TG Writefagging Edition.
Had a good thread last time with some neat new content, so we'll continue:
Never knew so many /d/enizens wrote their own TG stuff. Let's keep it up.
i've thought about writing my own shit for a while, just never took the plunge
i just kinda always thought, if i'm gona write some fapfic i'm going to try to Write it, write something worth reading that's not just fapfuel. but i know i'm garbage at that, so i never tried.
Also a question for those who frequent the threads, but is R63 acceptable posting for a TG thread? It is technically a genderswapped character, which seems to fit. I've got some stuff of that, though it's sometimes of dibious Eastern-ness.
All of them besides WD have male gendered pronouns used for them. I've never seen WD talked about enough to know what pronoun is used for him/her.
I just wanted to post it because it was cute, and TG, for me, should always be 1 part cute to 2 parts lewd.
Anyway, I'll be back later with something substantative to actually dump so take care, /d/.
we tend to focus more on process images/sequences rather than just one-off R63 shit but honestly seeing anything besides the usual dozen or so strips that ever get posted in these threads is kinda welcome
i guess don't clog up the thread with just that? but dont feel intimidated
Would anyone be interested in me writing to a titanpad as I finish up a TG story?
I know it's semi-off topic, but does anyone know any (preferably good) TG art that also involves [spoiler]shortstack?[/spoiler]
I've never seen that before and my dick is curious. Sorry for ruining the thread with my horrible fetish mixing, Google didn't come up with much so I figured I'd ask.
had this idea previously.
Same anon who thought up the "Theseus's Cruiseship" prompt and others.
most TG authors ive seen dont really specify heights so i cant help you there
honestly wish i could but sorry
i looked through my art collection but didnt find anything that really fit. sorry :(
I have a story idea that I want to write, or at least I think I do. Regardless, the idea is there. It's about a guy who winds up in the custody of a succubus by a fluke happenstance. She decides that she wanted more than a play thing and turns him into a woman is she can train him to be her apprentice. The catch is that he isn't allowed to have any of the shape shifting powers, so he's stuck with his new petite frame.
I don't like mind break and character death, which is rampant around TG stuff, so she won't touch his mind. That's part of the fun for her. He knows everything he's doing is wrong, but he really doesn't have a choice. Worse yet, he can't deny how good it feels, and eventually he even feels envious of her larger chest compared to the small one she gave him.
I love tentacles, aphrodisiacs, forced orgasms, magical orgasms and/or pleasuring, build up (like letting them stew with an aphrodisiac working on them while they're bound), and stuff like that, so that stuff would be a big part of it, or at least show up.
The actual TG part for the MC would probably happen relatively way on in the story, but there would probably be a lot more throughout. In my head, this is turning into something long that idk I can actually do.
Wonderful. Just making sure you're still there. Dunno where else to see your work so I've gotta make sure there's a TG thread up at any given time (besides enjoying what everyone else is posting, too). Have a speedy recovery from that illness.
I know that Camp Sherwood has the TG part right at the beginning and never does another one, but it's a nice little *western* TG comic
the writefaggotry is strong in the tg community, i'm just no english writer (or considering myself good enough or fluent in this language) to try a full story.
Very much so. I started getting ideas together to write something substantial (on one of the milfication threads before the /aco/ split), but at the moment it's still all scraps and fragments.
My favourite is succubus TG, which isn't too bad for a niche, but dominant TG in general is pretty hard to find.
Ok them, so I guess that its the best opportunitty to advertie this.
My buddy Flashkill writte some amazing captions, and often organize some contests revolving around TG. The current one is a Reverse-Corruption Contest, and he is offering $300 in prizes.
He is accepting comics/captions AND short stories.
You can check more information and rules here: http://flashkill455.deviantart.com/journal/Reverse-Corruption-Contest-With-300-in-Prizes-582564527
Anyone here interessed?
To be honest, I am not particulary fan of shortstack, but I wanted to make a comic or sequence with a fantasy cast, and include a halfling/hobbit in the middle.
Its among one of the things planed for this year.
