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Hey everyone, these futadom world caption threads... what happened? C'mon guys, let's bring 'em back!
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Not sure what happened to them :/
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>>5702557
This i find arousing, disturbing and intriguing at the same time
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bimp
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>>5702602
I was just about to start working on new ones. I had an idea for a more supernatural 4 parter. How that sound? With an angel.


We can have a new thread I guess.
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Here is a good one I did.
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I saw this in a draw thread and thought of the MREA. Anyone want to edit her badge?
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The one I am thinking about doing is a male is abused by his mistress, horribly. Have one really mean and harsh caption. Then he prays and an angel visits him. The next few will be about his relationship with the angel. How does that sound?
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What all do you guys want to see next?
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So anyone here?
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>>5703698
Bump
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It's because literally every thread is the same set of ~10 captions posted about 5 times each since there are like one to five word differences between different versions. Out of all the futa threads on /d/, these are objectively the worst.
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>>5703730

You mean when I fix typos?
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>>5703730

What do you mean? How can I improve?
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>>5703832
Not that Anon, but I think what he's trying to say is fix all the mistakes in a caption at once. That way you only have to post one image instead of multiple for every minor change you make to a description.
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>>5703847

Good point. Would a imgur link until I got it all be better?
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So what should I write next?
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i like your idea of the angel
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>>5703949

Would it seem too religious? Would that bother anyone?
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>>5703938
Hardcore rape binding.
Public cum dumps.
Police brutality.
Bound men fighting for freedom.

You've got a world to explore--two if you count the alt. world that one guy made with the Drainai.
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>>5703967

Hmmm I got some ideas. You got some pics in mind?
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>>5703730
objectively the best*

fixed that for you
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A whole setting for captions? Creative. I think.
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>>5704334

Thanks. I think.
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So do the MREA believe in what they do or do they just like rape?
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>>5704501

Both. They find it fun to rape but they believe that males are inferior.
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If anyone wants to write their own go for it. I'm writing but slowly.
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>>5704114
This one is by far my favorite, anymore like this one?
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>>5704932

What do you like about it?

>>5703887
This one is more rapey but it is in a lockeroom
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So with school starting and everything this might take me some time. Do you guys mind waiting? Keeping the thread alive with discussion and pics? Or should we let it die and I'll post a new one when I get these done?
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If any writefags are up to it I think it would be cool of a Futa whose cum makes the males detest her and hate her instead of love her but all the other effects still happen so even though the male hates it and fights back he knows he needs her cum to survive.
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>>5703549
this>>5703533
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>>5705050
That's sad. I feel bad for that futa.
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So guys what should I do?
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Is anyone working on anything?
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If anyone has any requests I'll do them. This 4 piece is taking too long.
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Is anyone ever here?
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>>5706502
Im here, i just dont have any requests :/
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>>5706526

Ah that's fine. I'm struggling with the ones I am doing. I think I have a few I could do. How does a school adopting a male to give "full service cleaning" after showers? I also have a really sweet looking one that would work great for resque male. Have I over played that angle?
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>>5706552
that sounds good, and what do you mean over played that angle?
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>>5706653

Like I use the rescue male story too much or somthing. Just wondering.
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>>5706552
male at futaschool sounds great!
(futaschoolgirl as bonus ... in case you need some visual input XD)
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shopped pic by abubu
sadly the resolution is pretty crappy ...
schoolgirl fresh out of the shower though
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>>5706658
>>5706668


That or this one. I was thinking she comes out of the showers and shouts "Male!" And he comes running mouth agape. Their both pretty good.
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And here is the other one I am think of doing. He is adopted by her (or she's his sister taking him away from their abusive mother) and is teaching him how to swim. She shows him her cock to let him know it will be alright.
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>>5706694
>>5706671

Which one should I do?
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did teef died
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>>5706702

If he still lives here's a good one for him.
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>>5706671
sounds good.
(pic from same artist mofuringu)
later he could be called to the teacher if someone complained about his services ^^
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>>5706707
he posted on the reddit and then disappeared. am sad
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>>5703537
>>5703549
>>5703852
Are these guys the best or worst cops ever?
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>>5707226

By FAR the best. I like to imagine Andy Griffith as a futa. A pillar of the community who is loved by the whole town. Insted of rounding up drunks she rapes MIF members.
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>>5706694
Have him be all scared from abuse and the swimming is physical therapy
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In this world the futas are mostly stronger than the males, correct?
Have you ever played with the thought of males regressing over time (getting smaller and weaker)?

