
Then adds at the end pages when will be next issue, a commentary about the chapter developments and a sentence that will hype readers even if it's misleading.
Oh god. The manga industry is different from the hentai industry. The fact that you're are quoting from a wikipedia page shows how stupid you are.
Bakuman has nothing to do with hentai. Let me ask you? Who is the dominant industry, manga and anime combined or hentai?
Hentai that is published on magazines is manga, you dispshit.
And as such they're bound by the same Procedures like any magazine does except hentai is bound by R-18 obligatory laws.
Also, I didn't post wikipedia links faglord.
Stop being retarded and ignorant.
>The manga industry is different from the hentai industry.
How stupid can you be? Theserialized Hentai industry is part of the Manga industry. They work the same way like every other Manga magazine, just that their content focuses on sex instead of say romance or action.
Please get out before you embarrass yourself even further.
They aren't. All they abide at in censorship laws and the anti loli law, that's all. While the term hentai manga is use, the term is defined as a hentai having chapters like a manga are you this stupid.
Those artists working for magazines are freelancers.
Dude, it's you who is embarrassing yourself.
Stop deflecting, you proved on your posts your sheer ignorance.
And animators, manga artists being low paid workers is common knowledge, it's you who refuses to believe Editors having influence on the works.
Editors do not. I'll give you a homework. Research Shiawase no Okina's recent work. It was the magazine management that intervene and does not mention any editors. Big time authors do not have editors. Shikishiro is probably a puppet bound by contract.
That was because he got an eye sickness and is lazy in general. See his claims in a recent thread that he would bring out the next chapters to Hito no Zuma in a week, when nothing happened after almost a month now.
Dutch Rabbit teaming up with him for Ayamachi is a bad idea, imo.
>Haruka is barren
>Shu's impotency complex is undermined and he starts to feel better/get erections without cuckolding
>they see specialists and eventually conceive
>everyone learns a lesson about communication, good end
inverted NTR, going from a pathetic cuckold protagonist to a marriage that has a chance of succeeding (if they can put the drama behind them).
But really, I'm just fascinated to see what'll happen next.
>I feel like she's getting back at him for ruining her chance of happiness by pulling that pen stunt.
She could have just divorced him then. I think all of that is a very fucked up way to please Shu.
> Hentai Artist
> No editor.
Then what do you call those censorships and tropes the artists do?
Mosts mangakas do a specific tropes in their work because the publisher and the editors know they are reliable on producing such content. The only handful of people who gets away with this are some of those rockstar artists that they know they are in a better position not to give a fuck.
That's why you see some vanilla artists making fucked up doujins during comicket and fetish artists doing vanillas since there's no editor to say what to do.
It's a matter of Personal work vs. Professional ,
It's really the same thing like in normal Manga. Guys like Kentaro Miura or Eiichiro Oda can do whatever they want to, most others are bound by editors. The Hentai Manga scene is very similar to the normal Manga scene. That guy is just a fucking idiot. ShindoL is not comparable to the majority of other Hentai artists.
Are we seriously getting angry at each other over how manga are made? I know we don't have much to discuss and won't until spoilers come but come either find a different subject or let the thread die till we get spoilers.
>He refuses at first, but then Haruka mentions she witnessed him stealing her panties from laundry the previous time they (Shu and Haruka) were staying in Shu's parents' house. Haruka uses this information as a blackmail material to urge him to agree.
that has to the weakest blackmail I've read in a ntr hentai man baka ,this story.This should've ended at vol2 desu and Kawai was wasted hype also.
Im convinced its just going for shock value now ,first the boss of shus company and now his father lol
Where will the story go after Haru fks his dad in ch24 since ch23 seems to be the setup right It'll be like 3-4 chapters left after that right?
From the other spoilers in the 2ch thread it seems like Shu's father agreed to participate on a condition he won't be the one penetrating Haruka but Shu will. So if it's true, in the next (24th) chapter we'll probably see a 3some scene with Shu fucking Haruka, while his dad is petting her or something like that.
