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Shiwasu no Okina thread

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Continued from >>4021125 which hit bump limit.
Archived: http://fgts.jp/h/thread/4021125/

Class Trip to the Nudist Beach!! -- Editing is still not done for chapters 7-9 due to real life issues. Sorry for that, especially for sadpanda users. But you can read all the non-finalized chapters here. Mag scans, but been editing the tank version too:

Chapters 1-7: http://imgur.com/a/QgIkP/layout/horizontal/
Chapters 8-9: http://imgur.com/a/cYMUI/layout/horizontal/
Tank extras: http://imgur.com/a/jkjSn/layout/horizontal/
Tank extras translation: http://pastebin.com/2Yf4zaNJ

Thanks to anons, Nogard and Sands for translations and previous editing jobs. Thanks to anon for scans of the extras.

New story -- phone(?) scans in the other thread, two chapters only. No translation yet. I can't edit it, hands full with the beach and not my thing. Maybe the upcoming one will.

We can post/request/discuss his other stuff here too. Someone said last thread that many older works are still untouched.
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[Shiwasu no Okina] Dare mo okite wa naranu Ch. 1
http://nhentai.net/g/150417/
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>>4122049
Only went through the first couple pages, but so far I've been enjoying the whole thing. Thanks for sharing.
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One day the whole world shall know that SnO is the best artist right now.
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Are they planning another Cinderella Girls work? I keep seeing im@s stuff on their twitter from time to time.
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You can now donate to okina for the latest donate only pic!
https://www.enty.jp/siwasunookina
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So what's the deal with this new series? Does it really end after just two chapters?
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>>4124086
Looks like it... Thank goodness. I mean, it doesn't have to be vanilla, but rarely can I stand the rape-y old man characters.
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>>4122049
1-7: http://www35.zippyshare.com/v/lCz8XOuv/file.html
8-9: http://www35.zippyshare.com/v/gVEHWn0f/file.html
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Thanks, OP, I've been looking for this! Also thanks for the zip files.
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>>4122608

I've been a fan since 'Love December girl' and 'Shiwasu no Okina' back around 1999-2000.

Man I feel old.
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>>4122784
I wanted to donate via paypal but I got a moonrunes error message?
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You know, I'm only a few chapters in, but I have to say I'm pretty disappointed that this turned into a standard harem story right after it starts. I don't really have a problem with harem manga, but when there's a whole class full of guys and all the girls suddenly turn into slobbering sex-crazed nymphos just for one big-dicked dude, it feels more like a kek story.

Given that the ratio of guys to girls seems pretty even, and the artist took the time to make each of them unique, I really hoped this would turn into an orgy/casual sex story, not twenty guys being disappointed while one gets all the pussy. Can't help but feel that the artist is either projecting himself onto the class-rep guy, or is a total kek himself.

Then again, it's hentai, so maybe I'm a fag for complaining.
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>>4127714
I just wish that there had been more stuff like the first couple pages. Stupid sexy antics and all that.
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>>4127714
I definitely agree the manga would have been better if it weren't a generic harem story, but that's not to say it's bad.
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>>4127714
Nah I liked how the niggas got their penises made fun of and essentially kekolded, it adds appeal for people who are into that she while not drawing attention to it. Okina did a good job really driving it home that he was fucking girls he goes to school with and I'm wondering how everyone's gonna act for the rest of the year knowing one guy banged every girl in their classroom
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>>4127714
Meh, we got 7 volumes of Shining Musume full of orgy stuff from him, I prefer nudist the way it is. Orgies tend to be pretty shit in manga format anyways, not enough real estate to depict a good number of goings-on at once.
In the end, you can't please everyone. Just like vanillafags are up in arms over the recent chapters, there's always going to be a group that isn't satisfied.
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Does anyone know of any other manga that have a public nudity theme similar to this one, where the people aren't exactly comfortable with it at first? It's a really huge fetish of mine and I love this one, but I've read it to death already.
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the newest work makes no sense at all. Are those kids just watching a friend of theirs get raped?
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>>4128290
You must be new to hentai.
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>>4127714
if something as light as this tickles your kekold radar, then you have issues
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>>4127714
The other male classmates get theirs, too. Read it to the end
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>>4128674
One extremely short scene doesn't really count all that much.
I have the same opinion as him. The series would have been perfect if the other boys would get together with some of the girls as well.
Let the MC have maybe 2 or 3 chicks, while the others build one on one couples or threesomes.

Much better than one guy plowing through the entire class while the others stand around sticking their thumbs in their asses.
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>>4128704
yeah i agree, i'm not unsatisfied however.
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>>4128704
I didn't mind that at all, on the other hand I was pretty mad that the girl with the braided hair didn't get any sex scenes.
What the hell was that about?
She was the cutest of the bunch.
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Not enough Maria
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>>4122297
no... penis what are you doing this is not a good thing
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>>4128920
>I was pretty mad that the girl with the braided hair didn't get any sex scenes
Preach.
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Anyone recommend some artists with a similar style to Okina? (I'll also take Royal Koyanagi)
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>>4122049
damn i wish there was more of sensei riding dick
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>>4130540
Doesn't matter.
The whole class can't please her anyways, and she won't allow herself to have an orgasm from her students.
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>>4128704
>>4127714

Paying attention to the early chapters, it looks like he was planning for it to go that way, with the protag getting the first trio and that nerdy kid getting the nerd girls and so on.

But I guess he changed it right around Chapter 3 or something.
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>>4128035
Mizuryu kei land has something like that, first time visitors to a sex theme park.
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>>4130548
Class Pres was the only male capable of multiple creampies.

The other males were pretty tired and shown panting and sweating only after one creampie.

The foreign women didn't even ahegao since those foreign women were already getting banged 24/7 by their fellow foreign males with 8 packs and super fit bodies compared to scrawny, overweight japanese teenage males.

At least, Class Pres works out and spends his time reading actual books.

There is a fairly good chance Class Pres might have a chance of keeping up with Sensei if we take his stamina into account.
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>>4130962
He already has 2 girls to take care that night.

