Hi, posting a series of superheroine porn comics I wrote and drew in which a teenaged mutant rapes and enslaves the most beautiful women in the Marvel Universe.
Let me know what you think! Any and all feedback appreciated.
Here's the newest chapter: Phoenix.
This is technically the third chapter in the Submission Agenda series, taking place after the main character has already enslaved the White Queen, Emma Frost.
Again, any thoughts welcome. Love it? Hate it? Let me know.
You're doing decent work, but you're suffering from a lot of the pitfalls most beginner artist suffers from. One of them is that all your faces look the same. One of simple things you can do to differentiate the face is to figure out what kind of eyebrow and jawline you want a particular character to have and then be consistent with those characteristic of the character. I don't know how much time you spend doing these but take it into consideration. Small attention to details like that will make your art stand out better even if readers are not consciously aware of it, they'll see the difference.
I like your work, It seems that you're starting to develop your own sense of style. I could do without the big plastic surgery lips, but hey... I don't think it detracts from your work too much.
Wasn't this shit originally like old school fapfiction? I mean pre internet usenet era?
But anon, that's just keeping with house style. Well house style with a little bit of what looks like hentai lightboxing, but the dick wants what it wants..
Wasn't he supposed to be doing something with the DC girls?
I always had a thing for them, particularly Wondy
I got to say, I have a thing for this particular fetish, and I think Pegasus' stories are great, but I'm not much a fan about the fact that all the female have the exact same body type.
I mean, I can see how someone like Emma Frost would look like a bimbo, but someone like Psylocke should be far more athetic and slim looking, and someone like Susan Storm have a more mature/soft type body with milfy curves.
Than again, asking for realism in porn is sort of stupid, specially when even the official artist themselves can not even do that themselves.
I don't get this guy, first he started doing his own art, it wasn't great but good enough, then started straight out lifting out panels from some Japanese artist ala Land, and then it seems now he went back to making his own art but in the style of the Japanese artist?
I wish he would find his own look, because I have actually read his stories and are not bad at all, some sexy stuff. The comics are a bit to bare in comparison though.
Meh, but in the end it is hot either way, can't really complain about free porn.
Wait, I though it was supposed to be Michael Cera?
Unless the author is Michael Cera...
But yeah, I rather the main character wasn't suspiciously a self-insert and rather some minor character in the Marvel or DC universe, or maybe even a chick or various characters somehow capturing these heroes for their own interests, like some cult or perhaps even more interesting a super obsessed fanclub.
>super obsessed fanclub
I always wonder how this would work in the comic universes, because you know these superheroines would have tons and tons of stalkers and even religions created after them.
Eh, it would be a hell of a lot more interesting if the main character didn't just have the power of control women instantaneously, and actually have to exploit their various weaknesses, because otherwise it just comes off like a lazy rape fantasy.
It has potential though
More like he keeps following the same exact formula and it gets stale. Give us something other than
>"I'll never submit to you"
>"O-oh no I'm turning into a brainless slut"
>2 panels later she's begging for cock
The amount of time you fuckers spend criticizing and nitpicking someone who is giving you awesome free porn is incredible. There's literally like hundreds of pages of comics at his page and you're still bitching, or even in some circumstances asking that he be banned? Are you fucking high?? Either shit up and jack off like the rest of us or go someplace else, Christ!
He came here asking for feedback, he got it. 4chan might not whitewash their criticism but he knows that since he's been posting his comics here for a while now.
In short, shut up and grow a pair.
Very cool how you do the bimbofication in this chapter. Phoenix is obviously subjugated and morphed into extreme proportions but still maintains some of her guile and agency. She's clearly dominant of the weaker Emma but once he starts fucking Phoenix she kind of dissolves into the standard simpering slut. Also some very nice ahegao going on. Kudos