Power Glutton Edition
Nigga I have the entire Slob Cinematic Universe planned out in my head, don't tempt my debauched fatty autism.
ayy SIC is back
really hope he writes more under his own initiative because this was really fuckin good even though I can't stand Touhou
Glad to see him back but every TooHoo looks the same to me.
Told you guys i got a really good artist this time!
Color should come later.
Well as bland as she is there is MUCH more boring out there. Content is content though. We don't have a particularly large pool of good material to draw from.
Christ everyone's in such a bad mood.
how about we all simmer down?
Yes truly the sanctity of /aco/ is threatened. This thread is a huge affront to such fine quality postings such as diapers, blueberry inflation, futa and interracial porn.
here's the colored version.
I pity her really, for having to share the same taste in "extensive human research" with the worst character in UT. Even worse than Jerry. I'm wondering how Idle feels about body hair though, has he taken a bit of a shine to it, or is it a case of "eh, I was just part of the commission?"
I assume when you say "full retard" you mean things like this, where the character winds up massively immobile sized, or the whole thing is played for laughs.
Kinda always wanted to try my hand at writing some fatty stuff, I've got storylines in my head I think only I could tell exactly the way I want (not to mention many of the fine premises I've read in these threads that are never realized), but I've never really written anything before, my grammar and punctuation to my shame is not so great and overall I have no real talent or experience in actually describing fattiness. It's frustrating really.
some basic tips that may help keep you from writing something that gets you chased with pitchforks:
>Burps and farts are not dialog and do not need to be typed out. Use descriptions of what happens when they occur, such as reactions from people or how the person creating them feels about it.
>Do not compare the fatty's mass and gain to relative objects to help judge size. IE don't say her breats were as big as basketballs, this is first grade level writing. Describe texture and weight as well as effects on clothing just to name a few ways to go about explaining their physical description.
>fatties can be into other fatties based on their mutual interest in what they are/have become. Two girls that start to enjoy their fatness don't necessarily need to be huge horny lesbians to enjoy each other's girth. Turning every girl into a lesbian is one of the current biggest flaws with a lot of writers in the WG story circles, if it feels organic that's one thing but don't feel the need to shoehorn it into a story.
>Burps and farts are not dialog and do not need to be typed out.
I don't really agree with this. If you want to impart that their speech is punctuated by unintentional burping, I think writing it out is the only really effective way to do it. Just saying "xxx burped constantly as she spoke, grossing everyone out" isn't nearly as visceral as writing the actual "BRRAAP" or whatever sfx you choose.
>Do not compare the fatty's mass and gain to relative objects to help judge size
Wait, what? Are you seriously suggesting to not use metaphor to describe things in a story? I think you're mixing up "don't use physical objects for comparison" with "don't compare everything to a ball". If I'm misunderstanding you, I apologize, but this seems like bad advice as you've written it here.
I will concede that a burp sfx in place of speech that is a sudden outburst or overlapping someone else's dialog works. The burps interjected into sentences is very tricky because it works well in dialog bubbles for art but not quite as well in a story. I think it needs notations with it to do justice like a preparatory sentance that says something like "her voice cracked and broke over every word as the torrent of gas could not be restricted for more than a few moments" after which dialog including sfx would be acceptable.
but obviously no one should be writing "BRRRRRRRRAAAAAAP" "FAAAAAAAAAAAAART" every other line.
>she was as big as a car
>her belly was like a bean bag chair
>her thighs were the size of tree trunks
these are just as bad as balls.
I suppose a skilled writer could make decent metaphors, but generally it's better, for beginners in particular, to just avoid trying to use objects for context on size.
> I think writing it out is the only really effective way to do it.
It's sophomoric and just plain retarded most of the time. It's also lazy as fuck but I guess that's the order of the day with expansion fiction.
"Visceral", gimme a break buddy.