Does Okina participates of comiket by any chance?
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>>4122049
That is
Without a doubt
The best H manga I've ever read
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>>4131606
nah fa.m are you new or something? Peace hame blows this the fuck up. HHH does even. READ YOUR SnO NERD
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>>4131802
>>4131802
naw this shits on both of those
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Are all the chapters out? I've only been able to find chap 1 on sad panda
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>>4131974
Did you even read OP?
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>>4129281
Objectively the hottest girl of the bunch.
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>>4131992
Sorry, didn't specify. I'm referring to the new one after the beach trip, link in second post is ch1
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>>4122049
Holy shit
I only could make it through Chapter 2, ill bookmark this shit for another times thanks
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>>4122049
Thanks OP.

Also i have a new favorite.
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>>4127129
Really? Were his books accessible online around that year?

I discovered SnO in 2007, with a Phoenix Wright doujin, I liked the art style and since then every year I don't know how I become even more in love with his new works.

>>4122608
I hope so too.
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Why is nobody uploaded this to sadpanda?
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SNO is awesome, and Nudist beach is fucking great. The two slutty girls were just goddamn boner fuel.

Considering that last statement, should come as no shock that I want him to make another Panty and Stocking with Garterbelt doujin and while focusing on Scanty and Kneesocks would be good...not having the sex scenes be +mf would be awesome (+mf= a pole for every hole. Not my cuppa joe.)
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>>4134282
1 to 6 is here - http://exhentai.org/g/802322/6f3c8def07/

The rest don't have complete editing so keep it between ourselves on /h/
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>>4136240
for those who can't into panda

http://nhentai.net/g/138521/
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C89 PREVIEW?
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>>4141998
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>>4141998
Looking good so far. I'm not really into the new Idolmaser characters as much as the pre-cinderella girls, but this definitely suits my fancy.
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>>4141998
I'll upload some of the sketches too.
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>>4141998
One more to go.
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>>4141998
Last one.
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>>4141998
Found another one.
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>>4142006
I bet SnO is doing pasties to avoid having to censor things.
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>>4141998
"Checks C89 budget"

=)
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>>4141998
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>>4141998
Found some more on the twitter feed
https://twitter.com/siwasunookina/media
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>>4141998
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>>4141998
Found some more from last month I think.
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>>4141998
Why is this R-15? Shouldn't it be R-18 cuz it's pornography?
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>>4142300
Well, there's visible buttholes, but the vags are all covered and so are the nips.
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>>4141998
Got digital raw of this one.Any translator here? I'm willing to typeset this asap.
http://g.e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=13661
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I couldn't decide which scenes was the best, but in the end Dainose's was the ultimate winner.

Besides the very hot sex positions, the occasional glances towards Akiho to make her jealous, her admiration for his duty as a class rep in the flashback and the use of the condom to have an excuse for a next time really drove it home.
Her scene rivaled Sanaka's in terms of really strong and emotional love making, though they were both really similiar.

Maybe I'm reading too much into this, but I observed that the girls who cared about him were the only ones who had proper sex between two parties and a flashback with more than one panel, these girls being Akiho, Sanaka and Dainose.

The gyarus were superb as well. I really liked Machi's conflict about betraying her boyfriend despite being a slut, plus that little comment in the extras made it seems like a netori situation, which I always welcome it.

Pic related was kind of confusing though. Being in denial is nothing strange, but why wouldn't she mention her ex instead of her father in the inner monologue? And I thought the friends accusing her of being a nympho was just in jest until the extras confirmed it.
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>>4122297
Where is chapter 2?
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>>4144049
>Machi's conflict about betraying her boyfriend despite being a slut, plus that little comment in the extras
where is this?
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It is up. Translation are welcome.
http://exhentai.org/g/887977/68dab9bb8c/
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Sorry for silence but plugging away, dammit.

>>4144642
I can see the pixels on some pages. Would've thought it was drawn digitally if not for the line-art posted.

>>4144049
Seems he just forgot stuff from early on, he admits it. Unless there was a mistake, but the translator said she uses "papa".
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>>4144642
What a waste, 47 pages and no proper action. I still love Okina though.
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>>4144049
>Pic related was kind of confusing though.
>>4146715
Yeah, it's confusing. Either it's deliberate because even the audience shouldn't know yet, or he forgot, or the translation is wrong.

>>4144642
What's this then? Is it up somewhere which doesn't constantly taunt you with a panda?
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>>4147643
It's a mirror with wrong title but here:
http://nhentai.net/g/152430/
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I´ve always love the work of Shiwasu no Okina, loved Sei Sou Tsui Dan Sha but my all time favorite was about these classroom where the girls didnt get along with the boys, so the teacher give the girls some magical rings that make them grown-ups so they could fuck the boys and tame them (It ends with a big orgy with all the classmates, and the teacher). I found it in a spanish H magazine, but when I search for it online only found it in Japanese, never in English. Anyone knows if that doujinshi was ever translated?
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>>4148355
never heard of that one desu
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New work by Okina in next months Comic Aun gets advertised with Sakai Maria.
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>>4149326
Advertising is not the content, Beach is over.
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>>4148792
No one knows about it. i believe even Okina said at the end of the book that he didnt like it because it was loli and the dumb premise. But I tell you, it is awesome.
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>>4149557
Title would help
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>>4141998
Is it this one?
http://www.animenewsnetwork.com/news/2016-01-03/voice-actor-minoru-shiraishi-apologizes-for-downloading-dojinshi/.97167
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>>4149785
Yeah like, if I got the tittle I could search for it myself and like, download it and like, fap to it. But I can only remember the premise and every page/blog/torrent that claims to have every work of Okina has failed me.
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GOT IT! http://king.carrot.free.fr/Love_December_Girl/m/ldg.htm
Searching for translation
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>>4150724
So that was the plot for this doujin? It's awesome indeed. I had this doujin here, never found it translated also.

Anyway I have this (pic related), everything is translated unless it was impossible to find. If anyone is interested, I can upload it somewhere.
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>>4151207
thats way more (organized) than my current collection would appreciate an upload
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The pairings in Nudist Beach are so good that after I'm done masturbating I fall into a deep depression. Because I know I will never experience sex as good as that with any single girl.
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>>4151207
Great collection.
I suppose this is it, then. The doujin was never translated, but at least now I know other people have seen it too...
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Re-requesing translation.
http://g.e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=13661
If this somehow wasn't translated in a month i will have no choice but to pay for translation and i hate that.
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>>4152320
No sex, not worth anyone's time. I really disappointed about Okina's C89. Hopefully C90 is better. Also, they are already lack of English translators in hentai, who translates for free not profit from piracy.
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>>4149326
They certainly knew what they were doing when they went about selecting one of the manga's girls for their cover.
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bump?
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>>4154346
Stop it, piece of it. The project's long dead.
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>>4154362
No. Job's been in the way. But the blame lies on me.