The caption could play in the future where baby-males are given to newborn futas by their parents, to grow up with them and become their servants later on.
(the male could be a bit older, maybe about 4 years and taller as the babyfuta).
When the futa turns 6 she would be as tall as her male and outgrow him from there on out.
but the young futas are not allowed to bind them until they are 14-16 years old. with that date their relationship changes from childhoodfriends to master and servant.
(in some cases the futa lustet for the male before that date or the other way around or both ...)
when both are outgrown the male could be half the size or (for me even better) a third of the futa.

The males would have to use their whole body to pleasure their futa and could get bathed in their cum ... yumm (plz excuse my bad english)
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>>5708239
The male babys could be adopted from help centers or even bought at a male breeding station.
(Don't have a concrete idea, about how they breed them)
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>>5708239
>>5708246

You give me a pic that even comes close I'll play with that. I like it.

https://i.imgur.com/8t4XCw0.jpg

I like to think that boys are bound around 5 by their mother. At least oral. Their are still too small for anal.
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>>5708384
How about one of these?
(Artist: ???):
>>5681705
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>>5708384
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>>5706700
Both. Please.
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>>5704708

>droll instead of drool, twice no less
>how's you like it (I'm gunna guess you meant "how'd" but it can be fine on it's own)
>they saud their goodbyes
>I would miss the offices there
>You're hungry aren't baby

I'm not sure if I said this last time but dude, write your stories in word first.
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>>5709162

Dang it! I thought I had gotten that. Thanks for the help man! I really need it. I do write then in google docs.

http://i.imgur.com/bszMkpJ.png


>>5708887
Planing on it. Which one first? And should I do >>5708148

>>5708811
>>5708809
Got any that are a bit more realistically tall? Like 7 feet tall not 12?
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I might be a heathen... but I would love to see one where the male ends up NOT being bound. Perhaps he escapes and vents his hatred into the eradication of ALL futa kind. This multi-part caption could culminate in the genocide of all futa's and at long last freedom for Males and Females.
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>>5703698
Is there like an archive for these or something?
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>>5709577
http://www.reddit.com/r/Futadomworld/
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>>5709469

Why would you want to kill all futa? They are such lovely people.
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>>5709588
>rapes for fun
>likes to mind control people
>lovely person

I like the setting as well, but lets not delude ourselves here.
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>>5709655
Well to them its not really a bad thing, the way society is its completely normal
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sorry bout the long break, was busy
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I'll admit, this one is mad twisted, but hey, I like mad twisted
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>>5709378
Better? (Artist: Milkgohan)
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>>5709823

Yeah
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>>5709741
>>5709787

Glad to see you back
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>>5709469

I support this. Freedom for Men! Viva la Machismo!
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>>5710472
That kind of talk will get you visited by the MREA. Is that what you want?
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>>5709741
>>5709787
glad to see you're back, teef. did you see my request on the reddit thread?
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First cap here, sorry if it's shit I don't have much experience writing this kind of stuff.
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>>5710693
oh yeah, feed back and criticism are of course welcome
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Small question. If a dude was forced to drink a futas cum in this world, if he made himself vomit fast enough would he be able to stop the cums mind altering effects?
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>>5710693
I like it, new approach to the draenei world, although the middle paragraph needs some editing (took and then taken)

Also, i really liked it because someone else is writing draenei captions :P
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>>5710979
I'll get around to editing it, but yeah, lol I am the guy that kept bugging you for requests. I figured instead of bugging one person to make a ton, I could help produce some content.
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1/2

Tried my hand at making some OC for the thread. it turned out a bit longer than most of these other ones though
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>>5711231
2/2

I'll try to keep these shorter in the future for some reason i just took off with this one. I didn't have any problem reading it but if the text's small iIll make the text bigger. I also welcome feedback and corrections
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>>5711231
Did you pick Ephesus due to Artemis?
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>>5711240
Really good man
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>>5711240
What are the other videos? How bad were they?
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>>5711572
This is all I have, sorry they're not 2d women.
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>>5711240
Sweet jesus yes, we need more like this. Maybe a similar one with a male who was resistant and had to go to the SRC?
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>>5710859

It IS possible to wean yourself off of the cum if you start right away. It would be painful but possible.

