i'm producing a new manga. one of my main characters has been finished. wanted to see what people thought of her.
Not a fan of the art-style. Especially those generic eyes
The 'medieval' upper part of the outfit clashes with the scifi legs.
I have no idea what's going on with the bottom of the boots but it looks weird.
The white/grey legs color clashes with the more natural colors of the rest.
Also this >>115778843
well, i had it done by a professional manga artist. but that's the idea. i'm not trying to make something that has been done before. i figured a lot of manga/anime fans will not like whats new but it's what i'm going for.
now this is a very early idea of her but i doubt much will change. other than some clothing colors.
i like it dude , dont listen to these fat neckbeards.
they are just mad they cant do what youre doing.
stay based, hope to see more in the future.
thank you. i figure i might as well post one of my other characters.
thank you, lol i'll take that as a compliment. i was going for a younger looking character. i'm sure you'll enjoy that he is 20 and legal. but he's designed to still be fairly innocent
well, the main point here is i have not given any lore. she's dressed perfectly for the situation she is in. yes it's a futuristic setting. but with the lack of resources she can only use so much. not to mention the village she is in. but what would you have in mind? this?
>i'm sure you'll enjoy that he is 20 and legal.
OP here. i figured there would be a lot of hate. but i actually expected it from 4chan. those that say "oh you arn't japanese! so it isn't manga" do you know what i hear? "you arn't white! you need to sit in the back of the bus!" so i'm not worried about that. and again, you all don't know the lore of my characters so the designs are fine. same with the names, there are a lot of anime with silly names. but so you all know i misspelled Emerald on purpose. in my story she will normally be called "Em, or Ema"
again, i'm shooting for something different. in most anime/manga i see today i see the same damn thing. high school, sudden GF, and japanese culture. not from this story. sorry for the change, but gambles are whats needed here.
anyway, i'm off to bed. ya'll have a good night
not to worry, i accept the fact coming here would run into rotten people. >^.^< enjoy your negativity. and i'll keep on pushing forward with this. if you see this story in the future, try to think more lightly of me. i'm just trying to make my dream come true here.
No, you aren't understanding. Saying this isn't manga because you aren't Japanese isn't racism. Manga is an export from Japan. You don't call American comic books "manga". They are comic books.
If you aren't physically in Japan, then what you are producing isn't Manga. period.
Also why the fuck would you create a thread like this and then leave? Are you baiting us?
While these aren't objectively horrible, their faces (especially the eyes) and expressions lean more towards standard /co/shit. Move away from Korra.
Not exactly a big fan of fantasy settings either, I dislike the ears. Why not make a straight-forward steampunk instead? With solid human characters that don't have a bushy tail to distract.
Capitalize the first letters in your sentences. You are typing like a retard.
Look, the point is, you posted this on the wrong fucking board. That's your fault, not ours. We don't care about western "manga". /co/ does. Really though, you'd get better feedback on one of the art boards.
And stop lying. If you say you are leaving, then leave. Don't post again. You are only digging the hole deeper.
This thread is going to get deleted soon anyway.
ok last one since i like real feedback! sadly i wanted more Moe from the artist i had this done. but he was set on doing this in his own style. these are concepts so they are set to change. but as for the fantasy setting. it's just what i like. i figured it's not everyone's cup of tea. but it's worth a shot. as for the tails and ears. these are the only 2 main characters that are non human. i figured i would get them done first. but i like the accent that tails give. the ears are a new twist i thought i would add. but again. it's all about peoples tastes