I don't know, how would you get across something like what's in biggirlshere's stories without actually writing it out? It doesn't have the same disgusting feel to it. It's fine if you don't like it, but just because it's a pet peeve of yours doesn't mean it's bad writing.
>without actually writing it out
Actual talent with a grasp of language helps.
>It doesn't have the same disgusting feel to it.
That makes no sense. Writing out in cartoon onomatopoeia is somehow better than actually describing it, ya know, like a writer does?
Ever consider you're just biased towards 'writing' more suited to comics?
>Ever consider you're just biased towards 'writing' more suited to comics?
I think you've just got some really deep-seated dislike for onomatopoeia that I don't understand. It's fetish fiction, if it's easily understood and does a good job of making the scene clear, I don't see what's so awful about it.
Descriptions like >>339450 are good, but they miss a big part of what they're saying if that's all you have. Just saying "her voice cracked" doesn't work on its own. Do you have a problem with dialect and such, too? What about ellipses or interrupted quotes? It's all a part of how they talk, isn't it?
>if it's easily understood and does a good job of making the scene clear, I don't see what's so awful about it.
Take a look at the multitude of shit fatty fiction out there. Sure it's easy to understand but that doesn't make it good.
Also stop playing armchair psychologist about people who don't think writing out 'BUUUUUUUUUURP' is the epitome of respectable fiction even by fetish standards. Are you really some butthurt DA tartlet who had his feelings hurt about his work or something? Johan if that's you please go.
I think the sound effects thing can work, in moderation. That's the issue. Some writers just use it to fill the space that would be better off with exposition or just plain old descriptive writing.
Take a look at the first Power Girl story in the pastebin (not sure who wrote it): the burps are there interrupting sentences but they're not gigantic drawn out all caps monstrosities AND they're sharing the space with descriptions of how monstrous they are:
>Kara could only smirk, about to speak before her body decided it would be a better idea to talk in the language of deep, bellowing belches first. "Please nothing! It's a challenge you -hurrp- wanted, it's a -blarrrp- challenge you'll get!" Her abdomen only continued to tighten and inflate with her own Super-Gasses caused by the KRYOTORITO which by all of god's graces should've been called off of the market by now. It got to the point that her breasts had a nice, taut shelf to rest on now, weight down on her bouyant belly. "And I hope you're ready because I'm" pausing to let out another heavy belch, her lips and throat quivering from the vibrations. It was loud enough to cause the pictures on the wall to rattle. "NOT holding back!" she exclaimed daringly, patting the side of her obscenely grown gut, sounding like a drum.
It's funny, it's sexy if that's your thing and most of all it's actually interesting to read.
(no fat PG pictures that haven't been posted already, sorry)
thread is getting interesting now
I wish Zob were here to give his input
for my own part however I only enjoy slob / wg in general as pictures
How dare a man in a porn thread think with his dick, what an insane suggestion.
If you all fancy yourself critics, you can chew on this and offer some opinions. Nothing serious, just a short single pager with the "horrible hedonistic domineering monster" slob style. But done in second person! If you get off on that, enjoy maybe!
Translator's note: you are not the fat slob. You are the spineless thing the fat slob abuses.
(kidding). Anyway, I guess it's a matter of taste, but it seems overly silly to me, in places it didn't need to be. (in particular, places like the "your weak level 2 knees almost slammed together..."). Comparing everything to pokemon moves just, I don't know, takes me out of it.
I also think the whole thing is too short for its own good, with jerky movements in places, like the "you pleaded weakly, though you were already licking." That just feels really sudden. The quick switch between expecting the reader to hate it and love it is odd, as well ("don't I get a gas mask or something...?" to "the thought of playing in that slimy Diglet's cave was heavenly"). Also, is her hair a purple ponytail? I thought of it as more a swept-back scarlet.
Anyway, I think it was mostly just not intended for me, I like darker stuff. Your descriptions aren't really lacking but I think they would benefit from a little more time, length, and editing love.