Sorry about the lack of content. WIll post new stuff by at least tomorrow. Life super busy right now.
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You're doing god's work guys, don't stop. I keep coming back here ever since I found this thread a few days ago. I especially love the futa setting Me and Stuff made. It's not the act itself that's interesting, but the emotional context, the buildup and the eventual climax. Also, the longer the better - as long as it serves the buildup of course. Don't make more or less than you absolutely need to. [spoilers]Also, have you ever considered making Xenomorph smut fic? I haven't been getting my dose lately and I'm getting desperate.[/spoilers]
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Is that helpful editor still around?
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>>5714351

I'm glad you like them! I should have more soon. Life is just SO busy right now.


>>5714644
PM me I'll see what I can do.
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>>5711295 nah i just picked it because i figured male states were a lot like ancient Rome with all the nationalism going on
>>5712996
>>5711483
I'm glad you guys liked it. I'll get started on making a new one tomorrow. I've been very busy recently but I'm free now
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>>5715026
Artimemis was the Greek virgin goddess of the hunt.
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>>5715284
Awesome cap, can we get a part 2?
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All right I can finally start writing. Sorry about the delay
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Thank goddess
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What was the exact specification from the SRC mother caption from the last thread? I have the picture and a general caption written but I cant remember specifics of what was asked.
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>>5716932

I think this was it.

> If you are doing requests, you could do something that pulls theory's from The Other Guy's captions on the subreddit. It could be about a young enemy combatant from one of the free male states. The prisoner would have to go through the special rehabilitation center and have to be built back by their new "mother" .After basically losing touch with reality from being being exposed to futa cum for the first time and slowly watching their memory/motor skills deteriorate while this is all happening.
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Please let me cum cock to cock skype: mike8xxx
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Cum with me cock to cock now skype: mike8xxx
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>>5717044
>Think it was
That is word for word.
Did you just remember that?
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>>5717159
I had the tab open.
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So whens the movie coming out?
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You know what I've realised this setting reminds me of? That one MLP fanfic setting, "The Conversion Bureau". They have fairly similar concepts, when you think about it - one group of people has no choice but to be fed a substance by another group of people (slash ponies, and let's leave the debate on whether sapient technicolour mini-horses are "people" for another time) that causes them to sympathise with and even enjoy their new situation. Admittedly, the situation in question is wildly different - you become a sapient technicolour mini-horse who may or may not have been brainwashed in one, whereas you become a sexslave to a woman with a dick in the other - but I'm starting to wonder what would happen if the two settings came together. What would happen? Would Equestria be overrun with futa ponies who mind-control everyone they rape? Would any of the established cross-setting organisations fuse into a single organisation that has some-to-substantial clout in both settings, depending on what fuses with what, or would it just become a free-for-all between all of the groups? And would anyone exploit the fact that alicorns are effectively magical superweapons, and develop the requisite technology to harness that for their own ends? Maybe we should have multiple settings of this sort, just to figure out what possible paths this could all take.
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>>5717772
>The Conversion Bureau
We never talk about that fic EVER.
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>>5718346
what is it? o:
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>>5718367
From Google it sounds like ponies are a non cyborg version of the cybermen or borg, and all will be assimilated or die.
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>>5717772
How about we don't touch the pony theme with a ten foot pole and go back to our knitting in futadom world..
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>>5718582
agreed
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>>5718582
What about an eleven foot pole?
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>>5718621
I wouldn't touch you with a
Thirty-nine and a half foot pole.
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>>5718651
Th-thanks
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I just wrapped up my newest one. Finally. Anyone want to help proofread it?

http://pastebin.com/QDdaRPH8
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5719222
throat instead of thought second to last paragraph.
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>>5719369
Sorry I missed this. It should be Right to an attorney not due right. Might of had it mixed with Due process.
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>>5719382

Dang sorry about that. Thanks for catching that.

So how is it? So fucking sorry about the delay.
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5719386

You should know by now that you make type gold.
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>>5719454

Glad you like it! I work hard on them. Sorry again about how long it's taking me. Work is getting rough and school is in full swing.

>>5706694
Now for this one. How detailed should his abuse be? Should I make him need the swiming as physical therapy?
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>>5719573
I think he might have meant the gold "male" is hard to read.
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>>5719606

Good point.

http://i.imgur.com/TqvEUht.png

Posted an imgur link to not >>5703730
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>>5719630
The last few did not have a name. Weird.
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tl;dr thread, yet...