>I know that Camp Sherwood has the TG part right at the beginning and never does another one, but it's a nice little *western* TG comic
Isn't that the timmy turner thing
that looks awful, and it keeps on showing up on sad panda because people always update it
I don't know much about writing, but isn't the first step writing up some kind of plan? Like figure out where the story is going to go before you start.
Who are your characters, how do they meet, where do they go, what obstacles do they encounter, how is it resolved, etc.
That contest looks interesting. I'm no artist, but I may try making a story for that. I was a little confused by the bonus stuff though. For the bonus, you write a separate story with corruption? Can you just have one character get purified while the other gets corrupted?
Just write a bunch and then trim the fat. It's what I do and people seem to like it pretty well. Plus, remember that you're making new content so you're already going to be a rockstar in everyone's eyes. If people with a slippery grasp of English can develop fanbases for their work than you can as well
Yea, I guess that's true. I fear of being the person whom makes something someone actually wants to read and never finishes it.
I might see what I can do this weekend since I'm in blizzard territory, which means I ain't going anywhere.
I start with plot points and then just write up how the story gets between them. You just gotta find the style that works for you.
Also expect an update on the cruise ship drone story this weekend. And I could use a suggestion on where to upload it besides pastebin. Someplace that will let me continue adding to it after the fact.
I just have it sitting on Google drive right now.
You're a man after my own heart. Usually people don't like the mind controlling aspect that comes with some TG, but I fucking love it.
Only thing that would make it better is if it was temporary and the main character had to keep changing them back into his harem. But that's just me.
Anyways, good work so far. Hoping for a Yamato Nadeshiko or shy girl in this harem.
I'm writing a multi part story with multiple swaps.
Part one is just a couple but next parts will include various forms of threesome.
If anyone is interested:
Yamato Nadeshiko? No...but there is an asian school girl.
The first one follows more that "smug and prideful" anime girl trope, that I find lacking on TG. There will be a shy one among the harem tho.
The mental aspect is kind of mixed tho, the characters retain their memmories and overal personalitty, but with different manneirism and thirsty for the MC d.
The dialog seemed a little stilted in the beginning but either you got in the the swing or thing or I stopped noticing because of the sexy. Any ways I would read more so you got me.
Writing is the same as any other skill... You have to git gud at it via time and practice, and by comparing your shit to other people's shit.
Is there a real, published author who you like I lot? Try to figure out why you like him/her so much and then emulate their technique.
>Wolbachia makes the species jump to humans.
>Wolbachia is a real parasite that is commonly found in insects around the world and is basically everywhere. For those species that are vulnerable to it, it turns the males into females. Any male that has sex with one of these transformed catches wolbachia too. Natural females are immune, but can still act as carriers.
>As an added bonus, the former males often experience pathenogenesis. Spontaneous pregnancy, rather than from having sex. They only have female children.
>So the story would follow the outbreak or a group of people who are watching the pandemic as it unfolds on the news until it eventually reaches their area and one by one they become infected. How they deal with it, how they react, and so on.
>No one would probably know about the pregnancy part of it until some months after the first transformations, since the pregnancy is neither instant or faster than normal.
It's gotta wait though. I got commissioned to do a story
Neat! You should probably namefag or something. If people can recognize which posts are yours they can associate the quality of your work, and that might get you more commissions in the future.
I mean I usually just make requests for people because I'm too lazy to make my own prompts or decide on one myself
A Yamato Nadeshiko is an ideal Japanese woman (good at cooking, clean, even tempered, motherly, ect.). Or rather, a very demure house wifey kind of character.
But like I said, a shy one is always nice.
The mental aspect sounds even better. They retain their memories and personalities, but I'm guessing they are all altered to be female. Looks like Diana doesn't remember being ever male, which is a turn on for me.
Finally, a positive and negative note. Positive is that I love how you point out all the bad cliche things about being a harem MC. Hope you run with that joke a bit longer. Negative point is that you should probably double check your spelling and grammar with some of the dialogue as it kind of throws people off when they read it.