[spoiler]I've been saving up to commission the decensoring of the tank by belldandy100, if it helps. That's been going smoothly,[/spoiler]
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>>4147014
Well, it's an R-15 book. Not sure what you were expecting.
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desu artstyle gets me more than story 90% of the time. Shiwasu no Okina is GOAT art.
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>>4154432
You're wasting your money. Fakku has it licensed already.
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>>4154517
This little shit is one of the highest selling hentai manga ever. It top every chart in Japan including Toranoana. Even Jewcob admits he wants to license it. This being released uncensored is inevitable.
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>>4154517
>>4154524
This isn't Wani.
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>>4154612
So? Fakku are not restricted only to Wani.
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>>4144049
She could have had sex with their clothes on and she didn't get a good look at his dick?
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>>4152320
..and it is done.
http://exhentai.org/g/892332/073b59c974/
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Tried posting this the other day but it wouldnt let me. Seen the thread is still up so sharing it, first colour I have ever done, thanks op!
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>>4157427
walking dead?
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>>4156209
Thanks.
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Can someone translate that 2 chapter story by okina?
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>>4159654
Is the second chapter out?
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>>4156209

WOOW thanks
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>>4161245
>out
>>4161245
yes
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translate the short story
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i can accept an immortal erection, in fact there are cases of being able to ejaculate and stay erect for multiple girls in a row if enough mates are there
what i often just find so hard to believe sometimes in hentai is just the sheer physical stamina on these dudes. On a good day at best i might be physically able to have sex 3 times in one day without the entirety of my legs giving out from under me. these fuckers are athletes
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>>4161684
if we're talking biology here, the occurance of STD/I's is 1/3 of the population
meaning mc most likely now has 4 and has gotten tons of sex and spread them to the girls of the class
while other boys in the class got to have sex once with extremely promiscuous partners

everybody gets happy ending with a handful of diseases
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>>4161702
1/3 of the world population or of japan? this makes a world of difference
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Where the fuck is COMIC AUN 2016-1???
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>>4162687
Really now? The search window is on websites to get used when you're searching for stuff, you know. Still, here you go:
http://exhentai.org/g/892381/bbf5f90602/

Anyway, since it's a thread on Shiwasu no Okina we're on, you probably meant Aun 2016-3 - which is due January 28th. Have fun waiting.
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>>4162998
What are you even smoking dude?
If I wanted Shingeki I would have asked for that.
I clearly meant the magazine containing this http://exhentai.org/g/883311/b96743d317/
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>>4161702
>once

Nah, read the dialogue
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>>4134248
Not him, but I was a fan too back then. Raws were definitely available, I found them on some french guy's site around 2000. I don't remember its name tho, he had the webiste in both english and french iirc.
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>>4150716
It's the first story in SnO old volume called Love from 1998.
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>WHERE IS THAT FREE SEX BEACH
I read all of it, thanks for sharing
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anyone have a source for the extra booklet from Nudist Beach? can't find large res versions
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>>4167757
A kind anon scanned them for us.
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>>4132841
>this girl doesn't get a sex scene
thoroughly mad
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any other nude beach doujins/mangas?
im 'reading' this one literally for year and a half
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>>4151207
Sorry for being such a blatant newfag, but what does C77, C78 etc stand for?
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>>4170349
Comiket #77
Comiket #78
Go google what Comiket is
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>>4170353
I already know what Comiket is, but thanks for spoonfeeding
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>>4169734
I think he just forgot
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>>4172329
>tag: 'off-screen' fetish
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>>4172691
This could probably qualify for tag:blue balls
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>>4122049
>http://imgur.com/a/QgIkP/layout/horizontal/
gotta love imgur, always has a link at the bottom to download an entire album

You rock OP
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>>4122049

This is a great project all, and I don't mean to be rude, but consider seeing if you can get a good translator to QC everything when/if you edit the translations into the tank scans. I haven't read all of the translations, just parts of it to see how translating from a translation worked out, and I noticed multiple errors. Most of this page for instance is completely wrong. It's more like:

"Did you hear about Sanaka?"
"Y-yeah..."
"When she's excited she only sees what's right in front of her. I'm pretty sure she's gonna confess to you while having sex."
"What?" (what's there is fine too, you can fill that bubble with a number of things)
"Seems Ayame tried to put put a stop to it, but she's a high schooler, so you're not going to stop, are you?"

The ○学生 confused me too at first, but she's clearly in the same grade as the rest of them. Honestly not sure why it'd be censored, but looking at how the line is written and using some deductive reasoning, it's most definitely not anything about her looking like a middle schooler (there's nothing in there to hint at "looking"). Pay attention to the なんだから.

Again, I'm not trying to be a cunt, I'm just letting you know that the translation has problems so you can hopefully get them taken care of and it turns out better in the end. Everyone wins.
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>>4174470
That part wasn't actually a translation of a translation. I translated it myself. That particular page I found very frustrating. I'm not a skillful translator and I used a combination of google translate, jisho.org, reverso, babelfish, my japanese book, some verb charts, several other websites to help with slang.

>(there's nothing in there to hint at "looking")
I thought one of the meanings of みたい was something looking like something else? I realize going back over this that it's not using the 見 kanji, so I guess I should have noticed, but since I couldn't make heads or tales of this bubble I just went with the closest thing I could figure.
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>>4174532

I just realized I forgot to post the image. Sorry for being retarded.

Yeah no worries, I get it, slang and casual speech are a bitch, especially if you don't know too much about it. It's not like I'm perfect either.

>I thought one of the meanings of みたい was something looking like something else?

It's like "seem", and you got it right where it was used, that Ayame seemed like she was trying to put a stop to it. However, she only used みたい that one type, after that she just says 「○学生なんだから」("is an X schooler, so") 止まんないよね ("not going to stop, right?").

Again, sorry I seem like a cunt, I'm just offering a suggestion. Not sure if this is your first tank or not, but one of my first projects was a tank that I got no QC on and while I was very proud of my accomplishment at the time, I'm terrified to even look at it now.
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You mean to tell me not one of these cunts had access to a lawyer to sue the fuck out of this teacher?
>Chairman of the whatever
I don't fucking care if you're the fucking president of china
>asian ethics
Makes sense why they're fucked in the head anyway
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>>4174535
>sorry I seem like a cunt
You seem to have mixed up being a cunt and being very helpful. This is good info, thank you. I haven't really looked closely at the first few chapters.