But what autistic retard created the teeth pulling FutaDom captions, what a boner killer... reeks of edgy-tryhard
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>>5720168

I started it. Like I've said before I wanted it be be a gentler Sue Dexter Chronicles. It turns out that I did not make it gentle enough. I don't do that anymore.
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Request 1

>>5720122
That is odd
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>>5720199
Request 2

>>5718701
Sorry couldn't resist. Always liked that song
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Maybe some variety would be good. I for one like teeth pulling, however I could understand that some people wouldn't.
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>>5720205
are there any requests left?

If not should I do work on more "normal" caps, give the FMS a few victories, or do some fantasy ones.
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>>5720207

I still consider it canon. I just don't mention it so others don't have to. I am thinking about writing one with teeth.

>>5720215
One guy on the subreddit was talking about that. I'd go for it.
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>>5720215
>>5720168

Some people liked the crueler, depressing captions though. To each their own. general tone has changed a lot though.
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>>5720232
Last of the newest batch. Feed back is appreciated.

>>5720226
Which one. I couldn't find the mentioned post on the subreddit
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>>5720239

http://www.reddit.com/r/Futadomworld/comments/2ekfzn/some_questions_for_you_guys_and_some_thoughts/ckg1gmj

Here
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>>5720246
OK thanks. I had thought that was for requests specified for you. Ill fill it.
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>>5719386
I really like your work, do you have any more captions?
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>>5720480

That's me. The name did not show up for some reason. Thanks though. Always glad to know my writing is liked.
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So what do you guys think of the new ones?
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So are the MREA like good guys? It seems like they bounce around.
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>>5720799

I see them as the heros of the setting. MIF and the Male Free States are bad guys. At least that's how I see it.
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>>5720799
Perspective is everything. They are the police force and enforce the laws. If you grew up with the mindset/propaganda of the futadom world yes, they are the good guys. From an outside perspective, or member of the FMS, Mif or other factions from the setting, no. They are like much nicer KGB. History is written by the victors and the futas are winning.

TLDR: Yes they are the "good-guys".
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>>5720168
I personally like the teeth stuff, it's ok if you don't.
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My second caption and once again feedback is helpful. I have another one I finished but I want to revise it so it's less text and more sex, but I can post it if wanted.

also where does everybody get their pictures from, I can't find a good source.
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>>5721686

4chan and hentai foundry mostly.