I'm the guy that commissioned Cap. His usual rates are:
<1k words (the length of a usual caption) - $3
1k-5k words - 0.4 cents per word, rounded up to the nearest dollar
5k-10k words - 0.5 cents per word, rounded up to the nearest dollar
Above 20k words – after discussion
I apologize if anyone was really looking forward to the Wolbachia, since my commission put it on the backburner. I was really impressed with CaptainCaption's work and decided to commission a story which I've been tossing around in my head for a while but my writing ability is too lousy to do myself. I'm personally very excited for it - it features a lot of mental TF and eventual identity death, which I personally like but I know isn't everyone's bag of tea. Regardless, I hope a few people besides myself can find something fun to fap to.
when it comes to this fetish sometimes just having one image is half the battle
get a write fag to write you up a story that makes your imagination go. Or write it yourself, though I find its hard to fap to things I make.
>I find its hard to fap to things I make
This a million times over. I've been told I'm a pretty good erotic writer but I just can't get off to my own captions or stories unless they're at least 6 months old. If they're too fresh I get caught up in wondering what I could have done about the sentence structure or the formatting instead of the lewd details.
Also, here's a blast from the past. This is the first caption I ever wrote for a /d/ TG thread almost 18 months ago.
Agreed. If I can't scale the image so that it fits on my screen and still read the text, there's too much goddamn text.
If I wanted to read a story that long, (and I regularly read entire books, so I'm not just blowing hot air here) I wouldn't be looking at images. There is no image format that is suited for huge blocks of text. That's why we have fucking text files.
Anyone want to make some hath and credits translating a TG doujin from Japanese to English?
None in particular, but I get what you're saying. People say that I write pretty well (professors and some play by post games), which is the only reason I'm considering writing something in the first place. I'll try to just start writing I guess.
Hum...I miiight have a character that fits better with "demure and lovely". She basically see the MC as a fairy tail prince.
Oh you are right, lately I'm having problems with the dialogues, usually I have people correcting my grammar, because english is not my first language. It will probably get better now.
Just uploaded the finished part of the highschool girl. The next Page will be probably be uploaded in two or three days. I'm working on some extra panels with the characters interacting before the transformations, so we can see better what changes.
Before/After pics are my fetish. Thank you for the new pic.
I'd find it hotter if his old mind was trapped inside and still concious screaming at his new life carrying on without him.
I need at least that to find identity death hot the vast majority of the time. Still congrats for making the only thing involving identity death where I didn't immdiately lose my boner.
Stole his girlfriend and turned him into a girl, this thing is hot
I was not pleased with the last couple of pages, but up until then it was pretty good.
"Every time you have sex or masturbate, mental changes will accumulate. If you still want to be turned back in a month, I'll turn you back." NEXT PAGE SHE'S A WHORE GOING DOWN ON SOME OLD FATASS.
Seriously, if I had a physical copy of this, I'd tear out the last two pages and burn them.
Does anyone know any TG fiction that tends to, I don't know, for lack of a better way of describing it, mimic anime a bit more?
A lot of what's out there on sites like fictionmania just isn't my bag.
Honestly your best bet it translated Japanese works. Here are a few that come to mind
Alternatively, if you're fine with machine translation you can take a story from http://okashi.blog6.fc2.com/ and plug it into Google translate. It's not pretty but it's better than nothing
I know what you mean anon -- you want non-rape/more realistic characters.
There's not many in manga. I don't care for written fiction but when it comes to manga, things like Idol pretender are one in a hundred.
TL for that new doujin is up. Someone still needs to typeset it but at least now you can follow along. It's definitely worth the read
Plenty are up here
F_TSF wrote it and has a twitter. I've talked to him before using the built-in translation tool. He's one of the few who puts out official english translations on his stuff and I don't think he'd appreciate criticism from someone who didn't purchase it.
By the way, there's a second chapter not uploaded http://www.dmm.co.jp/en/dc/doujin/-/detail/=/cid=d_089786/?utm_medium=dmm_affiliate&utm_source=ftsf-002/
The official english translation of 'the demon king and his bride' was also finally published http://www.dlsite.com/ecchi-eng/work/=/product_id/RE170064.html
One of my favorite things about Japanese TG is when the character shifts from using "ore" to "watashi" or "atashi", so with just one little word difference, you really know they've become female mentally as well as physically. It's such a shame that that doesn't really translate into English. Out of curiosity, how long does it usually take to translate something like this?
