I want some fucking honest to god, brutal criticism on my video for film class. Comment if you want, I don't really care.
Give me some advice.
Very well produced, excellent perspective and effects overall. I found that some of the transitions could've been a little crispier (there was only like 2 or 3) but my main criticism was that as someone who doesn't know anything about the context or the project, as an outsider, I don't know what the fuck the film was supposed to be about really. I just seen a girl get run over by a truck then it transitions to her in the forest, and then the grave is of her little brother. Also the ending visuals with the home video was a great visual. However, I just don't know what the video was supposed to be about, and the ending didn't do a good job of summarizing the main idea and hitting home a powerful message. None the less well done and goodluck
This anon here.
I've watched your film the standard twice for review and I have a lot to say about it, both good and bad.
Do you want:
>comment on jewtube
>copypasta to this thread
>jewtube video response, I need to post something anyway