I don't know art but I know what I like. Pretty fuckin funny dude (esoecially the weak level 2 knees), keep going man I wanna see more
All the Pokemon terminology is legit making me laugh, I love this kind of stuff, it makes the story feel more unique in that it couldn't work with any other setting or characters and above all it's imaginative. Personally though I don't care for dom/sub stuff but that's just my taste, or moreso I should say I don't like it when it gets overtly sex time sort of stuff since for me it's always about the gluttony and off the rails self-indulgence. Once again that's just me though. Please, go on, these threads need this (in lack of good art).
Man you're butthurt about the all caps thing. You notice he didn't spend a few lines and more letters than are humanly decent to write out the fart and instead used clever language like Poison Gas Attack instead?
>Man you're butthurt about the all caps thing. You notice he didn't spend a few lines and more letters than are humanly decent to write out the fart and instead used clever language like Poison Gas Attack instead?
Did you even read the (kidding) or did you just light up with rage? I was making fun of that guy.
I know what you did. And I reiterate: you're butthurt somebody rightfully criticized the wanton and frankly irresponsible use of all caps for fucking fart noises. You notice how this guy avoided that entirely? Any of this getting through to your noodle?
Oh my god you really need to fuck off back to DA or BBW-Chan. You know why it IS better? Because it requires some clever writing, it's something that is inherent to the sort of story he's writing (a Pokemon story), and it takes a bit more imagination than just writing a slathering thoughtless chain of letters in place of anything actually important to say.
I can't understand how you can get so hilariously angry over people preferring actual descriptive language (which you derogatveily refer to as goofy) and then turn around and say "FRRRRRRRRRT" is actually better, like what that's not retarded and goofy as fuck? That's literally from the Mad Magazine vault of sound effects. Get some self awareness my friend.
You can have descriptions without making it sound like a cartoon. I specifically said that it was my personal taste. What do you want from me, exactly? To bow down and say that your interpretation of the fetish is the correct one, and all others should be forbidden from ever commenting on anything? I offered what I felt were objective critiques (the sudden jumps in action, the description of Jessie's hair) and stated my subjective opinion on the tone.
You're the one who needs some self awareness. Your ideal slob story isn't everyone's ideal slob story.
>You can have descriptions without making it sound like a cartoon.
No shit, like the PG example posted earlier. But being cartoony was perfectly appropriate for this because it's, whoa, based on a fucking cartoon. It seems to me that you're the one getting bent out of shape because by and large in this thread several people want things the way you don't and now you're throwing a hissy fit.
I'm also picking up this really kind of arrogant and smug sense of superiority radiating off of you like you think you're some kind of literary fetish patrician having to begrudgingly deal with people you think lesser of because they're 'taste' is far more low-brow than yours. Well the door is that way if it bothers you what people in here like. By and large even as far back as the /co/ days the general populace of these threads have always liked things on the funnier side because many of us aren't so far up our own asses we can't laugh at this stupid fetish about inhumanly expanded women in various states of personal hygiene negligence and / or digestive upheaval.
Here is a picture of Cousin Mel from Grandma got Fucking Run Over by a Reindeer for your troubles.
>It seems to me that you're the one getting bent out of shape because by and large in this thread several people want things the way you don't and now you're throwing a hissy fit.
I think you're really misinterpreting my stance on this. I'm not angry at all. It's great to see OC, and I'm glad that >>340356 posted, even if it wasn't what I liked.
>I'm also picking up this really kind of arrogant and smug sense of superiority radiating off of you like you think you're some kind of literary fetish patrician having to begrudgingly deal with people you think lesser of because they're 'taste' is far more low-brow than yours.
Dude, I've said multiple times that it's just my personal opinion. I didn't mean it to sound like I think I have better tastes. I'm sorry if it came across that way.
You're telling me to fuck off, and I think because of your own attitude, you think that I'm telling you to fuck off. No, man, stay right here, and make and enjoy the content. I won't like everything you make and you definitely won't like anything I make (if your tone is anything to go by) but I don't see anything wrong with that.