I wish had gone through the mental changes but was still just fucking guys from school.
Somehow the instant an old fat guy is introduced my boner flies away, but everything before it was great.
Not necessarily. The character might be switching their speech pattern simply in order to pass for a normal girl. E.g. Mai Natsume in Remix Heart used watashi almost from the start in order to hide that she had been a man but only became mentally female later. Though there are other cases where the character keeps using boku while still trying to pass for a normal girl. E.g. Nanase Kyouya in Sai Taker.
>It's such a shame that that doesn't really translate into English
Longer stories usually take much more of a commitment. Longer != bulk
I'm someone who goes out of his way to buy your and others' work (something that is not easy to do given that I still have to call my bank every few weeks and tell them that the $200+ spent on Japanese transgender porn that month was actually me). If you bothered to put out timely and GOOD English translations of your work and made it easier for your customers to actually buy your stuff, I guarantee you will see a substantial increase in profits. Don't blame pirates for the fact that you aren't selling that much overseas. Blame the fact that there's very little in the way of a distribution model for us
Go kill yourself
go kill yourself
I had plans to complete next month's English translation, but since you went ahead and uploaded a pirated version, now I have to spend my time getting rid of that pirated version instead of working on the English translation. Die.
And trying to do fucking die
And trying to do Shinekuso
I had plans to complete next month's English translation, but since you went ahead and uploaded a pirated version, now I have to spend my time getting rid of that pirated version instead of working on the English translation. Die.
Dick or not he just wants people to not pirate his stuff and make doing official translations worth it. If there were never a translation and pirating were the only way to read it? Then alright, read the pirated version and if you really like it buy it in japanese.
If he weren't doing official translations he probably wouldn't bother posting here. But he is and he's losing money if he pays for translation, typesetting and publishing then gets no sales. He's allowed to be a dick.
Honestly surprised he bothered doing official English translations in the first place and fell for the 'we will pay for it we promise' meme. Majority of this crowd would rather just read pirated because it's convenient, used to it by now, cheap/poor fags, and give little fucks about author well being to begin with. Use that time and resources that was wasted on english translations for new content since I doubt the return is anywhere near worthwhile
He is free to be a dick but he is not winning him self any pr points by being one. Half of the battle against piracy is just being a cool enough dude that people will want to support you. Take blackshirtboy for example, he is pretty not okay with people posting his comics but he understand that it will happen occasionally and he dose not though a fit or start name calling when it dose happen. I think he knows that not everybody will pay for his comics for one reason or another, not even the most powerful content creators can lock down their shit, but he comes around is sociable, throws us a bone every now and then, and make his stuff easily available are a more or less reasonable price.
It looks like this guy or group is starting to get it with availability and pricing but I think his how he hands people is going to greatly effect how willing people are to pay even if the prices are reasonable.
Pretty much this. I mean, as far as getting his stuff off sadpanda, I wish him all the luck in the world, because I dislike sadpanda more than I dislike him. Thing is, I still dislike him quite a lot.
But that still doesn't excuse coming here and cussing people out, which isn't going to win him any friends when he could just as easily write in a civil tone, and insisting on using only Japanese, not because he can't communicate in English: he has demonstrated that he can and he doesn't want to.
If all of his stuff disappeared from all sources except his paysite, I still wouldn't want to buy his stuff, because I can get an unlimited supply of legitimately free pornography from pixiv. But also, I wouldn't want him to receive even a single dollar from me even if I wiped my ass with it first. Because he behaves like a fucking douchebag.
Yes I do.
And I'm not even that anon.
In fact. I'm going to post more personality death right now.
I'd like it to happen a little slower, so as to be able to savor it better. But honestly, the way people bitch and whine about it here wherever it shows up just makes me want to see more.
Personality death isn't the problem. Shitty personality change is the problem.
