Suggestions?

Thread replies: 18
Thread images: 10

Anonymous
Suggestions? 2016-11-23 10:20:24 Post No. 541741
[Report] Image search: [Google]

File: 1.jpg (116KB, 1280x720px) Image search: [Google]

116KB, 1280x720px

Suggestions? Anonymous 2016-11-23 10:20:24 Post No. 541741 [Report]

Hey guys, this is my first real attempt at making something, what do you guys think? Where do I need to improve?

Anonymous 2016-11-23 10:20:42 Post No.541742
[Report] Image search: [Google]

Anonymous 2016-11-23 10:20:42 Post No.541742 [Report]

File: 2.jpg (112KB, 1280x720px) Image search: [Google]

112KB, 1280x720px

>>541741

Anonymous 2016-11-23 10:26:27 Post No.541743
[Report] Image search: [Google]

Anonymous 2016-11-23 10:26:27 Post No.541743 [Report]

File: a.jpg (324KB, 1853x977px) Image search: [Google]

324KB, 1853x977px

>>541741

Anonymous 2016-11-23 10:37:12 Post No.541744
[Report] Image search: [Google]

Anonymous 2016-11-23 10:37:12 Post No.541744 [Report]

File: b.jpg (356KB, 1853x977px) Image search: [Google]

356KB, 1853x977px

>>541741

Anonymous 2016-11-23 11:51:39 Post No.541748
[Report]

Anonymous 2016-11-23 11:51:39 Post No.541748 [Report]

>>541741
Looks good. Keep it up.

Anonymous 2016-11-23 10:35:24 Post No.541782
[Report] Image search: [Google]

Anonymous 2016-11-23 10:35:24 Post No.541782 [Report]

File: hqdefault.jpg (11KB, 480x360px) Image search: [Google]

11KB, 480x360px

Damn OP, that's creepy as shit. Good job.

Anonymous 2016-11-23 11:05:49 Post No.541785
[Report]

Anonymous 2016-11-23 11:05:49 Post No.541785 [Report]

>>541741
Looks nice, now you need to give the model some textures.

Anonymous 2016-11-24 12:48:21 Post No.541790
[Report]

Anonymous 2016-11-24 12:48:21 Post No.541790 [Report]

where are the brows/eyelashes?

Anonymous 2016-11-24 01:32:36 Post No.541792
[Report] Image search: [Google]

Anonymous 2016-11-24 01:32:36 Post No.541792 [Report]

File: A.jpg (2MB, 3840x2160px) Image search: [Google]

2MB, 3840x2160px

>>541748
Thanks

>>541785
Its getting there haha

>>541785
finishing the body first

>>541790
...thats a very good question haha

Anonymous 2016-11-24 02:38:45 Post No.541803
[Report]

Anonymous 2016-11-24 02:38:45 Post No.541803 [Report]

>>541792
H I G H T E S T

I E

G S

H T

Anonymous 2016-11-24 03:26:55 Post No.541805
[Report]

Anonymous 2016-11-24 03:26:55 Post No.541805 [Report]

>>541803
what?

Anonymous 2016-11-24 10:08:58 Post No.541813
[Report]

Anonymous 2016-11-24 10:08:58 Post No.541813 [Report]

>>541741
Reminds me of a faint plastic head which is assembled using two halves. That's just from the tip of the head though. Anyway, keep it up.

Anonymous 2016-11-25 06:38:30 Post No.541876
[Report] Image search: [Google]

Anonymous 2016-11-25 06:38:30 Post No.541876 [Report]

File: 1324401047561.jpg (318KB, 1856x1534px) Image search: [Google]

318KB, 1856x1534px

>>541792

Boobs need work. Breasts that large wouldn't be connected to the body like that. The bottom part of the breast would be folded over top of where they connect to the torso.

Anonymous 2016-11-25 10:22:05 Post No.541882
[Report]

Anonymous 2016-11-25 10:22:05 Post No.541882 [Report]

>>541876
Clearly you are not a connoisseur of the female form. There are plenty of breasts that connect lower down the torso, and are firmer, and thus don't fold down like you're describing.
Furthermore, you don't model breasts as they sit with gravity. Clearly OP is modelling a base mesh, which presumably well be rigged or at least posed after it's modelled, which is the point at which you adjust the breasts to sit correctly.

Anonymous 2016-11-25 02:51:23 Post No.541896
[Report]

Anonymous 2016-11-25 02:51:23 Post No.541896 [Report]

>>541792
>>541741
hey, OP, can you share which tutorials you used to get to this result ?

Anonymous 2016-11-25 03:31:10 Post No.541897
[Report] Image search: [Google]

Anonymous 2016-11-25 03:31:10 Post No.541897 [Report]

File: topology_overview_collection_feature.png (209KB, 956x400px) Image search: [Google]

209KB, 956x400px

>>541896
I've been messing around with 3d for a long time doing some animation and different stuff. I've always used video game assets and I've done a lot of rigging so I've seen how topology is supposed to work. I gathered a lot of reference pictures for topology though. I'll dump some of the ones I used.

Anonymous 2016-11-25 03:32:14 Post No.541898
[Report] Image search: [Google]

Anonymous 2016-11-25 03:32:14 Post No.541898 [Report]

File: HQE6KoV.jpg (70KB, 446x655px) Image search: [Google]

70KB, 446x655px

>>541897

Anonymous 2016-11-25 03:43:31 Post No.541901
[Report] Image search: [Google]

Anonymous 2016-11-25 03:43:31 Post No.541901 [Report]

File: blog_facial_tests.png (598KB, 810x670px) Image search: [Google]

598KB, 810x670px

>>541897

I'm aware that Imgur.com will stop allowing adult images since 15th of May. I'm taking actions to backup as much data as possible. Read more on this topic here - https://archived.moe/talk/thread/1694/

I'm aware that Imgur.com will stop allowing adult images since 15th of May. I'm taking actions to backup as much data as possible.
Read more on this topic here - https://archived.moe/talk/thread/1694/