I wouldn't go anywhere or do anything against my natural inclinations whether I thought you wanted me to or not. Sorry to disappoint you but I don't need your express permission to stay in my own thread..
good job missing the "only" part of the sentence. It's encouraged to think with your dick, but if that's all you can do, you're a dunce who will eat up anything and expect others to do the same.
Not my style. I just occasionally open Word, slam out words until I'm looking at some Aurelina-level screeching sea cow with a domineering streak. I mostly do it to say I can do it. I've done others, but it's all pretty similar. One page or so, vague massive blob, eructations and implications of ceaseless growth.
Have another one, then. I believe I posted this one, either in an old /d/ slob thread, or a thread on plus4chan before they all but died.
Either way, it features Frida Mofette of Wakfu, as written by someone who had never actually watched Wakfu. I'll get around to those blurays one day. I digress though. Another short, simple already-a-ridiculous-pile woman gorges. Contains minor vore.
Also, a giant lower lip. At the time, I had seen Dustin's image of that one Teen Titan girl with a big fat lip, so I thought I'd try my hand on it. If it offends, just pretend it's a chin. Or something.
its all kind of complicated but it smoothed itself out around the end of last year and i cant see me deleting the account any time soon. its not a family thing either
it had to do with a physical move that meant not having a laptop to draw on for a while and i didn't know how long or if i would be able to come back to this stuff
im not self loathing and im probably not a diva?
thats not what this threads about tho so post more slob
The descent into total unfettered hedonism.
THIS THREAD PLEASES PAPA NURGLE
PRAY TO YOUR GREAT SLOBBY GOD AND MAYBE HE SHALL BESTOW YOUR BOSY WITH THE CAPABILITIES OF PRODUCING NURGLETTES
I guess technically slob is what happens when Slaanesh and Nurgle get along.
That's really flattering. I don't see anything all that special in it, myself. I guess the right notes were hit in the song, though. I'd ask what elevates it to such lofty status, but considering it's wank fodder, I don't imagine much beyond "it makes the wiener tingle".
Also, the picture I mentioned that has nothing to do with Wakfu.
Do you have any tips on writing well? What works for you honestly?
Anon please I want a higher standard than DA
What do you take me for, an inflation fetishist?
>No slob Stocking yet
Can I get a writefag around here?
Here, have a slob Juri
>Tfw you'll never bring her more food
>She will never belch in your face
Juri is the slob to end all slobs in my mind. Why the fuck isn't there more?
I could ask the same for R Mika also considering it's canon her special skill is gluttony
Fat Juri is actually pretty common, but she's more of a foot / femdom thing ya know?
You're right about Mika though.
I'm sorry but I think one thing that's lacking, beyond any specific character really, is giantess slob.
I know a lot of artists draw fat girls in general like giants but that's almost always unintentional or just plain bad / disregard for anatomy and not an actual giant girl growing. Yeah technically fat giantess on it's own is done a bit but I'm talking slob here not just festively plump or Saxxon autism.
Imagine a big fatassed giant bitch getting food dropped right into her gaping mouth from the walls of a castle or else she threatens to smash it. Imagine wizards and knights scaling rolling hills of slick blubber to try and negotiate. The whole town shaking from the occasional fart that thunders out of her rear planted too close to the city. This isn't complicated.
yeah I hear ya, i do have this:
basically the only good thing this guy has ever written but hey it's what you want
A while back, In one of these threads, someone posted a story about a mom and son (or daughter) who went out to a farm and these hillbillies had a slop pit and they put them in the slop pit and forced them to eat it and they grew really fat really quick and got dumber and dumber and ended up commiting incest and joining the hillbillies.
Anyone got any stories like this or have sauce on this story? It was on some type of forum
Oh man I've been thinking about this exact thing lately. I've seen plenty of just fat giantess stuff but nothing that goes full slob.
You even posted a pic of the one character I wish had some content like that.