[spoiler]Good personality change is where I self-insert the most, because I'm a shitty maso-slut who loves the idea of having my personality and form forcibly changed into somebody's ero-slave, while my mind slowly starts to splinter from the pressure.[/spoiler]
Latest part to the Cruise Ship Drone story.
Could use a suggestion for a catchier title. I know the story prompt that was posted had a suggested title, but I don't like it much.
Didn't get around to editing it this weekend cause I'm a lazy ass and spend a lot of time making cake.
I thought "Theseus's Cruiseship" was a fitting title.
Refers to the thought experiment upon whether replacing all the parts of something means it is the same thing, and refers to the situation.
yeah the title is neat and conveys the basic idea of the story pretty well
>The ship wherein Theseus and the youth of Athens returned from Crete had thirty oars, and was preserved by the Athenians down even to the time of Demetrius Phalereus, for they took away the old planks as they decayed, putting in new and stronger timber in their places, in so much that this ship became a standing example among the philosophers, for the logical question of things that grow; one side holding that the ship remained the same, and the other contending that it was not the same.
This fits the theme that accompanies the story, of how much can a object (or person) change, and remain the same person.
Could be ended, or have point midway where Sam has his consciousness copied back to his body, but the android body remains occupied, SOMA-style.
Thus, Android-Sam is confronted with identity and the aspect of a new life, as well as how much of his original identity remains with addition of protocols/mods.
Just had idea of Android-Sam taking the realization he's an AI badly after the transfer occurs, and him trying to attack himself in denial, only to find himself unable to harm a human being, due to the laws of robotics confirming his android state before emergency shutting down/overheating.
After being rebooted by LASS, he could go through experimentation, exploration, and acceptance with her new form, or undergo further mental manipulation until she's an obediant little "Jill".
Bah, curse my speculative mind. That's what you get when you opensource prompts. Not that I mind. I have little confidence in my writing. Just plotting.
Also, please don't go bad end. Too many good stories are ruined by identity death
>This still isn't translated
Why even live
I read the update and I liked it, but it seemed a bit odd to me how you went about describing the changes at the end. You had Sam note that the breasts were for buoyancy and that the hip changes were for battery life, but it seemed like he didn't read about the specific changes. I feel like that last paragraph would have made more sense if Sam had read like the first paragraph or something, noting that the frame changes were meant to increase battery life and buoyancy, but not noticing what the actual changes were. That way it would make more sense for him to identify the purpose of the changes. Like "I read that the frame had been changed to increase buoyancy, but this isn't what I expected. These look like breasts!". I think the update is good but it stood out to me as odd that Sam was just saying the purpose of the changes. It feels to me like it would be better if he started by hearing the purpose in the patch notes, then saw the changes and reluctantly accepted them, since previously learned why they were implemented.
So I've started supporting tsfのf since he's making an actual effort to localize his doujinshi. To be honest, I hate the way he's lashing out at some of us, and I wish he'd calm down for the sake of his PR, but I appreciate that he's taking the risk of tapping into something the vast majority of doujin circles never bother with.
Well he's certainly not doing himself any favors insulting the people here. I understand he stands to lose quite a bit of money from piracy so he's understandably upset, but really, this is the Internet we're talking about. No matter what he could possibly do, there will always be someone scanning and uploading his work for everyone to see for free. He should just accept the reality of the medium and work to respectfully discourage people from doing so. Honestly, I wouldn't be surprised if some people pirated his doujins purely out of spite for his vitriolic attitude. If he tells me to go fuck myself, he shouldn't be surprised when I return the favor. The difference is I'm not the one losing money by antagonizing someone online.
It always annoys me when people complain endlessly about piracy.
Yes, it is an issue that anyone in this kind of work may deal with, and it reduces their income. But when they get pissy, saying that they're being stolen from that annoys me. The way I see it, it's like a baker getting mad about some bread getting moldy. Its lost profit.
But what he's doing is yelling at everyone outside saying ours their fault for not buying it.
The best thing to do is accept that lost profit as part of your overhead. Maybe accept the idea of giving away the bread that's been sitting fit a bit.