>"I'm pretty sure she's gonna confess to you while having sex."
With 流れ, I think this is more like "I'm pretty sure she will confess to you and sex will follow."?

>"but she's a high schooler, so you're not going to stop, are you?"
The subject is unclear, but I think "but you're young and virile (in high school) so you're not going to stop, are you?" makes more sense.

You said you noticed multiple errors. What else did you find?

If you want to help out with QC/translation, there are some lines in the bonus pages I am not sure are correct. Email nudity at mail dot com if you want to discuss it in private, or we could do it here.
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>>4174846

>With 流れ, I think this is more like "I'm pretty sure she will confess to you and sex will follow."?

You could say that. She's basically saying that she'll confess and during that time, it'll lead into sex.

>The subject is unclear,
Yeah, the vagueness of the language trips up even experts. Your thoughts also make sense. I'll think about it some more and maybe even ask another translator and see what their thoughts are.

If I've got enough time to go through the tank again or the first 6 chapters rather as I think that's all that's been translated and released, I'll probably shoot you an email.
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>>4174535
The translation is fine, I wouldn't have put it better. You're being a perfectionist. The context match the translation. Sanaka looks like a middle schooler.

Are you sure you're not the one that is incorrect?
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>>4174852
>you're being a perfectionist.
come on anon, don't be mediocre over a translation consult
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>>4174852
This is the person in question:

If clarity is the culprit, I would rephrase it as:

Even though she looks like a middle schooler, she's the same age as us...
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>>4174852

Yes, I am a perfectionist. I think very hard about my own translations, I want them both accurate and natural sounding. The guys doing this project seem to be putting in an honest effort, and I wanted to help that. There are a lot of people who just shit out translations without thinking of quality at all, there's no helping them. If someone shows effort though, I like to give a hand if I can. And yes, I'm sure it's incorrect. If you can read Japanese, it's pretty obvious that the bubbles about her being "stolen away" and "while we're having sex" is incorrect. I can give you a step by step explanation as to why it is, if you'd like, but I'd rather not bother.

As for the bubble about the girl looking like a middle schooler, yes, that certainly makes sense when you think of her, but again, if you examine the actual line, it's clearly erroneous.

No hard feelings to you, NogardNogard, we all fuck up, I'm just answering a question.

>>4174862

In which case, you'd be wrong. I already explained why.
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>>4174862
Even though she looks like a middle schooler, she's the same age as us so I'm not gonna try and stop you from returning her feelings.

>>4174870
The thing is, you're wrong. you're failing to understand the actual point. Do you even know why the line is censored?

It isn't even vague. You're thinking too much about it. There is nothing erroneous about the translation. In fact the whole page is right. As for the other bubbles, it isn't really wrong. These does need rephrasing since it isn't translated clear enough. At least the NTR part.

You're just wrong. Japanese relies heavily on the context of the conversation and it can change the meaning of what is being said. Actually, the context dictates the actual meaning of the words.
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>>4174862
>>4174535
Whats happenig here?!

Nudist Beach book had zero netorare last time i checked !@
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>>4174887
The thing is, the words or context here isn't even confusing or vague. It's as clear as fuck if you know the situation. You're failing to apply the context to the words. Just because a person learns japanese or got an N1 doesn't mean they can translate.

>>4174891
Hint: They are in a nudist beach.
Hint: The guy isn't the only one with an erection.
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>>4174893
He is the only one with an erection.
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>>4174887

>You're just wrong

Okay.

Unfucked, it's "Sanaka can only see what's right in front of her when she's excited", or, if you'd prefer a more literal translation, "When excited, Sanaka sees nothing but what's in front of her." Now go ahead and explain to me how you could possibly translate that as "Before you know it, Sanaka could be whisked away..." which would be more like 「あっという間に紗耶香を奪っている」or something (I'm not nearly as good at writing Japanese as I am reading it, so it may not be perfectly written, if someone would like to point out any errors that sentence has, feel free). Furthermore, how does "she'll be whisked away" even make sense? There's no indication that the main character even cares for the girl. She's head over heals for him. There's no indication that she's even in danger of being stolen away (not that you can even consider it being stolen away if a person one doesn't particularly care about starts fucking someone). It doesn't make sense if you give it even a cursory examination.

That's all I'm saying on the subject to you unless you can come up with some actual arguments other than "Nuh-uh, you're wrong!" I'll deal directly with the team translating if they're still interested. If you're not part of it, then I honestly don't care how irate you get over someone offering constructive criticism.
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>>4174900

Whoops, kinda forgot part of the post. This should be sitting above "unfucked"

舞い上がると (when in high spirits.
目の前しか (only see what's in front of eyes)
見えなくなる (can not see)
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Well thank you, I have no objections to more revisions. We discussed those lines a lot back then. Though I'll save them for the tank if that's alright.

>>4174849
>If I've got enough time to go through the tank again or the first 6 chapters rather as I think that's all that's been translated and released, I'll probably shoot you an email.

All the chapters and bonus pages are translated, so go ahead and check all of it. Get a name if you want.
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>>4174870
Just fuck off here. Your interpretations is destroying and ruining what is otherwise a good translation. NogardNogard has done a very good job in translating. At least he applied the context to the translation while you are keep relying on the meanings of certain words.
>>4174896
What about the others in the nude beach? They are not the only ones there. Heard of One night stands?
>>4174900
>>4174901
See? That's translation of someone relying on google translate. Have you learn how to break down sentences? Because this somewhat basic rule can actually change a meaning so much. Your translation doesn't even make any sense.

You're really failing to understand such a simple context. I hope you realize how important the context in a conversation is now. Because the words you present can have multiple meanings and translations. If you can only be certain in a meaning if you know the context of the words.

This is why I hate japanese as a second language wannabies.

To the team, feel free to listening to this guy and ruin your hard work.
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>>4174920
>what about the others in the nude beach?
Low energy betas.

Sensei made them cum once or twice and they are done for the weekend.
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>>4174920
I would not even trust this guy especially if he's already struggling at applying a context to the words. It's easy to correct someone in a context heavy language like Japanese, but it is hard whether the correction is correct when considering the context.
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>>4174926

What are you even talking about? Who's struggling?
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>>4174930
I think he is talking about the one who's offering constructive criticism. I hope this translator is not CGRASCAL tier. Just kidding. This guy >>4174920 is stupid and >>4174900 is correct. If it's you calm down. People do get upset and pissed if someone criticize them, especially someone without a name.