Not that guy, but I think he more meant "woman with figure of a 600 lb ssbbw but is actually 50 feet tall", rather than "woman is so obese her fat rolls are giant".
Though I'll grant that it's a rare enough thing that there's overlap. Like this image. She's not technically a giantess, but she's so fat she wound up being one.
But then again, he did cite "disregard anatomy" as something he didn't really want to see.
Yeah, what I meant was actual giant girls being fat, not girls MADE giant BY fat.
>like fat and binging
>like a little sweat
>hate hairy unshaven bodies
>hate bodies covered in dirty stains, except around the mouth after eating
>everything combines all of them
Conciseness. I like a good developed story when it's there, but a story should never overstay it's welcome.
It hit the right notes, but also didn't have any bad ones. It gets more done in 6 paragraphs then I've seen some stories do in 6 chapters.
Also, yeah, I have a thing for Queens and dominant feedees, and that's relatively rare, and done well is even rarer.
Yeah this. Y'know I love Sic, really I do, talented as fuck guy, but some of his stories are literally 20 goddamn pages. I'm sorry but I dunno if I can even stay erect that long before I blueball from boredom. NOT TO SAY HIS STUFF IS BORING! But when I read them I just find like a single page or so I like best and fap from that then close the page.
That's a point. I've noticed these threads run down three branches, for what they want out of a slob related media.
>Submissive slob - plays up the negative aspects, being fat is suffering, totally reliant on others to function.
>Apathetic slob - plays up the sloth, wound up this way out of laziness, usually most prone to do the more gross elements, more about the filth than the gluttony.
>Dominant slob - plays up the gluttony. Is fat, and lords it over everyone else. Slobbish behavior is because of their size/perception they're above everything else. Frequently the rest of the world is cow-tows to them in the most submissive fashion.
Of course that last one gets you Aurelina, so that might be why it's so rare. Stigma, and whatnot.
Maybe I'll post another short thing later. Full of dominance, egos, bitches, and everyone's favorite friend, Caps Lock.
Aurelina is a psycho tranny furry who goes apeshit over basically anything in the typical furfag manner, he's his own fucking stigma, not that type of sub-genre.
Now not to sperg out myself in anyway but I like a combination of 2 and 3. A lot of my Power Girl related slob scenarios usually have the gain as a result of circumstance and not 'lifestyle' and often involve Terra being the 'sub', not because Peej is lording over her but because Terra is my straight man who has to bear the consequences of her friend's gluttony. I dunno but it always seemed funnier to me to have a tiny girl just to compare the fatass to.
I really don't think about this kind of stuff, I just know what I like is all. Since I think the seeds of this were planted in early childhood with that episode of Rugrats I think I'm naturally inclined towards dominant slobs but I don't really put all this thought into sub-genres or something.
>Of course that last one gets you Aurelina, so that might be why it's so rare. Stigma, and whatnot.
I don't like dominant slob at all, but man I have never let someone I dislike ruin a fetish for me.
Why is slob Midna always so perfect?
The sequence that got me into slob doesn't really fit into any of those, interestingly.
I suppose it comes closest to Apathetic, but still not a 100% perfect fit there.
Fuck, I accidentally posted the clean version instead.
I think what you're referring to is Down on the Farm, on the Forever Changing forum. It has quite a few slob TF stories, but a lot of different transformations, too. This story is about a woman and her son.
I really wish you were a less slippery guy and just took requests from us instead of striking like a bolt of lightning.
I'd rather six paragraphs from you than six pages from most slob writers.
SF by and large has a lot more slob content than Tekken.
I prefer the idea of shrinking around a slob over a slob growing giant.