Damn, this shit is confusing as fuck.
At least we would see that Shu and Haruka still have sex if that were true and we would get a threesome.
I think the next step would be Haruka's parents finding out about it and everything falls apart.
No, you're retarded.
If the spoiler is true Shudad is obeying because he is avoiding a scandal if he doesn't obeys Haruka.
In Japan smoking only gets you 1 week punishment, a scandal of adultery will make you lose your home, job and work opportunities.
Shu's videos? Why the fuck would Shu's father even care about what his son does. Where is Haruka's proof of him stealing her panties. It's you that's stupid. Seems the people in here has turned into a blind following.
I dont know why,but neto is reminding me of this one hentai where, the boss invites guys over to fuck his wife so he can get an erection to impregnate her,and it ends with more coworkers coming over. forgot the name of it though.
but netos progression is getting really dumb now,its like to me,anything after vol2 is just filler till it states through dialogue that she's infertile imo.
Why? What else do you think is supposed to happen? That spoiler looks like the complete chapter. This really turned to crap, even though there was so much potential for volume 3 with Kawai.
i agree a route with kawai and haruka being jealous would be better then having her have sex with everyone and "going for shus dad?" because lets face it, in chapter 19 i think shu was hiding all of this from is family since is mom texted him and he said that visiting them would be impossible, since haruka was getting fucked by senpai.
>in chapter 19 i think shu was hiding all of this from is family
That was chapter 17.
Yeah, the story contradicts itself all the time, especially Shu's attitude in chapter 20 compared to 19.
>inb4 That was a wrong translation, autist
Pretty sure you're all just in denial about it.
All troll spoilers were hardcore NTR, this is just genuinely stupid. Nips wouldn't talk about the parents all the time if that's false.
No, it was this in chapter 19:
And Shu's breakdown at the end of the chapter.
Also, the flashback in chapter 18 was much better than the Harupai fucking.
Kawai is literally screaming to the reader that she wans to be sexed up by Shu, but Shikishiro treated her like trash afterwards.
Kawai deserves the same treatment as Takakura. Takakura used Shu's fetish and Haruka being upset with that as a way to get easy sex and Kawai was about to do the same with Shu but he just wasn't having it. If she tried to comfort him in a more genuine way I'd think differently.
Shu and Haruka have both made it abundantly clear that they are only interested in each other. My guess is that Kawai and Takakura were just the most practical/convenient plot devices to demonstrate that fact.
>Takakura used Shu's fetish and Haruka being upset with that as a way to get easy sex
Haruka's method to pry out Shu's issue was questionable but she was surprisingly sharp on this one. That explains why she never answers Senpai questions when he pressed her. Maybe she's craftier that we all would have thought?
You know, she could have simply asked instead of all this Senpai BS stretched over 10 chapters. They never really communicate what exactly they want.
What she's trying is giving Shu an erection at all since normal cuckolding doesn't work anymore either. They should go to therapy instead of giving him even bigger kicks like a junkie.
With the current development I don't see what she's up to yet.
He's still capable of ejaculation like we have seen in the latest chapter, so she's using his fetish to inseminate her until they get a baby.
NTR stories in particular can be fixed very easily with common sense but we have to apply some suspension of disbelief, otherwise we wouldn't get a story.
I think our translator should get his copy soon.
Somehow I lost all of my excitement for this series. I guess it will end with Haruka being infertile, them finally giving up on the cuckolding and adopting a child instead. The rest of the chapters are just pointless fillers to fool the most dense readers.
You mean 23? We already know. Father stole panties blackmail cuckolding shenanigans.
Chapter 24 will be a threesome with them.
Chapter 25 - 26 will probably involve Haruka's family somehow.
Chapter 27: finally back to the normal life they had in chapter 1, just with an adopted child and maybe them having matured a bit.
For Yandere mode to happen Haruka would have to be jealous of someone else, but bringing in Kawai at this point would be extremely rushed and out of place after the parents crap, so that won't happen.