Some good will goes a long way, produces positive PR, and will make it more likely people will pay because they genuinely like the guy.
Didn't Farhads tg site have a version of this, can't remember if it was a TL though.
Doesn't black shirt boy post here as well? From what I've seen he tends to just ask people not to post his pay stuff. I rather like his stuff but don't know much about his personality.
I run a successful adult patreon/comics site and I have some advice for you about how to make it in the western porn business. There are people who will pay for porn access without much nudging and there are people who will never ever buy it; you can make money from both these groups or someone else will. The trick is to release your material early to paying customers, wait a few weeks or months and then post it on your own public reader site with ads you get revenue from. You'll build a fanbase, increase your exposure to new traffic and stop the scumbags at online hentai sites stealing your revenue. This is the model which allows me to live off of my material and I think yours is pretty good, but you're not monetizing it right.
>coming back as a beautiful asian girl with giant tits
The devil is much nicer than I remember.
Thank god all guys who turn into girls become 1000% qt3.14
The market for tg is nitch. I can't imagine how small the market is for smut where a guy turns into anything other than a girl that is at least semi attractive.
I would get a chuckle out of one where a guy ends up a landwhale with the feminist haircut
You realize you're not doing yourself any favors here.
Your stuff is going to get posted for free no matter what you say.
And if you don't have time to do the English translations, just hire one of the people doing it for free and offer profit sharing on the translated version.
You suck as a business owner.
Yeah, and by and large we tend to comply with BSB's wishes because he's a reasonable human being and not an asshole. He was in an /aco/ thread a couple weeks back and in a discussion about one of his pay comics he posted some pages from it himself (none of the good stuff, just enough to tease it). It was pretty good, I bought it.
New rule 63 thread on /co/
Yeah the download link is still up for the raws but no one bothered translating it.
I like the one-shot better than the on-going series. He has to defeat 1000 men as a small girl to return to being a man, basically never going to happen.
If anyone could help me find this story it would be awesome, I think it was called something like "New Job" but I could be wrong.
It's this guy who loses his job and he has a female friend that owns a strip club. He looks down on the dancers but decides to interview for a job at the strip club at the female friend's insistence. During the interview she makes a comment about how he's short and describes him as a girl and as she describes different parts he slowly changes. At the end of the interview (s)he's had mental changes and eventually ends up as a dancer at the strip club I think.
Anyone know about this one?
New TG thread on /aco/ - >>>/aco/343854
Of course I have already bought the magazines (少年サンデー超S), and read it. I am a fan of the author from he published the prototype of the manga. http://www.shonenmagazine.com/newcomer/production/?t=mgp&p=mgp11_09&m=27
I don't belong in TG threads.
I'm too attracted to the idea of the genderbent guy still being manly, and even getting a confidence boost and assertiveness that she lacked as a male. TG femdom is pretty much the only kind I like, like this stuff.
Now I take my leave.
>always liked TG but never felt like I actually wanted to be the girl
>realized one day I relate less to the girl being turned into a slut and more with the guy who just had a new fucktoy spring out of nothing
>realize that I just enjoy mindbreak (or in the case of games, being able to mentally control women) and that I only really like TG because it happens to show the mental process in greater detail in other genres
I can't be the only one who feels like this, right
You aren't the only one that enjoys the thought of being the one to acquaint the newly transformed woman with her new body, I enjoy that idea as well. Though, I also wouldn't mind having the ability to alter my own gender at will, something less permanent than a one time switch is the only way I'd do it.
Same here. My favorite scenario is if a tsf/tg virus turn your group of guy friends into 11/10 cuties, and the virus slowly alters their mind as well as you are trapped somewhere with them as they get very friendly with you, slowly forgetting that they ever were male to begin with, and just showing just how "the best of friends" they are with you.
... but, um, that's just me.
That's just personality change, which people go through in real life anyway without having their sexual organs flipped.
Personality death requires the inability to recall the previous person's characteristics. In the context of TG it might as well be an absolute death since your body is already gone, the only link you'd have to your old life is your personality and memories, the death of these would mark an absolute separation and therefore death.