They are times when you got to change the wording to get the actual meaning across or to make the translation flow better

For example:
Have you realize it yet? Why Sanaka is super excited? You're probably too dense to realize it just by looking what's in front of you (or simply looking at her).
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>>4174900
I like getting help :D Thanks for the recommendations. I'll be changing those lines to be closer to what you're saying. Not that it will make much of a difference unless Other guy finally gets to typesetting this stuff :P
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>>4174900
Yes, we're interested. Your help is much appreciated.

Chapters 7-9 and extras (except for tank guest artist pics) are all linked from the OP >>4122049
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>>4175077

>You have 舞い上がると as "in high spirits" or "excited" I wonder if "worked up" could work. "Aroused" is too sexual. Or maybe since it's describing her tunnel vision, it could go more idiomatic: "When she's excited for something/When something excites her, Sanaka only has eyes for it."

Yeah that's fine. High spirits, worked up, etc, there are various ways you can say it. Currently QCing everything by the way, I just finished chapter 1. When I'm done with the whole thing I'll just email the QC to the aforementioned address.
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>>4154615
What? they're only restricted on wani (because of publisher contract) what the fuck are you talking about?
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>>4174969
Well changing some lines for mag scans wouldn't take too long, still got all the files. Sands discovered the fake loli's name is wrong anyway. Sorry for delays again, but work argh. Slogging along.

>>4174976
I uploaded the whole sadpanda-resized tank some time ago: http://imgur.com/a/OJdN5/layout/horizontal/

I'll try uploading the full-size 400mb version on a better connection later, but imgur might resize it too.

>>4174900 >>4174901
I thought the bit about "stolen/whisked away" was something about "don't pass up free sex". Anyway

>"Sanaka can only see what's right in front of her when she's excited", or, if you'd prefer a more literal translation, "When excited, Sanaka sees nothing but what's in front of her."

You have 舞い上がると as "in high spirits" or "excited" I wonder if "worked up" could work. "Aroused" is too sexual. Or maybe since it's describing her tunnel vision, it could go more idiomatic: "When she's excited for something/When something excites her, Sanaka only has eyes for it."

>>4175087
Oops, ghost post.
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>>4175087
>"Sanaka can only see what's right in front of her when she's excited'

This sounds really awkward.
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>>4175094

It was a quick literalish translation. I was trying to be informative when I wrote that, nothing else.
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>>4174470
>Honestly not sure why it'd be censored
I think it's censored as a joke because she looks young. ○校生 can literally only be 高校生 or 転校生 (which she isn't), so it's just playing off of the usual censorship of 小学生 or 中学生 in eromanga (which this very book does a few pages prior) to make a little meta joke. I think the current translation actually fits that line fine, since you can't really keep this joke in English.
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>>4175215

Yeah probably. The more I think of the line, the less I'm sure. The way I see it is: She's a high schooler, just one of those ones that looks like a loli. So, going by that, the なんだから is a sort of "she's this, so" thing. That's how I've come to "She's a X schooler, so you're not going to stop, are you?" But I admit I could be off. Don't know where I would be, but eh. I'll leave this one to the decision of others. If all else fails, at least the current translations sounds good so it won't bother people.
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>>4174900

How does translation works? I saw the bare translations and why isn't they any he or she in Japanese? Why are the sentences look incomplete?
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>>4175414

>Why are the sentences look incomplete?

They foresaw gaijin learning their language and decided to make it as vague as possible so we'd have a hard time with it.
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>>4175419
What I mean is that does the meaning of a bubble depends on a person's interpretation? For example, >>4174952 makes more sense since it seems the girl is like teasing the guy here>>4174535.
This really looks like a haiku than a sentence >>4174901. So Japanese really has a weird sentencing format. So now I know why is it so hard to learn.
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>>4175433

Japanese is, as stated, a vague language. It doesn't use personal pronouns nearly as much as languages like English. You've got to use context to figure out what's going on.
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>>4175444
And that's why the mistranslations are rampant.
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>>4175092
>You have 舞い上がると as "in high spirits" or "excited" I wonder if "worked up" could work.
Worked up sounds perfect since in English it can be interpreted as sexually charged or not, depending on context. When there is a vague English equivalent of a vague Japanese term, well dawgonnit, we should use it.
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>>4175448

I sent four chapters worth of QC to the aforementioned nudity at mail address. I must be insane to offer translation QC for an entire tank. Well, at least many pages are just moans and simple dialogue that'll take only a cursory glance to check over. And it's a fun tank, so there's that too.
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>>4151207
Please upload to Mega.co.nz
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>>4175453
When I was initially translating chapter 3 I had a hard time making it more than a few pages before I had to... *ahem* "Take a break."
>>4175952
Ah, I was just about to upload that.
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not really /h/ material but Siwasu no Okina drew a wrestling pic for a Trigger collab.

When's a wrestling h-manga coming? They upload doodles of girls wrestling dudes all the time, there's concept art for wrestling characters, make it happen.
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>>4144371
Look for the bit with two chicks, one being the tanned girl with glasses. (THE hottest of the bunch imho and that's saying something)

DBG broke up before the trip, while her friend still has hers, but that just meant it was cool for her to suck the rep off...until she saw him lay the pipe and went "MUST FUCK NAOW!!!" Lol

Love that dark-skinned girl though, plus the one who was the de-virginizer. Two hentaifu's to my list.
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>>4175952
This looks really good.
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>>4175092
Finally uploaded the full size tank here. There's a little file size decrease from sadpanda but the resolution's the same.

http://imgur.com/a/7iyiK/layout/horizontal/

>>4175453
Thanks for the QC. Hope you get to go over the extras too, there's still some unclear parts. Feedback to follow.
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>>4134282
Cuz that site is for cucks
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>>4179356
>uploading shit on imgurl
this is not reddit dumb fuck. just paste the sadpanda link http://exhentai.org/g/838653/812ab0a7e5/
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>>4179392
Obviously a reupload for those who can't into panda, and nhentai's is resized
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I don't get it, why didn't she get a sex scene?
Did Shiwasu hate her?
[spoiler]Maybe a setup for a sequel/extra chapter in his next tank?[/spoiler]
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https://twitter.com/siwasunookina/status/695182166506930176
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>>4181179

Unrelated to that tweet, but I see that all of the chapters have been uploaded to Exhentai finally, but it's still not complete. What is there still to be done?
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>>4181378
Editing, and the tank.

http://exhentai.org/g/901554/e7ead33395/ --- Wasn't me who posted it. Has to be one of you guys.