And what's supposed to happen in two chapters with Kawai? Blackmail for Shu to sleep with her, but it's all okay again after he did it once the next chapter and she will never harrass them again? Shu would hardly agree to it without some kind of pressure.
Everything's gone to shit. Volume 3 had so much potential.
Kawaii calls Shu to the seduction conference room.
Shu opens door.
Kawai, Gotou and some other coworkers are having an orgy.
Kawai says their cocks are all bigger than Shu's impotent cock.
Shu pushes them away and ragefucks her like at the onsen.
Kawai sends vid to Haruka.
If I fucking owned the rights to this webcomic, Id end it anti-climactically, or produce an immediate, shitty ending just to troll my ridiculous fan base.
The levels of rage and autism in these cuck comic threads is ridiculous, the story isn't even that good. Some guy said it from another thread, CrossxCrime was better. The sex in that plot died, but it at least had a plot. Oh, and character development. This comic has literally become a 'talking heads' comic in an attempt to seem dramatic, fuck all is actually happening, it's very obviously being stretched out, and some of you guys are hanging on each other's dicks waiting for one guy to mail order this shit in so the rest of you can get dat jolly on.
Spend some fucking money and grow up.
He's probably just as disappointed with the recent development as the rest of us and doesn't want that troll to appear again that demanded raws so that he could jerk off to 2 pages of sex
Wow, look at Seinen's blog entry:
From January 4th
>I might put out Kizashi chapter 3 tomorrow. Depends how I feel. No guarantees. I want to try to keep releases up to 2 per week. But you never know. lol
I can't take this guy seriously. The other series he is doing, Hito no Tsuma and Love and Peach seem to be neglected as well in favor of some random oneshots.
I guess he will finish all of these in 2018.
>cross and crime being better
Don't lie anon that series was utter shit it is on par with this series. Actually I'll argue you that this series is better just for the fact it sticks to its roots of being about sex while cross and crimes actually tried become a overly serious series and failed terribly. Her being raped and not telling was stupid but since it was a NTR I understood it with NTR logic.
But then trying to make the audience sympathize with the rapist because "oh I'm your childhood who was abuse by my step mother and sister, so everything is all good". Was dumb as hell, plus the author got rid of the husband and forgot all about him as if he never existed in the story. Like the rapist was gay for the guy at first to the point he would get his GF raped just to keep them apart but now doesn't even think about him. I'm done even thinking about the series leaves a terrible image in my head
Sorry for no update.
Okay so the order was being held up by one book that wasn't ready. Looks like it's all ready to be sent out so hopefully I'll get a tracking number soon.
Been really busy but finally started to normalize.
I know I'm behind on Ayamachi. I'll put my game face on this weekend for it.
Hope all had a good holiday.
Also, found a rabbit on my front door someone probably let loose during the holidays. Mine now.
This is my first h/manga ever
Watch anime fapped to the hentai category on porn hub but never cared for a story behind the dicking
I didnt even know ntr was a thing untill chapter 16 (i came in late)
Its a shame this went how it has i would of prefered them normalizing after senpai or senpai stealing either would of been a great story (with shu managing his life and normallizing) but this father shit is trash making it the last manga i read really hope they save it some how
>Sempai cock forcing Haruka to leave was everybody's wish.
Stop speaking for others. I suspected that Senpai was only a tool for Haruka, nothing more. Chapter 18 made that very clear. What I didn't expect was Shikishiro dropping the ball so hard after he was BTFO.
I actually couldn't genuinely give a flying fuck about senpai, or any of the characters for that matter. I liked the story, and moreso the sex. But now it's turning into a splendid tardfest, I just don't know anything anymore, why can't I just know all these anythings?
CrossxCrime was an excellent series and the idea of her not reporting the rape, at least straight away, could have made sense. Unfortunately - and you're right about this btw - the sex in the series died and was entirely replaced by a fucking Brazilian soap opera. The girl was cuter than Haruka, and the story had more character development. People got mad because the cuck in that story never really participated much in anything, and because there was no sex, no translator will touch the remaining story. A shame, really. It had great premise, so does Netoraserare. Unfortunately, I feel that it's been kindof fucked now, and that has nothing to do with Senpai. It's more that the series is gradually degrading in terms of plot, it's getting repeditive, there's chapters where absolutely fucking nothing happens and it's just a bunch of talking heads, and then the dad thing. I don't even.
