My thoughts on issue 1: >really great concept, very interested to see where it goes >love the old gods stuff like >>77244786 >like the equivalence of cannibalism with power and the implication that perhaps the witches could easily become/transform into arcanics themselves - was hoping they'd show a bit more power or a more gruesome transformation >execution a bit flawed - not sure how to explain this, it doesn't seem to hit the kind of intensity it wants? >characters a bit flawed (all feel kinda one note apart from maybe the main char/the slave seller interaction at the start) >in particular I don't think lines like "I liked you better when you were on fire" and "I didn't want to kill her... but she insisted" go with a serious, harrowing tone the comic seems to want >some great characters though, like the foxgirl here: >>77244718 how good is that? >impressive range of characters - obviously female centric but good age range, body type, etc. covered >fight scenes kind of static >art is LOVELY but obviously rushed - I hope this gets better as things go on
My thoughts on issue 2: >address my characterisation concerns pretty well, because the comic was willing to take pages out to give even very minor characters some personality. It seems like a fantasy comic which is willing to show day-to-day life just as much as grand scale things, which I really appreciate. >talking cat is a major character, in any story in any medium this is my jam >casual, sort of modern garbage shit-talking from the witches still kind of bothers me a bit but this is Avatar.jpg >feels good to hit out some plot beats but also feels a bit rushed to end the issue with the inquisitrixes making an appearance this quickly >a little put out by how flatly they outlined the MC's bad side/moral dilemma, but maybe this'll get more interesting
Overall I am more positive after issue 2 than I was after issue 1, and I am looking forward to 3 because things seem to be progressing fairly quickly.
>>78801908 I like the art but the writing is weak. Two double stuffed issues in and I still barely have any inkling of what the goal or the stakes are just a bunch of world building that hardly even interesting. Not to mention how boring the characters are so far.
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