Over all I liked it. The structure was a bit wonky but you're on the right track.
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>>5721686
Let's see the other one
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some people dont like rough rapey shit, and have complained about it. Dont read mine if you dont like rough rapey shit
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forgot pick
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You know what I think would be interesting? A story about MIF extremists. I haven't put much thought into this, but I've got a rough idea and would be interested in what people thought.
Starts off with public service announcement warning futas of a rogue/feral male who's been attacking and raping futas, leaving some hospitalised and even murders some; "under no circumstances should you attempt to approach & bind this male, report him immediately etc"
The story would follow this member of elite futa enforcement attempting to find this male and bring him to justice (and to her own desires of binding such a dangerous male).
However, the male keeps eluding her as she follows the trail of rapes, attacks and murders and eventually she becomes obsessed with finding and fucking him into submission.
She gets a break and catches him about to rape young futa girl (around 13) and tases and sedates him, but instead of reporting and continuing with processing, she greedily bundles him into her trunk and drives back to her home, eager and ready to bind him.
Except when she finally gets down to the act (here I'd go into detail about her exacting revenge on all the futa he harmed and the pleasure of seeing his mind melt into her cum-worshipping slave) she discovers that he wont bind to her.
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>>5722386
cont.
Following numerous, but ultimately unsuccessful attempts to bind him she begins to fill with rage and all the time the male mocks her with his independence, how dare he not worship his mistress? After all she did to finally catch him, he won't surrender to her will.
She's forced to bring in a researcher on male behaviour in desperate attempt (this is incredibly hard for her as its acknowledging a defeat to male, for the first time in her life).
Together they run tests (more details about how they try numerous combinations in fucking him, I think I'd write in a lab-book style from the perspective of the researcher), all of which are still unsuccessful. She secretly runs blood work (neither want to give up this male now, their desire to bind him has kept growing over the weeks of experimentation) and discovers a unknown compound in his blood.
They attempt to interrogate him and his origins and history (this was previously ignored, both were too focused on achieving the pleasure (although unsatisfied) of fucking and binding him.
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>>5704944
Literally all of these captions are about rape
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>>5722395
He reveals himself to be from extremist MIF faction (I'd maybe do a little back story on how he was born and raised under the care of the extremists, but he developed a way of blocking the haze and binding after years of research and decided to take revenge on futa society; I actually think I'm deriving a lot of his character from Scar in FMA).
Following this the researcher attempts to find something to counter the compound in his blood, but the biochemistry is unlike something she's ever encountered (insert rage fuck of the male for her inability to best him).
All this time the male goads them, flaunting their inability to bind him and that soon the MIF will rise to power and cleanse the earth of futa so it can be a place for males and females to exist in peace and without fear of having their minds and dignity stripped from them.
The researcher decides to start injecting the male with a cocktail of drugs to try and weaken his mind to make him more susceptible to her cum, despite the compound (she does this without the enforcement officer knowing, at this point she wants him for herself and cant bare to stand the thought of her using him anymore).
Suddenly a breakthrough, she manages to get him to accept her cock down his throat (they stopped trying this previously as he would bite, hard) and shows minor symptoms of the haze.
In a rush she steals him from the holding/experimental cell in the officers house and takes him to a hotel, success in her sights.
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>>5722417
From here Im unsure how I'd take the story, I have ideas but I'm now tired (been writing all this on the spot) and if I actually do this, I want the rest/ending to be more of a surprise. What I really need now are peoples thoughts and feedback because I'm not spending a shit load of my free time writing the dialogue and characters without a audience interesting in reading it.
So /d/eviants, what chu think?
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>>5706502
holy shit there is something wrong with me.
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>>5722430
Na man, youse fine
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>>5722420
It sounds like it would be really interesting to read, not sure i like the idea of him killing futas but its all up to the writer
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>>5722386
>>5722395
>>5722417
>>5722420
>I haven't put much thought into this
Someones telling porkies
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>>5722420
I'd read the fuck out of that
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>>5722344
This caption (nice one by the way) made me think, to whom does a person get binded to if he has ingested several futa's loads in a short amount of time? With this caption, you might be able to get away with saying it's the first one he ingests. But what if several futa's had each put a load into a single glass and had a man drink it?
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>>5721686
Do you have more captions?
Maybe a website?
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>>5722386

I like it. I would have his immunity be something biological thing and not mental training. It's not possible to train your brain not to get addicted to cum. A biological immunity makes more sense. Other than that small thing I really like the idea. Those poor futa.
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>>5722768

Sorry if that sounded like an asshole.
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>>5722768
yeah that's why I decided to do down the biochemical route that he developed a compound to negate the effects of futa cum
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>>5722785

Well I'm interested in it.
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moar
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>>5723159
is this a one shot, part of your wow ones, or new setting?
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>>5723186
one shot, saw the pic, didnt know where it would fit in. I might make more in this setting though
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>>5723246

A futa empress gloats over a male who used to be a democratically elected person? Now he's a cumslave and she is the empress. How's that sound?

>>5685988
this pic
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Im back, I havent been on /d/ in awhile but im glad too see the thread is back

>>5711240
Welcome to the group, phenomenal job on this one!!!
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>>5720239
Great job on this one
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>>5723609
Thanks
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>>5723281
i tried, i might try again, im not too happy with the direction it took
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>>5724246
Great work
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>>5724246

I love how cruel the futa are.
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>>5724246
This is really good, but I don't think the "main cannon" (so to speak) should draw inspiration from this. I prefer to think that the futa are at the pinnacle of human evolution. That they are humans perfected and don't have leaders of their own, that they simply rule over all other humans collectively , and by divine right.
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>>5725096

That's how I see it. I like the idea of a Futa Empire eventually popping up in the "timeline" but not for a while.

Question for you all. What should society look like after a few generations of MREA and total futa dominance look like?

Side question. What do guys think of MIF being controlled at the very top by the MREA? Like the top three members are bound and puppets? The reason they do this is to find the very worst offenders and bind them. The second reason is so a bunch of unbound males basicly tag themselves with membership. How does that sound?
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>>5725120
>That's how I see it. I like the idea of a Futa Empire eventually popping up in the "timeline" but not for a while.