I think it's great the translators do this for people, I really do, I appreciate it. But we're allowed a view on how we feel the series is fucking up.
>there's chapters where absolutely fucking nothing happens and it's just a bunch of talking heads, and then the dad thing. I don't even.
You could say the same thing about some of the Senpai chapters. Nothing happened between chapter 10 and until Haruka started fucking him for two chapter in chapter 13. Same thing goes for chapter 17, actually. Everything concerning him could have been wrapped up within 5 chapters instead of stretching it to 10.
How were chapter 11 and 12 a good fap? Literally nothing happened there regarding sex besides Shu having delusions for some pages. To be honest, Shikishiro isn't all that good regarding sex scenes (that goes for his other series as well). His strength is the story, but that went down the drain as well.
I wonder what went through his mind when he made Kawai confess her love and strip down naked only to disregard her again afterwards. Didn't he see that she would be a much more interesting character and source of conflict than Gotou and this parents crap?
It's not even hard to write some sex scenes for her. She just has to threaten Shu with telling everyone how he lets his wife fuck around and she could be in his pants already. For some stimulation Shu could just imagine that Haruka cucks him or watching porn videos of her fucking Senpai while they're doing it. It's definitely more believable blackmail than this stealing underwear shit. That's Hana Hook level of storytelling.
Sempai was unnecessary stretched out.
Also Cross Crime was utter shit that lists its meaning aka rape fantasy the moment BF left the series, vanilla with the rapist is a huge turn off and hilarious.
And unlike netoraserare that got stretched from 2 to 3 volumes, cross Crime went from 3 to 12 fucking volumes where absolutely nothing happens.
That rumour was spread by Kawai (Gotou had her in mind when he brought it up). Instead of telling everyone just like that she could have given Shu the option to shut her mouth first. Anyway, it would be much more interesting than this stealing underwear father threesome crap.
> stealing underwear shit
yeah that blackmail was weak as fuck,not only did she incriminate herself showing the videos to shus dad,but she doesnt have any proof of him stealing her panties +it happened forever ago.
Correct me if im wrong,but in the videos when the c ucking was happening they really dont show shu in it from what we seen ,even though he is present in the room he is never in the shot,like a camera man taping/recording porn. So it only shows haruka and the person she is fking aka takakura \or random dude.
So all you get looking from the outside-in (from the fathers pov), is Haruka cheating while directing her comments towrads shu,right?
when youre a writer and you build a world and its characters,at least make the story coherent or believable.if youre going to do a hentai with a story make it decent,if not just draw 20 pages of sensless fking and moans i m o.
Carn is one the greatest hentai artists out there. Shikishiro is nothing compared to him. Story is irrelevant in hentai since people are just gonna fap. Sex scenes in Netoraserare and Ayamachi can't even compare.
People think this series is actually making a example by showing that a story can keep a hentai running. But so does sex scenes, Brandish anyone? I never seen such fans that are delusional and idiotic. Maybe the editing staff is laughing at you since they can just ruin the story and you people will like it.
Netoraserare is his worst work, the guy is going worse and worse with every series. In fact. This is and the other one before Ayamachi is his greatest works. Even the covers can tell you that. How can you go from this...
Don't tell me his editors now do the covers for his tankobons too?
There are some artists who excel in both departments. The majority of them don't have much to show besides good art style, though.
Nah, Carn is just same faces, same bodies, same henntai plot, same sex positions and same pregnancy end with the same broken MC.
It's like Sanbun with less shitty art but with more stupid characters.
So? Shikishiro cannot match him. Anyone would get diamond hard once they see CARN's work.There is nothing wrong with using the same things as long as the sex and art is hot. CARN is untouchable. In fact, Cross and Crime has better art than Netoraserare. At Shikishiro's current status as a Namaiki slave, he's a low tier. It's like he hit his peak already. If he is still the man he was back in Comic Unreal, Netoraserare would be very different.