But I'm not mad (have no right to be, anyway), just ashamed of myself for not being faster before delays got out of my control. And whoever uploaded it did say this was not a final version. That's a relief.

Oh well, cat's out of the bag, and I guess it wasn't fair to everyone who doesn't go here. So, all the more obligation for us to finish them properly, hopefully before the tank is a year old.
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>>4174891
It's full of NTR if you actually think about the other guys who are all left out because one of the girls was a giant bitch and drugged them. The 10 pages at the end where they have sex with some foreigners doesn't make up for all the pain before that where one boring dude got all the pussy, while all they could do is standing around like idiots
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>>4182545
Why would it be NTR if the girls didn't want to fuck them to begin with?
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>>4182547
Do you actually know the definition of NTR? I don't mean the shitty one from exhentai. It's NTR as long as there's feelings of sexual jealousy involved and this story is full of it if you take the perspective of someone other than the protagonist.
The early chapters made it even look like some of the girls could be paired up with the other boys instead of one giant boring harem with every other boy being left out.
It's pretty disappointing for me.
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>>4182549
That is your definition of NTR, and it is wrong.
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>>4182553
It's not. Look at the (correct) definition of vndb. Everyone who knows at least a little bit about the subject can see that exhentai's definition is plain broken and false. How that could even pass a vote is beyond me.

It's NTR as long as there is jeallusy of a third party not included in the sex involved. The female doesn't need to be in a relationship or return the feelings. It's also NTR if a guy has a crush on a girl and later finds out she's a whore who only cares about dicks. Think for a moment how every other guy feels in that situation. All of them got cucked because the vice class rep was a giant bitch.
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>>4182549
I know it's like the MSG of hentai and everyone wants it sprinkled in everything, but the cheating/betrayal kink isn't in this. Put it in while you read or think about it to get off, inserting scenes in your head of some guy jerking it to someone elses' sex scene in pure rage or jealousy and leave the rest of it alone. It can stay in your head and be extra hot just for you as your own private kink.

Meanwhile, the rest of us can enjoy the main dish without the extra crap you want to throw into it to season it only to your taste.
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>>4182577
>I know it's like the MSG of hentai and everyone wants it sprinkled in everything, but the cheating/betrayal kink isn't in this.
But it is. Not only if you look at all the other guys (why even have them in there if it's just a generic harem anyway?), bit one of the girls also betrays her boyfriend with the bland Megane. Also, I don't like NTR at all, which is the reason why I think this is disappointing. All the other guys are just made fun of and essentially get pity fucked at the end.
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>>4182549
>if you take the perspective of someone other than the protagonist

Why would you care so much about some random background character? If you take your definition of NTR and apply that even to the background character, then a lot of stories need to be tagged with NTR and that is simply not true and even the point of the story.
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>>4182667
I don't see them as random background characters here. The beginning of the Manga made it look like all of them were equally important before the artist shoved all of the boys aside in favor of some boring Gary Stu I frankly didn't like at all.

Sometimes I do feel sorry for characters other than the MC. The best friend of the guy from Twin Milf was pretty much treated like crap by everyone. The MC acted like a douche towards him and never shared the MILFs with him and he pretty much got NTRed by his GF who also treated him like crap. And the MC didn't really get a happy ending either when he was never more than a fuck buddy while the MILFs were in love with each other.
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>>4130962
Too bad SnO hasn't done any crossover with their previous work, otherwise we could this motherfucker right here crush that puss. Sensei wouldn't stand a chance.
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>>4182855
I guess your issue is that class rep was not the first boy to be introduced. Frankly, this series has everything that fancies my interest like harem, netori, glasses mc and many more to deem this as an 10/10 read.

And even if this has a "generic harem", "gary stu mc" or "stupid bitch that drugged the whole class", I just couldn't care less about those little details, but I can respect and relate if those things would upset someone.
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>>4182867
>dat filename
kek
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>last part with the teacher
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I will probably be called a faggot but whatever.
The whole thing thing was superior to me until the 7th chapter. I don't mind ntr and the whole "one guy fucking every girl" thing. Everything is cool to me when it contains good sex scenes and shows my fetishes. I didn't even care about other guys from the class, because seriosuly. If you can't get erect while being surrounded by beatiful naked girls and by even touching yourself then something is wrong with you and that's only your fault so fuck you. But the moment when they show that everyone (even protagonist) were drugged was a killboner to me. I mean, yeah they finally scored at the end. But I really feel bad for them couse later or sooner everyone will come back to their good old schoollife. And every guy other than protagonist will be srcrewed. What is the chance that girls from their class will even look a their direction with any kind of interest? Pretty low i guess, because every one of thenare going to crave for cock from the class rep. Every break girls would come back with something leaking between their legs and everyone would know why. And the worst part is that it could be one of them, the whole trip was an occasion to get laid with a girls from class that they liked and maybe even it would turn to be relationship. I think that was Sluttyteacher whole plan. But nope, all the bitches were taken by class rep and they can't do anything with this. Also rumours spreads really fast so probably girls from other classes will try to nib from a class rep's dick. So yeah the art and sex scenes are top notch for me, but seriously feels bad for them.
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>>4185923
I agree. The vice class rep was a giant bitch and she wasn't even reprimanded by anyone for it.
Btw, all the class rep got were stomach pills, because he was "special".
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This manga should have ended with the vice rep answering for her sins in a surprise guro twist.
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>>4185120
I wish it was a full chapter long.
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>>4186244
well you know what they say about too much of a good thing.
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>>4185923
I concur with you sometimes, depends on my level of lust. I tend to take it as a sign of maturity.
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Old SnO tank showed up on Moemilk

http://doujin.moemilk.com/2016/02/shiwasu-no-okina-enn.html
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>>4182867
He actually did.
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>>4182867
but Tamao was a fucking pussy
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I just skipped to the part where sensei made it up to the rest of the boys who didn't get to fuck earlier.
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Thank you guys for translating Nudist Beach! A very nice harem.
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>>4188451
I wished the whole Manga was like that. Felt like false advertising. Class Rep was one of the most boring MCs ever.
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Thank you
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This guy is a fucking genius, the Bob Sapp one made me cry of laughter while I was masturbating, and the one of the idols really made me feel a nice warm and comfy feeling in my heart.