They don't have a government at all, not even a modern one?

>Question for you all. What should society look like after a few generations of MREA and total futa dominance look like?

Do you mean early or later then current setting?

>Side question. What do guys think of MIF being controlled at the very top by the MREA? Like the top three members are bound and puppets? The reason they do this is to find the very worst offenders and bind them. The second reason is so a bunch of unbound males basicly tag themselves with membership. How does that sound?

I had thought the second part was already true. As for them leading it it makes sense. I had kinda figured when they were "pruning" they eliminated radicals ensuring MIF was useless as only mild leaders with no ambition made it to the top.
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>>5725140

They have a government. I just like the idea of an Empire in the futrue, Like 100-400 years after most of the captions.

> Do you mean early or later then current setting?

And yeah that is how it is I just wondering what everyone thought of that as I only talked about it on the subreddit.
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>>5725151
I dont see why they would be all that different. Im not sure what would change. I They would either likely have become more sympathetic and men would have more rights maybe even be male flappers, or less accommodating and men are back to being cattle.
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>>5725120
I have a hard time imagining the MIF as centralized enough to have a hierarchy to be bound. I figured they were more akin to the partisans of WW2 or anonymous. With some significant figures, but without a set group of leaders over the organization as a whole. It would leave a situation where some or even a lot of major figures could be planted easily, but true leadership roles couldn't really be planted because they don't exist.
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>>5725202

I think the MIF is just a label that the MREA perpetuates along with some sort of manifesto so that radical males will group together and develop along the path that the MREA want, so that every MIF group will make the same mistakes.
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>>5725096
>>5725271

Male independence groups are nothing but a social mutation, an accident. Their lives are measured in months and years. They wither and die. We are eternal. We are the pinnacle of evolution and existence. Before us, you are nothing . . . Your ideology is based on the ideas of the MIF, our constructs. By using them, your groups develop along the paths we desire. We impose order on the chaos of male independence. It exist because we allow it. And it will end because we demand it.
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Here is a caption I made a few threads ago explaining terms. Everything in there was (at least at the time) agreed upon, and Me and stuff edited some things. Thought Id post the current terms in case there is desire to rewrite, or add upon.

If there are any new terms yet to be explained, ill make a new one. SRC, MREA, Relgion, Milfs for MIF, and ODAR, all have their own captions already.


>>5725151
what were you picturing as the future?
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>>5725303

I see futa dominance being so prominent that it is not even questioned. Males are bound as young as five. Unbound males are seen as defective (until being bound) and with their control futa lead humanity to an eternal golden age. Granted that's like 500 years away.
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>>5725362
Or is that too harsh?
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>>5725303
I'd like to read about some failed conquer attempts on the Free Male States if you're really running low on ideas.
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If you're taking requests, more futa-on-female stuff going by the rules in >>5703861 would be nice.
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>>5725362
That's pretty much how it is now, besides the 5 year old things. I see men now as women during the middle ages minus the dowry. They could easily loose their humanity in they eyes of futas and become a mere commodity in 500 years though. I imagine the FMS still existing either because they remained unconquerable or because they provide an convenient scapegoat.

The "Golden Age" could work with harsher MREA enforcing and executing any futa who teaches a male to read. Since futas are fathering the children undoubtedly no matter what some will love their child to much to conform and need to be eliminated in a society that extreme.

>Too harsh
Its very Orwellian. Some people will like it others wont. I think teeth are to harsh for my taste, but they are requested (and complained about it) in every thread. Since the setting will take an extreme tone it will be harder accommodate both. Que Sera, Sera

>>5725647
Have a picture in mind? Told someone I'd give the males a few wins, or at least give the Futas some Pyrrhic victories. Obviously no Guro.
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>>5725776
I don't have any particular picture in mind. Just the general prompt.
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>>5725702
I'd like to but do you have a different picture? I would rather use one with less text. I have one half done and then a request and then I'll so that one.
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>>5725776
>harsher MREA enforcing and executing any futa who teaches a male to read
I don't think that's right. If the males are supposed to truly be futa property once bound, restricting their base abilities like literacy only devalues them to their owners, makes them less useful. That sort of thing might fly in the Middle Ages where authority went unquestioned, but in a modern age I don't think the citizenry would be too keen on government dictating what can or can't be done with their own property.
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>>5726743
>teaches a male to read
Thats only a point for a hypothetical "golden age" male servitude is unquestioned. In the current setting that wouldn't fly. But for the same reason it was illegal to teach a slave to read, you cant have educated males and have complete content 1/3 of your population with no rights, 2/3 if you count women. Besides the government has never has had that big a problem dictating what people can and cant do with their property. Just give them bread and games and they'll be happy.