This is his greatest work and already available uncensored. Tender Hearts isn't really that good, in fact it's worse than Ayamachi.
I have to ask. why are people still reading this piece of shit?
>I have to ask. why are people still reading this piece of shit?
I have to ask, how often will you keep repeating yourself? You said the same things a dozen times already over the last couple threads. And some people get flaccid whenever they see NTR, so your
>Anyone would get diamond hard once they see CARN's work
isn't true either.
People answered your question already. Even if it's not really good anymore, we still want to see how it ends. I don't drop series after I read more than a few chapters.
lol nope, nobody talks about Carn these days. His shit got old and busted.
Sure if you like samefaces. And there wasn't a single good sex scene, even the original was better.
>I have to ask why people still reading this
Actually, why you keep sperging on all the threads?
Looking for someone to agree with you?
There is Fakku for that.
You see his cliche once and you know the rest, watch the next and is literally the same, at least Takeda adds new fetishes. Carn doesn't.
>at least Takeda adds new fetishes.
Not really. He recycles everything as well. Mana Tama 3 is basically like his Pin Point game and he always uses the same stupid tropes. Some years ago he added dick-shaped and heart-shaped clothing, but that's about it.
His Ecchi series is retarded as well. Even many Hentai stories have better plots and characters than Maken-ki.
Carn part of the old guard including Takeda. Shikishiro is nothing compared to him. He is better as a Fantasy/Vanilla artist than NTR.
Better retarded and fantastic than trying to be realistic. Also using the same plot and fetishes isn't really a criticism. The fact that he can still be at the top of the ladder shows how good he is.
He recycled some but added new fetishes. Not the most original author but still tries things time to time
Carn doesn't even ranks anymore, his older tanks are better ranked tan his latest works that aren't even translated either. New generic netorare artists took the baton and Carn was left behind.
According to Amazon, Carn last tankoubon flopped amnd most of it reviews aren't encouraging telling you try other artists tanks, while selling less than Tsukino's Tankoubon.
Not even fucking ntrblog of all places gives a shit about Carn. You can't fall lower than that
In Toranoana, his latest work was at theTop 20 of 2015 year sales while Jyogi was place at the 40s. Netoraserare didn't even make any impact. Amazon isn't a basis for anything and being in NTR Blog doesn't mean anything.
>Also using the same plot and fetishes isn't really a criticism.
No, it is. It just shows you that an artist lacks creativity. Why do you think no one gives a shit about Carn or Sanbun Kyoden anymore? I would much rather have an artist that mixes things up while still revisiting his older works such as Takatsu or Marui Maru than the likes of Takeda Hiromitsu or Carn.
Nobody gives a shit about Carn anymore? That's news to me since one of his works, Joukyou Nightmare just have been colourized. Lack of creativity can't really be judged when one focuses on one genre. The same goes for Distance, nobody gives a shit about him anymore but he is still serializing like Carn.
In Japan, genius. Just because some leecher that got the work for free is adding color doesn't means shit, and even now only you seem to care.
Distance? Are you out of ideas to try to defend your side already?
The bastard got so popular that he is called thr Meister of Big Breats by nips and only is hired by Kairakuten and x-eros, popular magazine brands and is even allowed to republish old works in full color and no censorshit in magazines.
off topic here but has anyone ever tried an autoblow 2? I'm thinking of buying this one of ebay, ID 291644027609
Genius, it's actually part of a project which involves voice acting like a flash animation game celebrating his 15th anniversary. He is also called the king of NTR. He is untouchable. Even if his popularity has waned, people know him, people will still buy his works. He was never really popular, but he was well known and respected.
From what I know the master of big breasts belongs to Oda Non or Toshio. Distance is just as popular as CARN nowadays. Wani magazine doesn't really matter since the competition in hentai magazines are neck to neck. None of his previous works are coloured or have been republished other than as a tankobon.