>somehow get shrunken down to a fraction of an inch tall and end up in the room of a morbidly obese woman who almost never gets out of her chair
>your only hope of getting any help is to somehow get her attention, which means you need to climb up her body to reach her face
>spend days scaling her behemoth body by hiking across her rolls, forcing your way through dense jungles of pubic hair and spelunking the depths between her folds of fat while she does nothing but pig out, watch TV and sleep the entire time, occassionally causing massive tremors that shake your entire world when she gets up to go to the bathroom
>manage to survive by eating tiny scraps of food that she dropped and let gather all over her body and drinking from pools of sweat that build up between the piles of flab
>finally climb up to her shoulder, relieved that this hell is finally nearing its end
>shout and scream as loud as you possibly can to get her to notice you with no luck, she either can't hear you or just doesn't care enough to turn her head
>after what feels like hours of constant screaming she eventually turns her head to see what's causing the racket
>just when you think you're saved you hear a low grumbling coming from below
>you know exactly what's coming after spending so much time with her but don't have enough time to react
>she lets out an earth-shattering belch that blasts you with hot air and somehow smells worse than anything you encountered on your trip so far
>you feel like you've just been hit by a truck as you get thrown off your feet and go flying through the air
>start tumbling downwards so fast you have no way of telling what's going on
>after 30 seconds of being bashed around you hit the ground and pass out
>when you wake up you're in a black forest of giant oily trees that seem to go on forever
>realize you've landed back in her pubes and have to make the entire trip all over again
I would say it mixes all three, perhaps best described as a hedonistic slob.
She's lost all control over her hunger so in a sense she's submissive to her own cravings, she is helpless to her own desires.
She's apathetic about it and is just letting make her fatter and fatter, her newfound addiction to these vices being stronger than her willpower to fight them, thus her weakness fuels her slothful decent and the apathy makes her even weaker to resist the temptation, it's a catch 22.
Lastly she's not about to let anyone stand between her and a meal. She may not be barking orders, but you can imagine she wouldn't take going hungry well and trying to make her stop might just get you flattened when she goes for the food anyway.
Hedonistic slob the best slob.
I like your style. Stick to your principles.
"You gotta be you. Only one in the world."
I kinda wish more 'low-key' slob stuff like this got posted in these threads rather than mostly girls who look like a pile of mashed potatoes with a tiny face on top but oh well.
It is a testament to this work's hotness that only do I find it arousing, but I envy their slobby obesity.
The sequence makes it look much fun to be a fat slob. Pretty much gave me my mutual weight gain fetish.
Geez almost no one posts this kind of slob.
There are frequent ssbbw threads on /d/ and /aco/. Just chubby-loving slob fans seem to have it kinda rough, I imagine this is basically all they got and that this is probably the last place they want to be.
Kind of like when I resort to Tumblr for its god-tier fattywank. That's just about all it's good for.
I do kinda want to see more 'rounder' slobs, but I guess that would be inflation?
I feel like it's a getting a little more traction. Like him or not TAD pretty much exposed a bunch of people to it whether they wanted or not. On the occasion I watch him stream I always love seeing the vanilla fatty artists always going 'o-oh...' when he starts to go crazy
>actual discussion of diction and grammar usage in slob fiction
Now THIS is my kinda thread. Even I have gotten lazy as a writer because slob fans never hold me to any writing standards. I'm really, really pleased to see that changing.
>not submissive, meek, embarassed lardwhale
Eh, I could take it leave it. The writing is well constructed but the subject matter isn't normally my cup of tea. The humor is great; the day this fetish starts taking itself seriously is the day I hang up my pen.
>ad hominems everywhere
Troll post, happens every thread. Calm your jimmies son
These blurbs are pretty solid Anon. Your paragraph structure is well done and and the insults are brilliant. Excessive use of profanity tho, -1 points from Slytherin
This seems about right. I'm #1 or #2 lover (heh heh) myself though.
I think with me, it's the personality change that really sends me over the edge. If a girl is a) uptight, cleanly and orderly or b) active and outgoing, anytime these 2 types get fat and smelly I acquire diamond-dick syndrome.