I think it's pretty rare for an erotic artist to be able to transmit this kind of positive feelings, hope he keeps getting bigger.
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>>4189715
> one of the idols really made me feel a nice warm and comfy feeling in my heart.

Who?) and no one is idol, just schoolgirls.
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>>4157427
sorry anon but you cant just go into photoshop and use the paint bucket to fill it in the colors...
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>>4189715
He's already a big guy
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>>4192258
it's a she
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>>4192258
You're going to have to be a little more subtle than that.
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When is the new story going to be released?
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>>4192643
Pretty sure it came out like almost a month ago, but no one has scanned it yet.
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>>4122049
I like the parts with the teacher. The story is your typical "am I pritee?. *sucks cunt* yes you are!" cringy shit.
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>>4192258
for you...
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>>4127714
I was just in it for when teacher got fucked and all she got was a few pages at the end, don't get me wrong they were full colour and were fantastic I just felt a lot more could be done with her
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>>4192464
no.
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>>4192714
I want to masturbate to cartoon people, but the story is just ~so~ cringe worthy! Totally embarrassing! Can't do this in front of my girlfriend!
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>>4122297
(ಠ_ಠ)
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>>4122297
Oh gosh, what a false advertising! First couple pages seems like an orgy setup but it just turned in to rape?!
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>>4195721
Oh gosh, what a false advertising! First couple pages seems like an orgy setup but it just turned in to rape?!
Exactly the same thing goes for Nudist Beach. Just replace "rape" with "Harem".
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>>4122608
Didn't Shiwasu no Okina create Slut Girl? My favorite hentai back in ancient times (it was translated to english so there were scans on all the hentai sites)
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>>4197296
No
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I like Shiwasu no Okina because he is seemingly the only artist who draws realistic pubic hair on anyone who isn't a "mature" character. I seriously don't think I've found a single other hentai artist who does this. It's especially bizarre given how it's a Japanese comic; pubes aren't exactly as rare there. I think it's to indicate youth in comics with school girls, but anyone over the age of 13 or so should be fully developed in that respect.

As for the nudist beach comic, I liked the MC mostly because he was actually good looking and it made the whole "girls throwing themselves at him" thing come off as at least somewhat realistic. I'm tired of stories where the MC is some awkward twerp who just arbitrarily has a bunch of chicks interested in him; it's better if it's at least the kind of guy most girls would actually be attracted to.
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>>4199008
I agree with that assessment, though I was disappointed that it was just another "god penis" manga. Come on, size is great, but there's more to it than that.
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Pineapple has announced a animation adaption for this.

http://www.pinkpineapple.co.jp/products/detail.php?product_id=1055
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>>4201227
>Flash animation
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>>4201246
I don't know what you're talking about since Pineapple is known for having good animation. Perhaps you shouldn't make such a fast assumption when there's no preview or anything yet.
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>>4201261
Pink Pineapple is hit or miss, but at least they animate things instead of what happened to Peace Hame (flash animated stillframes)
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>>4199008
Minato Fumi draws very good pubes.
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>>4201227
Thank fucking God it's not Queen Bee. The animation from Pineapple may not be the greatest but it's 10 times better than whatever Queen Bee makes. I'll take it.
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>>4201227
A new adaptation.. of what? There's no pics and everything there is in moon language
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>>4201975
Use Google translate. It's for Nudist Beach
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>>4201975
The titile is in english, for god's sake.
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>>4201227
YES
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>>4201943
Yeah Queen Bee stays really true to the original style... by ripping each scene straight out of the manga, copy pasta. I have to admit that I enjoyed Peace Hame when Queen Bee animated it, but the manga is just better in almost every way. Would have been better if some other group had just half-assed it instead.
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>>4203259
It's not a big surprise since it's easier to make just a few highly detailed scenes on a paper than animate it.
It's pretty common overall that mangas have better visuals than anime. just look at fairy tail and compare manga and anime.
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>>4201975
Are you retarded? I literally just said an animation adaption of what this thread is about. What else could it fucking be.
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>"Still alive" post

>>4201227
Wheee.

>>4203259
I guess that will make it easier to sub if they don't change the lines.
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>>4175952
Are we getting this any time soon? It looks way good.
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>>4195673
>>4188704
>>4186905
>>4186183
>>4185923
>>4182855

>Get so affected by hentai manga.

Srsly stop identify yourselfs with a bunch of background faggots, then maybe you will stop being one.
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>>4122049

Whoever can take the credit for this (scaners, translaters, artists, publishers) can be asured to have my eternal gratitude.
Being a Kraut myself and visiting nude-beaches, it's hillarious to see Hentais/Japanese idea of a nudist beach.
Came buckets.
Shame the reality doesn't add up.
Based OP
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>>4206083
It is very good. I have gotten a preview and started translating it.

We need a typesetter. Any anons up for the challenge? Email me, address is here:
>>4174846
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>>4207129
sweeeeet, gods bless you)
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>>4207129
I can do it, it would break up the beach monotony a bit. Forgive me.

But any release won't be for a while because there are no public scans yet.
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>>4127714
I felt the same way, but the last chapter really brought me back in
trust me, all the guys get their day
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>>4127714
I feel the same way, wasted potential.
This could have been a nice story where the class is shy at first but slowly lose themsleves in pleasure and it turns into a full on orgy that drags the rest of the beach in with them, instead the big dicked alpha cucks the entire class for no reason other than some contrived "i wanted to be the only one to have sex with him so i gave all the other male students drugs to keep their libido (and dicks) down" I mean where does that even make sense? the last chapter kind of saved it, and i still like most of okina's stuff but this was a huge dissapointment. what's annoying is that this has happened three times now with his stuff where a seemingly decent idea suddenly turns into cuckoldry or ntr or other such nonsense for no seemingly no reason.
Like the Okusan doujin, wich could have been a nice little series where we see her actualy have sex with the husband, they could even keep the joke going of STILL never showing the husbands face. Instead she learns how to have better sex from a complete stranger.
And then this new thing where this girl literaly gets raped in front of other students and they just cry to themselves and quietly masturbate.
potentialy great things ruined by a shit-tier fetish shoe-horned in.

