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Here is a wallpaper for "The Revenant", so what do you guys think?
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>>252915
looks good
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>>252915
silhouet reads poorly. Could be holding a baseball bat for all I know. Sun looks like paint ms
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>>252915
Would be better as just a flat black character.
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>>252915
added some textures
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>>252915
The only problem I have with it is that it just doesn't seem to convey the movie at all apart from the bear claw.

On the other hand neither did the trailer...
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>>252964
looks great OP,
only the text is to small IMO
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Feel really displaced from the movie, you have modern ish type of EDM graphic trying toexplain a mobie about a frontiersman who fights a bear so you but a vector of a bear claw smack dap in the middlenin brown

Why dont you use a doublenexposure technique instead?
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>>252964
looks shit
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>>252964
i don't know, but colores fcked up during the upload, here's the newer version, hope it will upload well
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>>253925
i somehow like the concept of this all but there are a few things i would criticize:
the shape of the body looks too clean. try making it more grungy and some have some waving hair out of the cape to show the condition he is in at the end of his journey.
i like this sunset but the mountains look more like a jungle due to some gaps in it. the great bear and the bearclaw dont work together as they kind of symbolize the same.
for me some of the big symbols were fire and snow. maybe try to bring this in? maybe a blizzard background instead of this concrete looking one you have now. and some sparks on the inside shape? i also would maybe going to switch the type placement: the revenant on top of it but bigger and di caprio in the shape.
thats all for now
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>>254050
works better on this one
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>>254050

Despite being obvious cut outs, I think this works quite well.

>>254052

I don't like the noise filter on this one. Has a bunch of colored dots. The edges on the man feel a bit too soft when they should be hard edges. Good font choice, though.
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post more OP
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>>254052
make that noise filter monochromatic and change the font. The brushstroke type font is a good idea you just didn't choose the right one, it looks pretty basic. I'd go for something italicized and i'd probably do it all caps as well.

http://www.dafont.com/dk-boris-brush.font

http://www.dafont.com/edo.font

http://www.dafont.com/river-drive.font

http://www.dafont.com/drenazmozgow.font

try and see how these fonts look
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>>254052
also lower the noise in addition to making it monochromatic. 2 retro 4 me
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>>253529
You are a fucking terrible judge of design.
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>>253925
I feel like the edges are TOO smooth. Try putting in smaller detail, make it less round
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