Critique my logo for 'Vaen Media'

I see a pencil, but somebody out there is going to see a buttplug.

One route worth considering might be to cut the top shape entirely, and make a V and/or A out of the negative space in the E.

Anonymous 2016-01-09 16:31:17 Post No.250781
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Anonymous 2016-01-09 16:31:17 Post No.250781 [Report]

please allow me to read "vaen media"

Anonymous 2016-01-09 17:43:02 Post No.250794
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Anonymous 2016-01-09 17:43:02 Post No.250794 [Report]

>>250700
I like the style of type face used, the E and the N work well together. I think the negative space arrow shape that the A forms could be utilised more with the shaft travelling down the centre of the E and maybe even carrying it down through the N as well.

One big gripe I have with it is that if the company is 'Vaen' the V gets lost in this logo, if I were to see this logo without knowing the name of the company I would read it as AEN or even CEN at a stretch, but I don't see VAEN in it.

Anonymous 2016-01-10 09:50:42 Post No.250884
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Anonymous 2016-01-10 09:50:42 Post No.250884 [Report]

It is completely unreadable
It does not convey anything about the company
It is too simple to convey anything significant
It is too complex to have an immediate response or leave a lasting impression
The inconsistent widths are pissing me off

Anonymous 2016-01-10 10:21:59 Post No.250885
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Anonymous 2016-01-10 10:21:59 Post No.250885 [Report]

>>250884
>The inconsistent widths are pissing me off

That's the major problem here indeed.

Anonymous 2016-01-10 10:45:11 Post No.250886
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Anonymous 2016-01-10 10:45:11 Post No.250886 [Report]

>>250884
Bang on there mate

Anonymous 2016-01-10 15:34:45 Post No.250903
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Anonymous 2016-01-10 15:34:45 Post No.250903 [Report]

Really depends on what Vaen Media is.

Anonymous 2016-01-11 12:01:50 Post No.251031
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Anonymous 2016-01-11 12:01:50 Post No.251031 [Report]

Never comment on any design unless you know the brief.

What's the brief??? Then we comment.

Anonymous 2016-01-16 22:53:33 Post No.251979
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Anonymous 2016-01-16 23:25:34 Post No.251996
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Anonymous 2016-01-16 23:25:34 Post No.251996 [Report]

>>250753
Anything can be a buttplug if you try hard enough...

Anonymous 2016-01-17 21:08:18 Post No.252163
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Anonymous 2016-01-17 21:08:18 Post No.252163 [Report]

None of the corners are rounded but the top & the widths are inconsistent

Anonymous 2016-01-17 21:14:06 Post No.252164
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Anonymous 2016-01-17 21:14:06 Post No.252164 [Report]

>>250700
Sorry OP but it sucks, it's totally illegible and incoherent. Only the top symbol would be much better and simple logo

Anonymous 2016-01-20 01:09:03 Post No.252541
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Anonymous 2016-01-20 01:09:03 Post No.252541 [Report]

Makes you look like a shitty edgelord. Go with a wordmark, because as is its an indecipherable mess. And yes, it looks like a buttplug.

Anonymous 2016-01-20 08:26:26 Post No.252575
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Anonymous 2016-01-20 08:26:26 Post No.252575 [Report]

>>252163
this.

Fix these, and you got yourself a logo.
Fix the character width inconsistency too ("A" is much too wide in comparison to "EN").

Anonymous 2016-01-22 05:34:07 Post No.252867
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Anonymous 2016-01-22 05:34:07 Post No.252867 [Report]

>>250700
Looks strangely foreign and implies to me nothing about what you do.

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