It kind of feels like movies that could have been amazing ruined by studio execs who have no idea what the fuck they're talking about and shouldn't but in. Like okina just wanted to make a nice series where a bunch of students have an orgy on the beach but some high up guys went "you know what's popular these days? NTR! lets put that in. we gotta make a profit you know."

It's a shame.
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The OVA cover is up if anyone wants a taste:

http://www.getchu.com/brandnew/893654/c893654package.jpg
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OH MY FUCKING GOD

WHO THE FUCK CHOSE THIS STUDIO?
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>>4216190
Well it could be worse...
Someone could have killed my pets or a family member .
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>>4216190
>one of the best h-mangos out gets treated this terribly
Why do you hate me god
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>>4216190
Now I understand why MTSP never allows any studio to touch their books.
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oy voice spread quickly

>>>/a/138613453
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>>4216190
I don't see anything wrong with this.
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>>4216245
>I'm blind
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>>4216245
They are supposed to resemble this
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>>4216190
And people say Queen Bee is bad. Pink Pineapple screw the designs. They look so fat and plump and their nipples look so fucking weird. The girls are high schoolers not milfs, virgins not used. >>4216221
MTSP's problem was how it will be adapted and the payments he will get. Don't make stuff up. "L." was suppose to adapted Sakiko-san but MTSP was unhappy with the payments he will get so he reject the adaptation. Needless to say, he caused the animation studio to fold as they were desperate for funding and he's not willing to talk about it anymore.

By the way, L. produced Ore wa Kanojo o Shinjiteru and Princess Lover.
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>>4122049
Wow Hussites as origin of nudism is absurd. Although it seems that in bohemia was a sect of nudity in times of Hussite wars. But this sect was almost all eradicated by Hussites.

I guess that it was confused by author because this nude sect was largely spread in Tabor which later was Hussite main city.

Anyway great work. I have read through all Koyanagi roayal work and now i am going to enjoy this piece of treasure.
Thanks.
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>>4216299
Anon you have to learn to shut up when all you know is nothing about a situation.
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>>4216190
Let's just wait and see what it looks like when the screens/trailer come out. Sometimes the cover art is different than actual animation.
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>>4216441
Shut up. This MTSP guy is inconsistent anyway. In his "critically acclaimed" Tachibana-san series, the girls breasts sizes changes every sex scene. It's hilarious.

Even his fans don't really understand the story. They keep hinting interpretations made up from their unwillingness to accept the clear meaning of the words.
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>>4216456
Maybe, but >>4216299 about the "L." and mtsp wanting more payment is total source-less bullshit.
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>>4216190
>>4216181
Well, at least they released a cover quickly. Now I won't bother getting hyped up for this for nothing.
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I read through the first seven chapters and I find it fairly disgusting.
This one guy gets to fuck everyone while there is bunch of guys with limp dicks.
All those girls being unbelivebly tremendous sluts are even pectured like decen girls.
And everyone seems to accept it like its normal.

Sorry I cannot fap to this. In hentai I search for bit of emotion, something I can relate to. This only makes me mad.
Hentai like this is no different than common porn. Id rather fap to Asa Akira with her stupid face and voice like demented monkey than fap to this abomination.
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>>4216190
>"Hey, we don't have the proper nipple to ctrl+v into this perspective."
>"Who cares senpai, just throw any one on."
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>>4216190
Covers can be really misleading in a lot of animations. Lets hope this one is.
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>>4217106
They often are. But when they do, the cover exaggerates the quality. It's never the other way round.
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>>4217115
You're depressing me now.
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>>4217001
It must be fun poking fun at a extremely niche industry with a low budget and incompetent staff.
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>>4216190
THEY'RE MELTING
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>>4216190
So we have green light for an animation? I can't wait for the glasses girl.
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>>4216190
Who are they even supposed to be? Front is sensei, 'cause she's the only big boobed blond character of the class, but the other two girls?
Are we supposed to go by hairstyle? O.ô
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>>4217128

Careful! If that high horse of yours gets too much taller you might suffocate from lack of air.
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>>4217001

Holy crap! I could understand a typo or a layer being set wrong. But this is the cover art for the episode!

How did this get missed?! Was there zero review?
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>>4216190
Ok, I recognize the teacher, Dainose(?) and who is the other girl supposed to be?
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>>4216544
I'm with you, man. It didn't quite sit right with me either.
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>>4216190
Why don't they hire the original artist to oversee it?

Legitimate question
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>>4216221
Lurk more, newfag. When did a hentai studio ever adapt a doujin and not something from an official hentai publisher?

You suck MTSP's dick way too much.

His sad career is made up of mainly just doing Fate doujins.
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>>4217707
Then you get Queen Bee.
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>>4217711
>literal autism
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All that drug stuff was worse than NTR.
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You know what would be cool? An uncensored version of Aibuka.
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Nice one m8
Im fapping in the speed of sound
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>>4217666
Teacher, Dainose, Taniguchi.
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>>4122049
>sensei will never have a doujin all to herself
;_;

Thanks for all your work, this has provided many a grand fap.
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>>4216190
WTF IS THIS?
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>>4219022
That sensei might be the hottest character I've ever fapped to in a doujin.
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>>4216190
what is happening in this picture? who fucking drew this? were they even aware of how hips connect to a torso?
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high impact bullet time tits
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>>4219656
Are you aware that it's a niche industry with low budget and incompetent staffs who hire outsiders to do their work?
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>>4219420
I agree completely.
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>>4216190
what in the motherfuck am I looking at
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>>4216190
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>tongue in clitoris

REEEE
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So Comic Aun 2016, 01, 02 ,and 04 are now up, but not 03, the one with the new work. What gives? And how does the April issue get posted before the March one
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>>4221667
The 04 scan wasn't from mikocon.

But we did get scans of the story in advance, Sands translated it, and Nogard and me but mostly him are typesetting it already. It seems part 2 won't be in 05.

So uh we're one post away from autosage again, Can we move to >>4214434?
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>>4221667
But 03 is in Mikocon since saturday.
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holyshit he doing all of the animation for nudist bieach

it was obagon from erectlip
https://twitter.com/obagon_C3/status/709750789237919748

he did animation for Buta no gotoki, gakuen no ikenie, and last gyakuten majo saiban.
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>>4221123

I just physically cringed
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More screens

http://www.getchu.com/soft.phtml?id=893654
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Continued at >>4214434, probably.
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