Hey /b/, posting a superheroine porn comic I wrote and drew, starring Wonder Woman. Let me know what you think! Any and all feedback/commentary/questions appreciated.
Hahly shieet this is good. Great art style, interesting story and acceptable dialog. One thing though, I'd prefer it without the porn angle. Don't get me wrong, I love good fapping material but your skill would be put to better use writing actual COMICS. That's just my opinion anyways, but I still love it.
Thanks. It's not everyday I'm told my porn would be better as not porn
And that's the beginning of a new life for Wonder Woman.
Moving right along to the follow-up, starring Power Girl.
Totally monitoring this excellent fucking thread.
OP is a fucking hero.
And now Power Girl is a slave. Rolling right along to the Starfire chapter.
Yeah but I have fun
You can see all my work at benchleyfan01.imgur.com
Some real critique, learn2anatomy. It doesn't take much to understand how to people in numerous poses, from several angles. Including this is basic facial features as well. You have talent, but don't settle for what you can do- try and get better. As an artist myself, seeing lacking or poor anatomy is pretty cringe worthy but I'm sure you can manage in future works.
Take this for example, it is pretty atrocious. But the face is amazing. Something that pisses me off is Riot game's excuse for poor anatomy, they say they don't worry about it and just try to make the art look "cool". Anatomy is cool, it makes this believable and look generally better. Any image you think is "cool" can be made better with proper anatomical proportions. There is no debating it. Anatomy is important as fuck. When I see your pictures I see natural talent and an amazing head start. Gotta keep working like I said.
I can't even fap, I'm too enthralled by the story.
Wouldn't the flash be faster than the Omega beams? Or did the shock of seeing diana like that make him slow?
Also, Superman can bleed out?
Agreed. Gotta keep working
Also excuse rambling and grammar, drunk and its late. If you approach your art with a more tactical mindset about "what is needed to make this image work" you will immediately see the difference. I hate to say it but your anatomy is almost Rob Liefeld tier. You don't want to be that ego driven asshole going your whole career not being able to draw feet because you are uncomfortable doing so.
The idea is that Flash is already exhausted from running around the world trying to save people in the cities, and then is distracted by seeing Diana naked blowing Darkseid when he gets close.
Superman was pierced by Diana's magic blade, which would affect him just as a regular sword would affect us. So yes, he bleeds out.
No, but I like drawing feet. But I get where you're coming from.
Thanks much. Appreciate the honesty
Nah your best bet is benchleyfan01.imgur.com
The dude just traces other Hentai and comics, that's why anatomy feels so iffy
This is easily the best thing I've seen on /b/ this year. Well fucking done, OP.
Yes, but Darkseid has extra special super powers on his side this time around
OK, moving to another universe. Now, in Marvel: Psylocke
There are so many problems here. The art, the story, the awful dialogue, and dear god what kinds of problems with women do you have OP. But I do have a question. Who circumcised Darkseid?
Speaking of. I'm looking for critique and suggestions as well:
It's a CYOA story.
Some day my friend. Thanks for reading
He's an original character of my own creation -- a young mutant with sexually-based mutant powers that can make any woman his slave.
That's my real grip with superheroine erotica: it's all about rape and coercion. Still, there aren't a lot of people writing/drawing quality stuff, so have to I put up with it (sh porn fetish).
Guess you can't expect people only looking for a fap to have standards. My fault.