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>>302289
I don't know, trapcode starglow with red/blue colours + horizontal blur maybe?
and low res. i've seen ae plugins for that too.

>>302290
And by that i mean the vhs look.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K9hkhHWexPI

>smoke weed
>jerk off
>clear mind

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>>302128
>Smoke weed
>jerk off
How much money do you make a year? I doubt it is enough to ween you from mommy and daddy.

>>302130
Yay! I love projections! First off, great job at shifting the conversation. Second, I don't live with my parents, and third I make enough to afford me little luxuries like weed now and again.

Some people like excess white space. Like me.

>>301661
Try a very slight gradient per panel? You do not. Need more items on the pages though

White space creates sections in your design. In the example you posted, there are "products" sections that I feel need more white space above and below.

the letters are kinda bad. wiw not iww?

what's a better typeface?

are you seriously rebranding IWW ? Why ?

>>302989
bruv for your first poster that is some dank shit. great work lad. but i still got some crit for ya

1. heirarchy is not very clear. what's most important? what do i look at first? what do i look at second? 3rd? 4th? right now EVERYTHING IS CAPS AND BIG AND LOUD SO THERE IS LESS CONTRAST AND ORDER

2. the text at the bottom which is aligned upright feels too close to the rotated text in the middle.

it's promising for a first work ever but it's also not very good as is. I recommend you learn typography and color pairing.

>>302991
Don't forget the golden ratio and some typography combinations

PIC related is a mockup made by me. the post Owner.

Get some extra work under your portfolio. Maybe approach a local free paper to help design it. If all you have done is logos and header sheets, you will always be chasing the next £50.
My main client is a magazine group and I design about 15 issues per year. This makes up 80% of my workload and money–the rest is smaller jobs which are always a pain in the arse.

I've like 300-400 items for my portfolio but i don't get free time to do it. always doing stuff for household i am a boy yes and next month is my engagement. :-(

>>302265
the hair ruins it

Agreed, hair ruins it, the headphones don't look right, and unsurprisingly, I believe you made it in paint.

>Copperplate Gothic

>>300964
Well for starters its sideways.

bland and dated for a 'modern design agency' if you ask me.

too many colors for such a small difference in contrast. also i feel like the colors together are not very strong. The grey is really random and looks pretty bad. if anything I would make it a really light bluish grey, and then having the colors range from the blue to light grey.
and 'lakeside dev' might look better if they were conjoined in some way, like 'lakesidedev' and are separated only by contrast of color and I would say maybe trying to change the weight of dev or something.

Why not One.com? I built something nicer than that, at least automatically scalable to mobile unlike yours.

>wix
trash

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>When "designers" don't even design their own website

Try again

I legit thought this was a diagram for a vagina

>>302654
+1 totally saw a diagram of a vag first

>>302650
>https://design.tutsplus.com/tutorials/team-awesome-from-hand-lettered-logotype-to-vector-in-adobe-illustrator--cms-23737

this one is straight to the point just skip the steps you consider unnecessary, what i usually do is to draw a quick sketch very small then take a picture of it with the phone drag it onto illustrator, set the opacity to 60% and lock the image then just start drawing the vector lines on top of it.

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>>302589
post your email pleb, also use /wsr/ next time

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i was bored, i dont care if you like it or not

header can be centered but text beneath usually is better left aligned.

not bad though. what is your rate?

Still pretty beginner imo.
You can make that in Principle for mac in like 5 minutes.

>>302488
>effect
that's line art / illustration

vectors, probably done in illustrator

Illustrator. Bring in image, go to image trace and select high fidelity photo, hit expand and then remove everything but the linework

You need a grid, my dude. I like the color, I like your type choices, but you gotta grid this up. And a more straightforward layout might better convey the whole gov't bureau we'll protect you but take us seriously thing you're working at.

>>302395
So should I abandon the angles? I was sort of going for a crude aperture around the "community". "We're watching you"

i like the angles actually, but the uncle sam line at the end doesn't really fit the theme, i think?