Logo critique

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>>252482
start with something that holds up well as one color. worry about stylizing it later.

right now it's literally shit.

>>252482
lose the gradients and place one letter inside the other

>>252485
i tried that but it wouldnt work well unless i changed the size of one letter. gimme an example if you can please

>>252484
color aside whats wrong with the design

>>252488
why is one leg of the N thicker than the other?

why are the letters overlapping?

why did you leave a sliver of negative space in the top portion of the S?

why are the end caps of the letters rounded?

why is part of the N sticking out above and below the letter S?

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>>252482
Pay me, atleast £30 please, that would be nice. Or anyone

>>252499
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>Logo critique Anonymous 01/19/16(Tu
My email is [email protected]

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>>252500
Proof that my email is [email protected]. Send me the money kek.

>>252499
damn nigga you work quick

>>252492
>you're right didn't notice that, thanks
>thats the effect i want to give it if you have a better idea please share i'd like this to look as good and simple as possible
>will fix that
>i want them rounded
>thats the overlapping effect

Keep it coming, need as much criticism as possible

>>252520
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Hahaha, reinforce too

>>252520
I was more implying you should have actual reasons for designing it the way you did, not "just because i wanted to"

design useless without purpose

>>252606
well i've always been a fan of golden ration and i love looping effects. Its probably my favorite design style and i wanted to show i can make a good use of it when applying colors as well as shadow effects