Not to mention CARN is a pure NTR artist and therefore considered niche unlike Distance. Speaking of Distance, he still haven't finished one of his best works...for 8 years running. Oh well, it's probably abandoned.
>From what I know the master of big breasts belongs to Oda Non or Toshio.
Toshio Maeda doesn't even draw big breasts. Or did you mean Tosh?
>None of his previous works are coloured or have been republished other than as a tankobon.
So? Why should they? How else should they be republished other than as a tankoubon? That argument is just stupid.
Can you tell us anything of important in the chapter? I don't meant the "gonna fuck Shu's dad" but about the characters.
Haruka is more burned out than I thought.
What's your take on the recent development? I never thought Shikishiro would resort to Hana Hook levels of writing.
A sad view.
Sempai would have treated her better than this.
Oh fuck. Fuck Namaiki. This is a fucking joke. Shinmai no Maou is hotter than this piece of shit. The story is ruined and now the art. I suppose it would be a waste of anyone's time to even scan Ayamachi which also features lightsaber dicks.
>I suppose it would be a waste of anyone's time to even scan Ayamachi which also features lightsaber dicks.
shakuganexa said he would scan it in 4k. I think he's the same guy who always spouts how much better it and Cross and Crime are compared to Netoraserare in these threads.
This series is the worst. How people are still taking this seriously is beyond me. It's mutilated to stupidity. Not even CARN would go this far to destroy his own work. I suppose the only hope for uncensored release is an localization by Project H Books.
This fucking Shikishiro needs to fuck off Namaiki and go back to Comic Unreal or any other magazine that doesn't over censor. Even Vitaman magazine doesn't go this far. Just what the fuck, Namaiki!?
I doubt it. shakuganexa acts pretty chill even when against those crybabies from Tachibana's thread (I'm not generalizing the fans I do post there ).
The Crossfag is much of an attention whore.
No proof, not true. Fakku please save Netoraserare and license it uncensored. Every man here needs to see the size of Sempai's dick!
The posted machine translated summaries seem accurate. Only difference I saw was that Shuu's father was sniffing Haruka's panties. He didn't seem to be stealing them. Weak blackmail sauce...
For your pervs out there (I mean that in an enduring way) there's no actual H in this chapter. Only seen in a thought and the DVD-R that was shown to pops (Shuu's mother stepped out for a bit into town). Haruka did look hot in a scene.
As y'all have discussed... Haruka is most likely infertile. Shuujirou and Haruka won't/don't want to give up on each other and Shuu has lost his NTR mojo. The only way I see them parting is through death. Haruka's yandare mode might be a tool for such an ending, maybe a murder-suicide deal.
As far as a happy ending... If Shuu does go through on his word and commits to raising a child, any, then the could live happily ever after however... Haruka does like sex so without Shuu being able to perform... who knows?
I did use a black sheet behind the page. Still resulted in some bleed through however the color pages seem fine this time. No, not for Netoraserare. I do predict for the final chapter, Haruka might be on the cover of Namaiki.
Sometimes the bleeding is really in the paper. If that's the case, you really have to edit it out. I suppose Namaiki is printed to thin recycled paper. I wonder if Shu's father is just checking the laundry.
>(I mean that in an enduring way) there's no actual H in this chapter. Only seen in a thought and the DVD-R that was shown to pops
It's endearing. Someone posted his own translation of the chapter, not a machine translated one.
And that there was no real sex in the chapter was posted on 2ch already too.
>Haruka does like sex so without Shuu being able to perform... who knows?
She gets off on the Shu faces, not necessarily the sex itself. See her dialogue in chapter 21 and 22 and how she was far more into it when Shu was there.
A "happy" end is more likely, a dark one doesn't fits the author nor the magazine where it is published.
Maybe they'll just adopt a child and trick their families into thinking that she is perfectly fine keeping it a secret between Shu and Haruka.
This way isn't a Happy End but not a dark one.
Obviously you didn't read it. There were half a dozen chapters already with no or almost no sex. It has moreto do with the fact that the sex is a tool for the story, not the other way around.