I guess it really comes down to I cant imagine the "golden age" as anything else but 1984 to be honest. Maybe a brave new world setting were every one is "happy".
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>>5726870
That might've worked in older times, like I said, but if this world is analogous to the modern age, society wouldn't accept that level of authoritative interference.

There are more subtle, sinister ways to go about doing that though. Instead of straight up enforcing illiterate males, make use of media and culture, make it seem like the trendy thing to do. Music videos of males being nothing more than fuckpuppets, blockbuster romance movies where the heroic futa rescues the innocent male from disruptive educated masculinists, hit books about an uneducated male's devotion to their owner conquering all bounds, etc. etc. etc. Soon, it becomes a status symbol to have a dumb male.

500 years later, hell, 50 years later, there might be a fistful of educated males, kept as useful as their owners dictate, but the bulk of them are docile and calm as Hindu cows. Not necessarily illegal, just... odd, undesirable. Even the males themselves would eventually come to realise that to be smart is to be strange.
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>>5726909
I think you give modern society more credit then they deserve.

Not that the propaganda wouldn't work. It would likely take it to the level of docility and acceptance of the current modern setting. Its the norm and the natural order thinking. The 100% eternal golden age of the future with no dissidents is another story though.

I don't see how a free society can have a permanent slave class that has the ability to be educated, without dissenters.

Also I find it a tad odd citizenry would revolt if they were told they couldn't educate slaves, but 2/3 of the population would be content with being slaves.

Not that your points aren't valid. Anyway if we're gonna continue this discussion we might want to talk it to the subredditt. I don't want the threat to get deleted because we were getting off topic or if this gets drawn out.
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Lots of discussion.
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>>5726961

Maybe a little dissent but for most its just how things work. There are a few crazy anarchists but most people accept the authority of judges.
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My third caption, I decided to go a different route than my previous two so let me know how you like it.
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>>5722336
I like the rough caps
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>>5728750
Then you'll like this :)
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>>5728709
Very nice
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Does anyone have the one with the futa princess of an island nation that enslaves young married couples?
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>>5728709

> his resistant was restless

Should be resistants other than that I REALLY like it.
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>>5729391
resistance*
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>>5729448

.... yes
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All right at the rate things are going the new one will be done tonight!
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>>5728709
Incredibly good shit man, you should try to write on about a male who as to go through the program as well.
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All right I got the text done. I need some feedback though. How is it? I was thinking that this one COULD have teeth removal. As his injuries were bad enough maybe the teeth could not be saved? What do you all think? No teeth removal as of yet.

http://pastebin.com/CRrJYh57

>>5706694
It's for this one.
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>>5730917
http://pastebin.com/HZPBxujC

"The little champ swam like a determined cow."

I'm not sure if that's the imagery you are looking for.

The teeth could go either way, buuuuut with the mother being such a bitch, I'm sure she'd have had them pulled as soon as she could, not accidentally during a beating
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>>5731032

Is that bad imagery? I imagined him not swiming so well.

As to the teeth maybe you're right. I just assumed that would be the easiest way to do it. Besides I don't think the mother could afford to pay a dentist.
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Feedback feedback feedback. How is it? Should I make it to where his teeth are removed? How could I improve it?
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>>5731716
I like this one just how it is.
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>>5731716
It's good, no need to change the teeth part. Not sure about everyone else but I like the longer ones, lets you become more, for the lack of better terms, emotionally involved. Kinda reminded me of a femdom story I had read once where women had gotten super tall and strong and there was a total role reversal world wide.
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>>5731913
>>5732177

Glad you guys like it! Did it seem to rushed?

Also what should I do next? I have one request on the burner but after that what should I do?
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>>5732537

So no requests? Allright. I have a few I could do.
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http://thumbs.hentai-foundry.com/thumb.php?pid=249328&shadow=0&size=1250

what about this one
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>>5733374

Been done by teef but I also have an idea. A guy tries to hide as a futa. Gets caught. Rape/
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No.5732537
I really liked it. I prefer the rougher stuff, but you do sweet captions so well it doesn't matter. Also here's a request pic.
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>>5733475

I like rough stuff. Others don't. How rough do you want? As long as the ending is nice I will do anything.