>Excessive use of profanity tho
Zob not only are Panty and Stocking officially foul-mouthed in their own series but you yourself have used excessive modern day profanity in places where really you shouldn't or didn't really need it, like the Sphinx story which was in a medieval fantasy land. Let's not cast stones now.
You know I wonder how a slob Ryuko would be like...
I'm also glad we can finally talk about standards here (in a fetish specifically about declining personal standards but that's irony)
I can tell you for my own part, I have so goddamn many stories banging around in my head (that come to me as I'm lying in bed or in the shower or whatever), that I literally flesh out from beginning to end and at least try to make funny and different and even interesting, that I never do anything with because I know I'd be an awful writer and we don't need more shit fiction that might as well could've been written by a monkey with his banana in his hand out there on the internet.
In the fetish writing community, aren't we all monkeys sitting with our bananas in our hands? So don't worry about it, try adding something short to a temp pastebin and ask for critiques.
At best you might improve somewhat, get your ideas out there.
And at worse... well, you can quickly dump the trash anyway.
It's not slob, but it's one of the few named images I've got, so have some top-tier girl
My advice to you, write what you want. Find a way to just make words come out. Even if it's just purple prose that goes on to just describe the body, do it. Anyone can slam words together, I'm proof of that. But you won't get anywhere if you don't get it out in front of you. Read it. Reread it. Get others to read it. Don't ask either them or yourself "did you like it". Ask yourselves "do the words flow well?" A second set of eyes will usually find a grammar snafu you might have missed. Outline if you have to, some write the way they speak and just let things flow out aimlessly, only in editing it will they ever refine their thoughts.
Nothing is gained by sitting idle and feeling sorry for yourself. Make an effort. Make it interesting. Ultimately, don't worry too hard about trying to appeal to some audience you might never win over. The harshest critic is yourself. When you look at what you write, you have to ask yourself: "Would -I- want to read this?".
And yet, don't stress it. This is fatty wank porn. Ultimately the main thing is that in some way, the prose is going to be enjoyed by someone. It's why I write things so tongue in cheek. If I wasn't having fun, I wouldn't be doing this.
Speaking of, have another. Did you like Cia and Midna? This doesn't involve either of them. Also, no farts. But there is a lot of fatty. Contains the usual in patronizing dominating ultra blobs, though.
Oh? I've never watched the show.
I usually throw in profanity for joke factor, yeah. Normally because I can't think of anything else. I'm actually not a very funny guy. Unlike that Cyberkitty guy. That dude is a fucking comedic genius.
I am a huge fan of the Flavor High /co/ concept with the high school full of chubby food based monstergirls, pic related. The mountain dew girl, Max, makes an excellent gas-fetish subject--she's literally carbonated, and gets bigger when she gets upset or aroused. But no one will ever write that universe and I've come to accept that.
Well here's my take on Max doing the dew as she gets worked up. Hope you enjoy this little bit.
Max felt her inner bubbles froth and churn as she replayed the searing red F stamped on her test. She allowed her usually excellent self-control to crumble, her breasts rounding out just a bit more, her belly not that far behind.
Damn that Ms. Twitzler, with her red stretch arms and her high fructose bitchiness. That was the reason she failed, she rationalized, not because of her failure to study, but the vindictiveness of that long-armed, lanky, licobitch!
A belch erupted past her lips as she vented her anger into gas, her height increasing by two feet. Realizing she couldn't quite reach her locker, Max started inhaling and exhaling in slow, measured breaths.
Her belly receded, bubbles returning to the gentle thrum they usually were and not the boiling level they had been at. All in all she was back to normal, green skin placid once more and not shifting or expanding.
She was going to be okay.
She was going to-
"Um...excuse me Max, you're in front of my locker again."
Turning around, Max's red eyes widened as she spotted the most adorable, and sexy, senior in all of Flavor High: Star Wrigley. Her square body, with flatness in all the right places, got Max's heart pumping.