Off the bat I can understand a bit of the simple stuff but there's a lot of dialogue in this chapter. I see that Shuu's father probably using a colloquial form of からと言って when he says 母さんがちょっと上京したからって
Not really important but Shuu's father was sorry for the both of them coming by on a holiday and only because his mother went into town (母さんがちょっと上京したからって), he only had enough food for himself and he wanted do something to fix the situation but Haruka interjects saying that it's no problem and wanted to help.
Again lots of dialogue that'll I'll have to deal with.
With that I'm out.
Hasn't there been censorship in everything Shiki does? Just asking the hardcore fans if they know. Like I'm used to it, but not sure why the censoring is needed when other artists do it uncensored, or is everything in Namaiki censored (highly doubt it)?
No, his oneshots from Comic Unreal is his greatest work. Ayamachi, Tender Hearts and Netoraserare are like amatuer works when compared to it. I'm surprised they aren't popular in here. I believe it DMP released it uncensored.
>or is everything in Namaiki censored (highly doubt it)?
It is. Censorship is always the same in one type of magazine. Some have mosaics, others use bars and some have full censorship (the worst kind). They're only uncensored if someone like Fakku releases them officially in English.
Some Spanish guys did a decensor for the early chapters on exhentai. doesn't look that pretty. One of Shikishiro's earlier tanks can be found uncensored if you look for expunged galleries or search on nhentai. Most artists don't really put much effort into the genitals since they will be censored anyway if you look at some official english Eroge releases. Hamashima Shigeo is a rare exception.
So yeah. This whole premise of watching your wife getting fucked by other mean really appealed to me. A month and a half ago or so, I asked my wife if she'd be down with having sex with other men. Needless to say, the divorce was finalized three days ago. So yeah, thanks, Netoraserare
There should have been more detail. Like Haruka's pussy or pussy being red and bruised from being daily raped, kiss or bite marks or even sweat. At this point, it's really hard to feel any sorry for her. Seems Shu eyes has disappeared too.
You can't rape the willing.
As I already said, it's like a drug addiction they try to deal with by giving him even bigger kicks.
And like every other drug addiction the euphoria wears off over time while the negative side effects are increasing.
Good evening guys.
Here's a quick update.
The chapter is 22 pages long.
I'm still transcribing the chapter but I'm translating as I go on the fly.
For the translation rough draft I have the first 7 pages fully translated.
(honestly not a lot of dialogue until they visit Shuu's pops.)
So that'll bring it up to 32% fully translated.
I want to have the chapter scripted/transcribed done by tonight before bed.
I do as much as I can tonight because tomorrow I can't touch it until around 9pm.
I want to get the translation rough draft done before midday Saturday so I can give it to Sands. Then I'll adjust/clean/edit the scans and get them prepped.
Highlighted = translated
Brackets = my notes (or even suggestions)
Haruka askes Shuu to get "that" out (of her purse).
He takes out a DVD to puts it into the player.
They both are present with his pops. Shuu starts talking to him to eventually say he wants him to be her partner.
Haruka eventually asks him (she addresses him as "father-in-law") if what they are asking is fine with him. Then proceeds to say "I'll talk about the incident with my underwear". Shuu had no idea of it. She saw him sniffing at them when she was doing laundry. She stepped away from the machine to use the restroom for moment and that's when Shuu's pops saw the load and grab a pair and starting sniffing them (kun kun SFX). He tried to play it off like "Oh, it's not what it seems..."
Hope that clarifies the situation of what happened.
Back to the chapter for me.
How did Shikishiro fall to such shitty writing?
I really feel like all of this is just filler that doesn't lead anywhere until they say Haruka is infertile 2 chapters later (which will absolutely shock everyone on 2ch who were still waiting for their gangrape chapter).
Still, thanks for doing this. If I could suggest you something to translate after you're done with Netoraserare and Ayamachi, try something from Hakaba. His storytelling is pretty good and he doesn't suck at sex scenes like Shikishiro.