Personally, instant personality death is lame, but I pierce the heavens when it happens slowly, creeping up on the transformed girl as they realize they're slowly having trouble recalling small characteristics and moments and snowballing from there. More like a reality warp really, that's my stuff.
odd, I too always liked tg but never wanted to be a girl. But for some reason stuff where a guy turns into a girl and suddenly wants to get fucked seems a little, gay to me?
Perfect tg scenario is guy gets turned into girl, becomes shy/submissive, gets another girl to initiate sex ... profit?
Personality change is the other side of the coin to character development.
My favorite TGs are the ones where the protagonist sexual preference shifts gradually alongside while maintaining their personality, or even allowing for repressed parts of themselves to flourish (Shinyuu to Seitenkango, For a Girl, Ranma 1/2 fanfic "Tabula Rasa")
Can someone post some artwork or a manga where we legitimately see the guy turn into a girl (cock turning a pussy growing breast etc) I can't stand nor can I get off on that poof now your a girl stuff. Something like this.
Yeah, the other one has the same deal. Fuck if I can find what it was a trace of, though. I thought it was Ecstasy Bomber, but that doesn't seem to be the case.
>I pierce the heavens when it happens slowly, creeping up on the transformed girl as they realize they're slowly having trouble recalling small characteristics and moments
My slow-burn nigga.
Do you know of any good stories where this happens?
Does anyone remember the title of that one doujin where the MC gets his mind transferred into a maid robot? In the end he ends up getting stuck in there since getting him out would break one of Asimovs laws of robotics. There's also a mind break element. I want to say that marneko was the artist but I'm not really sure.
Content sort of related.
There's no reviews on TGStorytime but dude, you're writing is the fucking tits. I've thoroughly enjoyed all of your story so far and I look forward to every new update. Please, don't stop.
Also, you might want to post a link when you upload a new chapter. People in these threads may not know what site it's on or may not have heard of it before if they weren't here before.
Just got some fire gender-bender doujins. I do I go about scanning and cleaning these?
hey, has someone ever tried virtual reality porn?
a friend showed me some, on a cheap vr goggle,
and actually, what the fuck
its fascinating how real it feels to watch, you really think are in the room/the guy who gets fucked
now, i think it would be great to watch those on the womans side
>Personally, instant personality death is lame, but I pierce the heavens when it happens slowly, creeping up on the transformed girl as they realize they're slowly having trouble recalling small characteristics and moments and snowballing from there. More like a reality warp really, that's my stuff.
Why I love the latest F_TSF and DATE so much. No one else does it nice and slow and it's my perfect fetish.
Your communication appears to be malfunctioning. Are you asking whether you should do so, or how to go about it? In the former case, answer is yes. For the latter, I recommend your search engine of choice.
>There's no reviews on TGStorytime but dude, you're writing is the fucking tits. I've thoroughly enjoyed all of your story so far and I look forward to every new update. Please, don't stop.
Great! Glad you're into it and thanks for the compliment.
>Also, you might want to post a link when you upload a new chapter. People in these threads may not know what site it's on or may not have heard of it before if they weren't here before.
Good point. I'll do that from now on.
Yes more like this can't stand that instant poof now your a girl stuff.
Who /tfgamesite/ here
>tfw you just want to play well written text based smut games ever since you got tired of Fenoxoshit but most of the games are shitty tedious life simulators with mediocre sex on the side or have images inserted in which ruins the imagination aspect
There are like 5 worthwhile games on there but I can't stop coming back
Tfgamessite is catered primarily to those who have a fetish for incomplete games. You can really only truly enjoy all it has to offer if you get off to the content you are anticipating most being missing.
I also love tfgamessite but jesus christ I wish people would finish their games ever. Nearly every game on there is destined to drag on with the promise of some sort of payoff only for the creator to lose interest because nobody knows how to finish what they've started. Most of the game creators need to get a sense of scope, they always try to do too much. I'd rather play a short finished game than a medium length one intended to be long.