Her ass pressed against the locker now as the two usually soft orbs became twin bogs of flesh, her height shooting up. "I'm so sorry Star! Let me just-URRRRAAAAAPPP!" Her whole face turned the pale green it usually did when she got embarrassed, Star's pink eyes holding no judgment.
"It's ok, Max, I know how Ms. Twtizer can be."
Unfortunately, her crush's empathy only caused Max's arousal to grow and a ten second fart followed, Max hurriedly writing her number down and waddling away as her thighs merged together.
"Gotta call, call me Star!"
Thankfully, Max's growth slowed down as her crush vanished from sight and she resumed her meditation.
I found more of his art through his old name, Quogaora.
Zob, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Check your notes on DA when you have a chance.
Also, here's a little Trip ditty.
Trip might not have had schools, whatever the hell those were for, but she had plenty of food now.
Monkey provided a lot of it, viewing her as the reason he was still himself and not the slack-jawed slave to Pyramid and Trip shared when she could.
But she also consumed.
Greeting the morning with a gusty fart, she stretched as far as she could. Curtains of flab hung down, partially obscuring her sweaty pits. Huffing and puffing, she got to her feet and walked towards the mouth of the cave she called home. Her thighs pressed together, their litheness long lost to an array of tasty delights Monkey had scavenged for her.
Of course, he also joked she should change her name to Pig, but she took the annoying jokes with the good and the good was very, very tasty.
Scratching aimlessly around her massive ass, she farted again and brought her fingers up to her nose, taking a deep whiff. She liked her own scent and it helped her deal with Monkey's overpowering BO most days. Running her non-flatus coated digits through her greasy hair, Trip threw on the mecha tarp she called her outfit these days and waddled down to greet her fellow survivors living in the mountainside, hoping some of them had a little food to spare.
I'm gonna offer some critique here. You're falling into, what I feel, is one of the traps of writing Dominant slobs.
They're not really dominating, as much as insulting and not doing much else (besides eating). There's a writer on deviantart who's especially bad about this. All his fat women are evil psychopaths incapable of doing anything for themselves, except whining. And everyone responds to their whining. That's not endearing, and it's not powerful.
Now, this isn't like that, but it could certainly do better. I liked the "100% chance you are a worthless bitch" thing because it had comedic timing and came across as clever. Showing cleverness is cool.
Buuuut there is a bit of veering into everyone wants to make demands of Link, but it's not clear why? Are they not capable of getting food themselves? If they just want as much as possible, why is only Link being treated like this? The cumulative effect is that Link seems to be the only person capable of agency in the story, which again undercuts the dominance effect.
This I can definitely say is one thing that made the Moffette story one of my favorites ever. It establishes why Moffette is doing this, and able to do this:
She won the battle, proved herself capable, was given command of the ship, and was "the only thing on the entire ship with a spine". She is, in fact, the only character in the story who actually takes agency and makes the story happen.
All that's super good, and this Hyrule story could use more of that.
Dude honestly it should be your own initiative that stops you from being stagnant, it's not on anyone else.
Same reason I gave up on Gnibbles, guy is perfectly content to stay in his rut of Persona and Touhou and has no desire whatsoever to branch out effectively making every picture the same shit over and over.
>it's OK if an artist stagnants and draws nothing but the same shit every time to the point where it all blurs together
I bet you justify Axel drawing nothing but the same copypaste le big butt of she ten thousand times over because hey, at least it's SOMETHING!
subject matter repetition isn't stagnation, it's just obsession. It's not ideal but no one, least of all you, have any room to tell an artist they have to draw something different.
Now if you want to know what stagnation is that would be drawing the same pose or same plot over and over and never deviating. This is caused by an artist's fear or reluctance to try something new. They find an easy format and just keep reusing it never trying to evolve from that comfort zone.
Axel is sort of in a gery area here. He's doing butts for commissions and those commissioners never ask or pay for anything more than the same cheesecake butts. He could certainly try new ways of doing this, but he isn't doing anymore than what they pay him for. This is laziness on his part, doing the bare minimum for the pay.