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Fix Avengers: Age of Ultron.
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http://fix-flick.com/2016/01/04/how-to-fix-avengers-age-of-ultron-part-1/

Point is, how would you fix the movie?
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Make Ultron kill them all and replace Avengers with original Thunderbolts.
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>>78920711
Have Ultron beat Tony so badly that Rhodey has to step up to be Iron Man
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Fire Joss Whedon before its too late.

Cut out the needless exposition and farm scenes and fill it with much needed STORY exposition. If you wanted personal scenes for Black Widow, Bruce and Hawkeye, should have made those Shield movies, dick.
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>>78920763
Good idea, it would make Rhodey way more interesting
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>>78920711
>Avengers: Age of Kang

Kang arrives from the future with incredible tech and a militia. Kang manages to conquer the planet in just a few days. It's revealed that Kang is from an alternate universe where Thanos wins the Infinity War, Kang goes back in time with the belief that if mankind is to survive, it must be ruled under his greatness. We also see Kang have a strong disdain for Stark, who he sees as a squanderer, and an obsession with Captain America, thinking them of the same ilk.
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>>78920711
Keep Ultron at the same intensity of his introduction and don't kill him at the end.
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>>78920826
Kang really could be a villain for Phase 4 too. Gives us a reason to retcon shit too.
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>>78920826
>Kang
Who has rights?
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>>78920958
I think Fox does
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>>78920711
Pick a motivation for your villain, and stick with it.

That is all.

(also Quicksilver's death felt pretty pointless and box-checky, but it didn't ruin it, so whatever)
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>>78920711
Quickslav lives.

Everything else can be saved by better directors in another movie.
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>>78921243
Ultron's motivation was pretty clear.
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>>78920711

Ok, here's a few flaws on your blog

The hulk being left at the mountains as banner and then just coming back for no reason is a bit a plot hole

You have to have thor's bath scenes because they're mandated to set up infinity war, but you can still keep them in your blog, if you replace them with Thor's near death experience

However, you will have to set that up with his return to duke it out with Ultron at the farm

You also make Vision a heel turner, so you need something extra that makes him betraying Ultron more plausible

Maybe something thor tells him that he saw in his vision

You shift the hulk's character arc to be paralel to Thor's but his character climax is resolved entirely independent and only based on a one-off sentence halfway through the second act

Also, I think you should rely on Thor sheer power less. He solves practically everything except when he's there to be worf

Natasha "comes to terms" with her publicity, but you don't explain why

Everything else is actually a pretty solid work of fanfic
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>keep some jokes but remove the ones interrupting serious moments
>make iron man is more sympathetic to ultron
>remove stupid thor: ragnarok setup scene
>make ultron look more comic book like
>make ultron seem more creepy and serious instead of being treated like a joke
>quicksilver lives
>make movie somehow take place during the course of a couple of months instead of a day (its called AGE of ultron)
>remove awkward hulkwidow relationship
>cap gives motivational speech instead of fury, fury smiles while listening
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>>78920711
Re-add the deleted/replaced scenes.

Instantly bumps it up an entire star.
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>>78920711
just making Ultron an actual threat with the same personality he had when he crashed the party and write off BrucexTasha

everything else was dumb blockbuster standard so fuck it
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>>78920711
Make Ultron an actual threat.

Delete Vision. Replace him with Commander Data.

Come to think of it, replace Ultron with Lore and the Borg.
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Make it about Hank Pym's psychological battle with his inner demons
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