>I know it's semi-off topic, but does anyone know any (preferably good) TG art that also involves [spoiler]shortstack?[/spoiler]
Ranma-chan is supposedly just at the borderline of being a genuine midget: 147cm
Hey Fenek, how is going the next page?
I want to see the rest of the girls!
This page pratically done, along with other two...but I am with a bad case of writter's block regarding the dialogues. I have a general idea of what I want them saying, but not exactly what.
Probably because of three nights barely sleeping. But it will soom be finished, I hope.
Oh thanks anon.
Blue shirt - Chase
Black shirt - Ryan
Green hoodie - Colin
Basically, Chase is braging about something to do with soccer, and Ryan, start saying that he could do way better. Colin them complain that they are always competing with each other over everything.
Next two panels is Chase and Ryan bickering, saying that they could won against the other on everything.
My idea is to make them as somekind of Ayeka x Ryoko, or Sailor Mars x Sailor Moon. Rivals and always bickering, with opposite personalitties.
For the sequence, Chase is planing a new challenge for them, while his mind changes while he is talking. In the end I plan something like:
>Too bad! I'm going to be the first person to give him a hug! And make him say how much he loves me!
What you think?
Also, I was taking some rule 63 requests a while back on /co/. If you have some, go ahead...but I usually only do rule 63 requests.
I wish people would stop cluttering shit up with almost no content and broken engine and broken english pre-alpha abortions give feed back pls :)
Wait until you have at least one path that can be played to completion before posting. If you want super early "testers" go on the forums.
Not that anon, but if you want a smooth transitioning scenario, maybe have it transition from soccer, to scoring, to scoring with the MC. Maybe have him brag about how manly he is compared to said rival, and have those description transition to female ones. Maybe even have them transition by saying how they love how manly the MC is and how he deserves a more feminine woman such as themselves.
Also, they can brag how many chicks they can pick up, to saying how bad MC and rival is to picking up chicks, to how many times they can touch/grope/whatever the MC.
Let me ask you if you know this story /d/, it was one I read a while ago, on tfmedia on a similar site that shut down, and it involved a guy getting attacked buy a succubus who plants succubus in him, marrying his best friend while still a guy to prevent himself from turning into an evil succubus, and in their wedding bed as they slowly start to fuck, the parts the husband touches turn feminine. I remember a line "Your pussy juice tastes like strawberries" or something like that.
Author later expanded it into a trilogy with some truly god-tier writing at times, although at this point I'll take anything that isn't just "his ass ballooned outward" and "his tits grew to a GG cup"
I can take a crack at it.
>Chase: Not that I'm keeping track, but that's the 6th game I've won for us.
>Ryan: Bullshit it was. I set you up every time.
>Colin (whispering to himself): And 3, 2, 1-
>Chase: Oh, that's it, huh? So that's why you haven't made a goal once this season?
>Ryan: Well maybe I would if you weren't such a fucking ballhog!
>Panels 4-7 (his sentence changes with the transformation)
Ryan: Okay, fine, match off, you and me-
Ryan: -on... the field... we'll get [another male character, the harem master?]-
Ryan: -and let him decide which of us-
Ryan: -is cutest. Hun, you don't stand a chance!
Orchange that last one to:
Ryan: -is cutest. Good luck, hun, you're going to need it.
Ryan transformed looks quite haughty, so the line should reflect that stuck-up attitude in some way or another.
Anyone have any weird turn offs in TG? I find myself unable to fap to anything involving creating new people other then the person being created during the morph.
Say a man gets TG'd into a wife and mother. If he's being forced to cover for the woman he's being morphed into, I'll fap until the end of days to it, but if it involves a husband and the kids popping out of no where, I just lose all interest. I'm oddly okay with being dudes being morphed into pregnant women though.
My one nitpick is that Ryan's dialogue doesn't seem to make much sense in the first bubble. The "bullshit it was" is awkwardly place.
It might just sound better if you cut the "Heh, doesn't look that impressive" line.
here's part 2 of the story if anyone is interested, a couple in stranger's bodies and a teasing of the next chapter in the end
hope someone enjoys this
if there's any preference as to posting somewhere else let me know