I like the idea of molding a person to your will. cruelly shifting them until they meet your standards. After that why be cruel? So what do you have in mind? And what do you mean by "rough"?
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I was thinking a male reminiscing about being bound/raped, and wanting to try rough things only to regret it and eventually learn to love it.
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>>5733504

Like "Lets try this" and then "holy crap this was way worse than I thought!" and then "I guess it's pretty good"? And I think the pic you posted is of traps.
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Sorry. how bout this one?
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>>5733525

That works. So my VERY brief idea works? What sort of cruel stuff should they do?
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>>5731716
Such a happy ending.
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So what is the end goal of the MREA? And do they love males or hate them?
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>>5734419
Keep status quo. Love males, in a misguided arrogant way.
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>>5734419
>>5734451

Agree with other guy except that I see them as wanting to bring all males under futa control and THEN status quo.

>>5722482
Bound is bound. Biologically he is addicted to cum. Legally who ever wants him. He belongs to the sorority until they tire of him and then who ever adopts him.

>>5725285
Except futa don't take fifty thousand years to cum.
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I was thinking the typical bdsm things. Chastity, shock stuff, chains, and whatever you think would please the crowd. But The most important thing is that this is a new paradigm in the relationship. Things getting rough and never going back to how they were is way hotter as a concept than any specifics could be. That being said I do love chastity.
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>>5734501
Yeah, I was assuming futa already having control as a general basis.
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>>5728937
can we have another one with these characters that ends in a happy ending, this one actually feels wrong, poor guy, poor father
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>>5734892
Which character? Teaf tends towards the crueler captions.
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>>5734915
the one with the son of the new president of the free male states and the commando futa
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>>5734927
You mean the exact same story just nicer?
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>>5734936
hmm my thoughts were more on the line of a continuation, but thats okay too
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>>5734501
They sound nice. I want to cuddle one.
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>>5703698
>>5703549
>>5703537
>>5702602
I love so much how they call the boy little guy or little man.

:3
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Did a fantasy cap.
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>>5736637
Still working on the FMS captions.

Thoughts, requests, and feedback are of course welcome.
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>>5736597

I like pet names. You might be able to tell.
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>>5736637
That's a good one.
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>>5736637
>>5736646
I love both of these. You have a grammatical error in the demon caption.

"Embolden by my first taste of sustenance I lost inhibitions and greedily began sucking with all my might, taking in as much her as I can."

would probably read better as

"Emboldened by my first taste of sustenance I lost my inhibitions and greedily began sucking with all my might, taking in as much of her as I could."

and

"Her dead piercing eyes my very soul"
to
"Her dead eyes piercing my very soul"

There's some other nitpicky shit, but everything else gets across
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This alternate universe theme sucks and gets old really fast.
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>>5738316
You suck and get really old fast
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>>5737651
>>5738002
Thanks,
Ill fix it when for when I put it on the subreddit.
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>>5736637
Very nice cap, a continuation on this might be nice. Would be cool to know a back story. That and hear about what happens after she catches him.
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>>5738316

How could I keep it fresh?
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>>5738628
This. I love this primal amazonian theme going on
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So Teef likes it dark right? Well what can you do with this?
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>>5738628
>>5738883
Ill look for new amazon pics. I don't know if I will be able make a back-story or a sequel as the picture sets the tone.
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>>5739007

You could link it to the main canon by having it be a bunch of futa who left mainstream society because they thought males had too many rights. Have one that shows a woman leaving the city and bringing her male with her. That could be the back-story. Just a thought do what ever you want.
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>>5731415
I thought it was cute.
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>>5738316
Do you have any real advise or ideas or did you just feel like saying your peace?
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>>5741608
any specific requests?
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I find this world pretty interesting story-wise as well as fap-wise

any chance there'll be more insight into the world as well as the normal caps?
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>>5741747

What would you like to see expanded upon? What insight would you like?

I have an idea of one with a MREA officer as a helpful small town cops. I was gonna have her walk through town, help a cat out of a tree keep a drunk of the streets, let a parking offender go free, scare of some vandals, rape a male, and other normal cop stuff.
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